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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sainiayshi14

hi priya

i love your ff ankahi
do pm me please
n con.soon.

Thanksss Ayushi...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: bakula_gandhi

Update was too good. Thank you... Raj and naina are married and everyone is very happy for them

But yeh kya shaadi karte hi unhe alag kar diya. maine nahi kiya...yeh toh story ki demand thi My lord...😛
Toh ab jaldi se update kardo taki who dono mil jaye. arey...aise kaise mila dun...unhe...😆
Hope the others are safe as well pata nahi...next ud me pata chalega...
Can't wait..so please continue soon

Thanks dear...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the whole update except the last bit
arry yaar bechaare RN ki abhi shadi hui aur abhi ye sab
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

So the comment for recent update.
Shocker one over all for me 😲 😲 😲 and the longest one too.
😆😆 😆 ha ha ha...sahi hai...
Kyounki maine jara bhi nahi socha tha ki itne tight security k baad Naina ko koi le jaayega Raj se door. Vajah chahe kuch bhi ho i mean pata nahi kyoun mujhe kahin na kahin aisa feel ho raha hai ki kahin ye Raj ka hi to plan nahi hai? pata nahi...dekhte hain...😛
Agar hai to bahut risky aur dangerous tha and agar nahi tha to Yusuf k alawa vo kaun log hain jo Naina k peeche pade hue hain aur vo Naina ko apne saath le gaye hain. yeh bhi mujhe nahi pata...😛
Naaz k kehne par shaadi to badi shaanti se nipat gayi par vahan bhi kuch ajeeb se log pahuch gaye the to i am sure ki vo log Raj aur Naina par bahut acche se najar rakh rahe the.
Filhaal shaadi k baare me baat karte hain, it was all very lovely sab kuch shaanti se nipat gaya. Raj ne sahi kiya pehle Naina ko vahan bheja fir apna gaya. raj hamesha sahi karta hai...
Pooja bechari kitne khush thi na jab us ne Naina aur apne Veer ki shaadi ki khabar suni par Raj ne acchi patti padhai un officers ko ki KMA k time se hi vo sab ye game khelte aa rahe hain. haan...ab maj ne kaha hai toh khelte honge...sayad DJ's ne voh scene edit kar diya ho...😆
Bechari Pooja us ko to itne khushi ho rahi thi ki poocho mat par pehle to Raj ne us ko daat diya par ab Naina samjhaye aur Raj nahi maane aisa to ho hi nahi sakta na. Phir Raj ne bhi us ko itne acche se samjhaya ki us ko sab samajh me aa gaya. Raj jo samjha raha tha...😆
Abhi to shuruvaat hai Raj sahab aage aage dekhiye hota hai kya? But that was cool jab Raj station pe Naina ko apne saath le gaya aur dono romantic chats me busy the to 15 min baad Alekh and company vahan pahuchi.
Alekh k saath ab mujhe lagta hai Neelu k rishte jaldi hi theek ho jaayenge. Huda ko to humesha koi chahiye hota hai na. Shalu ne sahi kiya apne man ki baat Raj se discuss kar k kyounki aise problems vo aur kisi se khule man se discuss nahi kar paati na. isi liye toh Raj se kaha...
Gunny ne bhi Naaz ko apne bachpan ki baatein yaad dila kar us ka gum halka kar diya hai aur accha hi hua. Sab kuch ab set hoga jaldi hi aur mujhe poori umeed hai ki Gunny hi Naaz ka vo sahara banega jis ki us ko talash hai. pata nahi...sayad...
Naaz k kehne par Yusuf ne bhi shaadi chain se ho jaane di.
Huda aur Alekh ne sahi kiya jo Naina ko jaane nahi diya Raj se milne varna Raj kaise aata aise chup kar milne apni Naina se. Shaadi k pehle aisa karna kitna khoobsurat aur romantic hota hai na. pata nahi...mene likh...isi liye achha laga...par abhi tak experience nahi hua hai...😆
Huda aur Alekh ek taraf Naina ko mana kar dete hain aur doosri taraf Raj ko bhi bhejte hain milne k liye un se. Bechara Raj to dar hi gaya tha soch kar bhi ki jaane kya kehne waale hain ye dono yahan aa kar itne raat me. Raj bhi na har waqt ye sochta hai ki as a Major us ko kya suit karta hai. ab kya kare...uss ki bhi koi reputation hai..jise huda aur alekh tell lene bhej rahe the...😆
Naina k maa papa khush hain ki unhe un ka beta ek baar fir mil gaya par jaisa vo chahte the jaldibaaji me us tarah se shaadi nahi kar paaye Naina ki bus yahi armaan reh gaya. Sahi kaha tha Naveen ne ki vo Naina ki shaadi Raj se karayega aur aaj us ki ye iccha bhi poori ho gayi. Khush hoga Naveen aur Raj bhi na kitna sharmaata hai abhi bhi. meri fic ka Raj sharmata hai...mera ashar hai uss par...😆
Naina kitna natak kar rahi thi aakhein bund karne me. Batao ye dulhan hai jis ko us k pati ka naam haath pe likhne k liye aakhein bund karne k liye itna samjhana padta hai had hai. Bechari Pooja Shalu aur Naaz ko le kar aayi tab us ka kaam hua.
Finally shaadi ho gayi aur accha kiya jo us part ko jyada lamba stretch nahi kiya. That song was lovely and wonderful.
Pata nahi Raj ko kaise nahi laga par mujhe laga ki ye koi chaal thi un sab ko fasane ki. Vo le jaa rahe hain Naina ko aur Raj ko rokna hi hoga unhe. par raj ko toh bullet lagg gayi hai yaar... ab Raj kaise rokega...main hi kuch karti hun...😛
Try to update soon.

