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Posted: 14 years ago

#201

..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !
[-A Passionate Love Story]

PART-27 [3/4] {THE BLACK MONDAY-4}

{Banner made by AASHi [aashizin]}

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SAMRAT VILLA:

As his car came to screeching halt in the drive way of his VILLA, DAI Maa rushed to open the door. She knew, typically SAMRAT was in a foul mood... so, better If no one delayed opening the door. SAMRAT stormed in angrily...and without acknowledging DAI Maa's presence, strode upstairs to his room. DAI Maa's calls to him fell on deaf ears. Much as DAI Maa wanted to talk to him, ask him about his day and why his mood was so foul, She knew better. No way was he going to tell her anything. So, she decided to wait till things cooled down.

SAMRAT slammed the door of his room shut as he threw his coat on the floor... walking up to his bed, he flopped down... he wanted to forget the day...everything that happened during the day..and most of all GUNJAN... why was this getting difficult??? Why was her name cropping up... as did her thoughts... WHY???... but, then... (( Irresponsibility ki bhi hadhh hoti hai...1 toh bina bataye yun hi akeli hi chali gayi... aur,ab itna bhi nahin ho raha ki,at least only 1 call kar Sorry kahe...Yeh bataye ki,ghar thik se pahuchi yaa nahin...? She is such an irresonsible person...Maine kyun usse job di...?? Achha hua jo usse terminate karne ka decision liya hai...she doesn't deserve my job...))

And the pillows on his bed found their places changed...they were on the cold floor as SAMRAT angrily flung them there... He was about to throw the blanket down, when a scared voice reached his ears... a servant with his head down spoke... "Sir,DAI Maa...ne poocha hai...Dinner lagaoon...? Aap kab tak neeche aa rahe hain...?"

S - (Angrily) Nahin...Dai maa se kaho..maine Dinner bahar hi kar liya hai...n just get out...I don't want any disturbance in my room...iss liye, main jab tak kisi ko awaaz naa doon...Koi yahaan nahin aayega...You get it...?? He Yelled very badly.The poor man...turned around and disappeared... He was glad to get away from there.

SAMRAT walked up to the door and locked it. He did not want to be disturbed...He did not want to talk... but somewhere, a thought was disturbing him... ((GUNJAN...!! how was she??? Where was she??? had she reached home??? Pata nahin usne DINNER bhi kiya hoga yaa nahin...? Aaj LUNCH toh nahin liya usne...Kabhi-kabhi main bhi naa...thoda zyada hi strict ho jaata hoon...Kya hota jo LUNCH usse offer kar deta...aakhir hum DiNNER toh saath mein hi karne waale the naa... Socha tha after meeting kisi achhe se Resturent mein Dinner karenge... Par,jis tarah se aaj usne meeting spoil ki hai...uske baad toh...!! aur woh GAUTAM MEHTA...yaad rakhega ki,kabhi kisi SAMRAT se samna hua tha...Yeh saare losers mujh se hi kyun mil jaate hain...))

He had to know... He went and opened the cupboard... taking GUNJAN's file, He opened It and checked her land line number. Keeping the file back, He walked towards the window as he dialed her number... but, no one responded there either. Disconnecting the call, He flung his cell on the bed... (( What the Hell...? Woh ab jaan bujh kar mere call receive nahin kar rahi hai...Kyunki,woh acchi tarah se jaanti hai ki,Mobile par call na lagne par main Basic line par try karoonga...Woh yeh sab sirf mujhe pareshan karne ke liye kar rahi hai...Par...Uss ke family ke others members toh honge...? Woh call kyun receive nahin kar rahe...?? Yeh sab 1 jaise hain...Bilkul,ussi ki tarah...She is totally an useless girl...Woh deserve hi nahin karti ki,koi uski care kare...I hate U GUNJAN...I really hate U...Achha hoga agar tum ab kabhi mere saamne na aao...warna,main khud nahin jaanta ki,tab main tumhaare saath kya kar baithoonga...Mujhe nafrat ho gayi hai tumse...Main apni zindagi se woh 8 din nikal dena chahta hoon...woh 8 din...jo tumne mere office mein...mere saamne bitaye hain...uss 8 din ke har 1 pal ko bhulna chahta hoon main...aur SAMRAT yeh karega...Tum kabhi meri kamzori nahin ban sakti...kabhi bhi nahin...))

