Maneet FF - Journey called life (OLD THR 1 - 2011-12) IMP NOTE PG 126 - Page 69

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Posted: 13 years ago

Again sorry dearies...my little ones especially the new arrival has been keeping my hands full...believe me, she gets disturbed when I am away from her even for 5 mins...


Part 18:

I decided to make him mine...and today, the time has come for it...I will propose him and he has to accept it. Who has the guts to reject Ahana? Sipping in a cocktail drink with a smirk

Maan is on the way to office when he realises that all the details with regard to this farm house were kept in the side table of his bedroom. Mr. Chopra had given these details to him when he visited his house...Oh...I have to get back to home then.

He again calls Geet...

Geet...I have to leave for a important client meeting. So, I doubt if I will be able to come to office today.

Geet remains quite for a sec...

HELLO GEET...

HUN..

Any problem?

NNooo Sir...You please carry on and call me if you require anything

Hmm...and he cuts the call...

Geet gets little wild now...Raavan! Couldnt he tell this to me before, Atleast I would have met that person in the orphanage whom Radhaji was interested in introducing to me? Huh!😡

Maan calls Aadi and informs his as well. He gets into his Manscon changes into his casuals and arranges all reqired papers in one file and about to leave. He remembered that he will not be able to meet Komal. He calls her school and talks to her with Nandinji's permission

Hello...

Hello...PAPA!

Listen beta, today I wont be able to meet you.

Komal makes a Angry baby face...not replying anything.

In meantime, Daadi sees Nakul taking coffee tray...

Nakul, for whom you are taking this coffee?

Maam...Maan Sir is back from Office...I am taking this coffee for him.

What? So early? Daadi is surprised as Maan never comes back from office so early...You carry on I will join him in his room...

Daadi meets Vicky...Vicky bete, Itseems Maan is back from office...I feel its the right time to talk to him about you joining the family business...

Bhai and at this time? Anyways, Daadi...I am already bored of being idle at this manscon. Lets talk to him right away. When they both near Maan's room, they get to hear him talking to someone over his mobile...

Maan has tried calling Komal "Dear", "honey"...finally he tries...

Komal Darling...Please maan jaavo na...

Daadi & Vicky's mouth wide opens hearing "Darling"

Will make it up when we meet next time...hmm?

Komal melts with his words on the other side...Ofcourse Daadi and Vicky dont get to hear it...

Tho phir ek kissi do...

He showers the phone with kisses...Mwah Mwah...Mwah...

Daadi fainting and Vicky holds her...

Vicky wakes her up by patting on her shoulder...

Daadi...Daadi...utto....Daadi opens her eyes slowly...VICKY...You know, I just had a bad dream...

DAADI...that's not a dream, that's reality...

Daadi's eyes wide open...she's not in her bedroom, she's actually standing in front of Maan's room...and reality strikes her that she's not dreaming and she makes sure that she pinches herself...

Maan is kissing that...that...😡

KOMAL DARLING...😳

Daadi looks back at Vicky with a anger filled glare...

I mean, Komal...

What ever...Maan is crossing all limits...Let me talk to him right away...

Daadi...Daadi...please...this is not the right time to talk to him...see, he's in such a good mood.

Good Mood?...oh yah...Komal se jo baath huvi...Huh!

DAADI...Let me get all the details about her and then talk to bhai...hmm? Now, lets get inside.

Both get inside...Maan instantly cuts the mobile saying BYE

Oops...I hope they didnt hear me talking to Komal...

Aap dono kab aaye? (When did you both come here?)

Jab aap phone main kiss...Daadi controlling all her wits...she gulps her saliva and continues...

Jab aap phone main kissi se baath kar rahe the...

Maan takes a long phew...

Par Bhai...you here at this time...

Haan woh...I had come here to collect some important documents. I have to go for a meeting now.

Meeting? Aur woh bhi in this casual dress?

Yah...I am helping Mr. Chopra in setting up his farm house. So, I need not go there in formals.

Well...Vicky, Why dont you join me...just see how I attend to meetings...Even though this farm house project is just a friendly help for Mr. Chopra where I am not charging him, you will get to know the key essentials to be considered for every project...

Sure Bhai...I will join you...

That's great...lets leave now as we are getting late

Vicky Winks at Daadi and leaves

At IP:

The translator who guided all those foreigners few days back, walks into IP and meets Geet.

Madamji...Those foreign deligates are going back to their respective countries. They are very much interested to take a step ahead in getting into long term understanding.

That's a great news...Geet is excited...

Yes Madamji. I need to get Maan Sir's signature on these key documents and this should happen today

TODAY? But he's not coming to office today.

Madamji, its very important to get his signatures on these documents today. These people are going back to their respective countries by tomorrow morning and its difficult to catch hold of them after that.

Ok Ok...I will talk to my boss and get back to you hmm?

Sure...Remember...its now or never offer.

Hmm

She sends smss to Maan's mobile as she didn't want to disturb him but there's no answer.

What to do? If I call him he will get angry. She paces between her cabin...as she had to take a decition. Let me call him...What will he do. Doh chaar baathen sunayenge...hum sunlenge (He will say 2-4 rude sentences. Will listen to it)

She calls him but no answer. She continues calling him for next half an hour. Finally, she calls Khurana Constructions as there was no use calling on his mobile.. She managed to reach Aadi and took the location details from him.

Romeo ji...sorry to bother you again and again...please pick Komal from her school and drop her home. Uncleji will be there.

