FANTASY (Maaneet FF)-Link to thread 2 Pg-151

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Hello guys I am Sarzah! Some of you might know me, but most of you probably don't.😊
I am still quite new to this Forum and I am damn scared to start this FF since I dont know whether I will be able to continue it, do justice to it, or even write it properly in the first place as I am a TOTALLY crap writer!!
But still its worth a try. I just hope you guys like it.

FANTASY

(Maaneet FF)
Characters:
1. GEET KHURANA: A Beautiful girl of 26. She is simple, sweet, loving, innocently sexy and VERY much in LOVE!!
2. MAAN SINGH KHURANA: A rich and handsome business tycoon of 29. He is born to succeed and he got there all by himself!!
3. SAVITRI DEVI: A remarkable lady with great personality, style and principles. The much loved grandmother of Maan, she is the one woman he looks up to.
4. PARI SINGHANIA: A family friend of the Khuranas, and an almost sister of Geet.
5. VIKRANT SINGH KHURANA: The youngest son of the Khurana Household. Pampered and loved by all, he is like a brother to Geet.
INTRODUCTION
The roads were crowded with the evening traffic as usual as people all around were hurrying to the warmth and shelter of their homes and loved ones.
Clutching the grocery bags in her hand, she wrapped the shawl more tightly round her petite figure, as a feeble attempt of blocking out the frosty, raw wind of early January.
" Geet!!!!"
She stood still as if the voice rooted her to the spot. It send shivers down her spine, made her throat dry, and caused her palms to become all clammy and sweaty..He STILL has that kind of an effect on her, and she cant deny that.
But she can run. She risked a backward glance, and caught sight of him. The desperate glint in his eyes was the last thing she registered before she took to her heels and started running with all her might!!!
" Geet! Geet stop, listen to me please listen to me! I HAVE to talk to you!! Please!!"
The traffic sounds were blocking the voice, and when she looked around He was gone!!
And then a pair of muscular arms grabbed her by the waist. She tried to scream, but the large hand on her mouth blocked the voice out!!
She was slammed onto the wall of a dark, deserted alley and held tightly against the wall.
" Let go of me! I dont wanna talk to you. Jao, Just go, leave me alone ", she screamed and started to hit him with her tiny fists, tears streaming down her cheeks, while he stared at her lovingly!!
" Maine kaha na, choriye mujhe.. warna main chillaungi Maan. I will gather people..I.."
He pinned her hands down on the wall, the bags lay on the ground forgotten!!
" Chillao! Mujhe bhi sunna hai ke tum logon ko kya kahogi. Ke tumhare PATI ne tumhara haath zabardasti se pakra taki woh tumse baat kar sake, tumse maafi maang sake, tumhe yeh bata sake ke woh tumse kitna pyaar karta hain!!", he said huskily while planting a wet kiss on shoulder.
Thats it guys. I am sorry. I think the introduction went too long... I am sorry if you found it boring..I would really appreciate if you give me your feedbacks honestly. I will be waiting for it!!😊
Love
Sarzah
INDEX
Chapter 1- Pg 3
Chapter 2- Pg 5
Chapter 3- Pg 7
Chapter 4- Pg 10
Chapter 5- Pg 16
Chapter 6- Pg 19
Chapter 7- Pg 25
Chapter 8- Pg 31
Chapter 9- Pg 35
Chapter 10-Pg 39
Chapter 11-Pg 43
Chapter 12-Pg 47
Chapter 13-Pg 51
Chapter 14-Pg 57
Chapter 15-Pg 63
Chapter 16-Pg 67
Chapter 17-Pg 73
Chapter 18-Pg 79
Chapter 19- Pg 85
Chapter 20-Pg 93
Chapter 21-Pg 101
Chapter 22-Pg 109
Chapter 23-Pg 119
Chapter 24-Pg 125
Chapter 25-Pg 135
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rupzloveu thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsome ...loved the prolong plzz continue soon will b waiting...👏
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i want to read more... mummyyy😭
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Cool start
Do con & pm me pls
Update soonnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congo congo
new FF
awesome prologue
love it
do cont soonnn
pls do pm me
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Awesome concept
Plz add me to ur pm list
Thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Love the introduction, and love the concept..
Looking forward to the ff
Plz do pm when you update :D

And update soon 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing pro.
love it.
do continue plz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow nice start yaar !!!
continue soon !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you guys for the response!!!😃
I have chapter 1 all done and ready!!
But I will update after I get a few more likes and atleast 5 pages of comments!!
I am sorry for doing this, but its no fun writing when you dont have enough readers!!😭
Oh, and if you want to be PMed PLZ SEND ME A BUDDY REQUEST!!It makes my life a lot easy!!!😆
Edited by sarzah - 14 years ago

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