He looked at the sky. He had made a resolution...to forget GUNJAN... but, easier said than done... with ever negative word about GUNJAN that he thought...His heart hurt...like someone was piercing It with a thousand pins...

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NANDA HOUSE :

GUNJAN still was thinking... looking at the floor, her tears flowing... as she lifted her hand to wipe her tears, she saw the Red marks of SAMRAT's fingers on her wrists... She touched her sore wrists and winced in pain as she felt the physical hurt... and shut her eyes on remembering the incident... SAMRAT's grip on her wrist... She slowly stood up and looked in the mirror. Her arms also had the finger marks...her fair skin showing away prominently the dark Red marks. As she cried, she thought... ((Woh bahot bure hain...Main ab kabhi unse nahin miloongi...kabhi bhi nahin... (wiped her tears) Woh yehi chahte the naa...ab main bhi yehi chahti hoon...bhool jaaoongi ki kabhi SHERGILL's mein work kiya tha...Kabhi woh mera office hua karta tha...woh office jahaan kaam karte hue kuchh chhote-chhote sapne dekhe the...woh sapne jo ab puri tarah tut chuke hain...Yahaan,kisi ki value nahin...Na kisi ke sapnon ki...na kisi ke hard labour ki...aur na hi kisi ke emotions ki...

par,...yeh Marks...?? Agar Uncle-Aunty...yaa phir RAHUL ne isse dekh liya toh...? Kitna bura lagega unhein...? Kya samjhenge woh...? Aur,RAHUL...woh toh yeh dekhne ke baad apne anger ko control hi nahin kar paayega...Nahin...phir,pata nahin woh kya kar dega...?? Woh achhe insaan nahin hain...woh kuchh bhi kar sakte hain...agar RAHUL ne unhein kuchh kaha toh woh RAHUL ko bhi pareshaan karenge... Main kya karoon...?? Main RAHUL se jhooth bhi toh nahin bol sakti...main jhooth bolne ki koshish bhi karoon toh woh samajh jaayega... usse sab kuchh batana hoga...at least,Itna ki unhone mujhe job se nikal diya... par,inn marks ko dekhkar woh samajh jaayega ki...unhone mujhe kitna badly treat kiya hai... phir...?? Phir...toh RAHUL kuchh bhi kar sakta hai...gusse mein woh kisi ki nahin sunta...Uncle-Aunty ki bhi nahin...shayad SINGAPORE jane se bhi mana kar de...? Par,agar aisa hua toh,phir uske career ko kaafi nuksaan hoga...Yeh project ki success uske liye kaafi important hai...

Mujhe kuchh samajh nahin aa raha...Kabhi nahin socha tha...sirf 1 pal mein zindagi itni mushkil ho jaayegi...Jahaan sab kuchh itna complicated ho jaayega...Kya karoon main...?? and again she felt some tears on her cheeks...she was feeling totally helpless this time... Mujhe yeh marks aur inn marks ki sachhai...RAHUL se hide karne honge...phir,woh thoda kam naraaz hoga...aur,1 baar uske SINGAPORE jaane ke baad sab kuchh thik ho jaayega...Jab woh aayega...toh ussi ke office mein job kar loongi...

Par,abhi sabse pehle...SHERGILL's ke loss ko compansate karna hai... par,kahaan se laaoon main 14,000...?? aur,woh deal ki conformation jiske fail hone ka ilzaam unhone mujh par lagaya hai...?

She opened her cupboard again... hoping to find some money... Maybe she had kept it away for something special... and It had slipped her mind... She searched frantically... but, no success...She was completly distraught and then, she saw her Parents picture... She picked It up and hugged It very tightly... as If she was in her parents warm arms... and she sobbed... she looked at her Parents picture...their smiling faces...and she remembered her last birthday... Before, destiny... Before GOD snatched away from her...Her small and happy world.

