#7 Kya Pyar Aisa Bhi Ho Skta Hai???(AR)note-155 - Page 40

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you so much for the updatešŸ¤—

Gosh i just love this ff so much...this was the first ever ff i read & since that day i have never said good bye to ffs...honestly you are the reason i love reading ffs so much...i mean if initially (your ff) i read something so good & wow...there was no turning back from ffs... 😃

The update was great...loved the AR moments, kids were so cute & sweetšŸ˜›
awww the AR romance...😳...the dialogues & understanding is just wowšŸ‘
I do hate that Vishali heaps...there many reasons why i don't like heršŸ˜†...but 2 main reasons are one that she doubted ridhima's love & said wrong abt it...vishali still didn't apologize for it to ridz, despite armaan explaining to her the meaning & death of ridz love for him...& another that she is comparing herself to ridz & trying to show armaan all that😔...god woman i understand love has no control, but what is wrong is wrong...& even after all that our ridz is so nice & understanding still telling armaan to behave normal...this is what ridhima is a woman that is the best of the best😃

Looking heaps forward to the update...the precap😭...but i know all will be good heaps soon😊

Thank you so much for writing so beautifully for us...take care...god blessšŸ¤—



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Posted: 13 years ago

Part-214

Its evening, everyone's sitting and enjoying, ritu suddenly asked "aaj date kya hai???", armaan looked her and made face, riddhima came from back..

R: kya puch rahi thi tum??

Va: (looking at ritu) 22nd October…

R: kya 22nd October?? Mujhe bhi batao??

A: kuch nahi riddhima, velle baithe haina, issliye "aaltu faltu sawaal pucho" game khel rahe hai, tum apna kaam karo, jao.. (riddhima made weird face and goes in kitchen, armaan looked at ritu)

Ri: maine kya kiya???

A: ye jo teri lallobai(pointing towards her tongue) haina isse na khinch lunga, bahut chalne lagi hai aajkal..

Ri: kayue tu haath laga kar to dekh meri lallobai ko, tere haatho par kaenchi (scissor) challa dungi, sharafat ka jamana hi nahi raha, mai jitni sharafat se baat kar rahi hun utna hi tu sir par chadta jaa raha hai…

A: bass teri sharafat ussi par to mai kab se mar mita hun aur tere paet(stomach) ke to kya kehne, hamesha kharab rehta hai, digestion naam ki cheez to tere paet ne kabhi seekhi hi nahi, chirag ko kitni hidayat di ki tera paet check karwaye, jarur kahi mota ched(hole) hai tere paet mai, ek bhi baat nahi pachti tujhe, saari uss ched se bahar…

Ch: to mujhe iska digestive system check karwana chahiye ya stomach??

A: sabhi check karwa le chirag, iska purja purja hila hua hai, kitni baar kaha hai ki muh band rakha kar, kuch bhi utt pataang cheezein mat pucha kar, par nahi, akal to ghans charne gayi hai..

Ri: (lil loudly and dramatically) basss… bahut ho gaya… mera sab kuch kharab to bana diya, par kiss baat ke liye??? Maine aisa kya paap kar diya hai??? Maine aisa kya bol diya jo mujhe nahi bolna chahiye tha, bas yahi to pucha tha ki aaj date kya hai.. (armaan hits his head several times when saw riddhima standing near kitchen's door with tinsy winsy eyes, trying to understand their conversation, armaan pulled ritu down and placed his hand over her mouth)

R: koi mujhe batayega ki yaha kya ho raha hai?? Kyu itna shor machaya jaa raha hai?? Ritu kyu itna chilla rahi hai??

Ri: koi bhi chillayega jab ache khase insaan ko beemari kaha jaaye..

R: (with confusion) kyaa???

A: kuch nahi riddhima, maine kaha na ki ritu game khel rahi hai "mere ajeeb sawaal,tere gareeb jawaab" ye ussi game ka part hai, nothing else… jao jao tum soup banao sabke liye… (riddhima looked at them with unsurety, armaan gave cheesy smile) jao bhi ab… (riddhima goes) chirag ritu ko samjha de, agar basket ko jara bhi shak hua to mai bhul jaaunga ki ye teri biwi aur mere bacho ki maami hai…

Ch: aisa kar duties divide karte hai, tu apni biwi ko sambhal, mai apni ko, vaishali bacho ko sambhalegi… (vaishali widened her eyes)

Va: please mujhe koi aur duty de do, mai unn aafat ki toli ko nahi sambhal paaungi…

A: (widened his eyes) tumne mere bacho ko aafat kaha..

