'EK ANCHAHA SAFAR' part 21 - Page 23

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nai1311_ysp

loved it ...

maan's di & jiju character nice...
update soon


thanks me trying hard to continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mrk_1

awsome yaar...loved it


thanks alot..me glad u liked it...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maaniqra

superbb,awesome part.every part is just fabulouse👏



thank you so much...me happy u liked it...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: leverne

saakshi sorry my evil bachchi for late commenting on your lovely SS...i am sure you took a lot of efforts now since u have a problem with ur keyboard...but love the fact that they are married now...cant wait to see how u manage to bring them close and adjust to their new found relationship...loved the bonding between mami and neice...
the bonding between sanchit and geet as well as asmi and geet is interesting...maan will be left alone as both will support geet only...next part jaldi se updat ekar...before you leave i want 2 uodates atleats warna...



reni time doesnt matters dear ur cmnt is precious to me... are baabre dhamki... i m trying hard o update bt kucch baatein samajh me nhi aa rahi...will try my best..love you dearie...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: divareena

lovely update. You can feel maan and geet's pain. love how maan tries to bring her out of the pain.

more comments to follow



thank you di glad u liked it...love you...🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

@all loved ur cmnts plz keep cmnting... and long ones keep me double happy... plz ignore the mistakes as i typed it in hurry...

simi91- for you i have tried to write it in english mostly...

Aash di ,reni- specialy for u both...


so bear with the next part...


PART 6:-


Maan and Geet first went to dadima to take her aashirwaad' geet saw dadima and was amused as she was merely sleeping' She thought


Geet:- (to herself) Dadima seem like sleeping peacefully then why doesn't she talks' I want her to talk to me desperately' I don't know why babaji''

Then Maan and Geet were going towards the stairs when maan suddenly stops and asks Geet


Maan:- you go to your room and change' I have to talk to u' come to my room then' its urgent'

Geet felt something odd'.. she thought

Geet:- (to herself) my room means??? Why my room not our room' geet what the hell are u thinking about'. Isn't it too early,''.

She went to her room'. She stood in front of the the photo of babaji and prayed'

Geet:- (to her babaji) babaji I am starting a new life from now' the little navya made me realize today that I am not yself only but ai am related to every person whom he is related' I know its early but its better to accept the truth of my life that my life is not anymore mine but it is belonged to someone else now'. This is the truth.. and today or tomorrow I have to accept it so why not today'. Plz babaji give me the courage to fulfill my promise to bhaiya and the promise to myself'. I'll never let him complain'.. I have to accept him as my life' bcoz it is the hard truth of my life'..and if you have given it to me then i will accept it happily...

Geet then went to change' she was unaware what to wear' she thought her mother always teased her that after marriage you have to wear saarees only but she is most uncomfortable in saarees' then she thought lets give it a try as she has to do everything now onwards which she has never done or never thought of'.. she wore a golden color saaree'. She then went to maan's room'.

Maan was taking a shower and came out with a towel on his neck..


geet saw that and turned around in embarresment' Maan saw her in a saree and was mesmerized by her beauty but he was strongest in distracting himself so does he' he distracted himself and thought you have no right to see her like this'.. just remember your promise to urself maan'.

Geet was standing there unable to move' she was in the situation where she cud neither leave nor stand there' Maan understood her situation and quickly wore his clothes and called her'.

Maan:- geet you can come in'..

Geet turned around slowly and found him fully dressed in his black suit' he was looking dashing'. She moved in still mesmerized.. she came to the world by her husband's voice'..

Maan:- Look Geet we need to talk as I have to clear some issues to you' firstly you don't need to change your dressing style wear whatever you are comfortable with'..if you think your life is changed then plz through this thought of yours out of your mind' because I don't want you to change your life for anyone' I don't want you to force yourself in any kind of the relation'. Secondly' don't plz ever commit the mistake to expect anything from my side' I am the same old stranger for u'. who has nothing to do with ur life and whose life you had nothing to do with' we are staying under one roof coz of our promise to the person who was the integral part of our lives and according to my promise I'll never let u feel anything missing in tour life' you can buy whatever you want ' you can spend ur life in a way you want'. I'll never ever interfere in your life and expects the same from you. From now onwards you are 50% share holder of Khurana Consructions means half owner' so I guess you'll not face an kind of problem'.. in this way I have fulfilled my promise'..

Geet was startled hearing all that' she cudnt believe her ears'.


Maan continued'

Maan:- so look geet we are no one to each other and I promise u'll never going to face any kind of problem from my side' that's it' do live as u want to live' as I believe in the quote Live And Let Live'' I have a meeting ' I am going''

Doing all that blunder to Geet's life he left from there' Geet was not in the condition of bearing all those words so she fall down on her knees and was crying'.

Geet:- (to her babaji) Babaji why the hell it happened to me ??? Why why why'. I had accepted him to be my life although I too don't love him yet but why he said I meant no one to him'..

she was crying when she remembers her bhaiya's words

"geet be a strong girl.. life me aise kai situations aayenge jab hum apne aap ko bahut bebas aur kamzor samjhne lagenge par itna hamesha yaad rakhna aansu bahane se na to kabhi kucch thik hota hai nahi kabhi hoga... aur tu to mera strong baccha hai na... live your life with emotions and strength to control them whenever needed...thats life..."

