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Posted: 14 years ago
Chalo finally you will come back.. Will wait for it..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

so sorry i am taking time here..
trying to type a long part.. :(
pls pls pls do forgive me.. will update double in few hours..
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UPDATING in few hours
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we can wait... we will wait... we r waiting since long we dont know...
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Posted: 14 years ago
~ENIGMA~
PART 56






The silence was only aggregating them further to do something stupid. Dadima failed to understand anything.. Or what type of situation everyone is... Maan looks way, very heart... Then he slowly walks towards the door, nothing could be seen, he gently touches the door and walks off...

She jumps up hearing rik moan, a small smile crept up on geets face but why was he moaning? Was he in pain? Geet quickly pressed the button for a dr, he was not late, instantly one dr flowed by 2 nurse walks in. "he moaned, is he in pain?" geet looked so rough, her messy hair, she did not go home at all, shila took the sibling home while she staid with him,
Dr "yes yes, that's good he is responding... He is still very much in coma, but this is a good sign." geet smiled slightly still with teary eyes, she could barely say a word, whole night she staid up, just praying to god, maybe one sign, there is already black mark under her eyes.. Clearly showing how tirade & worried she was. "he will be alright na Dr?" any good word would be perfect for her satisfaction. Dr smiles "don't worry, he will be fine.."

Maan stood outside, just shocked to see geets state, he somewhere was feeling guilty while somewhere his eyes could dare not look at her. He wanted to walk in to comfort but stopped him self, realizing geets words earlier on... Dadima did not come, as to her this girl is nothing, maybe how is she? Where is she? & if something happens.. It will be poor girl... Suddenly his phone rang.. Its rano..

Rano "where are you?" she wonders..

Maan "hospital mom!"

Rano "hospital? Are you alright? What happen? You went out of the house perfectly fine!"

Maan "I am fine... Its.." he could not finish when one of the nurse disturbs no phone sir!.. Maan


Maan "yes! Sorry!"


Rano in panic without thinking she made her way to the hospital. She have lost her one family she could not afford to let him to happen anything...




Maan tries to knock again, but his instinct stops him. He looks down sadly then up again, but fails to walk in... Dr walks out, giving him a comfortable smile...

Maan "is he alright?"

Dr "much better sir!"

Maan "I have pain all the cost, & extra, make sure he is perfectly fine."

Dr "don't worry sir, savetri devi did feel she is responsible for this... & paid everything.

Maan "thanks dr," he smiles giving him a warm handshake.


Geet on the other hand, felt so tirade she could barely walk. Shila walks in with fresh set of cloths & her food. "you should take a shower & fresh up!" she suggest, geet could not even walk as her feet tremble in lack of sleep, specially after 2 whole day & 2 nights of no sleep. Her eyes burning with pain, throbbing. She smiles... "you will fall Ill 2!" she suggest... "go and freshen up, I will get the food ready for you." she again smiles.

Geet "I need to pay as well, I really have no idea how much this operation have cost." shil kept quit, knowing well, private hospital, top of it private room & private care. She was worried if she could afford it.

Shila "geet.. I think..."

Geet "I know it will be very expensive, I am sure I can negotiate."

Shila "this is a very big hospital, are you sure? Why don't you ask maan..." shila could not even finish the sentence when geet gives her a glare. She may work under him, have relationship but she flows her own rule, she have her dignity, & surly after what just happen yesterday, she surly will never ask for any help. "enough, I can clearly pay for it." she spoke in a firm voice.

She hurriedly walks in to the wash room for a shower & change, the cool water gave her enough time to think everything through, specially after what have happened. She took a sigh breath... Making sure she have not gone to her. She did not want the guilty feeling. Defiantly not.


Meantime maan walks in, to see rik. Shila jumps up. Shocked at the same time surprised.. "s-sir!" he faintly smiled to show his pliotness, yet controlling. He came by, gently brushed his hair back, just wanted to feel that he is alright. Shila already could sense that something have happened in between them again, she dare not speak a word, glue to one side of the room... "s.. Sir..." before maan walks out he looks at the washroom door.. He faintly smiles again and walks out...


She drank the shower water as it touched her skin. It was so soothing and calm. She dare not touch the tap to turn it off, it made her body relax...

She walks out after 30 minute. Food was all ready. She tries to take some bite but just couldn't digest... But forced her self to eat...

Geet I am going to pay the bill!" shila nodes... Maan observed her as she walked out. She still looked so toured but much beter.


Rano taps on his shoulder which nearly makes him jump.. "why are you here?" she asks panickly..

Maan "geets brother rik had a accident." rano was smiling, but her face suddenly went to shock hearing her kids name.. She could barely utter a word, the word almost refuged to came out... "w-wha- what was the name again?" she managed to force some words out,.. But still it went in vain, her heart startted to ake, surly 2 people having her son & daughters name, that can not be coincident.

Maan"rik! Geets brother!"


Geet comes to the reception, but only to over hair...