Va: (quickly) nahi nahi, wo to..

Ch: (cutting her) to tumne mere bacho ko aafat kaha?? (vaishali got up and holds kids hand, took them in room)

A: (from back) dhaanu aunty ko wrestling bahut achi aati hai, unke saath wohi karna… (aarish got excited, vaishali's shocked and visualized her condition, armaan-chirag gave high-fives to each other)

Ch: bechari ab chidiya ka ghonsla bankar hi bahar niklegi…

Ri: very bad, aise nahi karna chahiye tha tumhe..

A: jayda dard ho raha hai gilhaeri ho, tujhe bhi wahi bhej dein???

Ch: are shukar karo wo gayi, uske saamne plan karte to abhi riddhima ko sab pata chal jaata.. chal armaan jaldi se bata ki kaise sab karna hai??

A: I think tum dinner ke baad nikal jao, waha sab kuch check kar lena..

Ri: aur baaki sab..

A: wahi par pahunchenge, ritu tune saara saaman check kar liya na..

Ri: haan, 5 baar cross-check kiya hai, bacho ko hum hi le jaayenge..

A: par sambhal logi tum dono ko??

Ri: aarish ki chinta nahi hai, wo golu(rishab), ritika ki company enjoy karta hai, angel ka doubtful hai, wo riddhima ke bina nahi rehti, par uska sone ka time ho raha hai to I'll manage, par vibha??

A: dr. aakaash seedha 29th ko vibha ko lekar aayenge, treatment se iss waqt itni lambi break lena theek nahi hoga..

Ri: par riddhima iss baat ke liye taiyar ho jaayegi kya??

A: riddhima vibha ki sehat ke saath kabhi bhi laparwahi nahi karna chahegi, specially jab uske theek hone ke chances bhad gaye ho, don't worry, ye sab mai sambhal lunga, to set?? Koi confusion???

Ch: armaan par tu kaha milega hume, ye to tune bataya hi nahi…

A: wahi jaha tum sab ikatthe ho rahe ho..

Ch: phir tu hamare saath kyu nahi nikal raha??

Ri: chirag, uski riddhima ka b'day hai, usse kuch waqt akele bhi to chahiye na, kyu kabaab mai haddi ban na chahte ho, waise bhi riddhima ko surprise ke baare mai kuch nahi batana…

Ch: okk, to raat ko 12 baje milte hai phir..

A: 1 baje.. (he blinked his eyes, chirag nodded, riddhima started arranging dinner table and kept on looking at trio who were trying to enter in each other's ears, she's confused and moved towards them, they didn't acknowledged her, riddhima patted on armaan's shoulder, armaan shrugged her and remained busy in talking)

R: mujhe pata tha.. (trio got shocked and looked at riddhima) mujhe pata tha ki kuch gadbad jarur hai, kya khichdi pak rahi hai tum teeno mai, mujhe batao..

A: (got up and trying to balancing his expressions) are basket tum..

R: mujhe ab ye mat kehna ki koi "ear game" khel rahe the, mujhe batao kya planning kar rahe the tum sab???

Ri: tujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai riddhima?? Hum sach much game khel rahe the..

R: mujhe paagal samjha hai kya??? (ritu nodded, riddhima made a face)

A: basket tumhe humpar vishwas nahi hai?? Hum tumhare bina koi planning kyu karenge???

Ri: until and unless wo planning tumhare liye hi ho.. (riddhima looked her and armaan gave expressions like he'll kill her)

R: matlab??

A: matlab kuch nahi riddhima, seriously hum aise hi baatein kar rahe the..

