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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
very beautifully written.
very touchy.
please do write more.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: zARqaa_X

res! i think :P *edited*

yayy im first!! woohooo😃 lol i get very happy when im first 😆
anywayy!!! wooowww i lovd this os!!
u shud totalli wirite more OS but afetr u update yur ffs first :P i lovd it! the whole concept was soo good!
you should be happy cuz your comment was BIIIGGG😃 (thats a greedy smile btw😆)
thank you thank you jee😳 and haan yaar updates bhi likh dungi😆
i felt soo sorry for riddhima! she never gt love frm anyone 😭 her mums a bi*ch! wot kind of mum does tht to her child! n her hubby is just🤢🤢 YUCK!!!
poor her she gt married at 13 at tht age girls lives are soo much fun n free but sadly riddhimas wasnt..i feel so thankful tht my parents wud never put me thru tht all!
her husbands disgusting!😡 how cud he bee soo evil! hitting a 3 year old kid! i felt like killing him then😡😡
well no all kids are lucky to have good parents, we should always thank god for this. i know i couldnt even imagine how can 13 year old can get married and get comtinuosly raped😡 some people are JUST SICK bas***dS!😡
im soo glad tht even after all shes been thru she still gav her love to ishaan😊 thts soo sweet tht she wantd to giv the motherly love tht she never gt..im soo proud of her for tht its nt easy AT ALL for a 14 year old to look after their own child or even get pregnant!
yes i wanted to her personality as a strong mother who even though was kid herself, she gave her best to bring up ishaan. but it's simply ridiculous for her to fall even pregnant at that age!
HAYYYEEE!!! ARMAAN 😍 hes sooo HAWTTT!!!😳 i love his character! lawyer awww..im so glad tht armaan came in riddhimas life n savd her nt many ppl hav the guts to do tht coz they r scared😃 armaans soo smart! God i wish he was mine!
SHAME ON THT OTHER GUY! (too disgusted to say his name) he shud hav never messed wiv armaan or his love! i hope he rots in jail!
😆😆u always find armaan hot no matter what😆 i wanted to give armaan's character a strong personality so i thought lawyer was just perfect. i know most people wouldnt have the guts but armaan is just too nice and he loved riddhima as well😳 yup riddhima's ex hubby will rot in the jail😆

OMG the forest scene!!!☺️ HAWTTT was the right word for it! OMG riddhimas armaans first...thts soo cute! awww i just armaan was riddhimas first but still doesnt matter...
i was literally jumping when riddhima gt free!!!
awww lovd the ending! AR married! im soo glad tht armaans a WAYY better father to ishaan lovd their bonding!😃
see see told u the end scene's gonna be hot😉 well riddhima was am afraid wasnt a virgin when she met armaan for obvious reasons i am so glad u liked the os. feels like my hard work payed off😃 thank you for commenting xx
such a great OS! now update Sinister love!😡😈🤣
hayeee heartless readers😡😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: anushkajain

awesome di
that was a great os
just loved it to the core
superb piece of work
keep writing more😊

thank you 😃 glad my hard work payed off
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
🤣🤣 toh ab update kab aayega?? hmm???😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: diyaa1pk

😕after reading it twice ...still wondering ...how u managed to write on such sensitive topic at this young age...

ah well its sani for us...again u have proved ...u have brain girl ...which works at super sonic speed...😆.

i have missed soo much THIS style of writing ...which only u posez..👏...
u manage to make us smile when tears are rolling down our cheeks...
brilliant work...👏
nd its nt only with girls overseas gettng married to some remote village guys...even within a country ..well educated girls are forced to marry a total illiterate...with no respectable means of income...
nd thre is one other issue ...women are bought to get married frm village or tribal areas...reason being that they will cater to every whim and fantasy ...with out ever raising thre voice...
its a weird world out there...
and doc basket ...when are u updating ur FF'S...WE WANT A DHAMAKA ...UPDATES...

wooowww diya u red it twice?😲 thank you man😳 and aah c'mon my age which is 17 has got nothing to do with this😃 its just that i believe really strongly against forced marriages thats why the talent comes naturally😆 am glad u realised i have a brain (which works really fast wooohooo)😆
aww thanks man but am sure many people can write much better than me, am still amature writer (see i cant even spell amature correctly)😆 u were crying while reading the OS?😲
i know diya that even within the country girls are forced into marriage with loosers with a big L😡 but i have lived all my adult/ teenage life or mature life in england so its easy for me to write with the concept which includes overseas stuff😆 but i totally agree with u on that one, we shud just be glad that our parents are not like that. am such a feminist man, i refused to date a boy who was very old fashioned and slightly sexist😆 but vo mere piche hi par gaya hai😡 anyways lost track sorry😆
yup yup i'll come back with a dhamaka again😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
@zarqa- dekhungi, sochungi, kal parso kuch kahungi 😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
@sani: how bout tu dekhegi sochegi phir kal parso kuch update karegi! 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutiepreet

hey Sani...i seriously love the stories u write...they r very inspirational...true and always has a big meaning behind it...:) <3
this was really nice as well..) loved how brave u portrayed Ridz charctr...it was awesome...Armaan helped her to get out of the hell... n they fell in love n got married..yeahhh awesome story..:) <3

wow so much praises😆 am so glad that u like my writing but am not all that as well😳
yup making riddhima's character really strong and brave was my actual intention but its not easy for a 14 yr old to be a mother. thank you again😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: zARqaa_X

@sani: how bout tu dekhegi sochegi phir kal parso kuch update karegi! 🤣

okay okay fair enough. kal parso tak kuch likh ke deti hu 😆 after all u gave me BIGGG comment😳 and am not sure which one i'll update but lets hope for the best😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: HoneyLimeUsha

awesome...that was too good...and such a sensitive topic...well written...

i like writing on sensitive topics😳 thank you xx

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