CGM FF: Ehsaas...Kuchh Naya Sa (complete)

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trishnaultimate

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

just one word Stupendo Fantabulously Fantastically Superrbbb!! nice writing.. waiting 2 continue..

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pallavi guha biswas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

hi
m new 2 dis forum.Is anybody there/

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Kamalika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Really really superb! I loved the dramatic meeting! 😳
Do update soon
Thanks for the pm!😊

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Ritu Aigal

@Ritu278

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Posted: 14 years ago

#124

very nice Aru ji..I was waiting for this one👏

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Ankita

@radhikarani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#125

ok amy on the bank of jhelum er bangla naam ta janas pls. Ok.

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Arunita Chandra

@RoseFairy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#126

jhelum nadir tire...r ami partial keno re???

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karuu

@Manipadma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#127

muhaaa...muhaaa..muhaaa for the grttt update... 😃 ... So finally digu apne dhara se mli hi liye...i like the shtr frm of durdhara...DHARA..sounds really sweet ...lov the convo betn digu n dhara...hmm digu apne sis se bht pyaar karta hai...they both r swt..
..n now the most hilarious..cute...funny...romantic( 😕 😆 ) part of d update...the big bang... 😳 😳 😳...colrs pe chandu n chandu pe dharuu...hahahaha...o god jb se ye scene padha m to hansti hi jaa rai hun...god..1st meeting itni jordaar hai to aage kya honga... 😛 😆 ...lov lov lov this part...plzzz...aruu...update soon na...cant wait to read their reactions...plzzz update soon...
... Lov uuu sweetuuu...

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talkie14

@talkie14

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Posted: 14 years ago

#128

The story is very intersting... Nicely written..Looking forward to the next update...😊

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pallavi guha biswas

@pallo2504

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Posted: 14 years ago

#129

hi
m new to the forum is anybody around

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Arunita Chandra

@RoseFairy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#130

PART-8

Sukant and Akshay were roaming in the garden with the children of palace...suddenly a gusty cold air flowed over them...the air left a paper on Sukant's face...Sukant being very annoyed removed the paper from face and was about to throw it and then he had a glance at the portrait on the paper and he stopped like a statue...what a beautiful girl is she...is she really exists on this earth or its only a dream..or imagination of the painter...for some moments Sukant became lost in that painting...Akshay was very surprised by watching Sukant's behaviour...he called Sukant..but Sukant didn't response...then Akshay shaked him and Sukant regained his consciousness at last..

Akshay : Sukant kya ho gaya hai tumhe??..kahan kho gaye the??

Sukant : nahi Akshay hum to bas ye chitra dekh rahe the...baht sundar hai na??

Akshay looked at the portrait of Subhadra..no doubt the painting is beautiful..but Akshay failed to find anything there which made Sukant speechless...

Akshay : han sundar to hai...parantu tum kis soch mein par gaye..kya tum is kanya ko jante ho?..

Sukant (in a dreamy voice) : yugo yugo se...

Akshay : kya?? main kuch samjha nahi...

Sukant : tu samjhega bhi nahi...

Akshay : acha jane do...parantu hume aisa pratit hote hai k ye kanya isi rajmahal ki rehnewali hai...kadachit ye swayam rajkumari hi na ho??

Sukant (became confused and a little bit disappointed) : nahi hume aisa nahi lagta..

Akshay : chalo hume kya farq padta hai k ye kaun hai??hum is chitra ko mahal ki bacho ko sanp dete hai vo avasya jante honge ye kaun hai aur vo unhe wapas bhi de denge...

Sukant : nahi bache ye chitra ko nast kar sakte hai...

Akshay : acha thik hai fir tum ise apne paas hi rakho..hum baad mein Digvijay se puch lenge...abhi chalo hume apne baki mitro ko bhi dhundna hai...sandhyakalin ke utsav mein yogdaan bhi to dena hai...

Sukant : han chalo..
(he again looked at the painting and thinks..)
humara hriday keh raha hai ke ye rajkumari ki chitra nahi hai..parantu jinki hai vo avasya ye mahal mein hi rehti hai...aur na jane hume aisa kyu lagte hai ke hum unse baht i shighra milenge...

Edited by FairyDreams - 12 years ago

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