'EK ANCHAHA SAFAR' part 21 - Page 37

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow nice update..
luved it when maan called her his wife in front of the whole staff..
sasha deserved it...
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
@all- I am sorry for the delay in the update... last few days were sort of disastrous for me... ๐Ÿ˜ญ disasters ki lambi list hai...๐Ÿ˜†
clg work was on head... just finished it... and came here...
I'll try to update tonight coz i am feeling much relieved and better...

My lovely shovely crazies!!!!!!!!! love you all for all your love and support!!!!!
dont come behind me with a "belan"๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
๐Ÿ˜†@Hima di- di i have some time so i am updating... and i am fine di!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š...

I loved reading all ur comments but i am unable to reply individually... so a big wala thanks to all...๐Ÿค—

Hopefully tonight ๐Ÿ˜‰

Love
Sakshi
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Posted: 14 years ago
yipppeee updating..
hey saakshi...how r u doing dear...
hope all is fine...
and mon morning you online...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wovvv i am going to wait for tonight
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: libra25

yipppeee updating..
hey saakshi...how r u doing dear...
hope all is fine...
and mon morning you online...


hey miti hw r u?
Actually ma proffesor is on leave so came 2 post a msg... I have my holiday 2moro so trying to update tonight...
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Posted: 14 years ago
saakshi update jaldi se...dont forget to check ur email 2mor..i have pics a update of meeting with aash...k chalo...utake care..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey thats OK. Studies first dear. Waiting eagerly for the update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
sakhi,
u said today night you will update. i am waiting for the update as i said.
pleaseee update it soon yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 10:-

10 months passed after their marriage'Geet and Maan were going to office daily' Geet was managing both home and office quite well' Maan was somewhat impress with her' being at office she never forget about Maan's lunch and even being tired she always waited for him to return and have dinner with him' he was amazed at how she manages all'Dadima was happier as she knew now her grandson and granddaughter-in-law are going to spend most of the time together' so was Asmita and Sanchit'..
Whenever Geet got some time from the busy routine she always paid a visit to Asmita and spent time with her and Pari of course'.. She also had her childhood friend Pinky in the office''

While being in office she noticed how much to the extend workaholic is her husband is.. He always forgets everything around him when he is engrossed in his laptop or file'. She often smiles seeing him so indulged'.


And of course Geet was also not unnoticed by our Maan'. While passing by her cabin he noticed her one habit when she is indulge in her file which is of chewing her pen and playing with it ' he unusually smiles at her ' he was still unknown of his feeling towards her.. he thought may be he admire her a lot for being so supportive for his not "his" actually "their" family' he now started accepting her as a part of their family but not yet the love feeling came out'..


On the other hand she was sure that she loves him a lot' coz she realized his value at the time of the accident''.. she was still finding the reason behind that face of Maan Singh Khurana' she keeps on asking everybody about him indirectly' but all that she came to know was that he was the one who keeps all his worries upto him only' he never share his pain with anyone'


One day she was busy in one file when someone came and told her'


Voice1:- excuse me ma'am Maan sir is calling you'.

Geet:- okay I am just coming'.(to her babaji) babaji if he is going to ask me about the presentation what am I supposed to do' the final e-r is still remaining'.and the plot sheet'. Save me from dusht danav'.


Murmuring to herself she reached his cabin' he was again lost in some file' she knocked' he didn't reply.. she went in and sat in front of him' he still didn't notice' she said its better to sit quite when his work will be finished he'll surely notice her' after few minutes when he looked up to find another file he found her sitting there and looking at him' he was stunned and asked


Maan:- Geet you here?????? I mean when did you come????


She smiled at him and said''


Geet:- when you were eating your file like a file worm' you called me???? Anything urgent???


Maan:- oh yeah we have to leave for Paris tomorrow night' we have to sign a very important deal there' this deal is going to take our company at new heights'


Geet was impressed by the determination in his voice' she also love the terms "we" and "our" from him'.


Geet:- wow that's great!!!!!!! So how many of us are going??? And for how many days???


Maan:- no actually it's just me and you' everyone else is busy with projects here' it's a 3 day trip' hope you don't mind'


Geet:- dadima???


Maan:- Geettt don't worry about her.. di is going to stay with her' any more queries???


Geet:- no not at all' I'll be ready'


Maan:- hmmm


Geet murmured "again a hmmm"'.. Maan heard that''she was leaving when Maan stopped her ..