Nurse "20 lak. Can you imagine, why would anyone leave maan sing khurana!" geet looked puzzled.

Nurse "20 lake bill, the way she walked in, she surly did not have that money!" geet tried to ignore..

Geet "may I have the bill please for rik handa room 21." she asked pliotly to one of the receptionist & smiled.

R "mam your bill have been pain, 20 lak!" she looked at her in shock, trying to figure out the nurses word.

Geet "who have paid the bill?" she demands an answer in angry tone



R "mr khurana & her grand mother. Bless them, they were feeling so guilty," geet walked off quickly. She was so angry now, the amount was so big, her months salary & top of it, thiss stuff. Her brain did not cool down at all, now wars, she couldn't think at all..


Rano stood there shocked as maans eyes watched fuming geet. He wondered what happen now? Her eyes feel on maan, & Ranos back. She came rushing, without acknowledging Ranos presence "how dare you pay the bill to show me low?" still not realising get moms presence while she had tears of happiness in her eyes. "how dare you?"

Maan "geet.." he felt heart...

Geet "enough! Don't you dare entefear with my life, what have you thought of me? I greedy girl? Just because she have 3 kids to look after! Can't afford this?" her word pierced his heart...

Her anger only increased, she was tiared, top of it her brother still in coma & now those disgusting thought behind those payment. "I had enough of y..." geet could not finsh her sentence when her eyes fell on rano, who's tear did not stop. She was so confused, very confused, was this really her mother? No! No that can't be.. Maan looks at her in surprise, why she have stop so sudden? He looks at rano, in tears...

Geet "m.. Mo.. Mom!!!"

She was about to faint, as the lack of sleep on top of it now was she day dreaming because of all the worries.. Her world was spinning, then suddenly all could she remember was crashing her self in maans embrace...


Maan in panic startted to pat her cheek, shouting for the dr... He was so worried, it clearly showed on his face. He quickly picks her up & shooting for a dr... He hugged her tight, bringing him close to him, like almost not letting her to escape...


Rano in sock just stood there. Couldn't digest the truth, couldn't digest anything.. She tried to sum up, rik is in hospital, much beter, maan is in love with geet, madly, something that will leave him no where. Her daughter just faint! .. She took few step back, stumbling, wouldn't she be happy, that man like maan, a angel is in love with her daughter.. Or upset because there so many things to be cleared, specially our past, not just about me, but also her father family, will he accept her after those, the face that even geeg her self unaware. What she to do, be happy that her daughter is in safe hand or cry?


Maan gives her a small peck. Worried sick..

Dr "she is fine, just too much stress, please try to put her in bed rest.. Maan nodes & holds her tight. He loves her so much.. But does she?

He observed her face, she looked so pale, very ill, he creased her cheek.. Flowed by another kiss on her forehead.. Rano looked at them from outside.. Crying...



next "argument"🤢😕

sorry for sad parts.. but bare with me😭

hay you so so so sorry.. i do appoligies, big time, but lately have been very

busy.. too much work, running round everywhere..

so here you go.. wrote another part.. wil update that soon 2..

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

YIPEE ME FIRST FISRT FIRST... sooo happpy... keyama i must be stalking u subconsciously... thats why me the first to like and comment...

WOHOOO
me so happy FINALLY you updated... u were in updating process for a long time... i thought u were going to update last night for me... and i was sad i would have missed this update... but i think u went to sleep... so me just made it here on time...
coming to update,
awesome update... wow RIK is responding?? wow good sign indeed.. glad he is responding... geet cares abt rik so much... poor geet she stayed up the whole night.. maan is so sweet... i cant see him hurt,,,😭😭 shila is good...😊
RANO😲😲😲 OH EM GEE😲😲😲
GEET😡😡😡 i know she is upset but this is NO RIGHT shouting at maan...😡😡
so rano saw geet and they finally met😃😃 aww... poor thing...
KEYAMA it was a unusually short update... but also very sad... 😭😭 but me loving the update... keep going... loving the flow of story... BRILLIANT update... pls update soon and continue more... me as usual greedy so want more and more and more... 😈
PRECAP was🤢🤢 another arguement!!!!!!!!!!!😡 keyama pls give us some happy ones too... ghsp is more than enough to give us maaneet arguements... pls make a happy one soon... me will wait... awesome again...👏👏👏 me so happy... 🤗
Star of update: MAAN😳
continue soon... MUAH...
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Edited by zaara25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

yaaa ho meee second at kemya's ff...Thanks

yes this part was very important for the strory to proceed... finally they met...
Edited by maansee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow Rano met Geet, and now Maan knows she is Geet's mom.
glad that you made Maan come back for her,
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW !!! mind blowing update...

cant Waite any more ...please continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Poor maan but geet is hell worried about her brother both the anger is justified
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Posted: 14 years ago
happy that finally geet n rano met... now plss update the next part sooon😊 lovely part
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sad part...but looking fwrd for happy happy parts...hope everything gets solved fast...grt work...

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