CGM FF: Ehsaas...Kuchh Naya Sa (complete)

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Cuty16

@Cuty16

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#111

😃 Really nice update dear.
The convo between Digvijay&Durdhara was realy sweet, loved it. 😛
And finaly Durdhara and chandu face to face awesome.
Curious to know what next.
Will wait for next one. 😊

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indupriya2008

@indupriya2008

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#112

Too much nicely updated Aru di, every incident is flawless.

Converstaion b/w dhara n digu is too sweet.

Amazing attitude of princess Dhara; moreover u have fantastically shown it without any mistake ,but, one thing going wrong which breaks the spirit,

that is,

Please don't mind it.😳

Hume apni chitra ko puri krni hai...

I know writing such superb hindi (that u have used) in english is a difficult task, but i don't expect such things from the talented writer like u.

Otherwise, everything is excellently placed n planned.

Chandu n Dhara's meeting is too nice as like ekta kapoor's 😆 but usmein lead actor actress ko catch kar leta hai but Aapke ke meeting plan mein toh bichara chandu bhi gir gaya.😆

Waiting for part-8...😳

Edited by indupriya2008 - 14 years ago

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Arunita Chandra

@RoseFairy

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: indupriya2008

Hume apni chitra ko puri krni hai...

thanks indu for your comments and pointing out the error...i have said earlier i am weak in hindi and don't know to write proper form of hindi in english words...
but error point out kiya to correction bhi krna chahiye tha ya nhi...warna mujhe kaise pata chalega sahi sentence kya hai???😕

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Ankita

@radhikarani

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#114

Hehehe indu, bengalese ka hindi aise hote h 🤣 mere v male female aur female male ho jati 🤣

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indupriya2008

@indupriya2008

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: jhum_86

thanks indu for your comments and pointing out the error...i have said earlier i am weak in hindi and don't know to write proper form of hindi in english words...
but error point out kiya to correction bhi krna chahiye tha ya nhi...warna mujhe kaise pata chalega sahi sentence kya hai???😕

its correct form will be...

Hume apne chitra ko pura krna hai...

...

@radhi- iknw 😳 aap bhi...aise hi likti ho, but ab samaj aa jata hai.

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peihu

@peihu

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#116

u kno jhum u shld seriously consider a career in script writing..👏
nd ur hindi is no problem...waise bhi hume jo samajhna hai hum wahi
samajte hain😆
aur tune durdhara ko itni jaldi gira diya mere chandu par..uff
im sooo jealous
ambhik tum kahaan ho????????

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Khushi Grover

@Amor.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#117

awesome

aru

thnk god u updated , i feel relax after reading it huni

continue sooon

i wana see more C & D 😍

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: indupriya2008

its correct form will be...
Hume apne chitra ko pura krna hai...

...
@radhi- iknw 😳 aap bhi...aise hi likti ho, but ab samaj aa jata hai.

@ indu : thanx 4 d rectification..mujhe to woh dikhayi v nahi diya..as radhi said " bengalese hindi "..full of grammatical mistakes !!

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Bhargavi

@Historylover

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: radhikarani
Hehehe indu, bengalese ka hindi aise hote h 🤣 mere v male female aur female male ho jati 🤣

😆 and i personally love it...bada maza atta hai 😉

@ aru
so finally i have read it ...brilliant update aru...and u dont need to worry abt wrong hindi..coz nowadays scripts are written in english only...and later dialogue writer writes the dialogue 😉

sagars come here and learn something abt how to formulate a story 🥱