ArHi OS IN THE BATHROOM (Pg 25)

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Chinchinchoo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

The first OS is amazing as well...loved Anjali teasing Arnav!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Hey this was Awesome...Too funny...loved khushi's dialogues..i was laughing soo Hard..Hilarious 🤣 🤣 I wish we could see this in the show...Too good 😆 😆

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AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

ROFL! Commendable work hun 👏👏

Loved the humour! What a Lovely start at IF today..with ur OS! =D

and yes next read i want it to be solely of ArHi..maybe first day at office..try a hand at tht..u r Fab! ⭐️

Highlights have to be

"Tum mere samne kuch nahi ho aur waise mein bakriyan palne walon (people that raise sheeps) se baat nahi karta," His nani OMG how cud he forget😆😆 and then "Yeh appka chottu hai? Itna bada sandh?" 😆 really funny!

To b a positive critic ...Just one teeny weeny thing..khushi always says Aapke Humare instead of Tumhare mere...dats all

..Keep writing! m luvin ur works..!😳

Luv

ZeeJay! xD

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: mahiem94
Wow that was very good cant wait for the next one 😊

Thanks a lot dear

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: kdg129
that was awesome!! gosh, u're OSs always leave me wanting more. u get the whole setting, feel, and characters very well! and excellent dialect, too (especially when Khushi calls Arnav "lal kila" 😆)

KEEP WRITING!! 😃👏⭐️

Aww thank you soo much sis 😆 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: NaDzGirl
it ws fantaaabulous munchkin 🥳 🥳

i loved ur version more than da actual one we got 😆 must take a bow cz ur dialogues are simply SMASHIN!!!! tooo damn funny baby sis

kushi ws just tooo good 🤣 🤣 i could totally imagine her sayin those dialogues to her lad governor 🤣 🤣 🤣 u cracked me up early in da mornin with ur os dose. poor arnav babu!!! he has nothin else but to stand dere and tolerate da jalebi girl 🤣

pls write soon & pm me warna i'l lose track of ur work!!!

🤗 Glad to be ur mornin coffee 😉

😆 I think CVs should be fired and pple like us (including u) should be hired 😛

Thank youuu sooo much😳 luv ya

🤣 its imaginable tht u'lll lose track of the chalti phirti chatterbox 😆 i'll surely pm u next time😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: kiran255
OMg love it :)

its so fun and chirping !

i wish this would have happened in the show :)

im sooo loving it :)

Thank you so much kiran...

glad u liked it 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Suvi7884
That was hilarious! I was laughing throught out all of it...Khushi is soo funny! and the' bakri ko kyun bich mein laa rahein hai?' LMAO
And Arnav bechara all puffed up and agry at the end! LOL

Great OS!

The first OS is amazing as well...loved Anjali teasing Arnav!

Thanks for reading and commenting suvi 😳

Edited by 0711rokxoxo - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: aahana1
Hey this was Awesome...Too funny...loved khushi's dialogues..i was laughing soo Hard..Hilarious 🤣 🤣 I wish we could see this in the show...Too good 😆 😆

Thanks alot Aahana 🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: TheWandmaker
ROFL! Commendable work hun 👏👏

Loved the humour! What a Lovely start at IF today..with ur OS! =D
and yes next read i want it to be solely of ArHi..maybe first day at office..try a hand at tht..u r Fab! ⭐️

Highlights have to be
"Tum mere samne kuch nahi ho aur waise mein bakriyan palne walon (people that raise sheeps) se baat nahi karta," His nani OMG how cud he forget😆😆 and then "Yeh appka chottu hai? Itna bada sandh?" 😆 really funny!

To b a positive critic ...Just one teeny weeny thing..khushi always says Aapke Humare instead of Tumhare mere...dats all

..Keep writing! m luvin ur works..!😳

Luv
ZeeJay! xD