Thanksss Vartika...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nainaahsingh

hi priya!!!! Hiieee esha...

wow yaar yeh pata tha ke tum update long dooogi par yeh nahi pata tha ke tum record tod dogi😆😆😆 aage se kabhi record todne ki koshish bhi nahi karungi...halat kharab ho gayi thi meri...😆
i love the looonnnggg update❤️❤️❤️...specially bcz ab jaakar RN ke shaadi hui!!! abhi achha achha bol lo...baad me tum bhi sab ki tarah danda pakde mere hi piche paddnewali ho...😆
pooja ka scene to buhut accha tha!!!👏👏👏 thank you...
raj ke explanation bhi bilkul usi ke tarha hai😆😆😆...kuch aur nahi sooja to GAME keh diya🤣...tooo much raj!!! ab itni jaldi me dimag me jo bhi aaya bol diya maj ne...😆
pooja was kind of emotional when she heae that raj is going to marry naina...bhai after all jeeju jo thera!!!!😆😆😆 aur pooja toh hamesha apne veer-zara ko sath me dekhna chahti thi...
alekh n neelu ka sceen buhut aacha tha👍🏼...but
i love rn scene better then any scenes❤️ ha ha ha...pata hai...aur mujhe bhi RN scenes likhna jyada achha lagta hai...😉
ek to raj ne naina ko book stall se aise uthaya tha jaise kisi ko kidnap karte hai😆😆😆...upper se us ke face expresion ko dekhh ke hass bhi raha hai😆 aur kya karega...karnaama bhi toh aisa hi kiya hai na maj ne...😆
i love the song ...PERFECT!!!!!👏👏👏 achha tha na...😃
naveen ne raj aur uske friends ko kaha ke agar wo apne behan ke shaadi kisis se karwae ga to wo sirf naina ho gii!!!...😳😳😳howww shweeet!!!!! arey naina nahi Raj...
ooohhhooo ☺️ to captain rajveer ko sharmana bhi aata hai!!! kyoun nahi aata hoga...meri fic hai yaar...her inshan ko ek normal inshan ki tarah sab kuch karna aata hai...😆
so shalini yaudi ko like to karte hai but just as his cadet!!!!👎🏼...not fear!!😔
waise jaisa raj waise he uski naina😆😆😆...usne bhi apne parents ko kya explanation de hai ke wo raj se is leye jalde shadi karna chahte hai ke kahi bake ke ladkiya uspe line na maare 🤣...Priya u r just too much!!!!😆 tumhe aaj pata chala mere bare me...😆
i don't know why but i like gunny n naaz to gether👍🏼!!! okay...😃
mehindi wala scene bhi buhut accha tha!!!!👏👏👏...good job!!! thank you...
ooo to maj rajveer naina ke room main aae wo bhi aadhe raat ko!!!!...kya baat hai apke maj!!!😆😆😆 khud nahi aaye yaar...
so know raj ko flert karna bhi aa gaya hai.😆 rajveer sir ko sab aata hai...😆
my favorite sceen was when raj was putting sandor in naina's mang!!!❤️...i mean jab unki shaadi hui...loved it!!!! hmm...toh tumhe yeh scen pasand aaya...😃
naina's badai scene was way to good👏👏👏...i mean pehle saare roo rahe the but raj ne un sab ka mood ek dam se theek kar diya!!!!👍🏼 haan raj ko roti hui shaqal pasand nahi hai na...isi liye...
naaz n akram😕😕😕...what r they up to??? pata nahi...1😆
aur fir wo log kon hai jo RN ko marna chate hai???? pata nahi...2😆
hahhh naina ko kon le ke gaya😲😲😲...pata nahi...3😆
priya ke baache😡..hamesha aise scene pe he break lagati hai teri to main😡 meri abhi tak shadi nahi hui...sachhi...toh tumhe mere bachhe kahan se dikh gaye yaar...😆
sharafat se jalde jalde update kar do...samjhe??? jo hukum sarkar...😆
N YES😡😡😡 love u😆😆😆 ha ha ha...pyar jatane ka bhi yeh badhiya tarika tha...
Esha

Thanks Esha...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143

Hmmm...sab ke reactions dekhke aa rahi hu...kitne shocked hai log yaha pe...hona ye chahiye tha ki sab ko shock Raj aur Naina ke alag hone pe lagna chahiye tha apr hua yun ki sab iss liye shocked hai ki tum ne Priya...tum ne itniii lambiii update di hai🤣...jaisi tu waise tere readers... galat baat pe reactions dete hai aur sahi baat ko bhool jaate hai... ha ha ha...nahi yaar...aisa bhi nahi hai...lambe ud ke liye khinchi ki hai sab ne aur RN ko alag karne ke liye baht daanta bhi...!!! kya zamana aa gaya hai...log toh aaj kal shero se bhi nahi darte...😆

ab mujhe hi dekhe le...maine update padh ke bookmark karke rakhi thi ki comment karni hai aur bhool gayi😛🤣🤣...ab hue na hum dono best friends iss naathe...hai na...??😛😆...waise sorry ha bhoolne ke liye nahi... gaaliyan dene itni late aane ke liye...tera dose abhi baaki hai mere dost🤣🤣🤣...iss liye pehle hasaane ki koshish kar rahi hu...I know Moi is bohuth achchi😳😛 pata hai ke tum kitni achhi ho...agar koi mujhe dant ta hai toh tum bhi behti ganga me hath dhone aa hi jati ho...😆...ab chalo gaaliyan khaathe hai...🤣🤣🤣...neeche aa jaa... main nahi aane wali...main yehi se dekh lungi...😆


Ye kya tha...????😡😡😡😡😡...haan...humne hi tujhe sar pe chada rakha hai iss liye ab tu taandav kar rahi hai😡😡...shaadi ke laddu dikhaaye aur khaane se pehle hi cheen bhi liya tu ne..??😡😡... how ruthless u r Priya??😡😡😭😭...dil hai ki nahi tere paas...dimaag nahi hai ye pata hai par dil bhi nahi hai ye aaj pata chala mujhe...😭😭... dil aur dimag dono ko Raj en kidnap kar ke rakha hai barsho se...aur mene sirf Naina ko kidnap karwaya...toh koun sa gunah ker diya...😆

