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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
waiting 4 the next...😊😊
Edited by butterfly.tanu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
congrats for new ff
nice update
thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
hey
gr8 intro...
cont.soon
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
PART 1
That day was 19th AUG 2007 n today is also 19th AUG 2011 but still i cannot forget that day when i lost my love n best friend.Today after soo many years im going back to that same place to face my past n today im nt alone but with me im taking my wife Avani n our daughter Ashi there.

Ashi is very excited tht she is just jumping in the back seat n sometimes sitting on my lap as im driving.Its a 6 hrs journey n Avani is also very excited to go to Madikeri as she has not visited that place yet.

As Ashi n Avani dozzed off in the car i still remember the day 5th AUG.
PAST
It was my best friend Roopali's birthday n we had a party at her place but i had forgotten to get her a gift n as my mom reminded me i just rushed to GARUDA Mall our usually hangout place where we there is a store called JASHN n she really liked a saree few days back n i was going to gift her that as she had demanded me to give her that gift.

I went to JASHN n brought her that saree.
As i went to the car parking i found my cell missing so thought i would have left it at tht store.

As i was about to go i saw a BEAUTIFUL,Hot,Sexy girl in skirt n white top it looked like as if the world has come to a stand still i could just see Her talking n cracking jokes with her friend with lots of shopping bags in hand n seeing her i just walked backwards to have a more clear look of the angel form of a girl. It was love at first sight for me n then the most idiotic thing happened to get a clear view of her i just kept walking backwards n i forgot there was a manhole theren i fell right into tht manhole n started shouting for help .

That girl's car was parked right next to my car n the manhole n she heard someone calling for help from tht manhole n so she extended her hand to help the person n as she help me come out tht was our first touch n it sent a current passing through my body.After seeing me in tht state where my face was full of mud she n her friend just laughed at me n went away n as soon as she left it started raining n i saw tht while helping me her watch had got stuck to my shirt n i kept it as a sign of her.

PRESENT
N remembering myself falling in the manhole n her laugh i started smiling at myself n checked my face again in the mirror
Garuda mall[our IF friends of bangalore usual hangout place]
Saree gift
Girls dress
guys plz dnt complain about short updates as i will update this in every 2 days
n ya do comment n press d like button n give ur fingers a bit of excercise...



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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
hiii nice update...
loved it...
continue soon...


jyothi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Happiness Is Lyk A Radio Station
Broadcasting All d Tym
U Just Have 2 Learn How 2 Tune In & Receive It Properly

Stay Tuned n Be Happy Always
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
Aj apki din ki achhi shuruwat ho
sare sapne apke sakar ho
Jinko rat-bhar dekti rahi sapno me apki palke
Rab kre aaj unse hi mulaqat ho
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
roopali...han????

Btw nice update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
have been to this mall well mostly all over india as am very fond of travelling
comming to update it is very nice
maan in man hole too good it indicates should never lose concertration otherwise manhole hehehehehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
awesome , beautiful part.
loved it.
continue soon.

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