Pandeji...can you come with me to this farmhouse? I have to go there and take boss's signatures at any cost

At the Party:

Both Maan and Vicky reach the venue...The atmosphere was fun filled with loud noice...there's a party in the pool side...Young girls and guys were either having fun either swimming/dancing... Most of the girls were dressed in swimsuits or revealing western attires.

Maan was not comfortable in the first place.

Bro, are you sure you have a meeting at this place? I am sure we have come to the wrong address.

No Vicky...I have come here once before...We have not missed on the place.

But bro... you never like this party varty...

I have come here for a different purpose. I will meet Ahana and then leave after our work is finished.

Hey...handsome... Me, Ahana. Ahana comes out of the crowd and welcomes Maan... Vicky and Maan were equally surprised with her gesture and her dressing sence. She was dressed extremely auckward in name of modernity.

Maan clears his throat...and then answers...Maan...you can call me Maan...

She didnt care much about what he meant to say...

and he's my brother Vicky...

Oh...hello Vicky...

She brings her hand forward guesturing for a shakehand...Vicky hesitates and ignores.

She drags both Vicky and Maan in between the crowd...Hey guys, Meet Maan Singh Khurana

The entire crowd screamed...HIEEE

And he's Vicky Singh Khurana...and again a big noice in the crowd followed.

Maan is embaressed to the core wondering what Vicky will think about him...is this the kind of clients his elder brother has been dealing with?

Bro...are you sure she has called you here for business.

Its not business Vicky...I am just helping Mr. Chopra in this regard...need to bare with this crazy girl.

Both of them were dragged to the actual party place where drinks were offered and guys and girls were dancing actively to the music.

Ahana came forward and offered Maan a drink and then called in for a dance...he gave in unwillingly. Even Vicky was called by one of Ahana's friends

Geet walks in with Pandeji...Geet is speechless with the atmosphere where as Pandeji is been cribbing...

Madam...kya Maan sir yaahan aayen honge? Chee Chee...yahan aakar mera dharam brasht ho raha hain...in kanyaon ko dekho...kaise chote chote kapde pehenkar naachrahe hain (Its an insult to my religion to have come here...look at these girls how they are dancing wearing short short dresses)

Pandeji, Aadi sir had given this address only. Even I have a doubt but what to do...I have been trying Maan Sir's number but there's no answer. Let's check this place in detail.

Both look at the pool side and then enquire with one of the girls who happen to be Ahana's close friend...

Excuse me...Is Mr. Maan here?

She scans Geet from top to bottom...Excuse me! Who allowed you to come over here in the first place? Here people from other planet are not allowed...

Geet and Pandeji look at each other and then look back to this girl...

Excuse Me...you are the one who look like the...like the...haan...ones from LOST WORLD again lost in this world...and if you have any sence left in you, then answer me where is Mr. Maan and if you dont know the answer, then simply say "I dont know"

What!

Geet moves forward continuing with her search...she tries to check with one of the guys dressed topless and Bermudas...there's no other way she could help herself as all the guys and girls were dressed this way...

Sunye...

That guy looks at her in a lustful way...

Haaye...Sunayiye... scanning her from top to bottom

She is feeling really ashamed with his flirtish behaviour...

Please let me know where's Mr. Maan...Its very important for me to meet him...

Well...I dont know about your MR MAAN...He comes close to her...Koi baat nahin...Maan nahi to main sahi...muj se kaam chala sakti ho. (If not Maan, I am available, you can make use of me)...All guys around start laughing...

She was about to slap this guy but she managed to control all her wits and she preferred to ignore and move ahead.

She cutely prays her babaji looking up...Babaji...I dont mind if Sir scholds me...Please I should not find him here between these APEs

Finally, she comes to the point where Maan and Vicky were dancing... Geet's eyes initially got glued on Maan. He was dressed casual and that too a vibrant white transperant top...he was indeed looking hot...Her eyes got glued to him without her own realisation...

And every girl trying to be close to him, dance with him but Ahana was taking a lead...At one point, Ahana motivates him to lift her...he just did it as a part of dance and he almost threw her back to the ground level when his eyes feel on Geet who was giving a shocked and disapproving look to him...

Ouch...Maan you hurt me...She is unable to get up and extends her hand to Maan guesturing him to help her get up... But Maan didnt even notice Ahana...He is all lost in Geet... Least did he expect her to be here. He's feeling really small...What will she think about me?😕

Geet didnt realise that tears started welling in her eyes...and when realisation strikes her she turns away and wipes her tears instantly and again she turns to look back at him.

Precap: Geet in trouble😲...ofcource Maan saves her😉

Edited by Vaidhumom - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079


di what about geetika😭


Pls 2 more days......Mostly on sunday
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom


Pls 2 more days......Mostly on sunday


k di so tell me would u be regular now or not even if u r not regular it k di
coz baby needs u more now😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful part..
Ahana s such a shameless creature...
Daadi angry on Komal..😆
Did maan c geet's tears?
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome
loved it
Dadi and vicky cursing poor lil komal
Geet is hurt bcz she has never seen Maan with any other girl
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update but its very small😔
itne dino k intezar k baad itna chota update🥺
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gshruti

nice update but its very small😔

itne dino k intezar k baad itna chota update🥺


sorry darl...I have almost typed half of the next part..will post that in 2-3 days
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update
waiting for maan's response to geet's presence

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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update...!!
Loved it
Eagerly waiting for next
continue soon
(aftr reading this upat...it took me back to the GHSP old days whr maan ws danceing wit ahana on Behake behake song)
Thankx for the pm


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Posted: 13 years ago

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