R: mat batao, mai bhi baat nahi karti kissi se jaao… (she turned and started arranging table, armaan hits on ritu's head and then goes towards riddhima, trying to manofying her) mujhse baat mat karo armaan, kitna weirdly behave karne lage ho aajkal, kuch batate bhi nahi ho aur phir jhoot bhi bolte ho…

A: theek hai, agar tum jaan na hi chahti ho to suno… haan ek baat hai jo mai tumse chuppa raha hun.. (chirag mumbled "nautanki saala") par tumhare bhale ke liye hi chuppa raha tha, nahi chahta tha ki tumhe dukh ho…(riddhima looked him) ritu-chirag waapis jaa rahe hai abhi kuch daer mai hi… (ritu looked at chirag like "hum kaha jaa rahe hai", armaan showed eyes to chirag and asked him to handle ritu)

R: (with shock)kyaa??? Kyu?? Mujhe kyu nahi bataya.. (looking at ri-ch)

Ch: haan wo bas office se sudden call aa gaya, issliye waapis jaana padega.. (riddhima got sad)

A: see mai tabhi tumhe nahi batana chahta tha…(side by side shows thumbs up to both of them, ritu imitated him while mumbling "acting ke liye to isse Oscar ka award milna chahiye") challo ab dinner laga do, phir inhe nikalna hoga na.. (riddhima reluctantly nodded)

Ri: kyu itna pareshan karta hai usse, dekh kitna chehra uttar gaya uska..

A: haan sach bolkar saara surprise ruin kar deta, aur phir tu mujhe truth follower (satyawaadi) mr. chandraji (harishchandraji) ka path follow karne ke liye award deti.. (ritu makes face)

Ri: par wo pareshan bhi to ho gayi na…

Ch: kuch pal ki hi to pareshani hai ritu, par jab usse surprise milega to wo kitni khush hogi ye socha hai???

A: aur waise bhi uss surprise ka maja hi kya jo bina pareshan kiye, bina irritate kiye hue diya jaaye…. (he said this dreamingly as he remembered his internship days when he use to irritate her then manofy her) waise bhi basket ko pareshan karne ka aur pyaar karne ka maja hi alag hai, ye dono saath saath ho jaaye to Cherry on the cake… (he smiled and goes in kitchen, hugged riddhima from back who's sad and was packing stuff for Ri-Ch)

A: hey don't worry, wo jaldi aa jaayenge.. (riddhima nodded, they all had dinner, angel's crying as ritu slightly pinched her knowing very well that to gain attention she'll cry on the top of her lungs)

Ri: riddhima mujhe lagta hai angel ko neend aa rahi hai to tu usse sula de, hume abhi jaane mai daer hai.. (riddhima nodded and goes in room, all gave high-fives to each other, vaishali asked them what's the matter, armaan indicated chirag that not to tell her now, tell her later and if she asks bring her along, chirag nodded, finally chirag-ritu settled in car, riddhima's sad but bid them goodbye, when riddhima turned to go in house,armaan stopped her)

R: kya hua armaan???

A: lets go out…

R: iss waqt??

A: kyu nahi jaa sakte??? Aur tum kab se waqt ke baare mai sochne lagi?? Abhi kuch waqt pehle tak to yehi waqt apna hua karta tha na, phir aaj kya hua??

R: nahi armaan mera mann nahi kar raha..

A: kya riddhima.. tumhe mere mood ki koi parwah nahi hai, chirag ritu kuch time ke liye hi alag hue hai, hamesha ke liye nahi, aur tum… koi kadar nahi hai tumhe meri..

R: armaan bas karo… (armaan makes a puppy face) tum nahi maanoge na.. (armaan shaked his head, riddhima moved in, but armaan stopped her) bacho ko le aaun, unhe yaha par akela chodkar to nahi jaayenge na..

A: to vaishali hai na bacho ko sambhalne ke liye, kyu vaishali??? (vaishali reluctantly agreed) that's like a good friend, kuch bhi problem ho to mujhe phone kar dena… (vaishali smiled halfly and armaan pulled riddhima in car and instructed driver to take them for a long drive, riddhima's mood started getting better, armaan smiled, after sometime car stopped, riddhima makes face and moves out from car, armaan again holds her hand, riddhima looked him questionably..

A: wanna eat ice-cream??? (riddhima after a bit nodded with a wide smile and she called vaishali to ask if kids are ok, she just said yes and cut the call, riddhima got worried)

R: I think hume andar chalkar dekhna chahiye, vaishali pareshan si lag rahi thi..

A: ohh mother-india, kabhi wife-india.. (riddhima showed him eyes) sorry wife-armaan bhi ban jaaya karo, bache theek honge, challo ab ice cream khaane, aur haan aaj mai khud drive karunga, bas bahut rest kar liya… (riddhima's still unsure, so armaan took out his cell and dialed ritu's number, then put phone on loudspeaker) haan vaishali.. aarish aur angel theek hai na?? koi problem to nahi hai na??

