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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zephyrr


I love you for mentioning Muskaan. I had put in her concern very subtly.. Glad you noticed. <3
About the story, thank you so much for appreciating what i do.. A lot of thought and writing time goes behind it for sure. But I have a rough idea of the entire story in my head. Execution is the only thing that's remaining and takes time.. LOL! Hence, The World's Oldest Story!! is half a year late. LOL!!
AR are not going to get peace for a while. Why that is will be revealed soon! 😛


I think Muskaan is a true friend, someone who cares less about herself and more about the happiness of others, thats why I write more about her than anyone too, and the way you put her across is really endearing. 😃

Oh AR wont get peace? 😭 I just hope whatever it is, thsts coming, leaves them more stronger than now. Dont make them fight though 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
really nice part...i hope this mess shorts out soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
This is one thing I hate about Riddhima in this fic. She just doesn't speak up her mind. I dunno if she does it to protect Armaan, but then ends up hurting him more.
I guess this sudden breakfast plan with Nikki is something to do about Armaan's house in Delhi. Guess Riddhima should give Armaan some space and trust him to tell her things on his own. Else confront him rather than trying to dig things on her own.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zephyrr


Hahahaa.. You're the only one who called Payal bechari.. You might want to rethink that! 😛

oh u mean ur gonna make her character grey .. hmmm good.. mujhe bada maza aata hi.. jab story mai vamps hoti hai hehe😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvarna...

This is one thing I hate about Riddhima in this fic. She just doesn't speak up her mind. I dunno if she does it to protect Armaan, but then ends up hurting him more.

I guess this sudden breakfast plan with Nikki is something to do about Armaan's house in Delhi. Guess Riddhima should give Armaan some space and trust him to tell her things on his own. Else confront him rather than trying to dig things on her own.


Bechari Riddhima is just confused ya! She doesnt know what she's looking for.. And still running behind it. I'm sure she had her reasons to not tell Armaan what she was doing.. Plus, the circumstances didnt favor her at all. She probably didn't expect Nikki to talk to Armaan before she did. Coz if she had to hide it from him, she would have certainly asked Nikki to keep shut which she didn't.. She didn't lie, just kept information from him.. She may not be right in doing so.. But I'm sure she had her best intentions at heart.. Armaan is justified in feeling what he is.. But i'm sure had Riddhima told him why she was doing whatever she was at Nikki's place, he would have tried to stop her, stall her or blackmail her into not doing it.. Okay.. I think i'm just giving away the story now.. LOL!! wait for the next ud 😉
Edited by zephyrr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow the part was superb. Never thought our Shanky papa will be so generous towards his crazt Damad. Now i am sure even he enjoys a lot in taking Arman's class .😆 But it was so sweet of him to leave them alone for sort out the matter. But little he did know there is something else in his daughter's mind. I love the teasing of muskan. Specially when she said anybody comes to room became "Kabab mein haddi" automatically. and then Nikki. Oho God was Arman got up on the wrong side of the bed today. Everybody is there to pull his leg and make him irritated. But yes it's rare occasion when somebody else get a chance to tease and irritate Mr. Arman Malik. Poor nikki didn't know what she said to already worried Arman. The lunch time was nice. I love the whole gang for no reason. I wonder sometimes that i would have became such a crazy fan of AR if the gang was not there. They are the piller of the love story. Awww Niiks is angry now. Poor abhi always get special treatment from nikki when she is angry. Why the heck Arman has to invite the interns to the party. And i really hate that Payal .I don't know i just feel she is not that innocent she looks like. She knows about AR but still eyeing our Hero. 😡 And Arman is doing everything to increase that more. . The party will be fun i am sure.
Ridhima is so confused. I guess she has become more protective about Arman now . so she is not able to decide how to talk to him on the issues. When Arman is now getting comfortable to his past somehow , she is became more sensitive towards them. I can see his past is now affecting more to Ridhima than himself. Don't know what she talked with nikki. But one thing sure that nothing she wants to hide from him .. so Let's see when our two crazy people (AR) talk to each other.

And yes i am happy that padma is back. Atleast Arman can talk to her in any case.
Continue soon..
Edited by shonagudia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb start.
Waiting 4 nxt ins.
Update asap...
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am loving the recent mornings...waking up everyday to read the new instalments of twos...Feels very nostalgic 😍 Its the best way to start a morning,you know.😳 Love you for making my days happy.🤗

Edited by armaanlover_7 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
another awesum installment and I just hope payal doesn't add up the New year spice !!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey:))

awesome parta I just loved them sooo much. It made sad and happy and laugh and what now:)
I just adore the relationship between Armaan and Juhi they are soo sweet.
loved all the AR scenes and the way Armaan irritates Riddhima that's just awesome
tnx for the pm's and con. soon
take care
love miss93

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