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Originally posted by: shonagudia

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Wow the part was superb. Never thought our Shanky papa will be so generous towards his crazt Damad. Now i am sure even he enjoys a lot in taking Arman's class .😆 But it was so sweet of him to leave them alone for sort out the matter. But little he did know there is something else in his daughter's mind. I love the teasing of muskan. Specially when she said anybody comes to room became "Kabab mein haddi" automatically. and then Nikki. Oho God was Arman got up on the wrong side of the bed today. Everybody is there to pull his leg and make him irritated. But yes it's rare occasion when somebody else get a chance to tease and irritate Mr. Arman Malik. Poor nikki didn't know what she said to already worried Arman. The lunch time was nice. I love the whole gang for no reason. I wonder sometimes that i would have became such a crazy fan of AR if the gang was not there. They are the piller of the love story. Awww Niiks is angry now. Poor abhi always get special treatment from nikki when she is angry. Why the heck Arman has to invite the interns to the party. And i really hate that Payal .I don't know i just feel she is not that innocent she looks like. She knows about AR but still eyeing our Hero. 😡 And Arman is doing everything to increase that more. . The party will be fun i am sure.
Ridhima is so confused. I guess she has become more protective about Arman now . so she is not able to decide how to talk to him on the issues. When Arman is now getting comfortable to his past somehow , she is became more sensitive towards them. I can see his past is now affecting more to Ridhima than himself. Don't know what she talked with nikki. But one thing sure that nothing she wants to hide from him .. so Let's see when our two crazy people (AR) talk to each other.

And yes i am happy that padma is back. Atleast Arman can talk to her in any case.
Continue soon..


@bold: I cant agree with you more on that one!! 😊
and Riddhima's either protective.. Or just doesn't know what to tell him.. 😕 but i dont think his past will ever affect her more than it does him.. Its the one thing that is impossible.
But she can come close.. You'll have to wait to find out. 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Rachna :)

Finally, I'm commenting! LMAO :D

I'm not commenting part wise because that'd be too long and I've gotta get back to studying! :|

I love the current track! Juhi has been an amazing character, really :) I loved the way you fit er in the story so effortlessly, as if she was always there! And we got to know so MUCH about Armaan in the last few updates! Why he is the way he is, etc. You portrayed the hurt and confusion on his side, beautifully. Kudos!

Have I mentioned I ADOREEE Armaan-Riddhima in this FF? They are SO cute :) <3

I love how she thinks of him before herself, how she's so darn protective :) And the tension between them is well portrayed too! Very realistic! Honestly, you're a brilliant writer! Their small fights, her helplessness at not being able to help him everything was extremely well written!

And the best part is that whatever be the situation you manage to put a little of masti mazaak :D Which is why I come to the super market part! I LOVED it! Bahahahaha Armaan is so freakin' hilarious while annoying Riddhima! LMFAO :D

I also loved the Shashank-Armaan duo! Damn funny! The way Armaan makes fun of him has me 🤣. Really :D

Armaan's past is sad :| I can't even IMAGINE what he's gone through! But despite that he's become a gem of a person, really :) I hope AR are able to get through this soon! And the tension between them is fine but please don't make them fight [like, serious fights].

Oh and I forgot to add this, I love how Riddhima gets so jealous of Payal. LOL :D
I read [in one of your posts] that Dr. Payal ain't that innocent as she seems. And once again I add, PLEASEEE don't split AR up!

I have a hunch that Riddhima's doing something related to Armaan's house in Delhi :| I hope it doesn't cause fights!

Can't wait for the new years party :)

Continue soon!

xoxo
Aanya
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb part love it ...
plz continue sonn
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Rachna!You obviously don't know me,but im a hugee fan of your ff!Its my fault cos i've never commented before,I hardly comment on ffs since im highlyyy inactive on I-F,but ur ff is something I follow regularly <3
I can't get over how amazing you are,seriously you write so exceptionally well,it leaves me craving for more each time i read an update of yours,whether small or big!I absolutely ADORE AR in ur ff,they are so adorable<3 Im one of those who hates seeing them fight,and the best part about your ff,well according to me is that they've always faced their problems together.They are so in LOVE LOLL!!It makes me happpy!😆
The present track is really intriguing,the way u've projected Armaans past,and the pain that he had to go through,still has to infact..is amazing<3
I love this update as well,in which ur showing how riddhima is trying to get him over that pain which has haunted him throughout his life till date,and still will according to her if she just stands aside and does nothing!!
Im a hugeee Armaan fan,so im totally biased towards him..😳but i think his character is THE BEST in ur ff,iv read many ffs so far and have always adored armaan in each and everyone of them..but the character of armaan in ur ff is just so perfect!😳I mean,he obviously has his flaws..but overall.I think hes the perfect life partner
one can ever ask for!😍
I absolutely love the way the story is progressing right now,I just hope hope that this doesen't create any misunderstandings between them..I think the best part about their relationship is that they understand each other SO WELL,even words aren't needed,and so im sure Armaan will understand Riddhima's dilemma,and I hope riddhima doesent go any further with her plan..without letting armaan know,because even though shes doing it with best intentions at heart,It can somehow cause problems and I would never want that!Infact none of us would!😔
Oh and did i mention,Payal makes me mad,I don't blame riddhima for glaring at her like that,she totally deserves it..infact much more than that if she tries to go any further! :P and as much as i love armaan,I think hes a total daft head!!Funny how he doesen't realise what that woman is upto!😆
Keeep up the good work Rachna,your ff has anything and everything I had ever wished to see in dmg,but that didn't happen unfortunately!I love how descriptive your ff is,you express their moments,thoughts,emotions so beautifully!Seriously hats off to you,and i hope this ff goes on and on foreverrr!haha
Take careee<3
Kashvi.
Edited by -kashvi- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -kashvi-