She kept the picture back gently and searched for something. Lying beneath some clothes, she found it...her 'Jewelry Box'... slowly she opened it and in the midst of all the small earrings and some other jewelry, she found it... a very beautiful gold Locket with a dainty gold chain... She picked It up and planted a kiss on the Locket... the last gift from her parents... her birthday present... the day that picture was taken... The only piece of jewelry that had once belonged to her mother...and her mother had so lovingly placed it around her neck that day. She had been so happy to have got such a lovely present from her parents. And then they had spent the day together...for once her Dad had stayed home that day... now she knew why... maybe because, It was the last birthday they celebrated... then fate snatched them... And she was left all alone...only with memories of her parents... She held the locket close to her heart as she asked for forgiveness... (( I am sorry Mom...I M really Sorry...par main kya karoon...? mere paas aur kuchh bhi nahin...jise dekar main apni self respect bacha sakoon...Aapki yeh nishani...jo duniya mein mere liye sabse zyada kimti hai...Aaj main usse hi khud se door karne ko majboor hoon... Main dusre ornaments sell nahin kar sakti...kyunki woh mere liye hain...par,mere nahin...woh Uncle-Aunty aur RAHUL ne diye hain...unhein sell karne ka mera koi haq nahin...Par,Yeh locket...Yeh locket toh mera apna hai...Yeh toh mujhe aapne diya tha...Main isse kho kar...1 baar phir aap ko kho doongi Mom... (cried very badly) par..koi insaan aap logon ko kuchh kahe...Main yeh kabhi bardashat nahin kar sakti...Mujhe apna gham manzoor hai...par koi insaan...aap donon ki parwarish...mere character...mere self-respect par ungli uthaye...yeh mujhe manzoor nahin...main isse sell kar, kal hi unke saare paise de doongi...

She walked towards the window, looking up at the sky dotted with innumerable stars... She was searching for her Parents...She knew they were there, looking down at her...may be, even crying for her... but, she so wanted to see them today... She wanted them to be with her, physically... ((Aap donon mujhe chhod kar kyun chale gaye...? Mujhe aap logon ki bahot yaad aati hai Mom...Main rona chahti hoon...aapki god mein sar rakhkar aap se baatein karna chahti hoon...Par...nahin kar sakti... (felt some more tears on her cheeks) Mom-Dad aap log toh bhagwan ke paas ho...Please,unse kaho naa...ki,woh meri thodi si help kar den...main toh unse zyada kuchh maangti bhi nahin...par,iss baar kuchh maangna chahti hoon...Kya woh kisi tarah uss Project's deal ko final karne mein meri help nahin kar sakte...? Main aur kis se help maangoo...agar yeh deal nahin hoti...,toh shayad mujhe zindagi bhar iss ehsaas ke saath jeena hoga ki,main 1 aise insaan ki 'Karzdaar' hoon...jiske liye insaan ki feelings...unke emotions... koi mayne nahin rakhte...Unke liye agar kuchh important hai toh sirf Paisa...unka Status...unka Class...mujhe unki soch se problem nahin hai...Main koi complain nahin kar rahi...par,main kisi aise insaan se koi rishta nahin rakhna chahti Mom...phir chahe woh rishta 1 'Karzdaar' ka hi kyun na ho...Main unke saare 'Karz' chukana chahti hoon...Azaad hona chahti hoon...1 guilt ki feelings se...

Unse bahoot door jaana chahti hoon Mom... (some tears again falls from her eyes) Itni door...jahaan woh mujhe kabhi naa dekh paaye...Main unhein bhoolna chahti hoon Mom...Kabhi yaad nahin karna chahti...yeh jaante hue bhi ki... shayad... shayad...main unhein pasand karne lagi thi...unhein PYAR karne lagi thi...par,aaj mujhe meri galti ka ehsaas ho gaya hai...aaj mujhe khud par sharm aa rahi hai...par,ab main yeh sab bhoolna chahti hoon Mom...apni life ki pehli aur aakhri galti ko sudharna chahti hoon...uss ehsaas ko apna dil se nikalna chahti hoon...jo,unse milne ke baad pata nahin kaise mujhme jaaga tha...par,Maine unhein PYAR iss condition par nahin kiya tha ki,woh bhi mujhe PYAR kare...Main jaanti thi ki, yeh rishta hamesha Adhoora hi rahega...par,main apni feelings ke saath khush thi...Maine kabhi unse koi umeed nahin ki... lekin,kabhi yeh bhi nahin socha tha ki,Yeh khoobsurat ehsaas 1 nafrat ke ehsaas ke saath khatm hoga... (her eyes were more teary) Main toh khud unse door jaane waali thi...par chahti thi ki,agar zindagi ke kisi pal mein bhi woh mujhe yaad kare toh..1 khoobsurat ehsaas ke saath...par...sab kuchh khatam ho gaya...Kaash...Ab main kabhi unse naa miloon...

