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@dazzlingdivz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#721

hey i jsttt read d whole now sriii

bt yaa lovvvddd 🥳 it thnxxx fr d pm n plz plz plz do continue soonn...waitinnn 😳

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#722

Ji...😉..

most 1stly...me 4 PM.😛..

u done a

..⭐️👏..

4 this ..👍🏼..

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so much ..dear..😛..

4 this update..👏👏.

tons of 4 u dear..🤗...

again said ..😊.

really ..dear...😛...

lov,❤️

Tama

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Posted: 13 years ago

#723

awesome updt
both couples were really cute
aww maaneet mahii mahii moment he he
hate dis sameera
cont soon
thnx 4 d pm

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savie_

@savie_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#724

pleashe sholly...
i m sholly for not updating and making u wait ..
shollyy ..

part 27

part 27

geet moved ahead and removed the cloth and a big collage of arohi's and arjun's pics appeared ..
a smile appeared on both of deir faces ..
every one were talking about how beautiflly dat collage was made ...
geet shouted present ..
she came forward towards arjun and arohi and said so how was it ..???
arohi blushed ..
seeing dis geet came to know dat she liked the present ..
even maan came from back and joined her
geet continued well actually a gift for ur engagment from me and maan's side ...
arjun stood up and hugged geet and said thanks sister ..
geet- ur welcome bhai and my sweet jiju ...
arjun arohi geet and maan laughed ...
arjun - thanks to u too bro ..
maan - welcome bro ..
vicky and dia came running from behind and shows 2 boxes wrapped in beautful colours ..
vicky and dia - arjun jiju yeh apke liye ..
den dey moved towards arohi and gave her gift - di yeh apke liye ..
pta hai humne na yeh ap dono ke liye apni pocket money se liya hai ..
arohi - thanks sweety ...
arohi kissed on both of deir cheeks ..
arjun picked arohi in his arms and kissed her cheeks and said thanks ..
he said thanks too vicky too
geet was continuosly smiling ..
maan again got lost in her beautiful smile .. her green eyes having a shine ..
sameera came from behind and holds maan from his biceps and keeps her head on his shoulder ..
dis brought maan back from his staring session ...
and he looked towards sameera and sameera gave him a cheezy smile ..
geet was still busy looking towards the sweet couple arjuhi ..
her eyes get into the direction of sameera and maan ...
her smile vanished ...
she looked at the bicep of maan where sameera has placed her hand .
dere was a kind of pain in her eyes seeing sameera geeting so close to maan ...
maan saw towards geet and noticed she was staring painfullly towards maan's bicep ..
maan jerked sameera's hand .. which brought geet back from her staring session ..
layers of tears started forming in her eyes ..
maan came to know dat she was feeeling bad .. and was really in pain seeing sameera geeting so colse to him ..
she looked painfuly towards maan and silently making sure no one noticing her she quiitted from dat place ...
but arohi noticed her going away ..
den she saw maan foloowing her ..
she stood from her place .. and went towards maan and stooped him ..
arohi - ruk jao maan .. usse akela chod do kuch der ke liye ..
maan - par arohi voh ro rhi thi ..
arohi - janti hun ..but tum usse thoda tym do .. voh samajh jayegi .. kisi bhi ladki ke liye yeh assan nhi hota ..
maan nodded and both of dem moved back towards the stage ..
arohi sat back on her place and arjun placed his palm softly on arohi's palm and gestured her wid his eyes and whispered softly ..
arjun - r u ok..
arohi smiled - hm..
arjun - kahan gayi thi ..
arohi - kuch nhi bas maan ko rokne gayi thi ..
arjun - kyun..?