Hey Rachna!You obviously don't know me,but im a hugee fan of your ff!Its my fault cos i've never commented before,I hardly comment on ffs since im highlyyy inactive on I-F,but ur ff is something I follow regularly <3

I can't get over how amazing you are,seriously you write so exceptionally well,it leaves me craving for more each time i read an update of yours,whether small or big!I absolutely ADORE AR in ur ff,they are so adorable<3 Im one of those who hates seeing them fight,and the best part about your ff,well according to me is that they've always faced their problems together.They are so in LOVE LOLL!!It makes me happpy!😆
The present track is really intriguing,the way u've projected Armaans past,and the pain that he had to go through,still has to infact..is amazing<3
I love this update as well,in which ur showing how riddhima is trying to get him over that pain which has haunted him throughout his life till date,and still will according to her if she just stands aside and does nothing!!
Im a hugeee Armaan fan,so im totally biased towards him..😳but i think his character is THE BEST in ur ff,iv read many ffs so far and have always adored armaan in each and everyone of them..but the character of armaan in ur ff is just so perfect!😳I mean,he obviously has his flaws..but overall.I think hes the perfect life partner
one can ever ask for!😍
I absolutely love the way the story is progressing right now,I just hope hope that this doesen't create any misunderstandings between them..I think the best part about their relationship is that they understand each other SO WELL,even words aren't needed,and so im sure Armaan will understand Riddhima's dilemma,and I hope riddhima doesent go any further with her plan..without letting armaan know,because even though shes doing it with best intentions at heart,It can somehow cause problems and I would never want that!Infact none of us would!😔
Oh and did i mention,Payal makes me mad,I don't blame riddhima for glaring at her like that,she totally deserves it..infact much more than that if she tries to go any further! :P and as much as i love armaan,I think hes a total daft head!!Funny how he doesen't realise what that woman is upto!😆
Keeep up the good work Rachna,your ff has anything and everything I had ever wished to see in dmg,but that didn't happen unfortunately!I love how descriptive your ff is,you express their moments,thoughts,emotions so beautifully!Seriously hats off to you,and i hope this ff goes on and on foreverrr!haha
Take careee<3
Kashvi.


Thanks Kashvi!
I wouldnt welcome you coz as you said you've been following my story from long..😆 But I'm glad you decided to speak up. And thank you so much for taking out time and writing all those wonderful things that you've written for me and my story. Encouragement from you guys is what keeps me going! And I'm grateful for the same. 😊

I'm glad you like AR.. That you like Armaan is not a big surprise. All of us love him more than anything!! LOL! I'm glad you find the current track interesting.. I've just added something to it.. You may want to check it out.. I hope I see you around more often!
Love
Rachna! 😊
Edited by zephyrr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG i feel scared of Armaan too right now GOSH :O
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Posted: 14 years ago
pls don't tell me that they are heading for another break up :(
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AHHH the update, honestly I was so scared before I started reading it LOL and what cliff hanger 😳

I must say what Riddhima was trying to do wasnt wrong at all. Armaan has had a real bad past, a lot of struggle and pain has gone through his growing years, and ofcourse those years are what make you what you become in your life. And for the gem he has become despite of all of that, he should be proud of it.Because as much as his past is tormenting for him, its a part of his life. So I agree, that Riddhima wanting him to acknowledge it and be proud of it, isnt wrong.
Then again, since you have put it so beautifully, one can understand Armaans plight too, when he has to face his past, he has to face a lot of pain, the memories bring along.Plus he is trying his best to overcome it and look towards a future with his Basket.He may also not want everyone to know of it because he might fear of being sympathized. And even though they were only pictures, thats his life, and since he is so shy about it, it being viewed in public might just not go down with him.
I hope Armaan understands her intentions, and even though am pretty sure he is going to be angry, I hope Riddhima knows its better to be cool her side, rather than losing it herself . But this time is probably necessary for them, for him to face it proudly and her to know about what got into making her Armaan what he is.

Honestly I have never seen any story which has so much depth to it, and neither have I seen someone manage it so well :) I am in love with the way you write :|

Only out of curiosity , will we be getting an installment tonight ? 😳
Edited by Ankita.M - 14 years ago
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Eee you updated!! What a pleasant surprise!😆Okay so,Needless to say,I loved this bit as well,even though i am DYING to read further..u've stopped at such a crucial point 😳You know even if there are some parts which make me sad,I think your writing makes it all worth it,and I obviously love each and every one of them!
Anyway coming to the part,Riddhima is obviously apprehensive about his reaction,cos his part has always been a touchy topic for him!but im glad she didn't actually intend to hide anything from him,that would have made matters worse.Can't even blame her here,though I wish they hadn't made a public show of this,cos it certainly added to armaans anger,but i guess,like armaan said,riddhima was just too lost in his past to notice the present!
Armaan is not wrong in what he feels,he just needs to FACE IT!I have a feeling he'll take his frustration out on her,but its all ok as long as he realises why she did that!He has her support,he can face it with her..!
I hope riddhima succeeds in explaining things to him,and armaan makes an effort to get over this pain of his,by listening to riddhima!
I loooved the descriptions about armaans childhood,awwwie I would have ooohed and aahed as well,if i was present there,will i by any chance get that teenager armaan anywhere?I would surely go for him then😆Well,cos that would suit my age😛
I will try my best to be regular from now on,and I hope you continue giving us such regular and amazing updates!
Continue sooon<3

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