SURROGATE RELATIONS ...part 11 on pg 142

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Tabinda Areeb

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Posted: 14 years ago

#781

nice, it seems sameera has some hint of his over protectiveness, i want her to help them develop a relattionship

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soumi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#782

loved the part...👏👏👏👏👏

its just awesome...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

hey can u please add me to ur pm list?????

waiting for the next part...

update soon...😊

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siroilily

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Posted: 14 years ago

#783

Loved d update. It was awesome. Pls cont soon wanna read more. 😳

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sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#784

nice update

Sameera seems to be a nice person ...

loved Maan's care for Geet ...

plzz plzz plzz update soon

cant wait to read

love

Sana

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Hima

@Ramhari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#785

Very nice part.
Sam seems to be the perfect woman for the perfect Maan.

She seems to be very gentle and caring.

Maan seems to trust her a lot and so gave her the responsibility of befriending Geet.

Geet is one big mess herself.

Looks like pregnancy hormones are taking a toll over already her nervous self.

Geet was hesitant with Sam too I felt.

Maan's over concern for Geet didnt go unnoticed by Sam.

Waiting to see how their relation would go moving further

Continue soon.

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dystopian10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#786

Beautifully written Bindu. You know the whole week I've been visiting Geet page just to see if you'd put in the next part. And It's almost 2a.m. in the morning and just before going to bed I said to myself I should check it just one last time and lo and behold there it was and boy was I happy!

Look forward to the next installment. Please let it be longer! It so reminds me of my Mills and Boon days!

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RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#787

Well your update , more than made up , for the wait . Our patience paid off 😃

Fantastic 👏 to say the least .

Maan is hopelessly in love with Geet 😳 ; it was not planned , but , well it has Happened .

Throughout the update I felt Geet is his oxygen ... the air he breathes to stay Alive is Geet , the drive that makes him fight the world , if necessary , is Geet ,

the mere excitement of Geet around him fills him with life & joy , her mere presence is enough to make him watch her incessantly ... her moves , gestures , little antics , Geet using the provisions arranged by Maan brings him a sense of immense satisfaction ... I can go on ... but my point is Geet is his life .

The fact that she is so scared of men is hurting Maan coz he wants her to share her joys , pain & worry with him . Her not so pleasant experience with men is preventing Geet to open up to Maan , to approach him ... this is making Maan restless .

Beautiful elements surfaced in today's update 👏👏👏 ; loss of words for appreciation am I .

Excellent writing Glitter Star Red

Thanks for pm ... Glitter Heart Red

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mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#788

what an update loved it to the core . looks like Sameera is a positive character…..loved Maan's care for Geet ...eagerly waiting for the next part...

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Zooni Begam

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Posted: 14 years ago

#789

Wow di I was waiting for ur update!!
Finally u updated!!
Reali nicely written!! Like the way u write how maan will do Anything for Geet!!
Well it's noe to everyone that it's maan ki geet!! That one no one can change it no matter life or death both will be together!!!
Hope sameera stay nice till the end..
Ok loved it continue soon!!
Thx for the pm can't wait to read more!!!

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jasraj123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#790

superb update. love the maan's concern for geet and he wanted sam to be her friend sooo geet can open up more. he is sooo caring and nice. sam is seems to be nice and gentle tooo.

thanks for pm and pls pls update soon bindu yaar. jayada intzaar matt karwana😆

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