arohi - voh mujhe laga ki hummme uski yahan zarrorat pad sakti hai ..toh isliye ..
arjun - kk
arohi's pov..
srry arjun ... tumhe abbhi kuch nhi bta sakti .. but promise humare shadi ke baad mai tumhe sab kuch bta dungi .. ujhe function ke baad geet se is bare mai baat karni hogi ..
maan's pov
yeh sameera bhi na jab bhi door bhagat hun dubara aa kar chipak jaati hai .. kuch toh karna padega iska ..
shayd arohi sahi keh rhi hai mujhe geet ko thoda tym dena chhaiye ..
she reached the backyard of the house where no one comes ..
she sat dere on a bench and teras started coming out of her eyes ...
geet's pov
voh sameera chipku samajti kya hai apne aap ko ..kaise maan se chiapak rhi thi ..aur maan usne sameera ko kuch kaha bhi nhi ..
par geet tujhe kyu farak pad rha hai ..
maan aur sameera ek dusre se pyaar karte hain .. colledge ke hottest couple hai voh ..
geet tujhe farak nhi padna chhaiye .. maan ko jo karna hai voh kare tujhe ussse kuch farak nhi padna chahiye .. suna tune .. door reh maaan sai ..
she hurriedly wiped her tears ..
she wiped her face lightly wid her pallu ..
and moved back towards the party hall ..
sameera's pov
yeh maan ko kya ho gaya hai ..
aesa aajeeb sa behave kyun kar rha hai ..
leave it .. i dont care about him ..
bas arjun ki shadi hone do ..fir isse humari shadi ki baat karungi aur yeh man jaye ... tab jaakar mera plan 50 % pooora hoga ..
geet comes back to the hall .. and stands wid all ..
maan' eyes r sticked to her .. he notices dat she still have sadnes in her eyes ..
even arohi noticed dis .. but it remained un noticed by everyone else ..
everyone moved towards deir dinner ..
arjun forced arohi to eat the healty food rather dan eating italian or mexican food ..
geet was happy dat deir is sum one to take care of her dear sis .. but even after dis dere was sadness in her eyes seeing chipku sameera so close to maan ..
finally the finction came to an end and everyone went back to deir rooms ..
geet and arohi changed deir clothes ..
geet went to sleeep .. she turned to her side and tears started rolling down her eyes ...
arohi came out of the washrrom .. as geet heard the click of the lock .. she hurriedly wiped her tears and closed her eyes ..
arohi knew dat she was jst acting to sleep while inside she was really really sad ..
she went to the other side of the bed ..
arohi - geet ..
geet - ..??
arohi - geeet ...r u ok ..??
geet got au and sat on the bed
geet- hm...i m fine ..tu aese kyun pooch rhi hai ..
arohi - voh sameera ka maan ke paas aana ... i know yeh dekh kar tu beech mai party se chali gayi thi ..
geet - nhi aru aese koi baat nhi hai ... aur agar koi baat hoti toh mai tujhe zaroor btati ..
arohi - vohi toh geet tu mujhse toh apna dard mat chupa ..
geet started crying loudly and hugged arohi ..
arohi didnt stopped her from crying becoz she knew crying will make her heart light ...
after some tym she stooped ccrying and pulled herself out of the hug and looked towards arohi .
arohi wiped her tears and said - chal ab bta kya hua ..
geet - mai nhi janti sameera ke maan ke paas aane se mujhe kyun farak pad rha hai ... bas apne aaap bura lagne laga ...
arohi - hota hai geet hota hai ..
arohi made geet sleep and den finally slept ... thinking about geet and maan ..

well gyz ..srry for being late ..
gyz i have pic of collage saved in my fb id .. but dats not opening .. will post the pic later for sure ...
and i dont know y ..many of u r assuming dat the marraige is done .. gyz dis was the engagemnt .. the marraige is about to come .. soory for draggging it too long . it is imp. to get a beter result of maaneet's relation and also srry for bringing sameera .. well she wil be the unknown cupid between maaneet ... vohi maan aur geet ko paas layegi .. so she is definitely important ..

Edited by savie_ - 13 years ago

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