Maaneet FF - Baarish. Link to new thread Pg 151 - Page 73

roopali amazing work dearie

don't know what to say...this FF is like high and low...happy and sad

i m really confused yaar maanet alag hue hi kyun and when they r happy in their lives why r they missing each other by thinking abt their past

hey

Part 37

Present

Omi n Preet went towards the Babies section.

Geet patting her Baby bump "Dekha Princess abhi tum ayiii nahii aur yeh haal haiii already tumhara Room full hogaya haiii par tumhare Dad aur Bhai tho shopping bandh hii nahi kar rahe haiii…

Bhagwan hii jane kya hogaaa jab tum aajavogiii"

(See Princess,You have not come yet n this is the situation already Ur room is full but ur Dad n Bro dnt stop shopping only…..

God only knows what will happen when you come)

N selects the Blue saree as it was Preet fav colour.

At the same time Maan was settling a sleepy Ashi in their hotel suite room which was filled with lots of toys n he knew it was done by Avanii.

After settling Ashi Maan made his way to the other room where Avanii was unpacking their clothes n Maan just movd the things n made Avanii sit n settled himself on the floor n kept his head on her lap.

Avanii "Mamaa kii yaad arahii haiii????"

(You are missing Mom)

Maan "Hmmm"

Avanii "Tho phone karlo na Mamaa koo…."

(Then why dnt you call Mom…)

Maan "Woh baath karengiii nahi abhi bhi mujhse naraz haii bas ek galtii ki thiii unki nazar mein aur uskii sajaa aaj thak derahii haiii Mama mujhe"

(She will not talk, she is angry with me bcoz of one mistake in her eyes n till today she is punishing me for it)

Avanii "Maan itne udaas maath hoo Jab Mamaa ko sachaii kaa patha chalega naa tho vo tumhe maaf kardengii aur baath bhi karengiii"

(Maan don't be sad when Mom will get to know the truth, she will forgive you n also talk to you)

Maan "Mein bhi ussi din kaa intazaar kar raha hu lekin yaha akee Geet kii bohat yaad arahi haiii"

(Im also waiting for that day but coming here im missing Geet very much)

Avanii "Dont worry Maan Geet jaha bhi hogii Preet ke saath khush hogii"

(Don't worry Maan whereever Geet will be she will be happy with Preet)

Maan "I also hope so…."

Avanii couldn't see Maan sooo sad so called Meera n kept the phone on speaker mode

Avanii "Hey Mama aap kaisi hooo??? Papa kaha haii??? Aap dono ne khana kha liyaa naa???? Papa ne daviii leli naa????..."

(Hey Mom how are you???How is Dad???You both had ur food???Dad had his Medicines???...)

Meera "Areee avaniii rukoo rukoo apni express ko station pe rokoo….Mein thik hu, tumahre papa bhi thik hai aur haan humne abhi tak teen bar khaa liya haiii aur tumahre papa ne tanturms dikaha kar daviii khaliii aur aab soo rahee haiii….ab tu bol Beta Ashi aur tum kaise hooo???? Aur wo bhi thik haiii naa???? Bahar jaake thik se khana nahi kayegaa aur dekhna beta Khana zadda thikaa naa hoo….."

(Areee Avaaniii stop stop ur express on a station…. Im fine,Ur dad is also fine n Yaa we have had food thrice till now n ur Dad with tanturms had his medicines n now he is sleeping….Now you tell child How is Ashi n how are you???? n how is he???? He will not have outside food properly n also check the spicyness in food….)

Avanii "Maa hum teeno theek haiii aur haan mama mein ne khana taste karne ke baad hii unhe khanee diyaa dnt worry aur aap unse itna pyaar karthi hoo thoo ek baar baath karloo naa mama

Aaj bhi apko bohat yaad kar rahe the"

(Mom we three are fine n yaa I have tasted food n then only given him n dnt worry n when you love him sooo much why don't you talk to him n he was also missing you lotss today)

Meera "Nahii mujhe baath nahi karni hai usse….

Pyaar karthi hu iska matlab yeh nahi hai kii maine usse maaf kar diyaa haiii aur Miss tho mein bhi karthi hoo uskoo"

(No I don't want to talk to him…

I love him but that doesn't mean that I will forgive him for his mistake n I also Miss him)

Maan was smiling through tears hearing that his Mama was Missing him

Maan "I miss you tooo Mamaa n Love you n rona maath plzzz

Happpyyy Mother's Day Mama"

(I miss you tooo Mom n LoveYou n Plzzz don't cry

Happpy Mother's Day Mom)

Meera just cut the call hearing Maan's voice n she knew he was also crying just like her.

Past

Maan and Geet come back from shopping n Meera saw Maan n Geet coming hand in hand n Maan pulling Geet towards him holding her waist n as they reached the door they sepreated themselves n stood as if totally innocent.

As Maan entered Meera called him n told him to come to the room as she wanted to talk to him something very important. Meera n Maan reached the room, Maan sensed some danger as Meera eyes showed soo many questions n anger in it which he had never seen in his lifetime n was a bit scared seeing his Mom's this avatar.

Meera "Maan,Kuch yesi Baath hai kya joo tum mujhse kehna chathe hooo????"

(Maan, do you have to tell me something which I don't know????)

Maan "Mama, Aap kya bol rahii hoo mein kuch nahi jantha….."

(Mom, what are you talking about I dont know…..)