Qwaab dikha ke ussne,mera chain loot liya...
unhe pura karne ka waqt jab aaya zaalim ne dil tod diya !!

ye tere liye tha...aaj kal main shayri likh rahi hu...pata hai kisis ki samajh mein nahi aayegi par fir bhi dimaagless logon ke liye yahi kaafi hai na...so yaha pe chalega... ha ha ha...mere liye shayari...bhai vaah...sherni ko sher sunaya ja raha hai...😆
waise aisa kyun kiya tu ne..??bol na...plsss... kuch khaash nahi...bass bore ho rahi thi toh socha kuch dhamaka karte hain toh kar diya...😆
kitni khush thi main shaadi ko dekh ke...shaadi mein sab ne jo masti ki usse dekh ke... Aalekh - Huda ki masti Naina n Rajveer ko leke...their alone moment in Naina's room...the song u chose for their wedding...in the beginning,Pooja n Rajveer's interaction about Jeeja-Saali relationship😛...haayee Pooja Rajveer ki saali hai...sahi hai ki Raj ka sar abhi se dukhne laga hai😆😆...poor Rajveer sir ka sar...😆😆😆...the advise Raj gave to Shalini on Yudi's matter...n also happy to see Aalekh n Neelu's problems getting solved...Raj ka apne cadets ko ullu banana...waise banane ki jaroorath toh nahi hai par fir bhi...😆...Naz n Gunny's interaction revealed so much about Naz's past life...n that bidaai scene was emotional but then Rajveer made everyone smile...but tu hai ki uss smile ko tikne hi nahi diya...u wiped it out fully😭...pata nahi kya hoga Naina ka...???jaldi update karo aur batao...plsss... kya batayu...??? tum sab ne itni galiyan di hain ke...main bhul gayi hun ke aage kya likhna hai...😆vaise yeh sahi hai...haa...ek hi line me pure ud ka lekha-jokha bhej diya...😆

I hope u r fine now...teri sardi-khaansi sab chali gayi hai..warna tu ek baar apna hi update padhlena.. itni sadness dekhke woh bhaag jaayenge...😆 hadh hai yaar...pure ud me RAJ NAINA chaye hue the...itne sare happy happy scene the...last me sirf ek hi scene tha par tum sab voh sare happy scene bhul gaye aur sirf iss ek scene ko le kar mujh par barash arhe ho...not fare...Cry😆

Thanksss...Siri...maza aa gaya padh ke...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna1

loved the whole update except the last bit ...ha ha ha...Thanks...😆
arry yaar bechaare RN ki abhi shadi hui aur abhi ye sab kya karun...story ki demand jo thi ye...😛😉
plz continue soon

Thanksss Prerna...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Guys,

sorry...maine kal update karne ko kaha tha par ker nahi payi...coz i was so shocked and scared when i heard of the news of serial blast in Mumbai...

My hearthiest condolences to the victims and their family...

Hope all are safe at home...
May God Bless all...
n one request to u all
when ever u r free...pray for the people who are dead & also who are injured & there family also.

