#7 Kya Pyar Aisa Bhi Ho Skta Hai???(AR)note-155 - Page 42

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Posted: 13 years ago
Great part..
Just love everything abt it..

eagerly waiting for the next

pls update soon this n ur other ff also
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks a lot for the update😃
aww it was beautiful as always😛
Loved the AR moments...haye they both are to die for😳
Waiting for the next update..take care😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
hello dear, now friday is going to end

as u said update on friday,

r u gonna update dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: prachi_mjht

hello dear, now friday is going to end


as u said update on friday,

r u gonna update dear


Yes dear i'll update the part today only but after 12 or 1o'clock as i'm still writing the part...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: GoDsLoVe


Yes dear i'll update the part today only but after 12 or 1o'clock as i'm still writing the part...😊




YIPEEE
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Posted: 13 years ago
the updates were awesum
loved it
dont drag teh vaishali issue too much
there is still a lot left to explore
once again i request dont let ar forgive anyone from mubai
plz reintroduce siddharth n show some cute ar n sid moments
bhabhi devar moments
that would be lovely
the scebne between sid n ridhima when tehy left sanjeevani touched my heart
waiting for a repeat

udpate soon
u promised friday
lekin friday khatam hone wala hain
plz update
waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part-215

A: (in her ears) happy birthday jaan… (kissed on her cheeks, riddhima forgot to blink her eyes, she's in utter shock to react as she found one white color half moon boat, fully decorated with flowers in front of her, it's looking very beautiful, she came in present when armaan slightly pulled her)

R: armaan???

A: tumhara sapna tha na ki tum kabhi chaad taaro ki duniya mai ghum sako, har gam se pare, iss duniya se dur, to challo aaj aapke sapno ki duniya mai chalte hai, aaj ek chaand ko dusre chaand ki saer karwate hai… (riddhima kept on looking at it..)

(he holds riddhima's hand and moved towards their moon sawari.. armaan opens the door of boat, as soon as he opened it a carpet full of flowers rolled out, armaan asked her with eyes to step forward, riddhima's still in a daze, armaan moved his arm around her shoulder and made her walk, as soon as she entered in boat she found a small table on which strawberry cake in moon shape's lying and with chocolate stars were made around the cake, a rose and a card was lying too, riddhima kept on looking at it with unsurety, she digged her nails in her arm to know if she's seeing a dream…)

She came in present when she felt that she's loosing balance but she's late in realizing this and was in armaan's arms already, she looked him and again felt a jerk, she looked around and realized that boat's not moving in water but its going up, she's shocked again..

A: or kitni baar itni badi badi eyes karogi??? Its boring you know.. pichle 20 minute se samne expressions dekhna..

R: armaan…

A: ohh waaoo, tumhe bolna bhi aata hai, that's great, badi maherbaani ki aapne iss naacheez ko apni aawaj sunakar..

R: (ignored his words) ye uppar kyu jaa rahi hai?? (scared) uppar kaise jaa rahi hai???

A: tumne chaand ko kabhi paani mai tairte hue dekha hai??? Maine to nahi dekha, mujhe to wo bas aasmaan mai uttarte hue aur chadte hue hi najar aata hai, to ye chaand bhi to uppar chadkar apna kaam kar raha hai…

(riddhima saw the ropes tying around the rope and realized that its moving up with the help of pulley, as they reached little above artificial stars started falling in boat, a smile crept on her lips, she extended her arms and tried to collect stars in her hands, armaan was still holding her from her arms but seeing her playing he left her arms but stood at the back of her like a strong pillar and kept on smiling, as they're moving up stars starting falling more and artificial clouds surrounded them,

riddhima's getting crazy with heaps of wind, clouds, stars, when they reached 400 ft above the ground, moon stopped moving, riddhima holds armaan's hand tightly, he handled knife to her and pointed towards cake, then made her sit on small chair and started singing b'day song, riddhima smiled widely and cut the cake, she's still in her own world, before feeding riddhima, armaan pulled her up and then pointed towards sea,

riddhima for a moment closed her eyes as sudden noise of crackers hit her ears then looked down with armaan holding her carefully and again her eyes got widened as she found "happy birthday riddhima", she then looked above and found the same in sky too, she's just amazed, actually with fireworks "happy birthday riddhima" is being written on sky, reflection of which can be seen in sea,

before her shocked eyes can turn into a smiling one her ears got attracted by some beautiful sound, she looked around and again her eyes popped out, armaan shaked his head and moved his arms around her waist, riddhima kept on looking at the big stars tied with strings which started covering their boat as if making a boundary around them, riddhima noticed it carefully and realized that stars were arranged such that they're forming "I luv you",armaan mumbled in her ears )

