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Posted: 14 years ago
haye mein toh maaneet ke hug mein kho gayi hoon.. lol.. great part yaar.. continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally done reading all parts. love this ff. never laughed like this before. my fav character chandu. heeh love maan and chandu scenes. loving this get out game. maan takes a lot of time to get geet out of the house ( becz she is very sidhi and wont go tht easily) but he takes only very few secs to pull her in the mansion. ehhee. maan, let me ask u a question, if u r nt going to let her go then why pushing her out of the house. why wasting ur energy. this adi keeps saying he is going to inform dadi abt maan and his secret wife but never does. i cant wait to see adi's reaction when he see geet in the mansion. i wish dev and annie was there when the doctor gave the injection. they both need it. i dont like them becz they dont like my poor geet. looks like maan knows geet even before she appeared in the mandap. then why did he behave as if he was seeing for the first time. is she really mrs msk. if he really married her then why is he denying it. does maan lost his memory or wht. just a rndom thought. cant wait for the mystery to unfold. continue soon. pls add me to ur pm list. 😃 ps: how do u come up with such funny scenes. ⭐️👏
Edited by reenasv - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I JUST DYING TO KNOW WHO IS MRS. MSK...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update and thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Buddies,

I am really very sorry for not updating earlier. along with all of you, I too was lost in maaneet's hug. Hahaha...it is a lie. Actually had some urgent work.

Thank you so much for your lovely comments buddies. To some of the posts, the like button is not working. So please don't mistake me buddies. i am reading each and every comment atleast twice.

Buddies, if possible, please read the readers comments also. And don't forget to read Nidhi's (niddzz) humourous and funny review of every update. Her funny reviews are far better than my updates. For part 32 she has posted a review on page 28. It is too funny. Enjoy it buddies.

@nidhi

Thank you so much for such funny reviews dear. Btw...i have found out the so called secret about part 31's missing review...hahaha..

Part 33

Maaneet are still lost in the hug. All the KC staffs are trying to peep through maan's cabin door to know what is happening inside. But before they could succeed in their attempt, Adi comes there and shouts at them

Adi: aap log yahan kya kar rahe hain? Why you people are always poking your nose into other people's personal matter? Ab Jayiye! Jakar Apna kam keejiye!

All are leaving for their seats siletnly

After all staffs left, Adi is so curious to know what is happening between maaneet. So adi opens the door slightly and peeps through it. Maaneet are still hugging. Adi's jaw dropped.

Adi: hey bhagavan! Am i dreaming? Maan sir is hugging his secret wife in the office itself. acha! Is this the latest development of his secret marriage? What if all the staff had seen him like this? adi! Ab staff ko chodo. What if dadima comes to know about his secret romance in office? Today i must inform this to dadima

Adi clicks a picture of maaneet's hug and leaves the place.

After few seconds, Maan comes back to his senses and realises that he is hugging geet. he is shocked to the core . he breaks from the hug with a jerk. This brings geet back to her senses

M: (st) ye maine kya kardiya? Why am i behaving like this?

Maan closes his eyes in frustration and recalls the hug.

M: (st) why did she hug me? does she really love me? geet is making things more complicated for me. Now what will i do?

Geet notices maan's closed eyes and she recalls how he hugged her, how peaceful he was while hugging her, how he tightened the hug...

G: (st) was that hug real? why did maan hug me back?

geet remembers, Maan's words, " geet! do you have any idea of how much i was worried about you? what the hell are you doing to me geet?

G: (st) why did he say these words? what is he feeling for me? what am i doing to him? is he getting affected by me?

M: (st) why i couldn't hide my feelings for her? why i couldn't hide that i am getting affected by her to the core? Maan! this is wrong. You have to stay away from geet.

Maan's eyes are still closed. Geet couldn't see him in pain

G: (st) i can't see him like this

Geet takes maan's hands into hers and calls him softly

G: maan!

Maan opens his eyes and looks into her eyes

G: what is bothering you maan?

Maan didn't expect this question from her and his heart skips a beat. he didn't know how to react

M: (st) who are you geet? why did you come into my life once again? I thought that i will never see you in my life once again. But you are back. do you know how much i find it difficult to stay away from you?

