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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 37(b)
Geet (think): babaji ye yha ,pr kaise
Maan(think): ye ladki mere room me kya kr rhi h.
Isse phle geet kuch kehti.
Maan said : get out from my room
She laughs. Maan lost in her smiles.
Geet :apka room,
Sir apki tabiyat kharab hai {ye kya geet, pura scene palat diya}
Maan : meri,
Yha tumhari
Geet (she sweetly says): sir, ofcourse apki
He greeted his teeth in anger.
Geet : sir ye apka room nhi h,
Mera room hai.
So please, aap yha se jaiye
She crossed her arms.
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Posted: 13 years ago
G : apni itni raat ko yha kya kr rhe hai,
Aur mere room me kaise aaye,
Maan try to say some thing.
Pr geet to geet hai.
She look towards her favourite babaji means toward roof of room.
G :hey babaji, khi inhe neend me chalne ki bimari to nhi hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan : geet.
She came near to the maan and held his hand and said "sir beth jaiye"
He sit.
{bt why,itni jldi baat maan gya}

Geet :mein apke liye pani lati hu.
She turn. But he held her hand and stand in the front of her.
Maan :chup bilkul chup.
Bhut ho gyi tumhari bakwas,
Phli baat ye mera room hai.
Aur jo sawal tum mujhse kr rhi ho, wo mujhe tumse krne chaiye.
Geet : sir
Maan : maine kaha na geet, ab ek sbd aur nhi
He pressed her lips from his index fingers.
Again both lost into each other eyes.
"mahi mein mahi mahi ve"..
He come near to her but they had to break apart, when they heard a knock on the door. It was...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Precap :Any idea frnds, kaun ho sakta h
1)daadi
2)dev
3)nakul
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Posted: 13 years ago
i guess dev ho ga dear 😊
awesome update dear... 😃
par y its in small bits lik this...?
cont soon dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 38(a)
Maan(think) : is time kaun hai
Geet(mummers) : hey babaji, ab kaun aa gya kisine mujhe inkhe sath dekha to,
Nhi...
Between this time maan open the door.
Geet : babaji inhone to mere kuch khne se phle hi door open kr diya.
Maan : nakul
Tum yha is waqt kya kr rhe ho
Nakul : chote sahab, wo apke liye flowers aye hai.
Maan :flower, wo bi is waqt
He take the flower from his hand and close the door.
She laughs after seeing the flower in his hand.
She said : "geet tu bhi na,kitna bda sapna dekhti hai"
She again doing her cutely complains to her favourite babaji.
Hey babaji apko bi sapne me koi aur nhi mila lane ko, ye dust danav hi mila.
Maan :dust danav
He mummers mujhe dust danav kha fir se.
Maan :geettt
Geet : ye kya hai, office me bi chilate rhte hai,
She speaks with attitude(jaise maan khta hai)
Geet CP wali file kaha hai,
Tumhe ek baar me smjh kyu nhi ata h,
"koi inhe btaye, smjhana bi to ana chaiye" Shi se to kuch btate nhi h. Bs chilate rhte hai.
Maan :chup
She interupted his dialouge.
Geet : chup bilkul chup.
Inka favourite dialouge.
Babaji, ab to mere sapne me bi chila rhe hai.
She make a baby face and said "why are you shouting"?
He greeted his teeth and said in angry tone : geet
Geet : babaji, bhut hi bura sapna hai.
Very bad dream
Please end this dream, babaji.
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Posted: 13 years ago
He held her shoulders and pinned her to the wall. She stepped backward as he kept pusher her to the wall.
She shocked for his reaction.

Geet : sir
Maan (angry tone) : chup bilkul chup.
Phli baat ye mera ghar hai.
It is my house not your. And secondly, it is my room aur ye koi sapna nhi hai.
Ab smjh aya, ya dobara smjhayu.
She nodded.
Maan :kya
Geet : smjh aa gya
Both look into each other eyes and short eye lock happen.
"mahi mein mahi mahi ve..."
He tucked the hair falling on her face,behind her ear and come near to the nape of her neck for kissing.
But his phone rings.
Maan (think) ye mein kya krne ja rha tha.
Both they had break apart.,
Maan receive the call.
Maan : hello
She : hey my baby,
Flowers mile
Maan : hmmm
She : kaise lage
Maan : tumne ye puchne ke liye mujhe is waqt call kiya hai.
Aur ye kya waqt hai kisi ko flowers bejne ka
She : how unromantic,
Maan pyar me koi waqt thode dekhte hai,
Aur maine kisi ko nhi tumhe beje hai.
Tumne to mujhe bilkul bi miss nhi kiya
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Posted: 13 years ago

superb one waiting for next

Edited by sakshi04 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

oye yaar ye kaun hai???

jisne apne maan ko flowers bhej diye??

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Posted: 13 years ago
maaneet ff-- kaisa ye pyaar hai
part 37








Part 37(a)
Flashback
He enter in his own room. The room was totally dark. He directly goes washroom. After changing the clothes, he come outside and lay on the one side of the bed.
Way pass midnight, they were come near to each other.
After some time, he could feel some one warm fingers on his chest. He lifted his brows with eyes.
Maan (think): mere room me is waqt kaun ho sakta h.
Geet (think) : yha sayad aur koi bi hai
Babaji
Ab mein kya karu
Geet tu dr mat
Is chor ki to aaj khr nhi..

She immediately pushed him away at once, screaming, fanatically checking her dress and her position.
She screamed "
Chor chor chor"

Maan covered her mouth, she struggled to let go. Trying to hard to scream. He pinned her down, she began to hit him wildly with her hands. He held her hand and pinned her down ,holding her completely.

Fractin of that second she closed her eyes.
Shot prayer to babaji.
(babaji, ye kaun hain , ab mein kya karu,
Ye chor half nude hoke kyun ghum rha hai.
Babaji)


In this time maan open the light of side lamp. And slowly eased his hand.


She opened her scared and terrified eyes and looked at him.
For some time,both lost into each other eyes. He cared her face.
Both didn't even blink.

"mahi mein mahi mahi ve..."
After few minutes, both were realizing the situation and both were take steps backward or inching backward. And
Both said together
Maan : tum
Geet : aap

Part 37 (b) coming



see below

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 13 years ago

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