maaneet FF... alwayz yourz... note on... pg73 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowww awesome luved ittt
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n d past
was so gud thm falling n thn laughing out
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update! Beuatifully written! Thease two really love each other! Wonder what happened?? Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved the update...
so maan is still possessive abt her and he cant bear if anyone touches her...
the song was nice...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hello guyz... silent readers come out and please write whatever you want to say. all other readerz dont be kanjoos while writing ur comments and feedback... plz write whatever u feel while reading the story... i love to read what my reader think while they read... dont forget to press like button and comment...
enjoy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Part 5

She woke up and kissed the picture of Maan she held while she was sleeping. She was feeling so good and different today. She took bath and went downstairs for breakfast. Pari was waiting for her at table. Geet came to Pari she kissed her cheek at wished her good morning. Pari wished her back and hand Geet her fan mail.

She opened one by one each say mail almost the same "I love you Geet! you are the best actress, you are hot e.t.c." she smiled few people wish spend time with her while some want her autograph. When she opened last mail it left her confuse.

"Geet! your name means song, and you are song of my life. I am one of your fan, I see you everyday but you can't see me. Soon this will change, you will be able to see me and I will be only one to look at you. I will be the only one to touch your delicate features and kiss your petal like lips. You are queen of my heart and soon I will be the only one to rule your heart!

Your's only"

There was sticker of heart pasted at the end of letter. The letter left her confused and she gave it to Pari. "What is this?" she asked Pari.

Pari threw the letter aside after reading and said "Geet must be some crazy fan forget him, finish your breakfast otherwise we will be late for photo shoot"

Photo shoot remind her of Maan and she forget about the crazy fan. After the breakfast Geet and Pari left for outdoor site of photo shoot.

When today Maan woke up he was feeling different and new. Once again he wanted to enjoy his life and work. He took bath and today almost after four year he went to dining room. He had light smile on his face and his grandma was shock to see him. Since Geet went away from his life he closed everything out of his life other than work. He used to have his meal outside, he used to avoid every single relation other than employees because he don't have to answer them.

"Did you forget you way Maan?" asked his grandma.

"No grandma, I thought I should have breakfast with you!" he replied with smile.

"Thanks for giving me this honor!" she said with taunting smile.

"I am sorry grandma! I won't disappoint you again" he said lowering his eyes.

His grandma got up from her seat and hugged him "I am so happy to have my grandson back!"

"Grandma don't get emotional!" he said laughing.

"Grandma I am very hungry can we start the breakfast otherwise I will be late for photo shoot"

As soon as he mentioned photo shoot wide smile appear over his lips.

His grandma noticed it and asked "What so special about photo shoot?"

"Nothing Grandma, breakfast is getting cold!" he said.

After that he had his breakfast with his grandma. His grandma and his younger brother Vicky is his only close family. Vicky is at the moment in U.S.A. studying business. His mother died after Vicky's birth and his father passed away two years ago.

So now days their large house is only occupied by his grandma and him other than team of servants.

After breakfast Maan left for photo shoot.

When Geet reached the site of photo shoot her breath was stuck in her wind pipe and her heart stopped beating.

It was the most beautiful place on the earth and this place has so many memories attach with it.

Sasha and Tasha greeted them and Sasha asked "How do you like the place I selected for our photo shoot?"

"It's beautiful!" Pari said while Geet was only able smile. Tasha guided them to their makeup van.

Once Geet reached makeup van tears started rolling out of her eyes. She doesn't know how to hold back her pain and tears. All sweet bitter memories started playing in her mind.

She closed her eyes and let the pain flow out of her eyes.

Sasha was giving instruction to all the technicians when she saw MK walked towards her.

"What is MK doing here?" she asked herself.

She was shocked to see MK here. Once he assigned her something he never interfered in the work. He had never come to any photo shoot before but since Geet came attitude of MK has changed. What shocked her most was light smile on MK lips. She had never seen anything else on his face other than frown and today there was smile.

Maan looked at the place and memories encircled his mind. He remembered it clearly like yesterday. This was the place where they shared their laughter, their victories, their tears, their defeats.

This was the place where their beautiful relationship began and this was the place where their relationship was put on pause he was sure this is the place where he restart his relationship with Geet. It looks like history is repeating it self with little change this time.

We will take it slow this time, we will see where we go wrong and we will mend our mistake, I won't let you walk away from me again Geet. I am selfish but I can't live without her and I will bring her back to my life but this time I will take it slowly.

"Good morning MK!" greeted Sasha.

Maan just nodded.

"Where is Geet?" he asked her as he was dying to see her.

Before Sasha could answer him Pari interrupted them.

"Sir! Can we delay photo shoot for while? Geet Ma'am is not feeling well!"

"Where is Geet?" he asked Pari.

"Makeup van!" both Sasha and Pari replied.

Without saying anything Maan went towards makeup van. Maan opened the door of makeup van and entered inside closing the door behind him.

He saw Geet was sitting in the chair with her face hidden in her hands. He could hear her sobs. She was so drowned in pain that she didn't even realized that he entered inside.

He went near her and sat in front of her, he gently removed her hands over her face.

As her hands moved over her face Maan saw that taps of her tear tank has been opened. He saw her red pain filled eyes and he felt like someone had punched him hard in his guts.

He wiped her tears with his finger and said "I am here Geet!"

She looked in his eyes and saw refection of his Maan, she could control herself any longer and she hugged him. He hugged her back just the way he used to do.

He felt so good to have her back in his arms that he can't explain in words. Geet was wordless after hugging Maan. She hugged him few days back but that was incomplete because her Maan was missing but today she could feel that a lot of her Maan has returned back to her.

After few minuets which seem like few seconds they let go of each other. Maan can see the happiness exploding out of Geet's Face.

He smiled and asked "Can we be friends again?"

He wanted to take his relation slow this time, he don't want to repeat or commit any mistake this time that was why he asked her this he don't want to jump at the last page of book, this time he want to read each and every word of the book.

Geet took Maan hands in her own and said "I would love too!"

"Are you ready for photo shoot?" he asked her.

She smiled and nodded lightly.

With Maan at her side she could fight with the world, fate and anything that comes her way. She smiled as fate was giving her second chance to her life again and this time she won't do any blunders.

to b continue...😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank you every one for loving my ff... i really love to read your comments and views abt my ff please keep them coming... thank you once again 4 showing ur love... 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
wonderful update
luved it
keep it up
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Posted: 14 years ago
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pyar se hi Mohabbat phir se shuru hogi haha!! LOVED it! 😉

Aisha
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
very very sweet n wonderful part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
awsome update
waiting for nxt update

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