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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wee. Awweesome upd.🤗
Nazu, Lovely part :)

You updated after loong time. Upd sooon :) 🤗

Love Hina
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Posted: 14 years ago

Walking Down the Darklane

Sorry for the late update😳...enjoy
Priya is still in her dreamy self and dadimaa asks her what is wrong with her. Priya blinks her eyes, walks towards her and hugs her sweetly. Everybody get confused.
Priya: Maa...where have gone leaving me alone. I missed you so much.
Geet tries to stop but dadimaa asks her to let Priya speak. khuranas r confused with Priya's behavior. Vicky thinks to himself now she is gonna make her way out herself and smiles.
Dadimaa: Priya...come with me.
Dadimaa takes Priya with her and makes her sit. She sits down beside her and puts her hand over head caringly.
Dadimaa: Do you feel lonely?...whatelse do you feel.?
Priya: who are all they...looking at Dev, Nano, and Vicky..
Dadimaa: they are our guests..
Priya: You are not gonna leave me alone again...right?
Dadimaa: No...
Priya hugs dadimaa and keeps on talking but no one understands what she is talking about..she slowly falls asleep.
Vicky: She is smart. even in her half conscious state. she never revealed her real identity.
Maan and Dev take Priya to outhouse and the rest go to their rooms.
Early morning, Geet wakes up and finds it difficulty to get up. She sees Maan is holding her tight. She tries to get him off her, but her attempts go in vein. She looks at him and puts her hand on his face. He opens his eyes. She shows him that he holding her. He tightens his grip.
Geet: Maan..please. let me go...see its morning..
Maan: you slept late..so you are gonna wake up late.
Geet: Maannn..
Maan: Geet..if u insist..no office for you today.
Geet: You are not my boss at home..
Maan: Am I not?
Maan kisses her Cheek. Geet tries to say something, but Maan does not listen and goes to sleep holding her. Geet smiles and closes her eyes..Nakul takes lemon juice for Priya who wakes up all tired. Nakul tell her what all happened last night. Priya feels all gilty.
Vicky is still on his bed, rolling on, when Nandini walks into his room.
Nano: Good morning...you had a good sleep.
Vicky: Good morning..yes..
Nano: What do you think..you have done.
Vicky: WHat...I am yet not out of my bed. he smiles.
Nano: Dont act. you got some problem with Priya...dont you..
Vicky gets off his bed and sits on bed. He makes Nano sit.
Vicky: Bhabhi...she is just acting oversmart and I know you too got problem with her. I just wanted her to speak the truth and get out of this house.
Nano: I just had a doubt. thanks for telling me, I was right. Yes I have problem with her becoz she does not reveal her identity as I fear she might end up hurting didi, but it does not mean I will let you play with a girl like this.
Vicky: Bhabhi..you are unnecessarily getting angry..
Nano: No..I am not...but if you repeat n create problems for Priya again. then next time you will have to answer to Maan jeejaji...I guess you will not like it..Have a good day...Nano leaves angrily...
Priya is walking throught the hallway and sees Vicky who gives her a wicked smile.
Vicky: You were lucky yesterday, but luck will not favor u all the time.
Priya: What? you have done it...I mean intentionally...Are you mad or what?
Vicky: I told you before, but you showed me attitude...
Priya: You have any idea what you have done. I mean I was trying to find that guy and you...you are simply hopeless.
Vicky: Mind your language young lady or you will have to face more..
Priya leaves from there. Geet overhears the convo between Vicky and Priya. All Khuranas are at breastfast. Priya comes there.
Geet: Priya..come join us.
Priya: No..I am fine..
Geet: Come...
Geet looks at seriously and signals her to come n join.
Dadimaa: Priya is not gonna stay in outhouse any more.
Priya: Sorry for what happened last night..
Dadimaa: Nakul! go take her belongings from outhouse and do it now.
Geet: But dadimaa where she will go all suddenly.
Dadimaa: I dont want anyone to interfere
Priya gets up to leave, but
Dadimaa: where are u going?
Priya; to get my belongings to leave.
Dadimaa: Nakul will do that.
Priya: But...
Dadimaa: Nakul get her belongings n put in the room beside my bedroom.
All are shocked... Dadimaa laughs and says she will be with us now..not in outhouse.. Geet and Maan are happy.. Vicky is all pissed off.
Maan gets a call from office and he rushes to the office with Geet. Adi informs him about the new client. Maan and Geet get ready for the meeting for the new project. The new client arrives. Adi tells to Maan that the new client is very well known to be tough and is very particular about the demands and never compromises with what she wants. Adi introduces Maan and Geet to Surbhi Wadhwa.
She shakes hands with Maan and Geet. Geet looks at the lady upside down and thinks she does not seem to have come for a business meeting but for some late night party..She feels uncomfortable with Surabhi being around Maan...Surabhi stays for short meeting and leaves promising to return for a proper planned meeting later.
Geet: Maan. I dont like this lady.
Maan: She and her company got pretty good reputation in market.
Geet: But still. I dont like her.
Maan is looking at his life: What are you trying to say Geet.
Geet snaps: Nothing.
***Precap: Geet gets blank call.***
hope you all like the update...do leave your comments and hit the like button😛
Edited by Naz_Angel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update sweety!
Rocking post! Keep it on! <3 thanks for pm n pm nx time too!
Love Alisha
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the udpate😳
so seems like Geet;s gonna freak out in the next update, 😆 wonder who is gonna give the blank call?!😕
anywho the udpdate was awesome, loved Maaneet's morning romance 😳
update soon
thx for the pm Naz🤗
~Jessica😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Vicky is so evil!
Daadima's sooo sweet!
cont soon
thanks for the pm!

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update di :D loved it so much 😉 plz write more soon and thnx for the pm :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Love the update!!
Simply awesome!!
Love maaneet morning romance!! Should hav more...
Hmm blank call ???
Who could it be???
Continue soon!!
Thx for the pm!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Naz Good Morning,😊

Thanks for the PM

I was thoroughly enjoyed yur update. It was awesome. You're a real professional & an excellent writer.

Loving maneet morning romance.

Continue soon.

Cheer

Fiona😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
when yu gonner reavel priya
identity
awesome part
love it
ty 4 pm

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