Ri: nahi armaan kya problem hogi?? bache bhi bilkul theek hai.. kyu pucha?

A: actually mai riddhima ko ice-cream khillane le jaana chahta tha, par usse laga bache theek nahi hai..

Ri: matlab riddhima ko mujhpar vishwas nahi hai, bas yahi thi iski dosti yahi tha pyaar.. (riddhima looked at phone in confusion, armaan mumbled "overacting karna kabhi nahi chodegi ye") tum aaram se ice-cream khaane jao, bache so rahe hai, mai sambhal lungi, nahi to tumhara number to hai hi mere paas.. (before she could say more, armaan disconnected the call)

A: ohh network problem..

R: (with confusion) armaan ye vaishali ki awaaj ajeeb si nahi lag rahi thi, jaise ritu se baat kar rahe ho….

A: riddhima ab tak to unka plane take-off bhi ho chukka hoga, abhi thodi daer pehle tumne unhe bye kiya hai na issliye aisa lag raha hoga, warna vaishali ka phone ritu kyu utthayegi???

R: phir bhi..

A: (cutting her) theek hai jao phir, khud hi check kar aao, had hai riddhima ek ice-cream khaane ke liye itne nakhre, nahi khaani thi to pehle hi bol deti.. tum jao andar, raho bacho ke pass, mai akela hi jaa raha hun..(riddhima looked at armaan with little surprise thinking "itni si baat par kyu irritate ho gaya armaan", armaan took keys from driver, then settled in car and called ritu) kisne kaha tha itni overacting karne ke liye?? Riddhima ko shak ho gaya hai..

Ri: oee kayue, jayda na bol, kitna kuch sambhalu?? Ye pata nahi vaishali ko kaha se uthaya hai tumne, muh band karne ka naam nahi le rahi thi, kitni mushkil se phone par baat ki maine iska muh pakadkar.. (armaan shaked his head with a lil smile)

A: vibha ko chod diya??

Ri: haan vibha ko hospital mai shift karwa diya, dr. aakash se baat bhi kar li, bache mere paas hi hai unki fikar mat kariyo..

A: ro to nahi rahe the??

Ri: bilkul nahi, haan vaishali jarur ro rahi thi.. (armaan giggled, saw riddhima from front mirror who started coming towards car slowly slowly, armaan smiled)

A: mission successful, phas gaya shikaar, ab jaise hi hum yaha se nikalenge, tum bhi nikal jaana, phir se sab check kar lena, milte hai 2 ghante baad, ritu nodded and cut the call, riddhima was on the verge of crossing armaan's window to move to the other side of the car when…)

A: (opening the door in front of riddhima, riddhima stopped and looked at armaan with surprise) kaha jaa rahi ho??

R: armaan ye kaisa sa sawaal hai?? obviously ab ice-cream to tum akele khaane nahi jaoge na...

A: haan to maine kab kaha ki mai akele jaa raha hun?? tum jaaogi na mere saath, par mai puch raha tha ki tum abhi kaha jaa rahi ho??

R: armaan tum paagal ho gaye ho….

A: tumse shaadi ki iss se bada paagalpan ka kya sabot ho sakta hai??? (riddhima makes face) jayda muh mat banaya karo, ek din aisa hi muh ban jaayega, phir seedha bhi nahi hoga… (riddhima looked him with irritation, armaan winked at her, she moved a bit, armaan holds her hand..)

R: armaan chodo aur mujhe car mai baithne do... (armaan pulled her with force such that she landed in his arms) armaan...

A: yes riddhima??

R: ye kya kar rahe ho???

A: tumhe car mai bitha raha hun.. (while closing the door)

R: armaan chodo mujhe.. (she struggled to get heself free) chodo mujhe.. chodo.. (hits on his hand several times)

A: jungle billi kahi ki, sudhar to tum sakti nahi…

R: armaan hatto, mujhe koi ice-cream khaane nahi jaana tumhare saath..

