ArHi OS IN THE BATHROOM (Pg 25) - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: 0711rokxoxo

Hey zee...
Firstly thanks so much for the advice...will def use that 🤗
Then so happy to see another writer...hopefully I see one of your writings soon 😳
Thanks so much for liking it and reading the OS
I guess anjali just makes me want to write more since I can relate to her as a younger sis though😆
thnks once again 😊


Always glad to help 😳
I am not sure i wud b writing nytime soon..i need to get used to these characters which m finding very difficult :S m still missin SaJan terribly :(

You can relate to Anjali..aww thts cute, I luv her character & Daljit plays it brilliantly ⭐️

Waiting eagerly for ur next update...! Keep Rockinng hun 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: 0711rokxoxo

😆 Your long post has made my day sis 🤗
And you knw one thnks to you isnt enuf 😳
Anyways Luv ya 🤗 bear hug!!! 😃


luv ya 2, 3, 4 my chalti phirty chatter box mwaaah 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hola pples!! 😎

Wadbumble's back agaiinnn' Now I would like to thank all of you that read my first OS and commented/liked. 😃

Moving on, dis OS is based on my point of view on how Arnav and Khushi should've met on the 15/16 June epi since the two freaking missed by an INCH.😡Oh and its not really romantic 😭and doesnt really have a point 😕(honestly 😳)So here goes'hope you all like it and peeps please comment..pls pls pls tell me if you want a romantic OS for next time 😉

ArHi aur Ms.Bakri

Khushi hastily walked out of the lavish room as per the instructions of the servant and in her bubbly thoughts she forgot her gathri of saris in the room. The sudden remembrance made her face turn in to a shocked expression with her eyes wide mouth hanging open.

"Hai devi maiya' meri yaadash aaj kal pata nahi kahan chali jati hai'meri gathri toh room mein bhool gayi."

She hurriedly ran back to the room to take her stuff, "bas ek baar gathri le loon and phir yahan rafu chakar hojawun."

"Di! Yeh bag kiska hai?" Arnav asked with curiosity as he never allowed anyone in his room.

"Woh toh woh saree wali ladki ka hoga," Anjali replied in a sweet and low voice. Arnav nodded and left the room with her blue file in his hand.

"Meri gathri gathri gathri'.," Khushi came in mumbling as if searching for it even though it was placed in the same place.

"Tum apni gathri yahan pe bhool gayi thi," Anjali said with a smile then handed her the bag filled with chicken saris.

"Arey iss bhool bhulaiya mein toh mein apna dimaag bhi bhool jawungi' yahaan pe naa, ek naksha (map) rakhna chahiye." Khushi replied with a bubbly voice while Anjali tried her best to control her laughter but giggles still dispersed from her mouth.

"Accha, hum tumhe bahar chod dete hain'chola."

Khushi chattered on and on about how big and beautiful the house was along with a lot funny talks which brightened up Anjali's face even more.

"Humne isse kahin dekha hai'par kahan?" Anjali tried to remember but her memory was failing her.

*NOTE: The story takes place in the afternoon*

On the other hand, downstairs the whole family had gathered for lunch and surprisingly Arnav and Akash were at home.

"Chotte, tum aaj ghar par kaise?" Nani asked him as she seated down on the head seat of the grand dining table. It was all white with silverware placed across and many dishes filled with different vegetables were spread throughout.

"Nani woh file ghar par hi bhool gaya tha aur phir client ka phone aaya ke who shaam ko ghar par hi aana chahte hain. Toh I thought thodi preparations kar loon."

Nani smiled and proceeded on to having lunch.

"Hello hi bye bye' Mein puchti hoon waihre (where) eeejj (is) Anjali?" Mami spoke with her heavy accent as Akash tried his best not spurt the food out of his mouth while laughing.

"its WHEARE' IIISSS'." Akash said exaggerating. Mami made a face and returned down to biting her food.

"Dekho kitne acche se who ladki laxmi ko pyaar se khila rahi hai," Nani said as she glanced through the stairs.

Everyone followed her gaze to see Anjali dressed in a beautiful sari (as usual) with her bangs clipped back in a puff coming along with a pretty girl that was very a salwar kameez and had her long hair in a braid. She had the goat in her hand and was with a smile feeding her.

Akash's eyes went wide as he looked from the girl and back at Arnav. Arnav was now peering at the girl as she made her way down the stairs still blabbering on and suddenly stopped in her tracks. She let out a gasp as she found Arnav standing in front of her. Everyone else was just looking at the two (soon to be)love birds staring at each other.

