The World's Oldest Story!! #10 - Page 69

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Posted: 14 years ago
I don't like payal...i feel like armaan is leading her on ...why doesn't he see what basket sees? sometime men are so clueless..You aren't going to give them any peace and quite during newyears 😲..or is this what is finally going to drive the message home to Payal that he is not hers!

Waiting to read more!

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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW Rachna..!!!
Updates every single day..!!! I'm actually starting to expect them now..!! And please don't let me down..!! LOL!! I can get soo demanding..!! =D =D
JK!!
I'm hating the distance they're putting between themselves and I'm hating the distance Payal is redusing between her and DR Armaan..!! Hmmm..!! I would give her killer glares too if I was Riddhima..!!!
But Armaan telling Rahul that anyone would become 'poor...' because of Ridzy's glares was HILARIOUS!!! Honestly..!!! At first i was like..OOOHHH New Year's party!! now it's like a "Nooo.. New Years Party..' just because those irritating juniors will be there..(READ: PAYAL!) Arghh..!!
But I do hate that AR are soo busy and don't have time for themselves.!! It's crazyyillyy saddening..!! Even after all they've been through..!! =S =S
But anyways..AWESOME portrayal of busy doctors lives..!! =D
Cont soon..and that means..tomorrow??? ;) ;) =D =D
Love,
Sanaa
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ankita.M

Okay honestly Rachna even before I comment on this update I have to give it you for all these updates, I update once in a week sometimes once in two weeks, but after am done writing one part my brain doesnt even work enough to know where my story is going to go after I posted that one. You really have a way with writing and all the thoughts to go with it .😳


Coming to the part, I am glad Riddhima does realize she wasnt behaving properly , but her not being able to give time wasnt really her fault, it was work and all too I guess. I love how Armaan gets all child like when it comes to Riddhima, he wants to be with her, wants attention which is fair enough, because she is his only family.
I dont know what Riddhima is upto, but I just hope it turns out right for the both, and doesnt cause any kind of misunderstanding between the two. The way things are going, and them having not been able to clear up anything, not getting time with each other, and their friends being so nice to them ( sarcasm intended ) with all the Payal coming to the party issue makes me feel somthing big is on its way, and am going to be left biting my nails🤣

Honestly its been really long AR both had some time in peace without any kind of tension, pain or hurt involed. Hint 😉

P.S - I LOVE Muskaan, as much as she teases AR, I love how she is so protective and concerned too.


I love you for mentioning Muskaan. I had put in her concern very subtly.. Glad you noticed. <3
About the story, thank you so much for appreciating what i do.. A lot of thought and writing time goes behind it for sure. But I have a rough idea of the entire story in my head. Execution is the only thing that's remaining and takes time.. LOL! Hence, The World's Oldest Story!! is half a year late. LOL!!
AR are not going to get peace for a while. Why that is will be revealed soon! 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: priya..

I don't like payal...i feel like armaan is leading her on ...why doesn't he see what basket sees? sometime men are so clueless..You aren't going to give them any peace and quite during newyears 😲..or is this what is finally going to drive the message home to Payal that he is not hers!

Waiting to read more!


Payal is harmless. I wouldn't worry so much about her. 😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

WOW Rachna..!!!

Updates every single day..!!! I'm actually starting to expect them now..!! And please don't let me down..!! LOL!! I can get soo demanding..!! =D =D
JK!!
I'm hating the distance they're putting between themselves and I'm hating the distance Payal is redusing between her and DR Armaan..!! Hmmm..!! I would give her killer glares too if I was Riddhima..!!!
But Armaan telling Rahul that anyone would become 'poor...' because of Ridzy's glares was HILARIOUS!!! Honestly..!!! At first i was like..OOOHHH New Year's party!! now it's like a "Nooo.. New Years Party..' just because those irritating juniors will be there..(READ: PAYAL!) Arghh..!!
But I do hate that AR are soo busy and don't have time for themselves.!! It's crazyyillyy saddening..!! Even after all they've been through..!! =S =S
But anyways..AWESOME portrayal of busy doctors lives..!! =D
Cont soon..and that means..tomorrow??? ;) ;) =D =D
Love,
Sanaa


Yay! so the joke wasnt really that poor.. Someone toh got it.. I thought it fell flat a little, but glad you found it hilarious.
Doctors actually have a terribly busy life. In fact they hardly have a life. So i just used it to suit my situation.. 😛😆
I'm not too sure about update man.. I'm never sure..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishiksg

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! paddy is bak .. i was misisng her terribily.. n was also missing armaan - paddy talks...

lolz ammy fought wid niks.. i so wnated sumthing like that to happen.. wu love to see hw ammy manaofy's her
bt b4 that.. the main thing is ammy ridz confrontaion n 2ndly ammy has landed himself ina big trouble.. by calling the interns as it includes dr. payal.. ridz se toh pitega hi.. bt dunno wat r u gonna do wid dr. payal.. wo bhi becahri humari tarah hai.. armaan se bahut pyaar karti hai.. bt she also knws that he is forevr ridzi's like we all knw.. bt is dil ka kya karen hehe..
nice installment...as usual .. good girl...


Hahahaa.. You're the only one who called Payal bechari.. You might want to rethink that! 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Finally padma mom is back :D a good sign and thing, she is one I could say about blindly that she can resolve issues b/w them in the most nicest way possible oh and for the I think 2nd time in this whole FF I thought shanky papa even has a heart 😳
I really don't like the differences b/w AR, first I thought its riddhima who is intentionally doing this but I guess it's not her fault either. I hope now she can talk to him openly about the problem 😒
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Posted: 14 years ago
installment was superb 👏⭐️
⭐️the starting was awesome with whole canteen scenario doctors with their lab court on due different reason which was quite unique i liked it ...
m glad padma mom is back ...i loved the phone conversation between basket n armaan in which padma mom was acting as their mediator
lunch time with all the friends together n disscussing thier new year plans was lovely
anjali n armaan's cute argument or debate on shanky papa was funny enjoyed it
junior inviting their senior 4 newyear... i bet that must be payal's idea to celebrate her new year with her dr armaan n than our very mahaan n dumb dr armaan fell 4 that ...wait beta armaan riddhima ko pata chalne do...abhi toh she is just ignoring u toh ye haal hai than toh she will totally boycott u
poor n bechari payal due to basket's glare that part was just hilarious
ar moment in cabin was way too cute cozy n adorable
just loved it😃
n than kabab mein haddi no 2 pager 😡after shanky papa
continue soon


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Posted: 14 years ago
I am so confuzzled by Riddhima now, I must admit
But she's in a tight situation too- what with the hectic schedules and responsibilities she's caught in a situation.Plus dimaag zyada chalta hai Basket ka LOL She's trying so much and keeping it from Armaan must be hard :/
I just hope New year's is a happy event for them all - the whole gang deserves it.

PS: Ok so the Grewal's are gonna have the Rahul Muski wedding in Delhi ? Ah ! :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome installment once again rachana...I was literally laughing at the part where you were describing the sleepy Armaan...he is so cute and if I say I am curious to know what Riddhima did, that would be an understatement...holding my breath for the next update/installment!!

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