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Posted: 14 years ago
Banner : By Shivangi (CIDManeetNaksh)
Sorry 4 d late update frnds. Here is d next part of "MERE HUMSAFAR" hope u will like it. Do let me know ur views regarding d update. Love- Piya
PART 3

Geet reaches d phone bhooth and dials Annie's number

Annie: Hello

Geet: Annie this is geet

Annie: Geet' tum kaha se baat kar rahi ho aur tumhari train kab aane wali hai?

Geet: Annie main Delhi pauhach chuki hoon

Annie: O wow dear' but wait ye tum kaunse number se phone kar rahi ho?

Geet: Annie I m calling from a PCO woh humesha ki tarah mera mobile coma mein chala gaya hai

Annie: o u mean tere mobile ki battery down ho gayi hai.. waise kya hua tu kuch upset sound kar rahi hai?

Geet: Chod yaar tu pehle mujhe pick karne aa ja phir tujhe saari baat batati hoon.

Annie: Ok Geet now just tell me ke tu exactly iss waqt kaha pe hai

Geet: Main iss waqt'(tells her d exact location)

Annie: Ok dear I will b there within half an hour till then miss me.

Geet: Ok dear I'll b waiting. See u soon

Call ends

Annie: Dadima geet delhi aa chuki hain main usse pick karne ja rahi hoon

Dadi: Thik hain bete jaldi aayiega hum bhi geet se milne ke liye bade utawale hue ja rahe hain

Annie: bye dadi

Dadi: bye bete

Annie leaves

Dadi: (thinking) Lagta hain aakhirkar khushiyon ne humare ghar pe dastak de hi di (smiles)

Dadi: Nakul aapne geet ka kamra saaf tho kar diya hai na

Nakul: Ji dadi

Khurana constructions:

Adi: Tum apne liye naya ghar dekh rahi thii na pinky kya hua kahi baat bani ya nahi

Pinky: Haan kal broker ke saath ek One BHK flat dekhne ja rahi hoon shayad baat bun hi jaaye

Maan arrives

Maan: (angry) Pinky ye tum adi se kya keh rahi thi?

Pinky: Wo maan sir kuch bhi toh nahi

Maan: Broker ke bare mein shayad kuch

Adi: sir wo actually pinky apne naye one bhk flat ke bare mein baat kar rahi thi.

Maan: (gets more angry) Ye mera office samjhe tum ayanda yaha agar kisi ne bhi one bhk ka naam bhi liya usse ussi waqt naukri se nikaal diya jaayega. Got it.

Adi and pinky: (scared) Yes sir

Maan enters his cabin

Adi: Maan sir ko kya hua humne aisi kaunsi baat keh di jo ke wo gusse se itne tilmilarahe hai

Pinky: ye kaunsi nayi baat hai gussa karna tho unka janamsidh adhikaar hai waise adi kya tumne note kiya ke aaj maan sir ki aakho ke saath saath unka gaal bhi lal nazar aa raha tha mano jaise kisi ladki ne ek karara thapad laga diya ho

Adi: (laughs) dheere bolo pinky agar maan sir ne sun liya na tho lene ke dene pad jaayenge'

Pinky: ya u r right chalo hum apna kaam karte hain

Maan's cabin

Maan: us ladki ki itni himmat ke usne maan singh khurana ko thapad maara. U will have to pay for this. Ab tum chahe duniya ke kisi bhi kone mein kyun na chali jaao main tumhe dhoond nikalunga and I promise each day of ur life will b a living hell. Ulti ginti ginna shuru kardo u dho kaudi ki ladki'

Railway station

Annie arrives

Annie: (Goes and hugs geet) o darling I was missing u so much. Tu soch bhi nahi sakti ke tere intezaar mein main kitni pagal hue ja rahi thi.

Geet: Annie maine bhi tujhe bada miss kiya yaar'

Both of them break d hug

Annie: Geet ye tere kapdo ko kya ho gaya' tera accident tho nahi hua na u r fine na

Geet: Relax annie aisa kuch bhi nahi hua haan ek akdu insaan se paala pad gaya tha lekin maine bhi usse uski naani yaad dila di

Annie: achha pehle ghar chalte hain tu mujhe apne iss experience ke bare mein raaste mein bata dena

Geet: (smiles) Haan chal chalte hain

Khurana Mansion

Dadi is desperately waiting to meet geet

Annie and geet arrive

Geet goes and takes d blessings of dadi

Dadi: Khush rahiye bete ( caresses geet's face) Are waah aap tho humare khayal se bhi zyaada khoobsurat hain (then suddenly notices her dress) Geet bete ye aapne apna kya haal bana rakha hain raaste mein kuch problem tho nahi hua tha na