next some days are going to be very bad seeing all this...so plz take care of ur self & ur near ones.
Love
Priya
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Posted: 14 years ago
EPISODE:-25
Maj Rajveer ki ankhen bandh ho rahi thi...bandh hone se pahle unhone bass itna hi dekha tha...Naina behosh...unn logon ke sath thi...unn me se kisi ne use apni bahon me utha rakha tha...
Maj Rajveer ne akhiri baar apna hath uthaya...gun par...trigger dabayi... ek bullet ja ker lagi...unn me se ek aadmi ke pairon me...
uss ne turn kar ke...Maj Rajveer par bullet chalayi...
bhaag kar aage aaya...Alekh...bullet us ke kandhe ko ja takrayi...
par tab tak voh apne van ke kafi kareeb pahunch chuke the...aur achanak uss ne turn kiya...dekha...Yudi ko...kafi gaur se...apna gun point kiya...ek aur bullet chali jo ja ker...Yudi kandhe par lagi...
Maj Rajveer ki ankehn bandh hui...
Gunny bhaga uss van ke piche...
Huda...bhaag ker aaya...Maj Rajveer ke paas...
Naaz chup se khadi dekh rahi thi...Maj Rajveer ko...
uss ke ankhon me dard...gussa...nafrat...sab kuch jhalak raha tha...
uss ne uss jate hue van ki taraf dekha...uss ke ankhon me halke se anshu bhi the...aur nafrat bhi...
Maj Rajveer ke kareeb baithe the hue uss ne dhire se kaha:- "aap ko kuch nahi hoga...bhaiya aur na hi Naina ko...
Huda chillaya...kuch soilders bhaag kar aage aaye...Maj Rajveer ko ek jeep me dala... Shalini unn ke paas baithi hui thi...
Naaz abhi bhi jeep ke bahar khadi uss ore dekh rahi thi...jiss tarf voh van Naina ko le kar gayi thi...
paas hi se ek aur jeep gujri...!!! Naaz ki nazar padi...uss jeep par...jisse Akram chala raha tha...
uss ki bhi nazar usi ore thi...jiss taraf vo jeep gayi thi...
Naaz ne suna Gunny ki awaz:-"Huda...tum...Maj Rajveer ke sath sabhi ko le kar army hospital pahuncho...!!! main baki ke soilders ke sath unn ka picha karta hun...
Gunny aur kisi se kuch kahe bina...aur sune bina vahan se baki ke sare soilders le kar chala gaya...usi van ko follow karte hue...
Naaz ne apna cell phone nikala...ek no dail kiya...
Naaz:-"maine pahle hi kaha tha...ke tumhara kaam main kar dungi...par na toh Naina ko kuch hona chahiye...aur na hi Nur aur Rajveer bhai ko...!!! par nahi...tum ne apni aukat dikha di...!!! mere samne mera bhai khun se bheega hua pada hai...aur Naina ko tumhare aadmi utha kar le gaye...!!! ab meri bari hai Yusuf...ab tumhara samna mujh se hoga...!!!ab mujhe Nur ki fiqar nahi...use khuda ke hawale karr rahi hun...
Naaz ne itna keh kar phone cut kiya...
Yusuf hairni se khada...tha...use samajh nahi aa raha tha ke uss ne kya suna...
Yusuf ne kisi ko phone lagaya...
Yusuf:-"Akram...yeh kya suna maine...abhi abhi Naaz ka phone tha aur uss ne kaha ke...
Akram...kafi tezi se drive karr raha tha...uss ke samne...thodi hi duri par voh van thi...jiss me Naina thi...
Akram:- "janab...jo unhone kaha voh sach hai...!!! Maj Rajveer ko goli lagi hai...sayad dil ke kafi kareeb...!!! unhe bachate aate hue Alekh Sharma ko bhi goli lagg gayi...aur Lft Sahani ko bhi...!!! Naina ke sar par vaar karte hue...unn logon ne use behosh kar ke jabardasti utha kar le gaye...!!! hamari samajh em yeh nahi aa raha hai ke ...yeh sab kar koun raha hai...
tabhi aage ja rahi uss van me se...kisi ne ek hand granade phenka...jo ki Akram ke car ke kafi kareeb aa kar gira...aur blast hua...!!! Akram ka hath stearing par se fishla... aur uss ka car...road ke niche chala gaya...
Akram ne dekha...kuch soilders ko le kar capt Gunny uss van ka picha karr rahe the...
Akram ne phone lagaya...phir se yusuf ko...
Akram:-"janab...unhe sayad hum par shaq ho gaya tha...isi liye hum par unhone ek hand granade phenki thi...par hum sab thik hai...jab ki capt Randhawa...kuch soilders ke sath...uss van ka picha karr rahe hain...
Yusuf ne gusse se diwar par ek vaash phenka...
Yusuf:- "koun ho sakta hai...??? koun ho sakta hai jo hum se takrane ki himmat karr raha hai...
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cut to hospital...
kafi chahal-pahal lagi hui thi...charon taraf jaise army ke camandoes hi nazar aa rahe the...
OT ke ander Maj Rajveer the...!!! bullet unn ke dil ke kafi kareeb laga tha...3 docs ka ek group unn k ilaaz me laga hua tha...
OT ke bahar Huda kafi pareshan khada tha...
Shalini...ne Alekh k kandhe par bandage ki...!!! ankhen bheegi hui thi... jaise voh apne dard ko chupane ki bekar me koshish karr rahi ho...
aaj tak use itna dard nahi hua hai...
Alekh:-"aap ro rahi hai...??? kuch nahi hoga Naina ko...aur na hi apne Rajveer sir ko...!!! yakeen rakhiye ma'am...sab thik hoga...!!!"
Shalini ne halke se mushkurate hue Alekh se sar par pyar se hath rakha... khud ko sambhalte hue voh bahar chali gayi...
bahar Neelu khadi thi...
Shalini:-"ander jayo...iss waqt Alekh ko tumhari jarurat hai...
Neelu ne khud ko sambhalte hue Alekh ke kamre me janewali thi...Shalini ne uss ka hath thaam kar roka aur kaha:-"main nahi janti...tum dono ke bich kya chal raha hai...!!! par kafi dino se notice ki hai maine ki...tum jaise uss se dur-dur si rehti ho...!!! voh iss waqt kafi tuta hua hai...khud ko himmat dene ki koshish karr raha hai...uss ka sath do...