G: boliyena maan! what are you going through? Why are you so upset?

Maan's heart is aching. his heart is begging him to confess his feelings for her. but his brain stops him

M: (st) geet! i can't tell you how much i love you. I can never tell you this geet

G: maan! aap chup kyun rahe hain? Batayiyena

M: (st) kaise batatu?

Tears gather in geet's eyes

G: maan! i always want to see you happy. I can't see you like this. please maan! let me know what is bothering you? Why are you being so restless?

Seeing geet's tears, Maan feels like crying his heart out hugging her tightly. he wants to tell her how much he loves her. he wants to tell her without her he can't live even for a second. But he is helpless

G: maan please! boliyena

M: (st) You can't understand it geet. i love you. At the same time, i can't live with you.

Geet starts to shake him

G: batayiyena maan

Maan has lost his patience. he couldn't take this anymore. He shouts at her

M: stop it.

Geet is shocked and goes mute. He didn't realise what he is doing. He holds her by her shoulders and shouts

M: you want to know what is bothering me. hena?

Geet is looking into his eyes with confusion

M: ab sunlo...

Geet starts to breathe heavily but she didn't know why

M: main tumse pyar kartha hu geet

She couldn't believe what he just said. Geet's heart almost stops. tears roll down her cheeks in happiness. She keeps on looking into his eyes

G: (st) kya ye sab sach me ho raha hain? Mujhe yakin nahi ho rahi hai.

Maan realises that he confessed to her just now

M: (st) ye maine kya kardiya?

Maan couldn't face her gaze, he releases her and turns his back to her

M: (st) maan! you are such a stupid who can not control his emotions. Now what is the need to tell this to her

Geet keeps on looking at his back

G: (st) did he mean those words?

M: (st) now what will i do?

Geet wipes her tears and says softly

G: i love you too maan

Maan almost stops breathing. He turns around and looks into her eyes and lost in them. Here starts mahi mahi...eyelock

M: (st) did she mean it? Or was it her usual lie?

G: (st) what his eyes are trying to convey?

After few minutes maan comes back to his senses and he breaks from the eyelock

M: (st) no maan! don't let yourself loose. now do something and send her out of the place. Wo hi geet ke liye acha hoga

Geet is still starring at him. Maan tries to do damage control action and he starts to laugh fakely. Geet is confused

M: geet! have you believed what i said few minutes back?

Geet is more confused

He again starts to laugh

M: how many lies you have told. I never believed any of them. But today,i told a single lie and you believed it. sach bol raha hu geet... main tum jaise bewkhoof kabhi dekha nahi hai

Geet is shocked and hurt by his words.

She wants to see him happy and smiling. But at this moment she feels that his laughter is causing unbearable pain in her. maan reads her face, understands her pain but he continues...

M: (sarcastically) tume kya lagata hai? I am getting affected by you? And i will say i love you to you? That too with in 2 days? What a foolishness!

G: (st) he is right. Why should he say i love you to me? he knows me for the past 2 days only and he hates me to the core

Maan reads her face and says in MSK attitude

M: ab dhyan se sun lo geet. i am still the same Maan Singh Khurana who hates women. You can not do anything to me. abhi bhi tum mere liye kuch bhi nahi hai. samji tum?

Geet is hurt. She turns around and silently walks towards the door. Though he is doing this for her good, his heart refuses to listen to his brain. He feels like his soul is leaving his body. His heart is crying for her to come back

M: (st) mujhe chodkar math jao geet. please come back to me

Geet stops

G: (st) geet! ye tum kya kar rahi ho? Why are you giving importance to his words? Maan ko chod kar math jao geet

Geet turns around. Maan heart beats quicken. Geet comes to him

M: (st) maan! control yourself. Now don't do anything stupid

Geet looks into his eyes and says with determination

G: aap ko kya lagta hai? i will go away from you that easily?. I am too still the same Geet Maan Singh Khurana. Your words can not do anything to me. i won't go away from you. samje hai aap?