Meera "Meraa matab woh Watch wali ladki ke bareemein????"

(I mean about tht Watch girl????)

Maan "Ohhh haan mama mujhe apko baatha naa haii lekin…..

(Ohhh yaa that I want to tell you Mom but….)

Meera "Lekin kya Maan????"

(But what Maan ????)

Maan "Mama aap mujhe gussa nahi hongii naaa

(Mom you will not be angry on me noo)

Meera "Thik haiii phele mujhe uske baare mein bolo tho sahiii

(Okkk first tell me about her)

Maan tells everything to his Mom even Maaneet spending a night together n all the other things except the name of the girl.

Meera was happy that Maan has found his dream girl but wanted to recheck it was not Geet as the girl seemed so different from Geet but the scene she had seen outside the home just didn't let her rest in peace.

Meera "Ohh tho mere Bete ne apni Dream Girl ko dhund liyaa….. Mujhe uskaa naam nahi bologee????"

(Ohh so My Boy has atlast found his Dream Girl….Will you not tell me the name ????)

Maan "Mama uska naam Geet haiii……."

(Mom her name is Geet……..)

As soon as Maan said the name he felt a slap on his cheeks n saw Meera crying n slapping him continous, he was shocked from such a response from his Mom he thought she would hug him with all the happiness but here it was complete opposite.

Meera just fell of the floor crying n Maan got worried to see this Mom this way.

Meera "Kya soch kar tumne yesa kiya Maan????Parsoo uskii Shaadi haiii…….Kya tum dono koo koi ilm bhi haii tum kya kar rahe hoo????

Mein tumhe yaha is liye laii thi ke tum shaadi ki tayarii mein Rajeev aur Naina kii madat kardoo aur naa ke iss liyee kee tum hone walii Dulhan ke saath koi affair karooo…….

Jab humne tumare liye Geet ka proposal rakhtha tab tumhe shaadi mein koi interest nahi tha…..

Aur aab jab woh shaadii ho rahii haiii tum dono bhaag nee kii koshish kar rahe hoo…..

Tumhe kya lagtha haiii ke jab tumare Papa koo patha chaleegaa tho woh tumhe aur Geet ko aapna lengee????

Aab Bhoot jeese kyun kadee hooo kuch bolo????"

(What did you think Maan before doing this????Its her marriage day after tomorrow…….Do you both have any clue what you are doing????

I brought you to this marriage so that Naina n Rajeev get some help n relief in the wedding preparation not that you go n have an affair with the Bride to be…..

When we had sent you Geet's proposal, you were not interested in marriage….

Now when she is getting married you are planning to Run away with her……

Do you think if your Dad will get to know this he will accept you n Geet????

Now why are you standing like a statue talk something????)

Maan "Mama par mein aur geet ek dusre se Pyaar karthe haiii"

(Mom but I and Geet love each other)

Meera "Kyaa tumahara Pyaar itna kudhgarsh haii kee Rajeev aur Naina kii izzat bhi tum log mithii mein milaa dogee????

Aur bhag ke shaadi karne ke baad agar tere Dad tujhe ghar se nikal denge tho kyaa haiii tera????Kaise khush rakhegaa humariii phool si Geet koo???? Bolll kuch javab haiii tere paas….

Mujhe tho apni parvarissh pe ghin aathi haiii kee tu mera Beta haiii aur isee acha tho mera koi bacha naa hotaaa

Chala jaaa mujhse durrr Shakal maath dikhana mujhe tumahriii aur mein teri saar kii kasam kathii huuu ke mein ussi din tumsee baath karungiii jab mujhe lageegaa ke tum mere bete kehlanee kee kabil hogehooo"

(Maan is your love soo selfish that you don't care about the honor of Rajeev n Naina n want to tarnish it?????

N after running away n marrying if your Dad doesn't accept you n throws you out of the house then what do you have????How will you keep our dear Daughter happy????Do you have any answers for this……

Im ashamed of my way of upbringing n that you are my son n it would be better if I was childlesss

Go away from me,don't show me your face n I take your life's promise that I will not talk to you till the time I think you are capable of calling yourself as my son)

Maan "Mama……"

(Mom….)

Meera "Mujheee tera chera nahii dekhnaa bolaa naa meinnee Bas Kehdiyaaa"

(I don't want to see your face I told Naaa)

Meera pushed Maan out of her room n closed it on his face n sat on the floor crying n Maan not knowing what to do just went away to his car driving to a near by pub n drinking this he was high n just fell asleep taking a room in that hotel.

Precap-

Maan –Geet Face to Face in Present

Noteee-

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okay sry for being late
but update...😲😲
tu kyun rula rhi h mujhe???
u portrayed the emotions beautifully yaar
it hurts to see maaneet like this
and meera...she is ryt in hr own ways but then maan ki khushiyan yaar...
its really sad😭
and sob sob me 1st😭

roops 😡
u r so dead after tht note
okay abt this..
roops tu apne liye likh okay
jo padhte hain unke liye likh...dun expect n e thing re...
u'll feel btr
we r der with u!!!!!😳

Hey ronpali dear... I extremely apologise 4 nt reading ur Ffs bt i cant help it. I live in hostel nd being a science student my schedule is like no holidays at al. I only get summer holidays nd those too filled with my entrance exams nd now d bigest reason dnt hav my pc here in hostel nd my phone is too slow...bt u dnt stop writing . Evryone doesnt hav that courage