Shalini itna keh kar chali gayi...
cut to Yudi...
uss ne apni shirt pahni...aur bass apne room se niklne hi wala tha ke...doc Shalini ko ander aate hue dekha...
Yudi:-"hello Shalini...
Shalini:- "kahan ja rahe ho...???"
Yudi:- "Naina ko dhudhne...!!! main yahan chup chap nahi baith sakta...!!!Maj Rajveer OT me hain...aur Naina...vahan unn logon ke paas...
Shalini:- "calm down...mujhe pata hai...par hamare liye yehi orders hain ke...humain jab tak seniors se kuch bhi order nahi milta...hum kuch nahi kar sakte...
Yudi:- "aur vahan Naina...
Shalini:- "janti hun Yudi...main khud pareshna hun...samajh me nahi aa raha hai ke kya karun...!!! par abhi abhi mujhe Huda ne kaha ke...aur kuch soilders bhi samil hue hain Naina ke search operation me...aur unhe capt Randhawa lead karr rahe hain...
Shalini baithi...ek jagah par...apne hathon se apne chehre ko chupa kar rone lagi...
Shalini:-"main yeh nahi dekh pa rahi hun Yudi...main nahi dekh pa rahi...!!! main khud ek army officer hun...kai baar maine apne sath kaam kiye hue soilders ko dekha hai bullet lagte hue...marte hue...par jo haadhsa aaj hua...voh main bardast nahi karr pa rahi hun...!!! mujhe dard ho raha hai...!!! vahan Rajveer OT ke ander apni zindagi ki jung ladd raha hai...aur yahan Naina ki koi khabar nahi...
Shalini ne sar utha kar Yudi ki taraf dekha...dhire se kaha:-"baht darr lagg raha hai mujhe Yudi...baht darr...
Yudi kareeb aaya...Shalini ke...uss ke chehre ko apne dono hathon se thaamte hue kaha:- "kya yakeen karr sakti hain aap mujh par...???"
Shalini ne dhire se apna sar hila kar 'haan' kaha...
Yudi...uss ke kareeb aa kar dhire se kaha:-"toh phir yakeen kijiye...mera yekeen keh raha hai...ke na toh Rajveer sir ko kuch hoga...aur na hi Naina ko...!!! capt Randhawa jarur kuch achhi news layenge...hamare liye...!!! unhe kamm mat samjhiye...aur phir main, Huda, Alekh, Ali... hum sab hain na...!!!"
Shalini ne kuch kahe bina...sar rakha...Yudi ke seene me...!!! Yudi Shalini ko apni bahon me thaame...console karrne ki koshish karta raha...
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cut to Alekh...
Neelu ne room me aa kar dekha...Alekh ankhen bandh kar ke baitha hua tha...
Neelu ne aage aa kar uss ke kandhe par apna hath rakha...
Alekh ne ankhen kholi...dhire se pucha:- "Rajveer sir kaise hain...???"
Neelu:- "OT me hain...abhi tak opretion chal raha hai...
Alekh:- "aur Gunny...
Neelu:- "unn ki koi khabar nahi...!!! Huda bol raha tha ke...aur kuch soilders ki help se Naina ko dhundha ja raha hai...!!!"
Alekh ne aur kuch kahe bina...baitha raha vahan...
Neelu:- "tum fiqar mat karo...Huda keh raha tha...sab thik hoga...
Alekh ne bas ek nazar dekha...Neelu ki taraf...phir apni ankhen bandh ki...
Neelu ko Alekh ki yeh khamoshi achhi nahi lagg rahi thi...!!! use pata tha ke voh kab ka Naina ko dhudhne ja chuka hota...par Gunny ka spl instruction hai ke Maj Rajveer ko hospital me bhi akele na choda jaye... aur yeh spcly uss ke liye aur Huda ke liye tha yeh order...
Neelu aage aayi...kareeb baithi Alekh ke...uss ka chehra apne dono hathon se thame kaha:-"mera dil kehta hai...Naina jahan bhi hogi thik hogi...
Alekh ne uss ki ankhon me dekha...thoda aage aaya...Neelu ke seene par sarr rakh ke...apni ankhen bandh ki...
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achanak se kisi ki bhari boot ki awaz se Huda ne turn kiya toh dekha...Col Gupta aa rahe the...
Huda...attention dete hue kaha:- "sir...
Col Gupta:-"ease...lft...aur mujhe batayo ke...Maj Rajveer ki condition kya hai...???"
Huda:-"sir abhi tak doc ne kuch bhi nahi kaha hai...
Huda ne OT ke ander dekhte hue kaha...
Col Gupta:-" aur tumhare baki ke sathi...jinhe bullet lagi thi...
Huda:- "sir...Lft Yudi ke kandhe par aur lft Sharma ko bhi bullet lagi thi...par dono thik hai...!!!"
Col Gupta ne apne piche khade dono soilders ko kuch ishara kiya...voh dono... thoda sa piche hatt gaye...
Col Gupta...Huda ke sath chalte hue thoda aage aaye aur kaha:-"Lft Naina Singh ko kidnapped kar liya gaya hai...!!! aur abhi abhi unn logon ka phone bhi aaya tha...!!!"
Huda:- "sir kya unn logon ne kuch maang rakhai hai...???"
Col Gupta:- "nahi...philhal itna kaha ke...agar Lft Singh ko zinda dekhna chahte ho toh... search team ko wapas bula lun...!!! aur baki voh baad me phone kar ke kahenge ke...Lft Singh ke badle unhe kya chahiye...!!!"
Huda:-"par sir...hum aisa bhi toh nahi karr sakte...hum apne search team kaise wapas bula sakte hain...aur...
Col Gupta:-"main tumhari pareshani samjh sakta hun Lft Huda...!!! par humain bhi soch samajh kar chaal chalni chahiye...!!! main nahi chahta ki...jaldbazi me liya hua koi bhi faishle se Lft Singh ke jaan ko koi khatara ho...
Huda ke nazar me abhi bhi sawal tha...
Col Gupta:-"maine unn ki condition maan li hai...!!! par sirf unn ke dikhawe ke liye...!!! maine disguise me apne soilders laga rakhe haina...Lft Singh ke search ke liye...!!! mujhe unn ke dushre call ka intezaar hai...
Huda:-"sir...humain kya karrna hai...
Col Gupta:-"philhal yahan tum aur Lft Alekh...Maj Rajveer ke paas rukoge...baki ke soilders ke sath...aur baki ke sabhi camp me wapas jayenge...jald se jald...