Maan:- one second Geet!! I need ur passport for approval and You go home early and pack today coz we have important meeting tomorrow so u'll not get time for packing tomorrow'


Geet nodded'..


She was super exited for three reasons.. *Firstly she was going somewhere after a long time'* secondly she was about to go to Paris one of the world's most beautiful places and *thirdly she was going with him'


She went to dadima and told her.. but with loads of instructions' dadima smiled at her'


Dadima:- bete I used to take care of myself when you were not here '.


Geet:- yeah dadima I saw that'.


Dadima rolled her eyes''.


Dadima:- Asmita is coming here na so u stop worrying''.

Geet smiled'.

Dadima:- now you go and pack ur stuff'.

Geet pats her forehead..

Geet:- hey babaji'. Dadima aap bhi na mujhe baato me laga diya' kitna kaam baaki hai'

Murmuring that she left running' dadima smiled at her innocence'

Dadima:- pagli!!!! God plz bring them closer'. This stupid girl loves my attitude boy a lot'..

Dadima called Asmita and she said she and Sanchit have thought of a plan' she told her the plan'

Dadima:- what if Maan find out???

Asmita:- Dadima you take a lot of tension' Chill' he is not going to find out' and just think they both will get more time to spend with each other'.

Dadima:- okay' but take care!!!

Sanchit called the travel agent of Maan and asked him to book the return ticket of 4 days ahead' he instructed him to tell Maan that no flights are available.. not even the urgent ones'.

Geet had packed her stuff as well as Maan's too' its being 10 months of their marriage but although he never told her anything but she was aware of his each and every need'. It had been noticed by Maan too'. After packing chore Geet decided to clean his room herself as he was supposed to be late and no servant was allowed in his room in his absence except Nakul and he too wasn't there''.

While cleaning his bed she found his diary under his pillow' she thought its something related to business she opened it and saw some lines'

Duniya hai akeli par uski aankhein dekh kar

phir jeene ki chaah hai

Jaanta hoon ye aasan nahi

Badi mushkil raah hai

Mere saath nahi jo

Uski who khushi chahta hoon

Use na chaah kar bhi gam deker

Zindagi sawarna chahta hoon

Woh chaahti hai mujhe

Ye baat mujhe khalti hai

Par kya kabhi koi pari

Kaanto pe bhala chalti hai

Jaanta hoon use mujhse koi behter milega

Jo uske pyaar ki kadr karega

Par kaise samjhaau use ki mai nahi woh

Use duniya de sake jo

Meri duniya bhari hai kaanto se

Jo paas aaya tadpa hai

Main nahi uske kaabil

Yahi mere dil ne samjha hai

Woh to bacchi hai

Abhi use jeena hai

Mai kaise kahu use

Mera dil nahi khaali seena hai

Nahi dekha jaayega

Use tadapte hue mujhse

Kaise samjhaaun

Main ye baat use

Jitna chaahta hoon

Woh mujhse door chali jaaye

Zindagi bhi ajeeb hai

Utna hi use mere paas laaye

Kaise samjhaaun use

Nahi ban sakta mai uska meet

Woh to ek pari hai

Jo nahi ban sakti Maan ki Geet

She was dumbstruck that a man with that face can write such emotional lines too'.She was shocked to read those lines and understood what was the fact that was keeping him away from her' today she found out her real Maan' The Maan who was just a Dusht Daanav from outside but with a diamond heart inside' she had tears in her eyes' tears of grief, tears of love, tears of understanding, tears of hope for coming happiness.. she hugged the diary tight and thought

Geet:- babaji!!! Today I came to know I am that much lucky to have him as my life as my love as my soul mate as my husband'. He was just quietly accepting each and every blame and was trying to save me from all worries coz he thinks the people who come near him lose their happiness' he is such a great man bearing all the pain inside him and not even telling anyone' he is a man who deserve to be the happiest but was sacrificing his happiness just for the sake of others'. (she looked at the diary) I know its bad manners to read anyone's personal diary but dear diary you know what you have come as a ray of hope in my life directly from babaji passing by his heart'. And you are no less than a God to me'. (She kept the diary with herself) now it's the time for some drill Mr. Khurana'. Your wife is going to change your thinking' she is going to make you believe that some people are there whose lives are nothing without you'who can only be happy seeing you happy'.you deserve happiness and it is going to knock our door soon'

Thinking that she smiled and went to her room'. Maan returned and found her as usual waiting for dinner' she smiled broadly looking at him he too smiled back weakly wondering why she is that much exited but then thought she might b exited about Paris trip' they had their dinner and went to sleep'. Luckily Maan was too tired that day so he went to sleep early without noticing his dairy missing or say he was sure that no one dares to touch his stuffs unless he permits''.

