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Namy

@Amy_an

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#151

Hey Khush, just finished reading last and latest part in one go..

OMG the apology scene was indeed amazing.. Loved the way Abhi hesitated to utter those five simple letters SORRY.. Part was very nicely written .. Loved it..

Well as far as the latest update is concerned, I enjoyed it to the core.. Specilally loved the convo between Nikki- Armaan- Ridhima.. As I keep on saying I simply love, adore the bonding between these trio. It was a treat to read something like that on a special day called 'friendship day'.. Oww that reminds me to wish u and everyone over here belated Happy Friendship day :)

Coming back to the update, I liked the way Ridhima intervened and saved Nikki from Armaan' rapid fire questions.. The way she shut him up and made him understand that why his intervention in that matter wasn't required.. Otherwise Nikki's tongue tied attitude would have encouraged Armaan to misconcept the situation.. Ultimately he, naively, would have ended up in going overboard and worsening the situation between AN..

Neverthless, I always love Armaan's great bonding with Nikki, his protectiveness for her.. So cute and facinating.. Well, somehow I feel that the bonding between Nikki- Ridz in this FF is much stronger than that of Nikki- Armaan… Wow, that's really amazing..

The convo between Armaan- Ridz towards the end was beautifully written.. Loved the update.. One more update and the showdown of AN emotions will get over.. Am not very much happy about that.. I wish u change ur mind.. Till then, waiting for the next..

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NEHU

@Glitter_In_Eye

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#152

pls dont kill me for this but res again.

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: Nehu_1
pls dont kill me for this but res again.

*laughs like Bellatrix Lestrange*

Avada Kedavra.

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@Sunnipwincessx

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#154

Wow awsome update dude

MIss NIki and Abhi i hope to see dem in DMG 3 xx

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ujala26

@ujala26

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#155

awesome part dear...
luvd it.
but an were very less...
continue soon...

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anotheranfan

@anotheranfan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#156

you know khushboo, in the actual serial i never liked the roles that AR played in AN story.. There were moments I loved the parts AR played but then there were times when i thought it was just mere exaggeration and things stretched too far.. And with that feeling in my mind i am always skeptical when somebody tries to bring them in their AN FFs .. So when you brought them here i was kind of scared but then you showed those emotions that noone tried to indulge in.. When i read it, it all looked so well fitted and right.. job well done.. Bravo.

But that aside I cant wait for the Finale hoping there would be lots of AN and their emotional climax...
This FF was one hell of a ride that i would love to read again when you complete the series, this time in one go.. one way i think that posting this in parts is kind of unjustice to the emotional flow that you have brought out so nicely.. so looking fwd to reading the complete series in one strech...

oh and you dont need to continue this if you dont want to but atleast promise us for another FF/one shot anything.. :)

Jhappies
Pri

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: anotheranfan
you know khushboo, in the actual serial i never liked the roles that AR played in AN story.. There were moments I loved the parts AR played but then there were times when i thought it was just mere exaggeration and things stretched too far.. And with that feeling in my mind i am always skeptical when somebody tries to bring them in their AN FFs .. So when you brought them here i was kind of scared but then you showed those emotions that noone tried to indulge in.. When i read it, it all looked so well fitted and right.. job well done.. Bravo.

But that aside I cant wait for the Finale hoping there would be lots of AN and their emotional climax...
This FF was one hell of a ride that i would love to read again when you complete the series, this time in one go.. one way i think that posting this in parts is kind of unjustice to the emotional flow that you have brought out so nicely.. so looking fwd to reading the complete series in one strech...

oh and you dont need to continue this if you dont want to but atleast promise us for another FF/one shot anything.. :)

Jhappies
Pri

Well honestly Pri, I was very apprehensive about bringing AR into the story...Riddhima had always been supportive and practical, whereas Armaan had a hot head and a tendency to jump to conclusions. DMG had always overdone the fiercely protective friend angle, and the melodrama sort of seeped the logic in the scenes.

I wanted this to be as close to real life as possible...Armaan still not trusting Abhi fully, but trusting his faith in his best friend, letting her have her own way since it was her life. Basically, being the supporting friend he should be.

Yes I know, and this FF has been one hell of a ride for me, despite how small it is. It took a long while to deduce, to understand, and to write. I wanted things to be just right here, and I did my best. It feels really good to know that my efforts have succeeded.

And yes, though I'm busy, my love for AN remains, as does my love for writing. I'll definitely write, don't worry about that. I've had another FF in mind for a long time, but it will take a long while to get posted...maybe a year, or so. But I promise that when it does get posted, I shall try to make it worth the wait.

And of course, you'll get random OneShots, as I just love writing those 😳

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jibreen

@jsha

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#158

Khush nice update

but missing AN

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#159

@annie.shona...thank you!

@Javeria...yeah, generally Armaan creates a lot of trouble so I thought why not let it be resolved peacefully for a change 😆

@Jyothi...thanks!

@Rucha...yes, he has agreed. And for me, that is what best friends should do - stand beside each other when they're needed the most.

@immayurfan...thank you!

@Nammy...thanks! Yeah that apology scene was inspired from a Ron/Hermione FF I read some time...I don't remember the name, but it had something about Ron walking up to her and saying that he was jealous of Krum. That's where the idea came from 😳 Well you see, in this FF though Nikki and Armaan are besties, the Nikki/Riddhima bond is stronger because they have better understanding in these circumstances. Riddhima offered support when she needed it, and so Nikki depends more on Riddhima than Armaan.

@Nehu...oh wait I already Avada Kedavra-ed you, I can't do much more 😆

@Sunnipwincess...thanks!

@angullgrl...thanks!

@Ujala...rather AN were not there at all 😆 thanks!

@Pri...I already replied to you but still I thank you for the comments!

@Jibreen...yes yes, I know you're missing AN...stop whining, you lot! 😆