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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: preethia

Congrats on new ff...

omg absolutely amazing...
very eager to know who wins this game...want love to win it this time...
pl cont soon
thnks for the pm

thanx a lot i was missing your comments
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

nice ff...


interesting concept...

do add me to ur PM list...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Tamy95

can u pm me also ?
i loved it .. :D

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonali_N

😊😊😊Awesome Graphic #15



for d PM 😊😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
thankyou all who commented and liked the update
here is the next one plz comment
PART 5:

Maan chose an English breakfast .

Maan agar yahi sara wa nashta karma tha to ghar pe hi kar laite.bahir q ae.kitni bhook lagi thi mujhe or ye sara wa toast or anda. Jis me na mirch na namak.

Geet tum koi bhi khana aram se nahi kha sakti . ab her restaurant me tumhare hushyarpur k khane nahi milte

Geet pouted and pushed the plates towards Maan.

Khaiye phir ye khuddi. Mujhe nahi khana. Mujhe sirf chole pathore khane hai

Geet.

She turned her face other side.

Acha theek hai me tumhai wo khila do gat um apni chae to pe lo abhi.

Pakka

Ha bhai pakka

After having tea and coffee Maan and Geet were about to go out when Maan spotted that babaji. He madly rushed towards him . baba was standing right there on the street he made his way towards him but when he reached there nobody was there. He looked around but no one was there he was about to turn back when he saw a note on the street.

THE GAME BEGINS.

He looked at the paper shocked and then realized it was the time for

Oh no

He rushed back into the restaurant only to see that many ppl were gathering around Geet.

Geet kia hua? He came running

Maan aap kaha gae thy

Wo sab choro tumhai kia hua

Kuch nahi maan

Nahi mujhe apna hath dikhao

It was the same burn mark that had happen earlier

How did that happen

Wo maan aap jab bhag k bahir gae to me aap k pche bhagi. Aap ki raste me aik waiter se takar hui or us k hath se coffee ki tray gir gai and my hand got a little burnt

Maan could not believe it he ran a hand in his hairs and moved back all scenes of that dream were flashing in his eyes and then that babaji.

Maan me thk ho sach me mujhe kuch nahi hua

Hmm

Chalo yaha se

He went straight to office

He orderd her breakkfast in office and asked her to make sure no body disturb him and she should under no condition leave the office.

Geet took it as some new business stress and ignored his weird behaviour.

It had been 2 hrs since he was sitting there trying to think but he could not get any answers. Finally he got up and dashed out of the office

Geet had been observing him from her office but then again it was nothing new . he does not care about anything infront of buiseness..

He went to that dargah. And searched the whole place for that baba. Finally he sat there at the steps tired . another baba came and asked him what's the matter

Wo yaha aik baba they . umm he described the baba's appearance

Acha wo

Baita wo to yaha kabhi kabhi ate hai koi un k bare me kuch nahi janta. Wo na kisi se baat karte hai na hi kuch sunte hai bus kabhi kabhi kisi k sir pe hath phair daite hai per jante ho wo jis k sar pe hath phire uski sari murade puri hojati hai.

Per mujhe unse milna hai

Unse milna namumkin hai. Wo to kai baar kai kai saal yaha nai ate.

Maan left from there dejected.

He entered office.Geet was walking to and fro murmering something to herself.

Ohhh shoot . isko kaise manao ab?

PRECAP;

jaane bhi de jo bhi hua jane bhi de...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
wow awsome yaar ...loved it so much
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
hey dat was a nice update and nw the game begins lets see wat happens next do update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesum ...😊
cntnue soon...
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Awesome part... Loved it
Thanx for the PM

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