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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Hey Sani😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

FINALLY !!
The churail is back and wow with a BANG

Firstly m a big FAN AC whatever uh call😆😆
I just love the way uh write its so pleasure to read any of your works. I loved Escaping the hell 1 too😆 even i know i didnt comment on that (sorry for that)😆
But i loved that part 1 also and then being proud i have read it god knows how many times 😆😆😆😆
Nd i almost threaten my friends to read that and they were so praising it and all that time i was pulling my collars that uh should be greatful that i made uh read that 😆😆😆
sorry i stole the credit🤣

Now Escaping the gell part 2 dvitiya 😆🤣 that was funny 😆
Ohhh myyy gossshhh. This is bollywood formula 😆
SEQUEL is HITTT 😆😆

I loved this OS it is so brilliantly written so well combination of reality and romance 😆 Loved each and every word of it. It was so expressive how can yours OS manage to be so brilliant splendid and elegant. I cant describe it in words.

Actually i guess i have questioned this before also😆 but i really doubt your age 😆 it is too small for a person who writes like this 😆

AWESOME and oh gal did i mention? It was HAWTT 😳
Really it was great writing this OS please keep writing 😃

Bundle of love😃😃😃😃😃😃

Hope to see this churail soon 😆😆
Take Care

😆

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Saniya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: aish_loves_KaSh
oh my goodness...i seriously fell in love with this OS
Poor riddhima...she had to suffer so much at such a tender age😭
Hate that bloody bas***d who caused her so much pain😡
But as usual.our armaan is the real hero man
He helped her & saved her from that horrifying life & married her😳
He is just too good❤️
Loved ur OS sani...u have done a great job:-)

aww thank you so much. am glad u liked it😃

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Saniya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: yourz4eva

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tera koi ff ya os ho aur morcha gang na attack kare uspe...aisa ho nahi sakta 😆

ab kya kare. mere OS ki kismat mein comments se zyada dhamkiyas likhi hai😆

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Saniya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: shristi sarda
i m speechless...
it was too good...

i was feeling miserable wen i read ridhima's condition...

it was heart wrenching...

thnx fr d pm...

thank you bbz but the reality is always harsh

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Saniya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes
very well written story!

thank you xx

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Saniya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Anam Ali
Gr8 Story Sani

u wrote another story on forced marriage very well written

thanks anam xx well what can i say, i have this thing against forced marriages😆

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Saniya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: ammy_ka_ashu

Omg sani this was superb! Loved it! It was sad but then rlly amazing! Armaan is the bestest!!!

thanks ashu, well i always make my heroes lovable😆

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namita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

welcum back sexy churel...

heyyy

OS was just awesome...seems like sexy churel is back with bang...hehe

so u deserve a biggg applause for cuming back wid this fantastic OS..(and at this time, when all other writers are almost gayab from ff sec😆😆)

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

and a biggg hug for u too 🤗

now back to the part..

seriously it was too good...

honestly i didnt expected u too write this ff becoz this topic was extremely serious..

but i know, my sexy churel is a big and mature girl now. and u have this inclination towards this topic..i.e marriages and exploitation of girls

In the first half, it was very senti,and gave me tears in my eyes also... becoz that situation was just not acceptable by any human being..

but after armaan's entry,i know my sexy churel is back with naughty comments 😉

only u can made me laugh in such serious in situation..hehe😆😆😆

I know, u think abt this topic too much, which reflected in ur almost every ff and that is a good thing also..

and i know, in future u will do some good work on this issue too becoz that is really close to ur heart and now ours too...

Usually i say, i love armaan.. but in this ff.. i lovee ridhima's character a lottt and not to forget her cuty baby ishaan..😉

She is strong, mature , cute, intelligent and amazing in such a small age..normally people lost their power, their dignity after facing such harrasment..but she didnt loose any of it just to save her baby..

Its not surprising that armaan love her in first meeting and anyone in his place will feel same for her..

butt our armaan is too best.. i love their intimate moments under the tree (hehe, from where u got that idea of love under the tree😆..it was absolutely great and new.😉.)

and last scene of their happily married life moment was a lovely ...

pls continue ur other ff too...

I MISS UR FF...and u too😆😉

thanks for the pm...

luv u

namita

P.S finally edited..*sign*...sorry for the delay

Edited by namita18 - 14 years ago

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Saniya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Medzi_ARian...

OMG! My sexy chudail is back and with a BANG! I loved this story yaar! Ridz's mom is a 'B'! I swear! How can she even THINK about gettin her married at a tender age of just 13! She really gotta be a stonehearted woman to put her own daughter through such torture! I mean, gettin married at 13 and havin a child at 14 ain't a joke! That Afzal guy's disgusting! That little b******! I can't believe she was raped by that guy pretty much everyday! I would kill myself if this happened to me. I couldn't live through that!

hiii medzi u okay?😃 shukriya shukriya😳 her mom is a byaaatch! trust me medzi some people just cant wait to get rid of their daughters😡 LOL calm down medzi, ur getting all worked up, but its true, getting a child at 14 aint a joke! but i made riddhima really brave who lived thru all the tortures.

I loved Armaan's entry! My hero! ☺️ LOL! She would say her name is 'Riddhima' instead of 'Rihanna'. 😆 I just loved how he shut Afzal up. He really gotta be a daring guy to do that! OMG! I was hell scared when that Afzal found everything out. Seriously. But I'm glad Armaan took care of everything. OMG! That was freaking hot! Seriously! But I'm glad Ridz's free. Wow! They finally got married! I loved the last bit. Perfect ending! And the sentence in the end really touched my heart. Loved it. Now woman, you better update your FF's as well, especially 'We Gambled With Our Dead Lives'. I'm dying to read that! Please update soon and thanks for your PM.

hayeee i always make sooo lovable in my ffs (even if he's a kamina underworld don)😆 armaan's really sharp and brave that he went thru all that just to save riddhima, but mind you he really liked her as well😆 well that sentence in the end, is one of my favourite quotes, it's on my laptop desktop LOL so thought of putting in as it matched the situation. acha acha i'll update my ffs as well. jeez u all want different different ffs to be updated😆 but thank you again xx

love

sani

-Medzi-

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Saniya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Klutszy_KaShian
OMG LOOK WHO'S BACK!!

My glassy chudail is back. N she's back with a BIG BANG! wow di!! I loved it. Loved it more then anything u've ever written before. It is so sad that people like Stoopid Afzal live. But it is amazing that people like Armaan live. Reallly loved it!!

heyyy how r u bbz? long time man. thank you thank you but yh thats true thats people like that still exist in this world🤢