A: pehle kyu nahi bataya tha ki tum b'day par mon vrat rakhne waali ho... (riddhima came in present and finally looked him)

R: tumhi to chahte ho ki mai kuch naa bolun, tumhari chahat ko hi to mai pura kar rahi hun… (armaan widened his eyes)

A: ohhh I see, waise tumhe hamesha itni pyaari informations kaha se mil jaati hai??

(riddhima didn't say anything, armaan made his voice like riddhima) sorry armaan.. (then correcting his voice) kyu riddhima??? (again he started speaking in riddhima's voice while fidgeting with her saree pallu and sharmo sharmaying) tum pichle 1 ghante mai mujhe 15 baar birthday wish kar chukke ho, jisme se maine 14 baar acknowledge hi nahi kiya, 15th time maine acknowledge to kiya par khaane mai galti se feviquick khaane ki wajah se meri tongue muh se chipak gayi hai issliye mai tumhe thankyou nahi ke paayi..

(armaan again corrected his voice) tum smile hi kar deti wo hi kaafi tha.. (he again holds her pallu and while blushing) maine socha tha ki mai smile karun, par phir yaad aaya ki mujhe smile karne se mana kiya gaya hai kyunki smile is injurious to health.. (armaan makes irritated face) to tumhe aaj karna kya hai riddhima?? Na tum bol sakti ho, na smile kar sakti ho to kya kar sakti ho??

(again he changes into riddhima) are irritate kyu ho rahe ho, ek cheez hai jo mai kar sakti hun aankhein chotti badi karna mujhe bahut ache se aata hai, tumne pichle 1 ghante mai note kiya hi hoga, beshak mere paas time na ho tumpar 1 minute bhi najar daalne ke liye par mai jaanti hun ki pichle 1 ghante se tum sirf mujhe hi dekh rahein honge.. (armaan becomes normal) ohh how sweet, tum mujhe kitne ache se jaanti ho, issliye to mai tumse pyaar karta hun..challo issi baat par cake ho jaaye…

(he tried to divert the topic as he saw the change in riddhima's expressions, he's expecting her to get irritate and reply him like a teekhi mirchi but she's looking him with extreme love and he knew that her thanksgiving lecture along with her love-words will get started in next minute, lecture he didn't want to listen and he's afraid of her love words, so he quickly picked up cake)

A: mai tumhe cake khillana to bhul hi gaya tha… (riddhima without breaking her eye contact with him took the cake piece from his hand)

R: don't worry, koi lecture nahi dungi… (armaan looked at her shocked, she raised her hand to feed armaan with cake, still looking in his eyes, armaan for once looked down and again in her eyes) bahut hi darpok ho tum armaan, aise hi sabne tumhe superman bana rakha hai...

He slightly smiled,she moved cake near his mouth, he opened his mouth and waited for her to put cake in his mouth, riddhima first kept on looking him, then moved her arms around his neck and without giving him any time to understand placed her lips on his lips, armaan's shocked to reciprocate at first but when ridhima moved very close to him such that her body's touching his and her arms tightly made a lock around his neck, he smiled and pulled her more closer and didn't take time to reciprocate back with equal fervor, both didn't break the kiss until they felt the need of oxygen, armaan looked her with small wink, riddhima hugged him tightly and kisses on his cheeks..

R: I love you..

A: luv you too… (while kissing her) happy b'day jaan…

riddhima just nodded, after a while both turned and holds the rope with one hand and second hand was entwined on riddhima's tummy, riddhima rested her head on armaan's collar bone and kept on looking around admiringly, suddenly both felt a jerk as boat started without giving any alarm and both fell down with armaan below and riddhima on him and her pallu covers both of them, armaan tried to make riddhima stand but she stopped him and asked him to remain like this for sometime,

boat started moving, not upwards but to the right side, armaan's getting lost in her eyes and her innerside was kicking him again and again saying "saale aankhein band ka raise continuation mai dekhta rahega to saara maja kirkira ho jaayega", his heart said "bas 2 minute aur pucka phir nahi dekhunga",his innerside shouted " abe naen mattaka baad mai kariyo, abhi aankhein idhar udhar kar, uski aankho mai jitna dekhega utna ghum hota jaayega kyunki uski aankho mai magnet laga hua hai aise hi khinchti rahegi tujhe, tera saara plan jo tu pichle 3 saalo se plan kar raha hai sab paani paani ho jaayega, phir baad mai tu pachtayega, iss se badiya hai ki tu abhi hosh mai aa jaaye"..

