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Posted: 14 years ago
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heya, I was an new write, too and readers come as the story goes along, that was the case with me at least. When I started, I had hardly any readers and now I have so many people who like to be kept up to date with my work... just don't give up, it takes loads of courage to write and I think we all appreciate the effort writers put into their work to entertain us.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mina420

heya, I was an new write, too and readers come as the story goes along, that was the case with me at least. When I started, I had hardly any readers and now I have so many people who like to be kept up to date with my work... just don't give up, it takes loads of courage to write and I think we all appreciate the effort writers put into their work to entertain us.

Thank you but i just want a FEW more likes maybe a total of 20 or 25???😃 thats not much is it??😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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update plzzz wating for long plzzz...


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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
nice start.continue soon...
plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i didn't found it boring or long rather it is intreasting and can u plesae add me to the pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome start...
plzz add me in
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Posted: 14 years ago
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AWSOME

PLZ ADD ME IN PM LIST
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
good start pal continue...we r waitin...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello guys. I got 23 likes so I am gonna update the 1st chapter. If you dont like it, then please let me know honestly, I will discontinue this FF!
People who have been asking me for a PM, I have sent you all a buddy request so please accept that, or you wont be getting a PM from me!!
So, heres the First chapter. Hope you people like it!!😳
CHAPTER -1
She shivered, which had nothing to do with the cold wind, or frosty weather. His touch was driving her to the edge. He held her hands tightly against the wall, and pressed his hard body closer to her soft, petite figure. He trailed a line of kisses from her shoulder to collarbone to her long neck. She started moaning softly, melting to his feathery touches.
" Geet, I love you, I am sorry, I did wrong, Please come back to me, I am sorry I hurt you, I am sorry please", he murmured, while sucking the flesh on her neck and collarbone.
He bit her gently on her shoulder, causing her to gasp. He looked up to see her eyes tightly closed, savouring his kisses and touches.
" Geet, please come back home. I cant live without you. I promise I will never hurt you again.I am so sorry jaan", his kisses became more aggressive and demanding. He bit her earlobe, causing her to arch her back and sigh softly.
She was almost on the verge of surrendering to his magical touch when the sharp pain shooting down her left wrist caused her to snap open her eyes and push him away.
" No Maan, I dont want any explanations. The most important thing is, you didnt trust me. You didnt trust your wife. Hamare rishte mein agar aapko mujhpar vishwaas hi nahin hain, toh iss rishte ka kya matlab hai?"
" Iss rishte ka koi matlab nahin hain Geet? Do you want to say you have stopped loving me? Mujhse galti hogayi Geet, I should have listened to you! But tum khud se jhoot kyun bol rahiho? Tum mujhse pyaar karti ho. Bohut pyaar karti ho phir...yeh"
He grabbed her again, this time wounding his hands in her hair.
" Mere taraf dekho Geet aur kaho, ke tum apne Maan se pyaar nahin karti? I dont affect you? You dont care if I live or die?"he looked at her desperately, their lips inches apart.
She stiifened with the word "Die" but then nodded her head for a no, with her eyes closed and tears running down her cheeks.
" Jhoot, bilkul Jhoot. You love me Geet, You are crazy about me." he brought his lips close to her cheeks and kissed away her tears. He kissed her cheek and rubbed his stubble on her soft cheek flesh.
She put her hands on his chest, and gave him a push.
"Mujhe jane dijeye Maan. Main aapke saath ghar wapas nahin aaungi."
Having said this, she picked up her bags from the ground and walked away, leaving a frustrated and heart broken Maan behind.
Geet opened the door with her set of keys. She was living with her friend Pinky after she left Khurana Mansion that night. She had insisted on paying but Pinky was hearing none of that. After all they were childhood friends and used to live together before Geet married Maan.
She was alone tonight, since Pinky was on a training tour for 7 days.
Geet walked to the kitchen closet and took out the first aid box. She sat on the chair and took off her bangles from her left hand, which she wore to cover the wound.
It was bleeding. Again. Probably because Maan had held her hand tightly. But then, it bled almost every night. The cut was so deep. Painful. She soaked the cotton ball in savlon and dipped it on the cut. The pain almost paralysed her and fresh tears started to stream down her cheeks.
She looked at the wound and thought of the day she got it. The day Maan gave her the wound. The day which ruined their relationship. The day Maan stopped trusting her. The day when it all started.
PRECAP: Geet, He's our new client Mr.
Ayan, YOU?? OMG I cant believe it.
She ran and hugged him tight, in front of Maan!!
Okay guys so this is it.
PLZ press the like button and do leave me comments. I am Dying to know your Response.
Love
Sarzah
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
simply awesome...seems that maan is very possesiive and obsessive about geet...
loved the first part to the core...
keep writing
love ur ff

reva

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