Ab main aage badhna chahti hoon...Mom...zindagi ki nayi shuruaat karna chahti hoon...unn 8 dinon ko bhool kar...unhein bhool kar...uss ehsaas ko khatm kar,jisne mujhe itni takleef di...Please,help me Mom... warna main kabhi yeh sab bhool nahin paaoongi...kabhi bhi nahin...))

GUNJAN was sobbing...looking at the sky...She wanted to feel that warm touch of her mothers arms... The strong arms of her Dad enveloping her in a hug that soothed her ... The warm kiss they would plant on her cheeks as she basked in the love of her parents... she wanted all that back...more than any other day, today she missed her parents... She collapsed on the floor... crying, weeping. But, the pain in her heart was too strong to let go... and there she lay, curled up on the floor, crying... till sleep overtook her.

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Continued on Next Box...😳>>>>

Edited by SIZZZLER - 14 years ago

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SIZZZLER

@SIZZZLER

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#202

..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !
[-A Passionate Love Story]

PART-27 [4/4] {THE BLACK MONDAY-4}

{Banner made by AASHi [aashizin]}

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SAMRAT VILLA :

Meanwhile SAMRAT

SAMRAT laid down on his comfortable king sized bed... but, sleep evaded him... He was still thinking...about HER... she refused to leave his thoughts... (( I hate U GUNJAN...I'll not forgive U...Tumne mere ssaath aisa kyun kiya...?? Kyun mere yakeen ko toda...? Main tumhein job se nikalna chahta tha...par,iss tarah nahin... Kabhi nahin socha tha ki,tum aisa bhi kar sakti ho...woh bhi sirf paisoon ke liye..?? Maine hamesha tumhein tumhaari class ki dusri ladkiyon se alag samjha...par,tum bhi unhin ki tarah thi...Tumhein paise chahiye the..toh mujh se kaha hota...Kitna diya hoga uss MONISH ne tumhein mere saath dhoka karne ke liye...?? Kabhi nahin socha tha ki tum bhi unn ladkiyon si hogi jo, paisoon ke liye kuchh bhi kar sakti hain... I can't believe my self ki,main tumhein pasand karne laga tha...nahin...shayad PYAR karne laga tha,tumse...yeh jaante hue bhi ki,yeh galat hai...Mujhe RICHA ke liye loyal hona chahiye tha...par,tumhein dekh kar main apni feelings ko rok bhi nahin pata tha...Tumse door hona chahta tha...par,1 khoobsurat feelings ke saath (his eyes were teary)...woh feelings jis se main hamesha bhagta rehta tha...jise main feel nahin karna chahta tha...socha tha tumhein jab bhi yaad karoonga...uss khoobsurat feelings ko khud mein feel kar sakoonga...Tum mere dil mein rahogi...1 khoobsurat yaad ki tarah...

Par,tum woh deserve nahin karti...Nafrat ho rahi hai mujhe tumse...aur apne aap se bhi...jo maine tum jaisi ladki ke liye...!! Tum mere dil mein ab bhi rahogi...par 1 dard ban kar...Jis se main bahot bahot nafrat karta hoon...par,iss mein tumhaari bhi koi galti nahin hai...meri kismat hi aisi hai...jisme mujhe kisi ka pyar nahin mil sakta...1 Jhootha PYAR ka ehsaas bhi nahin... Main jaanta hoon...Main kal bhi akela tha...Aaj bhi hoon...aur shayad kal bhi rahoonga...RICHA se shaadi karne ke baad bhi...Main apne dil mein kisi ko nahin dekhna chahta...Tumhaari yaadon ko bhi nahin...bhool jaaonga main tumhein...Tumhein kabhi yaad nahin karoonga...))

SAMRAT turned over and tried to sleep... but, he was not able to shut his eyes... because as he shut his eyes, GUNJAN's tear stained face...Her eyes filled with hurt flashed before him. Finally, he got up and took some sleeping pills... They had always ensured he slept well... and forgot his troubles. He lay down again and closed his eyes...the pills taking him to slumber land.

As Both slept... they had made a Resolve... to forget everything and move-on... but, was it this simple???? Unknown to the other, each had confessed their true feelings for the other...then would It be so easy to let go?? Would destiny, who had ensured that 2 love starved souls meet and find love... It's way of compensating what It had snatched from them... allow this to happen????