Col Gupta ki nazar padi...ek chair par baithi Naaz aur Pooja par...
unhone Huda se kaha:-"voh Naaz hai na...Maj Shekhawat ki behn...
Huda:-"jee sir...
Col Gupta...aage badhe...Naaz ke kareeb...!!! Pooja uth kar khadi hui aur sath hi Naaz bhi...
Naaz ke sar par hath rakhte hue Col Gupta ne kaha:-"fiqar mat karo beta...Maj Rajveer jaldi hi thik ho jayege...
Naaz ki khamosh nigahain bass Col Gupta ko dekh rahi thi...jabb ki uss ki zuban khamosh thi...
Col Gupta chale gaye...
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paas hi ek word boy khada tha...!!! jaise hi Col Gupta chale gaye...voh apni tez kadmon se lagbhag bhagta hua...store room me pahuncha...
apna phone nikala...
:- "Maj Rajveer ke heart ke kareeb bullet lagi hai...kareeb 2 ghante se docs unn ki operation me lage hue hain...!!! aur unn par nigrani rakhne ke liye...Lft Huda aur Lft Alekh ko yahan rakha gaya hai...!!! maine ek nurse se kuch batain malumat kari hain ke...Maj Rajveer ko saansh lene me taklif ho rahi hai...aur bleeding kafi ho raha hai...!!! unn ke jaan ko kafi khatra hai...!!! Naaz bahr hi baithi hui hai...!!! aur abhi abhi Col Gupta aaye the...aur Lft Huda se kaha...
cut to Yusuf...
voh kafi der tak sunnta raha...phone par aaye uss msg ko...!!! phir phone rakha...aur Akram ki tarf dekh kar kaha:- "jinhone Naina ko kidnaped kiya hai...unhone Col Gupta se contact kiya tha...!!! par meri samajh me yeh nahi aa raha hai ke...Naina ko kyoun kidnapped kiya gaya...!!! uss se kisi ko kya chahiye...???"
Akram ki pareshani uss ke chehre par thi:-"kahin voh bhi toh usi chiz ke talash me nahi...jise hum dundh rahe hain...matlab voh sare documents...jiss me Nadir saha k sare identification aur sare information hain...???"
Yusuf:- "ho sakta hai akram...!!! sayad koi humare sath game khelne ki koshish karr raha hai...!!!"
achanak ek phone aaya...Yusuf ke no par...
Yusuf ne dekha...'unknown' no tha...
dushre side se koi bol raha tha:- "janab Yusuf hi bol rahe hain na...
Yusuf:-"aap koun...
:- "bande ka koi khaash pehchan toh nahi hai...bass itna hi keh sakta hun ke...aap ki Naina hamari kabze me hai...
Yusuf:- "koun bol raha hai...???"
:- "aap humain nahi jante hain janab...par hum aap ko behad achhi tarah se jante hain...!!! humain pata hai ke aap kya dhudh rahe hain...!!! aap ki jarurat hamare paas hai aur hamari jarurat aap ke paas hai...!!! isi liye dono ka milna jyada jaruri ho jata hai...
Yusuf:-"humain Naina chihiye kisi bhi keemat par...bolo kya keemat hai tumhari...
:-"paison ki fiqar humain nahi hai janab...hum toh kisi aur chiz ki maang karne aaye hain...
Yusuf:- "toh kya chahiye tumhe...??"
:- "aap se mulakat...
Yusuf:-"matlab...
:-"hum bhi aap hi ki tarah sipahi hain janab...!!! ashle (ammunition) ki jarurat hai...!!! aur voh bhi baht...!!! jo ki humain sirf aap hi de sakte hain...!!! lekin humain janab Nadir saha se bhi milna hai...
Yusuf:-"koun Nadir saha...hum kisi Nadir Saha ko nahi jante...
:-"khair...agar aap hum se Nadir saha ko nahi milwana chahte ...toh na milwaye...!!! par hum unn ki izzat hamesha karte rahenge...!!! apne mission ke liye jo kurbani voh dete aaye hain...hum use aage badhate rahenge...!!! humain bass...kuch ashla chahiye...take aane wale dino me hindusthan ke kuch metro cites me hamla kar saken...iss ke liye hum aap ko pura rakam bhi denge...!!! aur rahi baat Lft Singh ki...toh voh humari taraf se janab Nadir Saha ke liye ek tauhfa hoga...!!!"
Yusuf:-"kya hum mil sakte hain...???"
:- "kyoun nahi janab...hum jaldi milenge...!!! par abhi Lft Singh ke search me puri army juti hui hai...humain thoda waqt chahiye...!!! aur phir Lft Singh ko apne kabze me rakh kar hum indian army se kuch apna hishab bhi toh khatam karenge...!!! khuda-hafiz...janab...hum aap ko phir se phone karenge...
phone cut ho gaya...
Yusuf baitha sofe par...Akram ko dekh kar kaha:-"hamare hi tarah ko sipahi hai yeh bhi... jo kashmir ke azadi ke liye ladd raha hai...aur...
Yusuf ne voh sab kuch kaha...jo abhi abhi uss en phone par suna...
Akram:- "aap ko yakeen hai uss par...???"
Yusuf:- "nahi...tabhi toh maine use akele milne bulaya hai...!!! aur voh jaldi milne aayega...yeh bhi kaha hai...uss ne...!!!"
Akram:-"hum tabhi kuch faishla karr payenge...jab voh hum se milne aayega...!!!"
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Kashmir ka ek baht hi purana gaon...jahan se high way kafi dur hai...
charon taraf bass sanatta...barfile pahadiyon ke bich me bass 40-50 ghar honge...
electricity toh hai par low voltage me electri bulb ki roshni naa ke barabar ki thi...
raat ke andheron ko chirti hui...ek badi si van aa kar ruki...ek ghar ke paas...aur uss ke sath hi aa kar ruke kuch aur van bhi...
jiss ke ander se nikle kafi sare log...mask pahne hue...hathon me hathiyar...
ek van ke ander se ek aadmi ne Naina ko apne bahon me uthaye...uss ghar ke ander gaya...
kuch log uss ek ander gaye...aur unn ke jane ke baad...uss ghar ka bada sa darwaza...band ho gaya...
baki bahr khade log...us gaon ke baki ke gharo me chale gaye...vans ko chupa diya gaya...
