newFF(Maneet)Mere humsafar Trd 1uptd prt16 pg 138 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congrats on ur new ff dear!!!
Lovely concept...try continuing asap...!!!!
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Continue soon ...maaneet contract marriage interesting...
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interesting concept...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks frnds 4 ur encouragement. i will b updating soon😛
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ilove your concept dear.do continue.
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Banner: by Shivangi (CIDManeetNaksh)

Thanks a ton for ur appreciation and encouragement frnds. I will try my level best to meet ur expectations

Character sketch:

Maan Singh Khurana: Owner of Khurana Constructions. Rich, Smart, intelligent but an arrogant person. Doesn't really care about anyone other than his family which constitutes of his granny, younger brother and sister. Doesn't believe in the institution of marriage and thinks that each and everything around the world revolves around money.

Geet Handa: Sweet, smart, intelligent and brave girl. Has witnessed very tough times pretty early in her life. She lost her parents in an early age. Excellent in academics and was able to complete her studies with scholarships. She believes in the beauty of relationships and the institution of love. She will never tolerate any wrong act and will stand like a rock in situations where she knows that she is right.

Savitri Khurana / Dadima: Granny of maan. Her whole world revolves around her 3 grandchildren. The only thing that bothers her is maan's attitude towards relationships and the hatred that he shows towards marriage. Desperately is in search of a girl who can bring about a beautiful change in maan's life.

Dev khurana: Younger brother of maan. Helps maan with the family business but doesn't believe in dictating terms. Has a friendly nature and can do anything for the happiness of maan.

Anvesha Khurana (Annie) : Younger sister of maan and best friend of geet.

PART ONE

Khurana Mansion

Annie (very happy): O Dadima aaj main bahut khush hoon aaj itne dino ke baad meri mulakat meri best friend geet se hogi.

Dadima: Haan haan jaante hai. Aapki khushi aapke chehre se saaf saaf jhalak rahi hai. Waise sach kahe geet se milne ke liye hum bhi bade bekaraar hai abhi tak tho sirf phone pe baate hothi thi aaj pehli baar hum unsse rubaru honge.

Annie: Waise dadi aapne maan bhai se geet ki naukri ki baat ki hai na?

Dadima: Aap tho jaante hai annie ke aapke bhai ladkiyon ke naam se bhi kitna chidte hain, lekin aap fikar mat khijiye ek baar geet ko yaha aa jane dijiye phir hum unsse baat kar lenge waise bhi geet kafi talented ladki hai maan ko unka kaam pasand aayega.

Annie: Ye baat tho sollana sach hai dadi. Geet mehez intelligent aur talented hi nahi balki bahut khoobsurat bhi hai. Jab bhi usse dekhti hoon bus ek hi khayal dil mein aata hai ke kaash wo meri dost ke saath saath meri bhabhi bhi bun jaaye

Dadima: Chahte tho hum bhi yahi hai ke maan ki zindagi mein koi aisi ladki aaye jo ke apne pyar se unke jeewan ko khushiyoon ke khoobsurat rango se bhar de magar'.

Annie: Magar kya dadi' geet wakai mein badi achhi ladki hai

Dadi: Baat geet ki nahi hai bete baat maan ki hai. Shadi ke naam se hi wo gusse se tilmilane lagte hai. Ab kya kare aap aur dev tho uss samay chotte the iss liye shayad aap dono ko yaad nahi hai magar maan ke dil mein iss baat ne jaise ghar kar liya hai ke shadi kabhi successful ho hi nahi sakti. Waise unki bhi koi galti nahi hai unhone apne aakhon ke saamne aapke mummy papa ke rishte ko tehes nehes hote hue dekha hai. Uss waqt ne tho jaise maan ka pura bachpan hi unsse cheen liya hum chahkar bhi unhe ma-baap ka wo pyar na de sake jispar unka adhikaar tha. Wo andar hi andar guththe rahe aur humhe iss baat ka ehsaas bhi na ho paya ke kab humare maan ki saari maasumiyat saare jazbaat waqt ke andhere kue mein kho gaye aur jab humne ye mehsoos kiya tab tak bahut der ho chuki thi. Unke liye tho duniya mein mehez do jazbaat exist karte hai aur wo hai nafrat aur gussa.

Annie: Don't worry dadi sab thik ho jaayega aap dekhna aapko geet se milkar badi khushi hogi n believe me dadi ek bus wahi hai jo maan bhai ko badal sakti hai.

Dadi: Kaash aapki baat sach ho annie. Waise geet ki train kab ki hai?

Annie: Pata nahi

Dadi: Kya matlab pata nahi? Aapki best frnd aaj aa rahi hai aur aapne unke train ka time bhi nahi pucccha?

Annie: wo geet ke aane ki khushi mein main ye pucchna bhool hi gayi. But don't worry uske paas humare ghar ka address hai aur waise bhi yaha aane ke baad wo mujhe call tho zaroor karegi tab main khud usse pick karne chali jaaungi.

Dadi: Thik hai lekin jaane se pehle hume bhi inform kar deejiyega

Annie: Definitely Dadi

Annie: Waise dadi maan bhai kaha hai kahi nazar nahi aa rahe?

Dadi: unhe koi urgent kaam tha iss liye bahar gaye hai. Chaliye ab aap apna kaam kijiye aur hume humara karne dijiye.

Saying so dadi leaves.

Meanwhile

Railway station

Geet: chalo aakhirkaar pauhach hi gaye. Thank you babaji mujhe sahi salamat yaha pouchane ke liye. Chalo abhi jaldi se annie ko phone kar deti hoon.

She takes out her mobile

Geet: (makes a baby face) ye lo iss mobile ki battery ko bhi abhi down hona tha. Kehte hai desh taraki kar raha hai bade naye naye technologies bahar aa rahe hai bhai lekin koi aisi technology banaona jisse ke mobile ki battery kam se kam ek saal without charge kiye chale. Jab kabhi bhi iss mobile ki zarurat hoti hai tabhi iski battery coma mein chali jaati hai.

Geet: Haiyo rabba ab kya karu. Haan (smiles)Itna bada shehar hai yaha kahi na kahi telephone booth toh hoga hi usi se annie ko phone kar leti hoon. Hello bhaisahab yaha telephone booth kaha pe hai?

Guy: Road ke uss side pe ek telephone booth hai

Geet: ji shukriya

Geet is trying to cross the road. When suddenly a car comes in a very high speed jiske wajah se road ka pura khichad geet ke dress par lag jaata hai

Geet: Areoye gaddi dekhkar nahi chala sakte kya meri puri dress kharab kar di.

D car stops and the owner of the car comes out. It is none other than Maan Singh Khurana.

Precap 1: Maan: "Tum jaisi ladkiyon ko main bahut acchhe se pehchanta hoon"

Precap 2: Geet: "Ayenda kisi bhi ladkise ulajne se pehle sau baar sochiyega kahi agle baar aapke gaalo par haato ke print ke bajaye kisi ladki ke sandal ka print na chap jaaye"

Edited by piya- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Piya...awesome start... Geet coming to meet Annie...her best friend... and she wants Geet to become her bhabhi also...OMG lovely start...Maan angry-young man... cool! wanna see more of his attitude...

Continue soon

Yay!! me first!!!
Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome...cant wait 4 next..update soon n thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome👏...cant wait 4 next.😉.update soon n thnks 4 pm😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update
cant wait for maaneet takkar

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