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MONiSH at His APARTMENT

As MONISH reached home, he headed straight for the gym which was situated on the 2nd floor of his huge mansion.He was very upset. His plan had hit a block. He had not been able to move closer to GUNJAN. First that SAMRAT and then this RAHUL. All his dreams of spending the evening in GUNJAN's company were broken. He angrily removed his shirt and flung it on the ground. He picked up his boxing gloves and started his 'punching practice'... the punching bag bearing the brunt of his anger... his mind were filled with thoughts... ((Pehle woh SAMRAT...aur phir,woh RAHUL...Aaj kisi ne mujhe meri GUNJAN se milne nahin diya...SAMRAT SHERGILL, tumhein toh main dekh loonga...ab toh yeh clear hai ki,tum mere dost nahin rahe...Dushmani kya hoti hai...bas ab yeh dekhna hai.

Par,main SAMRAT ka main 'Game Plan' kyun nahin samajh paa raha...? Aakhir woh chahta kya hai?? Kya,SAMRAT..RICHA ko 'Double Cross' kar raha hai...? par,Kyun...?? Kiske liye...?? Kya GUNJAN ke liye...? Kya woh GUNJAN se PYAR...?? No way...Its impossible...College days se jaanta hoon usse...woh toh 'Middle Class' peoples ke saath baithna bhi pasand nahin karta...unse Love yaa Marriage ki toh soch bhi nahin sakta...phir,kya wajah hogi...? Woh GUNJAN ke liye itna possessive kyun ho jaata hai...? Usne GUNJAN ko meeting mein mere paas baithne bhi nahin diya...Kyun...?? Kya woh GUNJAN ke liye badal raha hai...? Kahin woh GUNJAN ko pasand toh nahin karne laga hai...?? (stopped punching to Boxing Bag) Agar aisa hai...toh SAMRAT tumhein apni pasand badalni hogi...kyunki,baat meri kisi 'Time Pass' Date yaa Girl Friend ki nahin...GUNJAN ki hai...jo meri hai...sirf meri...Tum soch bhi nahin sakte ki,main uske liye kis hadhh tak ja sakta hoon...Aisi koi hadhh nahin bani...jo main GUNJAN ke liye na tod sakoon... [ He walked to table and picked up the glass of water. As he moved it towards his lips... he remembered RAHUL'S behavior... and angrily threw the glass on the floor...]

Aur,RAHUL...!! Maine all ready uski kaafi badtamiziyaan bardashat kar li hain...par,main khamosh hoon toh sirf iss liye ki,kahin na kahin...usse GUNJAN ki fikr hai...aur GUNJAN bhi uski kaafi respect karti hai,mera usse kuchh bhi kehna...GUNJAN ko bura lag sakta hai...aur main yeh nahin chahta.Lekin,tumne sahi kaha RAHUL...agar main bine kisi rishte ke GUNJAN se roz miloon toh uske liye problem ho sakti hai...par,agar main Mrs.GUNJAN MONISH KHURANA se roz miloon toh...? Phir,toh kisi ko problem nahin hogi naa...? Tumne GUNJAN ki kaafi care kar lii RAHUL...par,ab meri baari hai.Tum be-fikr ho kar SINGAPORE ja sakte ho...Kyunki,main hoon naa yahaan...GUNJAN ke paas...and I promise U...jab tum wapas aaoge...tum khud dekhoge...uski care karne ko pura 'KHURANA EMPIRE' maujud hoga.Usse tum jaison ki zaroorat nahin hogi...))

And he moved back towards the punching bag... One hard punch and he vented all his anger...

But, before the bag could bounce back, he stopped it as he heard his cell buzz. He removed his gloves, angrily flinging them away as he picked up his cell to see who was calling. His face had a smile... and... he said...

M - Finally,Aapne call toh kiya...Main aapki hi call ka wait kar raha tha Mr.VIRAJ.

V - Mr.KHURANA...maine aapke offer par kaafi gaur kiya...par...?

M - Apne sentense se Iss 'Par' ko delete karne ke liye hi toh aapko 10 crore de raha hoon.

V - I know,...par,Aap toh jaante hi hain ki,after 'AADARSH Scam' yeh sab kitna mushkil...

M - (cuts quickly) I want your answer Mr.VIRAJ...simple...YES or NO...?? Mere paas aur bhi raaste hain,,,maine toh socha tha,1 chance aap ko bhi de doon...10 Crore ka 'Jack-Pot' jitne ka.Waise,agar aap yeh kaam kar dete hain toh,Yeh hamare New Business Relationship ki beginning ho sakti hai...Waise bhi mujhe VIRAAR waale Project ke liye kisi ap jaise hi Partner ki talash thi. (This always worked... money could do wonders and MONISH knew how to use this asset to his benefit...)