Next day both attended the meetings at day time and flewed to Paris at night'.

Geet was feeling uncomfortable at that flight coz she has never been to such places and that too in plane' Maan noticed her restlessness with her expression'.. Maan smiled a bit at her innocence'.

Maan:- So what do you think about our plan????

Geet looked at him and first coz she was lost in her fear'.

Geet:- plannn???

Maan:- yeah!!!!!! Our new plan!!! Do you think we need any kind of changes' coz I want the besttt!!!!

Geet:- but as far as I am concerned our plan is Best possible!!! Do you find any kind of requirement?????

Maan:- no actually you are the chief architect of Khurana Constructions So you might knoe it in a better way'..

Geet:- but you know everything as a owner and moreover a more experienced person' I really admire your each and every step you take ' and I know every decision of yours is always for the best' behind every thing you decide there is some logic' that's why I am asking do you feel any mistake or something missing in our plan???

Geet's words made him silent again' He thought how much she admire him which was of no use.. and he is always silent to her but still she managed to get him' He was looking at her when she spoke

Geet:- boliye na !!! you need any improvement!!!

Maan came out of sudden trance'. He didn't understood what effect had that girl has on him' he always felt speechless in front of her' but he was still adamant on his decision'

Maan:- no no its fine !!! he looked the other way'..

Geet saw that the plane had taken off' now she understood why he was asking those unwanted Questions just to make me avoid my fear'.. she smiled as now she know what his husband is!!!!

They landed Paris' they headed towards their hotel..

Maan (to receptionist) :- Maan Singh Khurana from India' I have a booking'

Receptionist check the booking and said

Receptionist:- sir, 2 rooms are booked at your name' you and Mrs Khurana are going to stay in one' and the people who will stay in other will arrive at????

Both were a bit embarrassed'. Then Maan in his usual tone

Maan:- you need not to ask that' just mind your own business and hand over both the keys to us' you are not paid to ask Questions'

Geet rolled her eyes and murmured "Dusht Danav".. She blinked her eyes to the Receptionist to just ignore him and she smiled' they went to their respective rooms'

After some time Maan knocked her room' Geet opened..

Maan:- Geet get ready we have to attend a party tonight!!!1

Geet:- party???? But I haven't brought any party stuff..

Maan:- don't bother that much.. wear whatever you have!!!!! I'll be here in 1 hour'

He left..

Geet:- how unreal!!!wear whatever you have' let me do one thing nightdress pehen ke jaati hoon' ye bhi koi baat hui'

After much thinking she prefer to wear a saaree'. She got ready before Maan came'

Maan:- are you ready???

Geet:- am I not looking like???

Maan:- no just asking?? Coz I heard girls need time to be ready..

Geet smiled!!!!

Geet:- I am!!! Shall we??

Maan:- sure!!!

They went to the party' Geet was feeling uncomfortable as she attented the business parties but not like that one having everyone with unknown face' somebody approach them

Voice1:- hello Mr. Khurana.. nice meeting you' and he looked at Geet wiyh questioning eyes'

Maan:- same here Mr. Legrande .. BTW she is Geet he chief architect of Khurana Constructions'

Maan looked at her.. she looked hurt.. Mr Legrande took her hand and kissed'

Mr. Legrande :- Nice meeting you beautiful'.

Maan didn't like his tone and Geet gave a fake smile and left from there'Maan knew she was hurt but didn't know why??

Mr Legrande was speaking to him about the project and he was just looking at the direction in which Geet left'

Precap:-

Where is Geet???



@all-thanks for the comments and patience... plz keep liking and commenting coz it motivates me to update even if i am super busy... thanks alot...

@simi91-i shall post the meaning of poem in english by tommorow...




NEXT:- Part 11

Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey saakshi..
me first..yippeee...
great update...
idiot maan...how can he introduce her like that...
he really needs some piece of mind...
Edited by libra25 - 14 years ago

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