Whats your age Sani?
Because you are an amazing writer, and not only that, you are very mature too.
Rather than fictional writings, I prefer, real writings based on reality.
And shall I say it was good? Because it wasn't good, it was the BEST.
Masha-Allah, it is amazing piece of writing.👏
Commenting about the marriage thing, personally, what I feel is marriage in young age isn't good.After 17 it should happen.And as you said the age difference was 13 years in this story, to me it seems absolutely fine till 10-15 age difference because olden times, the old generation had this much differences and there marriage is still a success but yeah it depends on understanding and maturity between the two people.
I hate such type of people like afzal. I never expected a 26 year old would be soo immature?🥱I mean 50 year old act like that, they think they own the world, bla bla...old minded people, but what I feel is people aged from 20-30 are young, and quite matured, to perform such worst tactics, but yes the world is filled with such people.There are sensible, and cruel people in every community and age.
Is this really a real story? OMG poor soul.😭
I loved the ending btw.😃and aww Ishaan is soo cute.And Armaan is the best here. No guy would accept, a girl who has been a mother in young age, and he accepted.He surely is one of the true guys.
You know its quite surprise and hilarious on one hand is afzal- who is cruel, immature, and a idiot and on other hand is armaan- a perfect guy for a girl. How these both personalities contrast. And how beautifully, you have brought both of the contradicting personalities together. It is truly something amazing. How I wish only guys like armaan could exist in the world, but hardly armaan exists in the world.
It's really easy, portraying fiction as fiction, but really hard portraying reality as reality.And you have done that. I appreciate it. You seriously have the potential to write books about realities and you should try too.
Overall, the OS was amazing, and do write more on real stories, and believe me, I would remain your fan through out.🤗
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