V - Ok...Mr.KHURANA...I will try my best...Main kal hi 'Unhen' Notice bhej deta hoon.

M - No...Kal nahin...Kal waise bhi woh sab thode upset honge...Unka beta unse pehli baar door ja raha hai...(smiled softly) Aap chahe toh Wednesday ko woh Notice bhej sakte hain...Mujhe koi problem nahin hai.

V - Then,Done...Wednesday ko unhein woh Notice mil jaayegi.

M - Ok...phir,wednesday ko hi milte hain.Don't worry..kal tak aapko aapke pure 10 Crore mil jayenge...Bye...Good Night.

As he disconnected the call, he had a smile... his victory all so evident through that smile... MONISH KHURANA's Plan could never fail... He would not let It fail... GUNJAN was going to be his... and no one was going to stop him.

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Finally, "The BLACK MONDAY" ended... Shattering dreams and aspirations of all the four... each wanting to begin anew with the new morning. But who would be successful??? Which of these four would be able to realise their dreams??? What did destiny have in store of them??? Only time would tell.
[To be Continued...]

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#203

tht was sooo awesome part

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-CreativeSoul-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#204

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am a little behind in this ff but promise il catch up asap

editing***

Part 26 page 22

omg he begginign of this part is so cute😳 i guess im not use to seeing cute sajan sceens alot in this ff so far thats why i loved it even buti really loved when samrat started smiling at her innocence (finally a smile from our angry young mr.shergill😆) but ofcource it was to good to last the angry young man took over again god i hate it when he compares his status with gunjans😡 i feel so bad for gunjan then :( but she is so understanding...

oh god ab story main ek new charecter i hate this gautum alrady

how dare he look at gunjan like that he is soo arghhh

but omg from there when samrat bursted out with anger on gunjan non stop i felt so bad...he didnt even see her pain not even once and he spoke so much about her charecter

i felt so bad for gunjan this black monday is really turning out horble for her

part 27 page 27

argh i knew this Gautam was no good

how dare he say all this am so glad samrat punched him he deserved thoespunches 😃 and omg i loved it when samrat kept saying meri gunjan without even realizing it😳 i loved the samrats pov even behind his anger all he was thinking abot was that was she ok?😳

and omg wasnt expecting this a sudden confession from gunjan and then samrat both 😛😳 this was so unexpected especially from gunjan i mean samrat has always been in love with her that was really clear and gunjan like him i knew that but wasnt expecting a love confession...but so sad they are trying to hate each other there is to many misunderstanding between them i just hope that now that this black mondy is over some good things come there way

do continue soon because i can not wait for next part

love

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gurpreet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#205

mindblowing update...poor gunjan kept on crying...cont soon

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#206

but really u guys are sooo awesome writers

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Sadaf Rizwan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#207

OMG! Samrat confesses his feeling to himself...i did not even thought that he would do such thing but some where i knew that Gunjan loves Samrat...poor Gunjan she is blaming herself for every thing and crying non stop...and this Mohnish...what is he upto? it scares me alot...i think he is planing something really bad that will hurt gunjan in the end..,,

btw the entire update was awesome...samrat's and gunjan's feelings were presented so well that even i felt like crying when gunjan was crying...and your updates always affect me to such extent...

awesome, mindblowing and fantastic update...plz plz plz cont soon

Sadaf

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aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#208

awesome but heart-wrenching update...poor gunjan, she's been hurt so badly...crying and blaming herself for all the things...both SaJan confessed their love for each other in their thoughts...i don't like monish, whatever he is planning to do will hurt gunjan more, i think...

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VRITIKA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#209

superb nd amazing yaar.
u really rock guyzz
plz plz cnt soon.
luv u
vritika

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445892

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Posted: 14 years ago

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pheli dafa realy pehly dafa pora updte padh k mjhy hazaron kushi ho raha hai lolz sajan relizatin iz it true?i m nt dreaming 4 sure.. Aww. Best part starting just fulfild my wish...
Then gunjan s relaztn i didnt expect so soon. Haha .. Jasa story chal rahe the aj ka updte totaly unexpectd the.. Samrat s relaztn awesme.. Monish...what he z upto...hope didnt creat more mes in sajan s lyf. Once again spechles updte ... Awesme brilint swet sad rockng updte. Plz cntinue asap.
Meri

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