Geet:- (to herself) bhaiya was right I cant achieve anything by crying' I have to be strong' if his decision is final I will too declare my final decision'. I'll make him realize that relations are not meant for just compromises and responsibility' they are meant for love care concern trust and understanding'.. now I'll wait for your love till my last breath Mr. Maan Singh Khurana'. I am your wife and u have to accept it'.

Although Geet was in a state of shock but she made a decision to value that relation coz for her relations are precious gems for one's life' she made a decision to give her fullest to her wedding life'..

On the other side maan was feeling something bad' as he found some tears in her eyes when he was leaving but then he thought..

Maan:- (to himself) May be she hadn't expect those words from me but that are for her betterment' maybe she find it difficult today maybe she is sad today but she will be happy on my decision tomorrow''..

When Maan returned home at night he found Geet arranging plates for dinner'..Maan thought

Maan:- (to himself) why is she doing all this' doesn't she got what I told her in the afternoon'.

(to geet) what are you doing here haven't you slept'..

Geet:- no I was waiting for my husband to return so that we can have dinner together' so shall we'

Maan:- (in a bit irritating tone) I told you na not to interfere in my life and lead ur life in your own way'..

Geet:- exactly!!! You want me to lead my life in my own way na '.. then promise you will never stop me to do whatever I want'.. in my own way ofcourse'

Maan:- yeah I have already promised you not to trouble you in any ways'..

Geet:- so you are not going to stop me today onwards it's a deal'.

Maan:- yes it is''

Geet:- then let me clear you mr. husband this is the way of life I want to live in' waiting for my husband to return.. having dinner with him.. preparing food for him' looking after him'

Maan:- butt'

Geet:- a aan you promised me '. Remember that and yeah for always' so if everything is cleared shall we start eating coz I am dammn hungry'..

Maan was stunned at her that behavior' he hadn't expected that from her' he want her to hate him but she in return was giving her care and concern' of which stone was she made up of'. He left from there without having anything'

Geet:- (to her babaji) babaji aaj to ye expected tha par mai bhi dekhti hu ye kab tak chalta hai'..he has to accept the fact that I am his wife''..

Asmita who had come to have a glass of water watched that whole drama' she was very much impressed with geet' she rushed towards her room and called her husband ''

Asmita:- Sanchit she is the only girl who can handle my brother'..

Sanchit who was fast asleep was amused at the sudden statement of his wife at that odd hours spoke

Asmita:- asmi meri jaan what happened???

Asmita told her everything she saw'.

Asmita:- waise suniye we have to salute that girl ' she is really that much strong' she has just lost her family' and her husband is treating her like a guest in her own home ' still she has that capability of fighting with her fate'. I really admire her for that'..

Sanchit:- you are right ' I realized her to be something different when I saw her' she is the one who can get everything back to normal' turn our maan from a stone to a human' waise tell me one thing do u miss me'

Asmita:- aap bhi na''.

And they continued talking'..

Few days have passed' Maan was still ignoring Geet' she daily was getting everything ready for him, was preparing meals for him, was waiting for him like every wife'and he daily doesn't even look at her' but it didn't last for so many days when he found out that this girl was double stubborn than him he one day stopped and sat on the dinner table and started to have dinner with her' she was first amused but later was super happy'. She was looking at him when he interrupted'

Maan:- are you going to serve or have u decided to make me sleep with an empty stomach today also'..

Geet served him the food'.


Maan slowly slowly stopped ignoring her and started accepting what she always does for him' but it was surely not the love but her stubbornness that made him to do so'.. in his heart his decision was still admatant'.

Six months passed' like this only'. But everything seemed to change in khurana mansion' geet in her free time always goes and sit beside dadima and talk to her' earlier she didn't responded but now she smiles .open her eyes and sometimes even blinks.. which only Geet knew'.

Geet was such a lively girl that she has established an unbreakable bond with everyone in that house' fro cook togardner ' from milk man to watchman '. Asmita also had developed a sisterly bonding with her' both were the problem sharer' and Geet had become the favourite person of the sweet little princess navya or her pari''

Geet was everyone's life' but her life was her husband who never even look at her' but her thinking was far more different''. She thought if you are expecting love in the return of your love than your love is not true one'.. Keeping that in mind she was waiting for him without any expectations and desires'.


PRECAP:-


Daadima walking Maan stunned...



Guys me have to leave to clg day after tommorow... but my crazies were asking me to update atleast once... so in hurry i updated this part.. thoda chhota hai but plz bear it...if it is not up to the mark plz me sorryy😭... plz plz keep supporting me...i'll try my best to update next part asap.....


Next:- Part 7

Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesooome..
superb.
fab..
wonderful...
rocking..
loved the upd.
thanx for the pm...
take care...
Edited by mayadika11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it ...

cant wait to read more

love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
too good saakshi...thanks for the dedication...i keep telling you to update...me too very stubborn just like maan and geet...loved the fact that geet accepted her relation and i am very sure maan will accept her to...me will miss u evil bachchi...have fun in ur college and don't forget to keep stalking...love reni...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved t saks yeh thoda short nahi bahut hi short

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