before his heart could fight again, he felt a little tickly in tummy and noticed that riddhima too is laughing, realizing something he slightly jerked riddhima, riddhima looked him with slightly shocked,slightly confused expressions, armaan smiled like a kid

A: wo riddhima pata nahi unn logo ne boat niche se saaf ki bhi thi ya nahi, aur tumhare kapde na gande ho jaaye na.. (standing up)

R: (little irritation) mere kapde?? (armaan nodded with a dimpled smile) wao armaan, gire tum ho niche, tumhare kapde kharab hone ki jagah mere kapde kharab honge, how intelligent… (armaan laughed stupidly which irritated riddhima a bit more, she's irritated b'coz he spoiled the moment thinking "kitne time baad mai armaan ke pehle jaise kareeb thi par inn mahashayeji ko apna dimaag istemaal karna jaruri hota hai har baar", she looked at armaan who settled on bench attached at the end of boat and was asking riddhima to come and sit on his lap, but riddhima shaked her head thinking "mai kyu tumhari god mai baithu, khud hi to Dhaka diya tha jaise tumhari ijjat pe hamla kar rahi hun mai.. huhh"

A: kya nai nai kar rahi ho?? Jaldi se baith jao warna gir jaogi..

R: chinta mat karo, iss baar tumhare uppar nahi girungi.. aur baithna hoga to mai niche baith jaungi… (she's on the verge of sitting down)

A: (instantly) nahi.. I mean yaha se view acha dikhega, yahi par aakar baitho na.. (like a kid, before riddhima could say anything, boat again twisted and she's on the verge of falling to her side but armaan holds her) dekhaa.. at the end tumhe aana to mere paas meri baaho mai hi hai, aise nahi to waise.. pata nahi kyu nakhre karti rehti ho phir bhi..

R: haw mai nakhre karti hun.. (she tried to push him) khud to.. (she stopped and felt tickly in her tummy as if she's sitting on some swing, before she could look at armaan, her gaze fell around the surroundings and she's surprised and turned carefully holding armaan's arm, armaan smiled and mumbled "finally", riddhima looked him then around, their boat's going down in a rounded zig-zag manner, from above everything's looking foggy foggy due to artificial fog yet it's looking beautiful, as their boat moved down riddhima holds her tummy out of tickly, suddenly both felt a very hard jerk and the boat stopped in middle, riddhima got frightened, she look above, then down but found nothing other than fog)

A: (pulled her close to him) are ghabrati kyu ho, akeli nhi ho tum, mai bhi hun saah mai..

R: par ye aise ruk kyu gayi armaan??? Ab hum kaise jaayenge???

A: lagta hai boat ki motor kharab ho gayi.. (riddhima got scared) but you don't worry, mai hun na… (saying so he bends down and picked up two sticks that were rolled in red ribbon and decorated with sparkles) tan taenae..

R: ye kya hai??

A: magic… (he handled one stick to riddhima) maine ye musibat ke liye rakh liye the, challo ab iss se boat chalayenge.. (riddhima looked him with wide eyes)

R: yaha??? Aur in sticks se???

A: aur kya?? Kabhi boating nahi ki kya??

R: ki hai, par paani mai, hawa ko inn sticks se kaise piche kiya jaata hai, mujhe nahi pata…

