Escaping The Hell 2 (AR OS) - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
hey u are back
awesome os, just loved it

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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
Ye lo jee..aapka comment haazir hai . .. 🤣

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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
awesome OS...very beautifully wriiitten
it made me cry smile and really i fall in love with ur OS...
loved my ARMAAN in this so muchhh...
just excellent os...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
wonderful os!
very touching...
loved their lovemaking😳
awww! armaan is so adorable! i fell more in luv wid him
lovely...
would like 2 read more from u
keep writing such wonderful stories
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85

welcome back dear...

n gosh...u left me spell bounded wid this writing of urs...

simply amazing..

lvoed it...

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
Hey sweetheart,
Once again, an awesome OS:)
Keep it up and thanks a ton for the PM :)

Luv u<333
Kashish
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Posted: 14 years ago
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heeey
dat was an awesome os :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
Heyyy!!

sooo we meet again 😆

well this one was really realistic
it kinda scared me though!!

sooo sad though..
felt HORRIBLE for Rihana urf Riddhima😆
but seriously..tht was sooo saaad

how could he??
tht *beeep* *beeep* beeep*...
uggghhh...hate hate hate AFZAL!!!

and her mom!!

and all the stupid ppl tht got her forcefully married!!!

grrr...just HAAATE THOSE *beeep* s

how could tht retaaard be sooo mean to poor little Ishaan and Riddhima

aww.. but i love ishaan..hes soo cute!!

this version was really good as well

but it was sooo sad tht i think i like 1 better
but then again..
this one was more realistic and better concept..
so then i would like this one

donno..am confused!!!😆

jus looove how the hero, MY BELOVED ARMAAN, makes an entry at the right time

btw..do u hav an obsession of their first meeting being under a tree
while Ridddhima is sleeping..😆

but isnt it jus sooo perfect tht BY CHANCE (ahemm ahem) BY CHANCE, he's a lawyer...
well its good cuz he can save Rihana and Ishaan then eh!!!

oh and i like how even in this,
u reflected the thoughts of Riddhima first and then her real statement!!

very well written Sani!!!
jus AMAZING...
am sure it can leave ppl speechless!!!
(like it made me, the first i read it :P)

ooohh and i love the last line:

"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain" that's riddhima did and she finally met with the sunshine at the end of a very dark tunnel...

thats jus reeeli good..
nice wording there in the end with the:
sunshine at the end of a very dark tunnel...

well..i cant say continue soon
cuz its an OS.
soo i'll say tht continue writing soon 😆

i cant wait to read more of ur LOOONG OS's..hehe

oh and srry for commenting late..
(i swear mere bhai ne aaj maar khani hai😆..)

Luv,
Aashi <3

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