A: are aise kaise ni jaana?? Ab itna maara hai to bina ice-cream khaaye kaise jaa sakte hai… (riddhima turned her face with anger) tumhe safed pari se laal-peeli pari.. sorry.. rakshasni ban ne mai daer nahi lagti na, girgit ke rang se bhi jaldi tumhara temperature badalta hai… (riddhima tried to shrug him)

R: pehle to khud ache bhale insaan ko gussa dilwao, phir bolo ki wo normal kyu nahi rehti…

A: (tried to suppress his smile, he wants to pull her cheeks as she's looking very cute but he controlled his feelings, knowing well that she'll get angry this time for sure and he just wanted to irritate her but didn't to spoil her mood anyway)acha challo ab ladayi ladayi maaf karo, sirf pyaar aur ice-cream ki baat karo… (riddhima made weird face) phir muh bana rahi ho.. challo smile karo… (he did tickly in her tummy, she smiled)

R: acha ab mujhe chodo aur seat par baithne do..

A: to ab bhi to apni seat par hi baithi ho..

R: armaannn…. (with lil irritation)

A: jab mai chal nahi sakta tha to to bada shownk chadta tha meri godd mai baithkar drive karne ka, tab to kehti thi ki yahi meri seat hai, aaj kya ho gaya?? Bas tabhi tak pyaar tha jab tak mai chal nahi sakta tha, jaise hi theek hua saara pyaar khatam, meri value 0 ho gayi tumhari najro mai, iss se badiya to.. (riddhima quickly placed her hand on his mouth)

R: armaan anjaane mai,majak mai bhi kuch aisa na bolna, jaan le lungi tumhari… (armaan pulled her close to himself)

A: acha??? Kaise logi meri jaan??? (he mumbled this near to her lips leaving his hot breaths on her face and making her heart skip a beat, riddhima realized their proximity and she tried to move a bit away)

R: armaan mujhe apni seat par baithne do, tum drive kaise karoge???

A: (pulled her back) jaise pehle drive karte the, farak ye hoga ki pehle mai starring wheel sambhalta tha aur tum breaks, par aaj mai breaks and accelerator sambhalunga aur tum starring wheel sambhalogi.. (riddhima shaked her head, armaan mumbled in her ears) kyu dar lag raha hai mujhse, ya phir apne aap se????

Riddhima looked in his eyes, and with in a second turned her eyes as she found difficult to look in his eyes, armaan smiled a bit and pulled her more closer then tied seat belt around themselves and placed her hands on starring wheel, then twisted key and gave a bit race to car, as soon as riddhima handled starring wheel, armaan slowly slowly dragged his hands from her back to front tummy and made a lock of his hands tightly little above her navel, riddhima loosened her control over wheels..

A: kya kar rahi ho riddhima?? Theek se pakdo starring ko..

R: ( trying to control herself) armaan haath hatao apne, mujhe problem ho rahi hai..

A: problem??? Kaisi problem??? Aur maine kuch naya to kiya nahi, mai hamesha haath aise hi rakhta hun…tum bhi na basket, pata nahi kya ho gaya hai tumhe, challo theek se car drive karo…

Riddhima's not able to say anything as she knew armaan's right, he always keeps his hands like this only, she thought what's happening to her, same touch, same armaan, same hands, same her, same car, same starring wheel, same seat, same night, everything was same but why her heart's behaving so differently, why armaan's touch is affecting her that much, why she's not able to look in his eyes, from last 2 years she didn't feel like this, then why today?? Why she's not able to concentrate on driving,

before she could find answer, her heart beat raised more when felt armaan's lips on her shoulder, and his hot breath on her ears started driving her crazy, riddhima started scratching starring tightly to control her feelings, finally she left starring wheel and placed her head on his collar bone with a jerk, armaan's already taken starring's hold, he smiled seeing riddhima's closed eyes and little sweat on her forehead, she's totally lost,

armaan slightly kissed on her cheeks and kept on driving with one hand on her waist and one handling starring, he's just enjoying this moment, he knew very well that hows his touch affecting riddhima at present, but he loves to play with her, he loves to see her losing herself in him completely, he loves to see her in this avatar that is "armaan ki deewani avatar" which is solely for him,

he feels proud on himself that he's the only one in this world who can see and feel her this roop(avatar) and he's the ONLY ONE who can turn a sensible riddhima into a crazy lover, his little touch's enough to disturb her entire system of her body, armaan smiled proudly, then slightly kisses on her neck and in her ears mumbled "I love you jaan", riddhima just smiled, armaan kept on looking her, his speed's almost 15-20, he wanted to slow down the speed as he's feeling that the car speed's very high, but as soon as he did so car started doing break dance, riddhima made a bad face, armaan quickly increased the speed a bit and again continued with his staring game..

finally,he stopped car and was trying to move out from car holding riddhima, riddhima came back to senses when her head bumped into the door, she's on the verge of opening her eyes but armaan covered her eyes and with other hand rubbed her head mumbling sorry… and asked her not to open her eyes, riddhima nodded without asking much as she's still under the effect of armaanaesthesia, armaan gave her directions and they reaches somewhere, Armaan removed his hands and asked her to open her eyes, riddhima opened her eyes and got scared when found herself standing in darkness, she holds armaan arms and mumbled "armaan ye hum kaha aa gaye hai???Ice-cream palour kaha hai??"