Though maan's heart is happy at her words, his brain wants to send geet away from him. But after all the serious things happened just now, maan doesn't want to hurt her any more. So he choses to be calm

Geet wants to make the situation light. She grasps maan's hand and drags him to the couch. Maan is confused

M: (st) what is she trying to do?

Maan goes with her reluctantly. Geet makes him to sit on the couch forcibly

M: geet! ye tum kya kar rahi ho?

G: chup bilkul chup

M: (st) how sweet!

Geet takes the lunch which she brought for him from the mansion

M: (st) geet has come to office to bring lunch for me. why is she carring for me?

Geet gives the plate to him

G: khayiyena maan

M: nahi chayiye

G: acha! My husband wants his wife to feed him. Teek hai. i will feed you

M: (st) my heart is longing for it geet.

He scolds himself for this

M: (st) hey stupid maan! ab chup hojao

Geet brings the spoon near his mouth

M: geet! maine kaha than a ki mujhe nahi chayiye. Ab ye sab lekhar jao yahan se

G: aap bhi na? Bilkul bachon ke tarah. Ab chup chap khayiye

Maan is too hungry as he was starving for 2 whole days. So he takes the food from her hand and starts to eat quickly

Geet is staring at him with a smile

Maan is lost in the food.

M: (st) aaj chandu ko kya hogaya? He has cooked so tastily.

As maan already knows that geet had her lunch in the mansion itself, he didn't ask her about it.

G: (st) ye maan bhi na? He is this much hungry. But he is giving me attitude as if he emptied a fivestar hotel just now.

M: (st) is the food really tasty or it tastes so because of geet?

G: (st) He is not even asking me whether i had lunch or not? How rude? Chodo geet! why would he care for you?

Maan has finished his lunch. Geet gives him water

G: pani peejiyena maan

Maan drinks the water silently

Maan tries to be rude on her again

M: geet! what are you doing here?

G: i came to see my husband

M: geeettt!!

G: don't shout at me! my husband Maan singh Khurana is the Managing Director here. If i tell him about this, immediately he will fire you from your job. So better give respect to me

M: now stop this nonsense geet

G: what is nonsense in this? do you consider my husband Maan Singh Khurana being the MD of this company as a non sense thing? How dare you?

M: geet ab chup hojao varna...

G: varna kya maan! aap phirse se i love you bolege

Maan is speechless

M: (st) ye geet bhi na? sach much pagal hai

Geet is laughing silently

M: geet! ye office hai. if you finished, can i do some work?

G: teek hai maan! mein ab ja rahi hu. But come in time for dinner

Geet gets up and turns to leave

M: ek minute geet

G: ji

M: have your dinner in time. don't wait for me

Geet is touched by his words.

G: (st) how caring he is?

M: ab jao geet

G: (st) how confusing person my maan is? ye maan mujhe pagal kardege

She still keeps on starring at him. Maan is annoyed

M: (shouts) arey jao

G: haan ja rahi hu

Geet almost runs to the door

Thanks for reading buddies. hope you liked it. 143...Tonya

Edited by tonyahk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
He he he... so excited for being the first one !!!!!
Maan for a sec spilled the beans, aur baad mai kya cover up kiya... Ab maan bhi lo Maan ki tum pyar karte ho Geet se😉
Dear, your dialogues are so touching, Maan ke jo kashmakash hai woh aap beautifully narrate karte ho👏👏they kind of prick my heart...
Edited by maanhar - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hayeee msk confessed to himslf that he lus geet,geet ko bhi keh hi dia tha,nw seriously its a mystery he luvs her bt cant live wid her,maybe has to do smthing wid kunal's promise.funny prt,adi bcmng detective like jugnu mama.cont soon 😊
Edited by mandymore - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome udpate dear
loved it...uff confess kar diya tha tu phir use jhot kyon banaya
2 din ke baad confess kiya tha patha nahi how long will he take to confess again
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww awesomeee
it was beautifulll
n maan confessed i was like jinga lalaaa
bt thn whn he did d damage control
felt sad for geet n started doing jugnu mama bhangra
n wowww geet feed maan
im luving ittt more n moreee
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loooved it...
superb!!!!!!
wow Maan abb jyada din nahi rook payega khud koo...
Thkx for the nice update
---Anu

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