cut to Naina...
Naina ko bahon me thame...voh aadmi...ek kamre me ghusa...
Naina ko bed par sulaya...aur turn kar ke dekha...
do aadmi khade the...jo uss ke sath the...ek ladki bhi khadi thi...
:-"inn ka khayal rakhna...inhe kisi chiz ki jarurat ho toh de dena...!!! vaise yeh jyada zidd toh nahi karengi...par agar jyada zidd ki bahr jane ki...toh bahr se darwaza bandh kar dena...!!!"
uss ladki se itna keh kar voh aadmi chala gaya...
uss ke ek sathi ne kaha:-"aap ke pair me goli lagi thi...!!! aap nichewale ghar me baitho...maine doctor ko bulaya hai...wo abhi aate hi honge...!!!"
dat man:-"pahle doc ko Lft singh ko dikhayo...kahin chot jyada toh nahi lagi...phir main chala jayunga doc ke paas...
uss ke sathi ne uss ki baat maan kar chala gaya...
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cut to hospital...
OT se Maj Rajveer ko ek stretcher par dale...bahar laya gaya...aur turant ICU me shift kiay gaya...
Huda paas hi khada tha...Maj Rajveer ke chehre ko kafi gaor se dekhta hua...!!! Alekh kareeb gaya...Maj Rajveer ke...dekha unn ko phir wapas Huda ke paas aa gay...
par Naaz...vohin baithi rahi...aur dur se hi Maj Rajveer ko dekh rahi thi...
uss ke paas hi Pooja baithi hui thi...uss ne kaha:- "ja kar Rajveer sir ko ek baar dekh lo...
Naaz:- "himmat nahi ho rahi...
Pooja:-"himmat rakho yaar...hamare Rajveer sir ko kuch nahi hoga...!!!iss tarh se kai baar unhe bullet lagi hai...aur voh thik bhi ho gaye hain...dekhna hamare Rajveer sir... baht jaldi thik ho jayenge...aur Naina ko dhudh kar wapas le aayenge...
Naaz ne Pooja ki tarf dekha...jo bass roye ja rahi thi...par Naaz ko himmat dene ki koshish karr rahi thi...
Naaz:- "pata hai...ki bhiaya jaldi thik ho jayenge...aur Naina bhi jaldi hamare sath hi hogi...
uss ne halke se mushkurate hue Pooja ke anshun pochte hue kaha...
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cut to Naina...
uss ne dhire se ankhen kholi...sar me abhi bhi halka sa dard tha...!!! vo uthi...aur bed par baith kar charon taraf dekhne lagi...
chota sa kamra tha...ek halka sa lamp jall raha tha...!!! ek bada sa sofa pada hua tha...aur uss ke samne ek center table...
bed ke side par ek chota sa table tha...jiss par ek water jug aur ek glass tha...aur paas hi kuch magazines pade hue tha...
bed ke kuch hi duri par ek chota sa window tha...jiss ke kaanch ki khidki thi...aur bahar sirf andhera nazar aa raha tha...
Naina ne samne dekha...ek aur chota sa kamra tha...sayad washroom hoga...!!! Naina ne uss room ke main door ki tarf dekha...jo ki bandh tha...
cut to hospital...
Naaz abhi bhi vohin baithi hui thi...
doc aaye aur kaha:-" Maj ke paas sirf ek hi inshan reh sakta hai...!!! philhaal voh thik hai par 48 hours ke liye unhe observation me rakha gaya hai...!!! kafi bleeding hui thi... aur halat abhi bhi nazuk bani hui hai...!!! par humain bharosha hai ke...voh jaldi thik ho jayenge...!!!"
Huda:- "doc...kya Rajveer sir ki behn unn ke paas baith sakti hai...???"
uss ne Naaz ki tarf ishara karte hue kaha...
doc:-"kyoun nahi...jarur...!!! par itna dhyan rakhiye ki...unhe koi pareshani na ho...!!! vaise bhi ek nurse hamesha unn ki nigrani me rahegi...
Neelu aayi Alekh ke paas...Alekh ne use dekha...phir kaha:-"tu Ali, Pooja, Yudi aur Shalini maam ke sath wapas camp chali ja...!!! main aur Huda...yahin rahenge...aur Naaz bhi...!!! Naaz toh kisi bhi keemat par wapas jane ke liye taiyar nahi hogi...jab tak ki Rajveer sir ko hosh nahi aa jata...!!!"
Neelu:- "Naina ki koi khabar...???"
Alekh:-"nahi...voh Gunny ustad gaye hain apni team ko le kar use duhdhne...jarur kuch na kuch khabar toh milegi hi...!!! par Rajver sir ke jaan ko bhi khatra hai...isi liye hum dono ki duty yehi par hai...!!! par Naina...
Alekh chup raha...Huda ne uss ke kandhe par hath rakh ke bola:-"tension kyun leta hai...Naina thik hai...aur ek baar Rajveer sir ko hosh aa jane de...hum ek ghante me Naina ko dhundh kar bahar nikalenge...
Alekh...halke se mushkuraya...!!! Huda...gaya...Naaz ke paas...dhire se kaha:- "tum ja kar sir ke sath raho...
Naaz ne ek pal ke liye use dekha...aur uth kar ICU me chali gayi...
Huda:-"Pooja...tu wapas sabb ke sath camp chali ja...
Pooja:-"par...
Huda:- "samjha kar yaar...yeh order hai...upar se...!!! aur tu hi soch...agar Naina ki koi bhi news mila toh camp me bhi toh koi hum me se hona chahiye...!!! yahan Rajveer sir ki security ke liye hum hain...par vahan Naina...
Pooja:- "main samajh rahi hun yaar...
Huda:- "toh phir jaa...aur baki sab ko samjha kar wapas camp me chali ja...
Pooja:-"hmm...tu sahi bol raha hai...
Pooja uth kar chali gayi...!!! uss ke piche piche Neelu bhi jane lagi...phir kuch sochte hue uss ne turn kiya...Alekh ke kareeb aayi...
Alekh use dekh kar bola:-"kya hua...
Neelu:-"mera dil kehta hai...Rajveer sir jaldi hi thik ho jaynge...aur Naina bhi jaldi hi mil jayegi...!!! aur phir dekhana...sab kuch thik ho jayega...pahle ki tarah...!!! par kuch toh badlega...aur voh hai hamra rishta...
Alekh ne hairani se Neelu ko dekhta raha...
Neelu:-"main phir se khud ko ek mauka dena chahti hun...tumhare liye jeena chahti hun...!!! ek naye rishte ki shuruwat karte hue...tumhari bann na chahti hun...
