Maneet FF walking down dark lane/upd#19-pg128 - Page 44

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice... once again awesome n interesting part... shurbhi character is also interesting... reveal priya's flashback soon... n continue soon... 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...

that vicky...glad that nano caught it...

wonder y dadi took such a decision..??

continue soon...

thnx for PM>...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome post, loved ur analysis, Gurti is and will continue to be THE BEST :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aweesome upd :)
*Woops, looking forward to next part :)
Gosh, geet reciving blank calls .. hmm 🤔

Upd soon, Nazu 🤗

Love from Hina-

ps- Happy friendship day 🤗 I know I am late 😆
Posted: 13 years ago
Aww, cute Maaneet moment. But Geet getting blank calls in the precap? I'm not liking it. Still no clue about Priya's identity...hmm I wonder who she is?
Lovely update Naz!
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Posted: 13 years ago
brill great amazing superb update plz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
WALKING DOWN THE DARKLANE
Update #11
Geet gets call from Nandini reminding her to join her and daadi for shopping. Geet, Nandini, and daadi enjoy shopping and are returning to khurana Mansion when Geet gets a call on her phone. Geet looks at the landline number and picks up the call, but no one speaks. Geet gets panicked and drops the phone. Nandini consoles Geet and picks up the phone. The call is disconnected. Daadi suggests they call back. Nandini calls back.

Nandini: Hello
Priya; Helo...Khurana constructions...
Nandini recognises the voice and gets furious: PRIYA
Priya: yes...oh..Nandini...tell me
Nandini: What you expect me to tell you...why are you giving blank calls to Geet...I was always right about you..you are not trusthworty..

Geet snatches the phone, but Priya hands over the phone to Pinky n leaves upset. pinky tells to Geet that neither she nor Priya made any calls as they were busy finding some file for Maan. They just returned and this is the first call they got. Geet gives Nandini an angry look. pinky says she has no idea who made the call. Geet later tries to call up Priya who does not pickup her call as she is upset. Pinky tells Priya about the blank call Geet got from office.

Priya: but she has the office number saved in her mobile.
Pinky; there are 3 to 4 numbers in office, she might not have saved all..
Priya: but all are busy in the conference hall today then who would have called.
Pinky: leave it na yaar..
Priya gets furious: sure...we will wait until you get a missed call...
Pinky gets scared: what...nooo...ok...what shall we do..

Pinky and Priya have a check over all the office landlines and come to conclusion that either someone has called from reception or conference hall. Pinky calls peon n asks him if someone called from there, he says he was around n no one called. Priya n Pinky are confused...Maan finishes the meet and returns with his clients, Mr. Kunal Mehra to his cabin. Mr. Mehra invites Mr. n Mrs. Khurana for a dinner and leaves. Priya comes n hesistantly informs him about the missed call. Maan gets concerned and goes to the conference room. All the ones present in meeting are questioned but they refuse to have made any call...

Geet is still thinking she should inform Maan about the missed call or not, Maan calls her to get ready for dinner outside. Geet gets all happy that she is gonna have time with Maan. Daadi and Nandini tease her for blushing thinking of Maan. Geet gets ready and waits for Maan. Maan calls her back and asks her to reach the hotel and wait. Geet goes to the hotel, finds a table for herself, and waits. Geet looks around and starts fantasizing. A waiter comes with water and asks for order. Geet informs she is waiting for someone. She drinks the water and feels restless and sleepy. Someone comes n touches her shoulder and she turns around.

Geet: where were you...you know if you would not have come for 10 minutes, I would have fell asleep
Maan: Lets go upstairs...I booked us a table there.

They both go to the top floor with special decorations...They both sit and Geet looks at him lovingly with her sleepy eyes...

Maan: Shall we have a dance..
Geet: Sure

Maan and Geet dance together with music band playing music for them..

(credits to marshP...me lazy fellow couldnt make them myself)


Maan: Shall we have the dinner?
Geet; Sure...me feeling hungry..

Maan and Geet finish their dinner and Geet is looking for her phone.

Geet: Did you see my phone??
Maan: Nope...Did you bring.?
Geet: yes...
Maan: I think we should check downstairs Mrs. Khurana.
Geet: Mrs. Khurana???????????

Geet looks up, shooks her head, and is shell shocked. She gets off her chair and is like...how can I do this. how can I get confused someone else to Maan..

Geet: I am sorry Kunal...I thought Maan
Kunal: what happened...stop panicing Mrs. Khurana...please sit first.
Geet: No...I need to go..

Kunal and Geet come down and get Geet's phone from the reception which she forgot at the first table she sat. Geet checks it and finds Maan's missed calls and msg that he got stuck in traffic and will be coming late. Geet feels guilty. Maan comes and geet finds hard to look at him. Kunal says that they already had food. Maan is shocked.

Precap: Geet tries to avoid Maan out of guilt. Maan is confused with her behavior
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nazu🤗loved the update.
found it wierd... how Geet didn't notice that the man wasn't her husband!😆
she's gotta be guilty alright... !
buhh i guess Maan's gonna let it go.. probably a lil bit of convincing or shall i say seducing😉
update soon
ohh.. and thx for the pm.. and updating after ages 😳
~Jessica😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: _Jess_

Nazu🤗 loved the update.

found it wierd... how Geet didn't notice that the man wasn't her husband!😆
she's gotta be guilty alright... !
buhh i guess Maan's gonna let it go.. probably a lil bit of convincing or shall i say seducing😉
update soon
ohh.. and thx for the pm.. and updating after ages 😳
~Jessica😃

jess...thanks for loving it...ages😳😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fab update Naz
Luvd it xx
Can't wait fo the next part
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

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