A: tumhe kisne kaha ki hawa mai ye stick challani hai??? (saying so he moved his stick outside boat, riddhima's shocked to hear sound of water and looked down but didn't found anything accept flowers of different colors, she's surprised yet again and looked at armaan who flashed dimples) magic…

riddhima with unsurety rolled her stick outside the boat and got the feel of water, after 2-3 rotations boat again started moving itself and again stopped, like this they moved more down, now boat started moving straight, as it moved more.. that artificial fog started getting less, and colorfull flowers started appearing more, it's looking like their moon was swimming on flowers, riddhima's looking around with eyes filled,

just then their boat stops again near some gate like structure which has flowers curtains, riddhima looked at gate on which its written "pariyon ki duniya mai aapka swagat hai, kripya muskurahat ke saath iss duniya mai shaamil ho", riddhima smiled and immediately curtains got up,

riddhima this time didn't gave surprised expressions as she's tired to do that again and again, again their moon itself started moving,as soon as they crossed the gate rose petals with sparkling balls started falling on them, now fog was only at the surface, rest they can see's the world of flowers, their boat moved more, then stopped finally,

before she could look armaan, one little girl wearing angel dress came and forwarded her hand asking riddhima to come with her, riddhima looked at armaan who just smiled with his arms crossed on his chest, riddhima unbelievingly got up and holds her hand but due to these sudden actions she's trembling badly,

when she's on the verge of moving out but armaan felt her anxiousness so he holds her and both moved out together, they're walking on flowers, they stopped in front of a gate which was closed but that angel waived her wand and the gates got open, riddhima smiled and looked at armaan for the umpteenth time, armaan showed her his teeths, they entered in and riddhima holds armaan's hand for support..

A: (realizing riddhima's not well as she left her whole weight on him, he worriedly asked) riddhima tum theek ho na??? (riddhima looked him and suddenly tears formed in her eyes, armaan's worried but she left his hand and moved forward with unbalanced steps, totally lost, looking around and pinching herself to make her realize that its all true)

One angel came to her and asked her if she wants something, riddhima smiled and patted her face, then shaked her head, she looked at the ground which's covered with flowers and fog, the whole ground has a boundary of stars tied with a rope, there's little pond whose water was looking like magical water and artificial swans were moving on it, on ground little huts were there at some distances which were covered with flower sheets, 8-10 girls in angels dress were roaming here and there, at one corner there were 2-3 little shops of some eatables and on other corner there were 2-3 shops of accessories and dresses, there's a little waterfall also near pond, all in all its looking magical entirely…

All the angels comes to her with a tray and on it with different ice-creams "happy b'day " was written, riddhima smiled and took a spoon full of ice-cream, eats half from it and then moved towards armaan who's standing near accessories shop, riddhima goes near him and feeded him with melted ice-cream from which half has already fallen and hugged him, but when departed from him, she found a locket around her neck having three stars in it, it's again very beautiful…

R: armaannn….

A: yess jaan??

R: bas karo armaan.. riddhima ke liye ye sab sambhalna mushkil ho jaayega…

A: (hugging her) riddhima bhul gayi kya ki wo ek pari hai aur pariyo ke liye kuch bhi sambhalna mushkil nahi hota..

R: riddhima sirf armaan ke dil ki pari hai wo bhi issliye kyunki armaan aisa manta hai, par actual mai riddhima ek nanhi si bachi hai jisse ye sab sambhalna muskil ho jaayega..

A: to riddhima ko akele kaha kuch sambhalna hai, uska armaan hai na uske saath…

R: hamesha aise hi rahoge na??

A: koi shak hai?? (before she could say anything, angels pulled her and made a circle around her and asked her to dance, riddhima looked at armaan, angels pulled armaan too in circle, armaan holds riddhima and started taking little steps, riddhima placed her head on his collar bone with tears in eyes, she's totally lost as her childhood image started taking round around them while playing with a groom toy,that childhood image's singing "chanda ke rath pe wo aayega ek din, mujhe saath leke wo jaayega ek din" and while covering her head with red dupatta she continued "meri maan bhar dega taaro se wo, banayega dulhan mujhe…", her childhood image kept on laughing while looking at her toy and continues dancing.)

Riddhima looked at armaan, armaan holds her face and asked her what happened, riddhima shaked her head and rushed little away, then did dance while hmming tune, armaan's surprised to see her dancing in a different way, her steps were not linking each other, that's not her style of dance, armaan's little worried now as riddhima's not in herself, she kept on dancing, armaan tried to move near her but she didn't stop, armaan holds her hand, she stopped and looked him then goes near angels and holds their hands and again started dancing and after a bit armaan heard..

Ye pariyo ki basti, sitaro ka majma,

yaha gunjta hai mohabbat ka nagma,

yaha pyaar ke hai deewane sabhi,

chahat hi sab kuch yaha….