Geet: Kuch nahi dadi ek sirfira mil gaya tha bus usski akal thikane lagakar aa rahi hoon

Dadi: Kya matlab hum kuch samjhe nahi bete

Annie: ofho dadi geet ke aate hi aap tho mujhe bhool hi gayi. Dadi pehle geet ko fresh ho jaane dijiye phir hum dono milkar usse dher saari baate karenge

Dadi: Annie aisa bahut hi kum mauke aate hain ke jab aap sahi waqt pe sahi baat chedti hain' khair aapki iss baat se tho hum bhi sehmat hai. Geet bete aap fresh ho jaaiye tab tak hum aapke khane ka bandobast karte hain

Geet: Ji dadima

Annie: Chalo geet main tumhe tumhare room tak chod aati hoon

Annie and geet leave

After some time geet comes to the living room Dadi and Annie are already present there

Dadi: Are geet bete aap taiyar ho gayi aayiye baithiye

Geet: Ji dadi (goes n sits besides annie)

Annie: Acchha geet apne akdu Mr. Richie Rich ke baare mein dadi ko bhi batau na

Dadi: Mr. Richie Rich ye kaun hai

Geet: Dadi wo actually hua yu ke main road cross kar rahi thi ke tab achanak se ke car bahut hi high speed mein waha se guzari aur road ka pura kichad mere dress pe lag gaya

Geet: Maine peeche se aawaz lagakar poocha ke dekh kar gaadi nahi chala sakte kya

Dadi: Haan tho phir?

Geet: Phir kya, uss gaadi ka maalik meri taraf bada aur mujhe meri aukaad samjhaane lag gaya

Annie: Aur jaanti ho dadi meri sherni dost ne kya kiya?

Dadi: Kya ?

Annie: pure public ke samne uss stupid, arrogant, idiot Mr. ghamandi ko ek jor ka chata maar diya

Dadi: Bete ye aapne kya kiya aapko baat ko bhadhana nahi chahiye tha

Geet: Nahi dadi mujhe maaf kar dijiyega main aapki iss baat se sehmat nahi hoon

Geet: Dadi agar wo bhanda mujhse sorry keh deta tab toh koi baat honi hi nahi thi' wo Mr. BHK tho ulta mujhse maafi expect kar raha tha

Geet: Chalo agar baat itnsi hoti tab bhi koi gal nahi thi' magar paiso ka itna guroor itni akad' ke paiso ke saamne kisi insaan ke jazbaato ki bhi koi kadar nahi' iss baat se mujhe aitraaz hai

Geet: Dadi main maanti hoon ke zindagi mein paiso ki saqt zaroorat hain magar agar saamne wala aapse paiso ke mamle mein agar chotta ho tho iska ye matlab tho nahi ke aap sarre aam uss inseam ko uski haisiyat samjhaye

Geet: Dadi agar meri galti hoti na tho main jath se maafi maang leti ek pal ke liye bhi hishkichati nahi magar mere life ka ek aur rule hain ke chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye main kabhie bhi kisi galat baat ka saath nahi dungi

Geet: Are woh Mr. BHK ko itni tameez bhi nahi k ek ladki se kaise baat ki jaati hain aur who mujhe meri haisiyat samjhana chahta tha

Geet: Dadi agar mera bus chalta naa toh zyada nahi bus kuch dus pandra thapad aur laga deti' samajtha kya hai wo apne aap ko..

Dadi: Geet bete aap baate bade majedaar kar leti hai' khair humhe bhi lagta hain ke aapne jo kuch bhi kiya wo bilkul thik kiya' rahi baat wo dus pandra thapado kii toh ye kasar agli mulakat mein puri kar lijega

Everyone starts laughing

Dadi: (thinking) Annie thik hi kehti thi agar maan ko koi badal sakta hai toh wo sirf aur sirf geet hi hain. Ab chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye hum geet ko yaha se jaane nahi denge

Precap: Maan & Geet second meeting 😉

part 4 : pg 34
Edited by piya- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
CANT WAIT TO SEE MAAN AND GEETS MEETING
Edited by Palak5922 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh no another cliff hanger waiting for their 2nd meeting
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update...loved it:))waiting 4 the next part...Thanks 4 the pm:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww it was awesomeee
luved ittt
totallyyy rockinggg
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh no ab toh pakka jung chidney wala hain...
patha nahin maan kya karega...
waiting for the clash of titans
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Posted: 14 years ago
Waiting for the second meeting
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update Piya but you left us at a cliffhanger...i am not dadi's age but meri heart ki palpatations bad rahi hai in donon ki next meeting ke baare mein soch kar...
Please have some taras on my heart and update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice prt,waitng 4 their 2meetng,dadi annie bhi nillenge mr ghamndi se.cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
n precap sounds interesting

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