A: wo to tumhe pata hona chahiye na riddhima, car to tumhi chala rahi thi, tumne jaha roka, huma wahi uttar gaye, bolo kaha ruke hai hum??(riddhima looked him while biting her tongue, armaan smiled thinking "ohh I just love teasing her, she looks gorgeous in red" while looking at cheeks which's started turning red, he then holds her from her waist,riddhima's heartbeat again started raising, before her heart could start playing with her, she noticed armaan pointing somewhere, riddhima looked in front and was shocked...)

A: (in her ears) happy birthday jaan… (kissed on her cheeks, riddhima forgot to blink her eyes, she's in utter shock to react as she found one white color half moon boat, fully decorated with flowers in front of her, it's looking very beautiful, she came in present when armaan slightly pulled her)

R: armaan???

A: tumhara sapna tha na ki tum kabhi chaad taaro ki duniya mai ghum sako, har gam se pare, iss duniya se dur, to challo aaj aapke sapno ki duniya mai chalte hai, aaj ek chaand ko dusre chaand ki saer karwate hai… (riddhima kept on looking at it..)

To be continued….

Precap:

R: (crying) armaan mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai, please mere pass aa jao.. (she heard some footsteps voice, she rolled herself into a small ball and mumbled with determination) mai mar jaungi armaan agar kissi aur ki parchai ne bhi mujhe chunne ki koshish ki…


(her heart beats started raising as footsteps started coming near her, she's feeling like she'll die in a minute but her heart raised a question "kya ek baar armaan ka chehra dekhna bhi tujhe naseeb nahi hoga, kya yahi tha tumhare rishte ki manjil kit um pyaar se nahi ladkar alag hoge… kyu kiya riddhima tune aisa, kyu armaan se ladkar aayi resort se, kyu bhul jaati hai tu ki armaan ke bina teri jindagi sirf kaanto se bhari hogi.. kyu kiya tune aisa…", riddhima mumbled "par ab ye sab sochne se kya fayda…", she saw one shadow on door, she's shockedā€¦šŸ˜ƒ (dont kill me please... agar aapne mujhe maar diya to aapko pata kaise challega ki hua kya hai😳...)

Stay tunned…

Next update: Friday..

Will give reply to all your queries, views after updating next part.. 😊

Lots of love

ankita

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Posted: 13 years ago
😊😊di
amazing parts...
it was just mindblowing...😊😊😊
i am just waiting for the day jab AR ki jindagi mein poori tarah sirf khushiyan aur khushiyan hi chaaya rahen...šŸ‘šŸ‘
Edited by ardhana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was an awesome update

mazaa aa gaya

but dear, plz make it update on this friday only not like we r wating till more fridays

plzzz update veryyy sooonnn
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Posted: 13 years ago
ridz is so boring now a days

awsome part

update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
continue soon
i want PM
don't stop PMing me
TC
waiting for Next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesm part ankita...šŸ‘ jst loved it...😊
continue soon... thanks for d pm...'
n do pm me nxt time also...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Ankita

Loved both of the part...i cant believe that vaishali is in love with armaan. I hope she understand what she is doing is going to ruine all the ppl's life...

the precap seems quit scary...i hope nothing bed happens to ridhima...god they just came out of big problem and this another problem already...

thanks a lot for the pm

cont soon
love
nruti
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update.
I loved it a lot.
Armaan's surprise is just amazing.
the car ride was too hot u know for me n Ridz to handle.
We both had goosebumps...
It was simply awesome.

The precap is scary..
You are a wonderful writer dear.
Kindly update soonest..
love
Asma
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyyy di <3
awesome updates
lovedd them <3
happy to see AR smiling
:)
thanks for pm
luv
dhruvika

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