"Hai Devi Maiya' abb yeh lad governer mujhe din bhi dikhne laga' raat mein dikhta tha woh kya kam tha," she mumbled.

"Tum kyun mera picha kar rahi ho?" Arnav said in a stern voice.

Khushi sucked in a deep air when she realized that she was not dreaming. Anjali and Akash were now side by side and Nani, mami and mamaji were standing on the other side.

"Mein..mein'mein'" Khushi started but couldn't get anything out.

"Ab yeh bakri ki tarah mein mein mein kya laga rakha hai'par tum jaisi ladkiyaan'" Arnaav was about to begin when Khushi held up her hand.

"BAS!" She yelled loudly. Everyone was stunned at the courage of the girl to speak up against Arnav Raizada while Akash was giving the two a wide grin. Anjali noticed and gave him a confused look.

"Di' woh ladki' news par..arnav ki bahon mein'" Akash whispered. Anjali's face brightened like no tomorrow.

"Yeh kya tum jaisi ladkiyaan tum jaisi ladkiyaan laga rakha hai' jab bhi milte ho shuru hojati hai tumhari aaukad ki baatein. Jab peda huwe the toh kya neem ya karela khaya tha kya?" Khushi yelled as she found some courage when she thought that atleast the people in his family can save her today.

"Tum mere samne kuch nahi ho aur waise mein bakriyan palne walon (people that raise sheeps) se baat nahi karta," Arnav said but his statement made nani very angry and she was about to speak up when the rajdhani express started again.

"BAKRI! Oye mister' ek toh yeh meri bakri nahi hai balki TUMHARE ghar mein se mili'aur tum iss (bakri) ko kyun biche mein dal rahe ho?"

"Tum!...Tum!... Tum yahan kar kya rahi ho? Yahan ayi kaise??"

"Mein khidki todke aayi..." her tone sarcastic "itna bada darwaaza nahi dikhai deta kya?"

She gasped loud and everyones heart skipped a beat "Yeh appka chottu hai? Itna bada sandh?" She asked nani.

"Sandh!??? Tum ne mujhe sandh kaha." Arnav asked in disbelief.

"Aur nahi toh kya'mujhe laga ke naniji kisi chotte bache ki baat kar rahi thi lekin yahan toh pure ka pura lal kila (red fort) ghoom raha hai." Arnav was shocked and couldn't utter a reply.

She then turned towards Anjali "Iss rakshash lad governer ke saath aap rehti kaise hain? Kher chodiye mujhe dair ho rahi hai'mein chalti hoon." She stormed off the mansion without giving another glance back at Arnav.

"Chotte! Yeh koi tarika hai kya kisise baat karne ka?" Nani asked angrily.

"But' aap use jante nahi hai'bohot hi'" Arnav was cut in the middle.

"Acchi ladki hai'aur khabar daar agar uss ladki ke bare mein ya meri laxmi ke bare mein kabhi kuch kaha toh." Nani stormed off to her room followed by mamiji and mamaji who had surprisingly remained queit throughout the argument.

Anjali giggled while Arnav had a little pout on his face with a bit of anger as his family was turning against him for that strange girl.

kk so thats it for now...how was it???
Edited by 0711rokxoxo - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
bravo that was fantastic...keep it up...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: neetusidhu

bravo that was fantastic...keep it up...

thank you neetu 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
Wow that was very good cant wait for the next one 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
that was awesome!! gosh, u're OSs always leave me wanting more. u get the whole setting, feel, and characters very well! and excellent dialect, too (especially when Khushi calls Arnav "lal kila" 😆)

KEEP WRITING!! 😃👏⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
it ws fantaaabulous munchkin 🥳 🥳

i loved ur version more than da actual one we got 😆 must take a bow cz ur dialogues are simply SMASHIN!!!! tooo damn funny baby sis

kushi ws just tooo good 🤣 🤣 i could totally imagine her sayin those dialogues to her lad governor 🤣 🤣 🤣 u cracked me up early in da mornin with ur os dose. poor arnav babu!!! he has nothin else but to stand dere and tolerate da jalebi girl 🤣

pls write soon & pm me warna i'l lose track of ur work!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
OMg love it :)

its so fun and chirping !

i wish this would have happened in the show :)

im sooo loving it :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was hilarious! I was laughing throught out all of it...Khushi is soo funny! and the' bakri ko kyun bich mein laa rahein hai?' LMAO
And Arnav bechara all puffed up and agry at the end! LOL
Great OS!

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