~*The Unknown Desire 2(RP)*~part 52 up pg. 64 on 13/08/16 - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Vertika
Update was gud.👏
Vaishnaviji has accepted Kajal as her daughter-in-law.She is happy with Vardaan's choice.😊 Their meeting was worth reading.Kajal was so nervous to meet her for the first time.
Abhay is really naughty.He knows how to manupilate Kajal but its for her own gud only.She wasn't eating anything.
Vardaan isbeing shifted to Mumbai for better treatment..😛
Shalabh and his friends wud definetely plan something ti improve Arjun's mood..😆😆
Kajal was so happy at the same time guilty to see Vardaan like this.She cudn't stop her tears.😭😭
Edited by suhana.dixit - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally I am gain happy that u updated this FF.

Great part. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Specially the first and emotional meeting of Kajal and Vardaan after the accident where she was blaming herself for whatever happened with him. 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Vardaan knew that something she will do of such kind but seeing her crying so much made him scared. Pia is very understanding so she stopped Abhay when Kajal and Vardaan were alone. 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

I love the way Vardaan's mother made Kajal understand that she must take care of herself in order to make Vardaan fit.
Their convo was sweet and she is really a sweet mother. 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

Kajal gulped the whole soup in one go when she said if u will not finish it u will not meet him.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Mr. and Mrs. Arora are really good people not only they bought Kajal with them but also Abhiya and more to that they paid bills as well .


Update sooner this time darls ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Reply for previous part
Sorry yaar comment karna hi bhool gayi. Nice update,👏 Vardaan hosh me aa gaya ye khushi lagta hai Kajal madam se bardasht hi nahi hue and behosh ho gayi.😛 Jab hosh me aayi to bacchon ki tarah zid karne lagi ki Vardaan se milna hai.😉 Par Abhay bhi kam thode na hai us ne bhi thaan rakhi hai ki pehle Kajal ko apne aap ko fit karna padega.😛 Kajal bhi khoob gussa ho rahi hai us par ki us ne bataya hi nahi ki Kajal ki mom ka call aaya tha. But I hope ab Vardaan sab se pehle us se hi milna chahega.😳 Abhay and Pia are really awesome frnds akhir Kajal ka itna khayal rakh rahe hain.😃 Vaishanvi jee bhi carefree hain aur unhone kaha jab ki she is Vardaan's would be Mr. Arora bhi confuse ho gaye the.
😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi
the up is really good and touchy too
vardaan is fine now and by seeing him kajal who was worried is ok now but she cant stop her tears ohhh
but vardan he made her understand hmm good
and also his mom accpeted her finally
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved this part. 👏 👏

Specially loved the interaction between Vaishanvi jee and Kajal where she met her first time. 😃 😃 The love and concern she has for him was just pouring from her words !!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Kajal was so touched by her words as well.😊 😊 But I loved Abhay's plan who did it intentionally but see the result she gulped the whole soup in one go !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛 😛

Finally they came back to Mumbai and here he can get better treatment.😊 😊 Mr. Arora was so generous and even Abhay liked his efforts !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊 😊

Kajal was speechless to face him for the first time when she went to meet him and his fear & guilt came out in form of her tears !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭 😭

I am sure soon Shalabh & gang help to make mood of Arjun normal !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😉 😉

Update soon dear !!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey yaar nice update 👏 and I am happy that after being disappointed ur still updating this FF.😃 This is the spirit.👍🏼 I love this part. I was sorry for Kajal,😔 she couldn't meet him as he was sleeping but now when he is awake she is unable to face him. She is still crying and as par her nature he knew that but she was uncontrollable now.😭 He will soothe her but see what happens in next part,😕 Shalabh and the rest of the gang is planing to make them meet once I think.😉 I just love the convo of Mrs. Arora and Kajal, 😊 which was obviously one sided but I love the concern of her she showed for Kajal.😃 See kitne obedient bahu hai Kajal, she quickly had the whole soup. 😛 Mr. Arora is indeed a good man by heart and when Mrs. Arora has accepted Kajal than I don't think he will have any problem.😉
Darling try to update fast.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Meri maa tune kaha tha ki is ko pehle update karegi to ab is ka no kab aayega?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part
Sorry for replying so late.
Kajal was very nervouse about meeting Vaishnaviji, but is a relief that she has accepted kajal as her daughter-in-law. She is happy with Vardan's choice.
please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nihatri

pm after so much time n i will comment😭nahi yeh nahi ho sakta



Sorry dear I think I missed it otherwise I would have been pmed u. 😕 😕 😕

Vaise bhi there are only a few of members who still read TUD so how can I not pm u?

Forgive me dear and pls do comment whenever u get time. 😔
😔 😔

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Posted: 12 years ago


Thanks dear so much 🤗🤗🤗

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