Riddhima's looking at him cutely, armaan got relaxed a bit and smiled, riddhima rushed into his arms and while hmming she took a round, all angels detangled riddhima and armaan while singing

Pariyo ki duniya ke mehmaan ho, challo tumko sair karaein

Kaha hai wo sapno ka saudagar challo unhe dhund laayein..

Angels tried to took riddhima with them so that they can search for her "saudagar", but riddhima left their hand and turned happily saying "mera saudagar to mujhe 11 saal pehle hi mil gaya tha", but didn't find armaan, riddhima's surprised, angels says that now she'll have to search for her saudagar, riddhima looked for armaan here and there but didn't find him, one angel pointed towards one hut,

riddhima entered in hut and found armaan talking to someone on phone, seeing her he cut the call, riddhima asked him the matter, he shaked his head and asked her to change her saree, riddhima asked him why, armaan said that its having stains, riddhima didn't say anything, armaan said that he's coming in a bit till that time you can change, riddhima said "par tumne to kaha tha ki ab se hamesha tumhi mujhe taiyar karoge, phir ab." She turned and found armaan already gone, riddhima makes little sad face thinking "na kuch bolne deta hai na apne pass rehne deta hai, khud pyaar jata deta hai par mujhe usse pyaar karne ka mauka hi nahi deta…"

riddhima changed her saree which was in white color with red pearls work on it, armaan on other side was talking to ritu that they'll be reaching there after 1 hour..

Ri: par armaan tumne 1 baje pahunchna tha na, ab 3 baj rahein hai aur abhi tujhe 1 ghanta aur lagega..

A: haan ritu, mujhe khud nahi pata challa time ka..

Ri: par tum ho kaha..

A: bas tumhare aas pass hi hai..

Ri: phir tumhe aane mai itna waqt kyu lag raha hai??

A: kyunki riddhima ko itna khush dekhkar meri himmat hi nahi ho rahi ye kehne ki ki ye duniya jhuti hai, pata nahi usse khushiyan dekar uss se ye khushiyan waapis lena acha nahi lag raha…

Ri: kya?? (armaan shaked his head) armaan please jaldi aaja, angel ko mushkil se sulaya, humse to maan hi nahi rahi thi, phir aarish ne usse apni tutli bhasha mai lori sunayi, tab jaakar soyi wo.. (armaan smiled proudly) armaan waise tumhara pura pariwaar ajeeb sa hai, bas tum chaaron ek dusre se hi handle ho sakte ho..

(armaan shaked his head and turned, from his hand cell fell down as he saw riddhima coming towards him, looking stunning, armaan mumbled "armaan tu to gaya aaj kaam se, bhul ja apna agla mission, riddhima wo mission kabhi pura nahi hone degi, kya jarurat hoti hai meri biwi ko itni khubsurat lagne ki, mai to already fasa fasaya hun, phir bhi har baar dil par attack karna jaruri hota hai, har b'day ke saath iska rang roop aur khilta jaa raha hai, rabba mai to mar gaya, kitna fursat se banaya hai na tune mere yaar ko, sabki najar se bachake rakhna padega aaj riddhima ko, apni najar se bhi aur apne dil mai uthi lehero se bhi.." he took a deep breathe and saw one angel placing her own crown on her head making her look more extra-ordinary, she kisses on her cheeks, then she comes near him)

A: (tough he wanted to say lets go but) tum enjoy kar rahi ho na??

R: (looked him) jab mai kuch bolna chahti hun tab kuch bolne nahi dete kyunki tumhe sab boring lagta hai sun na..

A: (cutting her) obviously, tumhara thankyou ka rone waala lecture kiss se bardash hoga..

R: to mat suno, mai konsa kuch bol rahi hun, tumhe meri aankhein padne ka bahut shownk hai to apne saare jawab khud hi dhund lo, maine to abhi tak tumse kuch kaha hi nahi..

A: to gussa kyu ho rahi ho??

R: mai aur gussa?? Bilkul nahi armaan, mai gussa kaise ho sakti hun, waise tum sure kaise the ki maine thankyou hi bolna hoga tumhe???

A: kya karein etiquettes tum me kut kut ke bhari hai na, thankyou kiye bina tumse raha kaise jaa sakta hai?? (placing his arms on her shoulder)

R: thankyou waha kiya jaata hai armaan jaha thankyou kehne ki gunjaish ho, par yaha to thankyou waala case hi khatam ho gaya.. (she looked at stars and took one of them in her hands) jinn sapno ko pura karna hamare haatho mai hota hai wo sapne aksar pure ho jaate hai, par kuch sapne aise hote hai jo dil dekhta hai, ek baar nahi hajaro baar dekhta hai, wo sapna itna weird hota hai ki kissi ko batate hue bhi ajeeb lagta hai kyunki hum khud bhi jaante hai ki wo sapna jiska pura ho paana namumkin hai wo bahut ajeeb aur funny hai,

Par achanak se wo sapna pura ho jaaye, tumne uss sapne ke baare mai kissi se baat bhi na ki ho par phir bhi lage ki har ek pal tumhari sapno ki duniya se nikal kar tumhari real duniya mai saamne aa raha hai to pehle to tumhe vishwas nahi hota ki sach much aisa tumhare saath ho raha hai aur jab vishwas hota hai to dil mai bas ek completeness ki feeling reh jaati hai..

Aaj ka din meri jindagi ka incomparable din hai armaan kyunki aaj ek wo sapna hakikat bana hai jisse maine kachi umar mai dekha tha, tab jab mai saudgar ka matlab bhi nahi samajhti thi par ye song (o mere sapno ke saudagar) dekh dekhkar apni hi duniya sajati thi, apni gudia ka dulha cheenkar usse dekh dekh kar ye gaana gaati thi, jhhumti thi aur sapne dekhti thi ki mera dulha ghodde ki jagah chaand par baithkar aayega aur apne saath pariyo ki duniya mai le aayega, bachi thi na tab mai.. (she kept on smiling with tears in eyes as her childhood days flashed in her mind)

Badi hote hote mujhe apne sapno ka matlab samajh aaya aur khud ka hi majak banati ki aise bhi koi sapne dekhta hai kya, par kya pata tha ki jo sapne mere liye majak hai wo sapne mera humsafar ek hakikat ki tarah saamne laakar rakh dega, sach much mujhe pariyo ki basti mai le aayega.. mai apne humsafar ko milne ke liye iss basti mai aane ke sapne dekhti thi, par meri kismat dekho, mera humsafar pariyo ki basti se milwane mujhe lekar aaya hai,

tum mujhe har pal iss duniya mai sabse lucky hone ke liye proud feel karwate ho, darr lagta hai kabhi kabhi ki bhagwanji naraj na jaaye kyunki unhe ghamadi log pasand nahi hai, par kya karun tum ek bhi mauka hi nahi chodte mujhe proud na feel karwane se(she cleared her tear but it again flowed) armaan mai aaj ke liye tumhe kabhi thanks kar hi nahi paaungi, tumhe thanks karke mai tumhare gift ki, tumhare pyaar ki, tumhare iss sapne ko puri karne ki mehnat ko insult nahi karungi, par haan dil hi dil mai puju.. (armaan placed his hand on her mouth)

A: pyaar jitna marji kar lena par pujna mat, bhagwan bana liya tumne mujhe to pyaar karna mushkil ho jaayega mujhse aur mere liye jeena…

(riddhima smiled and nodded, she hugged him tightly, armaan cleared his own tear, he's tensed that why riddhima's not looking happy like he expected, he expected her to jump with happiness but she didn't acted like that, so he's having a doubt that may be she didn't like this but hearing her, he realized that she's much more than happy than his expectations, he realized that he still cant read her eyes properly, he could feel the satisfaction, the complete feeling in riddhima's words, he didn't stop riddhima from crying as he knew that these pearls are the result of her happiness, she's still looking around completely lost, armaan kept on looking at her, this time he's not looking at her for feeling her external happiness but for feeling her internal happiness, which was very deep, which was very pure, which was eternal, finally he realized he cant measure her happiness, his cell started vibrating, he saw ritu's name on phone and realized that its already 4, he looked at riddhima who's now playing in water, his face fell thinking "nahi mai riddhima ko nahi keh sakta, ab jab mai uski khushi ko feel kar sakta hun thodi si sahi, uske iss tohfe ke saath jude ehsaas ko mehsus kar sakta hun to kaise kahun ki bas sab yahi khatam, aao apni duniya mai laut challo, kyu waqt ko bhaagne mai itna maja aata hai", he looks on riddhima…

To be continued..

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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry yaad ni raha res kiya hai...comment neeche alag post pe ho gaya...
Edited by Neha.K. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
A wonderful surprise.
How do u do this yaar?
A unique gift for Ridz from Armaan.
Really hats off to ur creativity.
I'm too dazed to write anything else..
I simply loved this part soo much that I don't know how to let u know what I feel about it...
A world of angels where in an angel celebrated her b'day with her love...
Absolutely marvalous and one of the best parts of this ff.
I hoped for a little of AR romance as well.
Ritu is such a kabab mein haddi..
I want Ridz's desire to fulfill.She wants Armaan to feel her now.Armaan too wants the same.They both have waited soo long.
Kindly close the distance between both of them soonest..
I wish to read another passionate night of AR ...
love
Asma
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Posted: 13 years ago
Tumhe kya bataun k tum mere kya ho..
Meri zindagi ka tumhi aasra ho...
Main aasha ki ladiyan na reh reh piroti...
Agar tum na hote...agar tum na hote😊

"mere ajeeb sawaal,tere gareeb jawaab" 👏 hum bhi khelenge je..ok maa😆

this made me laugh loudly "
dhaanu aunty ko wrestling bahut achi aati hai, unke saath wohi karna" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣bechari ab chidiya ka ghonsla bankar hi bahar niklegi…🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 HILARIOUS

Driving driving romaaance...achi baat ni hai...its dangerous... toh readers ko soochit kiya jaata hai k aap aisi harkat ki bhi soch len par sirf sapno mein😆..sachi mein karoge toh bhgwan na kare par koi nuksaan ho toh uske jimmevaar aap khud hoke..writer ko dosh dena uchit ni hoga..dhanyawad

...

I coundn't finish my previous comment as you gave me the next part to read which vanished everything i read before
......



Now come to the UNIQUE UPDATE...

AYE KAASH K HUM HOSH MEIN AB AANE NA PAAYE😊

Let me start with my old 'ghisa-pitta' lecture... but you have left me with nothing else...Every time I try to comment, my words get caught in a knot in my throat.. I can never say this is what I needed to say except to say that this Is the far best i have ever read... BELIEVE ME THIS IS THE DAMN FANTASTIC THING U WROTE..

I took really long to read this.. and reading it was like living it myself... And all the feeling I have felt reading this were worth for this feeling I have now.


Moon shape ka strawberry cake.. chocolate stars.. my heart skipped jab boat upar jaa ri thi... i was like m flying... wind, clouds, sound of crackers, upar neeche asmaan aur neeche paani mein riddhima ka naam.. Armaan's chracter changing session.. his fight with his heart and internal feelings.. little angels...and then song which is since a veryyy long time one of my favs and recently i was hooked on it and u put it here which just blew me fully..

Bohattt sunder se bhiii bohat sunder tha sab kuch... par sab batane se pehle main ek baat bolna chahungi ki main confuse hun ki kis pe comment karna hai..jo sunder maine padha ya jo sunder tune likha yaaa jo sunder dil aur dimaag jahan se panap ke yeh cheez maine mehsoos ki...😊 I am sure readers can sense the beauty of your spirit.
Too beautiful...tooo amazing...Veryyy magicall...With lotsss of angelic feeling, . The writing"s...powerful..unbelievable..out of minddd... This is the sort of writing that very rare people can only imagine that too only 3/4th of it...
Beautiful. Absolute touching. Lots of people will say "this is the best thing I have ever read.." But this is the bestesttt... Beautiful. Beautiful. I've said it more than once but I'll say it again. BEAUTIFUL... A genuine classic above all other parts, MAGNIFICENT..


armaan waise tumhara pura pariwaar ajeeb sa hai, bas tum chaaron ek dusre se hi handle ho sakte ho😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

I guess the only thing I can do applaude this beatuiful piece of writing and wish you a happier life from here on in. Your IMAGINATION once again amazed me to the core, no matter how many times I or anyone else tells you.

i wanted to say thank you for all this par abhi abhi padha
thankyou waha kiya jaata hai jaha thankyou kehne ki gunjaish ho, par yaha to thankyou waala case hi khatam ho gaya😊... I wish yeh reading kabhi khatam naa hoti...

Ps: padh ke laga ki readers Riddhima hain..aur Author Armaan hai😊😊😊😊 (jise samjh aa jaye yeh baat toh acha hai..na aaye toh bura bhi kuch nahin...Maine jo feel kiya bol diya)

Dont know how much...but you know more than me that
I LOVE YOU😊

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