Alekh ki ankhon me khushi dekhi...Neelu ne...!!! thoda kareeb aa kar use hug kiya...aur dhire se use kiss karte hue kaha:-"love you...
cut to Yudi n all...
Yudi:- "main kahin nahi ja raha...
Shalini:- "meri kuch bhi samajh me nahi aa raha hai...
Ali:- "abhi abhi Huda bhai ne kaha ke Rajveer sir ki security ke liye baki ke soilders ke sath unn ki aur Alekh bhai ki duty yehi par hai...!!! aur Gunny ustaad Naina ki search team me hain...!!! humain camp isi liye wapas jana hai...kyoun ke agar Gunny ustad ko achank se hamari jarurat padi...toh hum unhe join kar saken...!!!"
Yudi:-"voh sab toh thik hai...par kahin se kuch toh news mile yaar...
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cut to Naina...
Naina bed se niche utri...wash room ki taraf gayi...!!! ek bucket me pani tha...Naina ne thoda sa pani apne chehre para dala...usse achha lag raha tha...
wapas bahar aayi...dekha...kamre ek kone me...ek mirror tha...aur uss ke paas hi ek chota sa hand bag...
Naina ne use khola toh dekha...kuch kapde the...uss ne nazar uthayi toh mirror par uss ki nazar gayi...!!! voh kareeb gayi mirror ke...lamp ke halki si roshni me bhi voh khud ko uss dulhan ki lavash me dekh rahi thi...!!! aaj voh khud ko kafi khubshurat lagg rahi thi...
uss ne apni maang me dekha...sindoor abhi bhi chamak raha tha...gale ki mangalsutra me...uss ke Rajveer ka sparsh abhi bhi voh mehshush karr rahi thi...
uss ne dhire se mushkuraya...
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Naina khidki ke paas aayi...bahar jhanka...!!! kafi andhera tha...par halki si roshni me uss ne dekha...chote bade ghar the aas paas...!!! baht dur barfili pahadi nazar aa rahi thi...kisi majbut chattan ki tarh khade the...
uss ne ankhen bandh ki...Maj Rajveer ka mushkurata hua chehra uss k nazar me aaya...
Tu Meri Dil ki Duwaa
Tu Hai Meri Har Kushi
Shamil Hai Tu Ruh Mein
Tu Hai Meri Jindigi...
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Bus Tu Nazar Aaye re..
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Naina phir se wapas aayi...sofe par baithi...ankhen bandh ki...
use phir se Maj Rajveer ka chehra dikhayi de raha tha...
use sindoor pehnate hue...
use mangalsutra pehnate hue...
akhiri baar...unhe jab bullet lagi thi...aur Naina unn ke paas bhaag ker aa rahi thi... tabhi kisi ne uss par vaar kiya tha...aur Naina behosh ho gayi thi...
Naina ne ankhne kholi...samne vohi halki si lamp ki lite use nazar aa rahi thi...uss ne dhire se kaha:-"love you Raj...plz jaldi aa jayiye...
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Armaanon Ki.. Bheed Main,
Teri Hi Hain Justjoo
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next day...
cut to hospital...
ICU se ek word boy bahar aaya...!!! dekha Huda aur Alekh baith kar kuch baat karr rahe the...uss ke kanon me bass...'Naina' ka word hi pada...
voh chalta hua...store room ki taraf gaya...
ander se uss ne kisi ko apne cell se phone kiya:- "janab...Rajveer ko abhi tak hosh nahi aaya hai...!!! par doc ne kaha hai ke achhi progress hai...
Yusuf:-"tum ne Rajveer aur Naaz ko dekha...
word boy:-"jee janab...vaise ander jana toh kis ko bhi allowed nahi hai...!!! par din me do baar saaf-safai ke liye bheja jata hai...!!! toh main abhi abhi dekh kar aa raha hun...!!! Rajveer behosh pada hai...aur Naaz unn ke kareeb baithi hui hai...
Yusuf:-"hmmm...aage ki khabar mujhe dete rehna...aur agar Naina ki bhi koi khabar mile toh bhi dena...par ankhen khuli rakho...mujhe sare info jald se jald chahiye...!!!"
word boy:-"jee janab...
kehte hue uss ne phone cut kiya...
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raat ke kareeb 10 bajj rahe the...!!! ek jeep aa kar ruki...usi ghar ke bahar jahan Naina ko rakha gaya tha...!!!
uss jeep me se ek shakhsh nikla...aur ghar ke ander gaya...!!! main door par teen baar dastak ki toh ek ladki ne door khola...!!! voh ander gaya...!!! chehre par lamp ki halki si lite uss par padi...!!!
chamakta hua chera...face par halki dadhi aur muchain...hathon me ek gun...!!! local kashmirio ki tarah kapde the uss ke...aue ek chota sa shwal bhi dal rakha tha uss en apne upar...
voh ladki boli:-"voh kuch thik se kha nahi rahi...!!! maine kal raat se koshish ki thi... par voh thik se kuch nahi kha rahi...aur na hi kuch batin karti hai...!!! aaj subah sirf ek glass juice piya tha...bass...!!! chup chap baithi rehti hai...!!!"
dat man:-"aur unhe chot toh nahi lagi...
dat girl:-"nahi...chot halka sa tha...
dat man:-"abhi kya karr rahi hai voh...
dat girl:-"so rahi hain...!!! main jab pani rakhne gayi thi...toh voh so chuki thi...
voh aadmi seedhiyon se chadhta hua...upar pahuncha...Naina ke kamre me...!!! dhire se darwaza khola...aur ander dakhil hua...
Naina bed par soyi hui thi...abhi bhi uss ne dulhan ka livash pehn rakha tha...
uss aadmi ne darwaza ander se bandh kiya...aur Naina ke kareeb aaya...!!! Naina kafi gehri neend me so rahi thi...!!!
uss ne uss lamp se Naina ke chehre ko gaur se dekhne laga...
Naina ke chehre par bikhri hui zulfe...uss ne hatayi...!!! dhire se Naina ke kareeb aate hue uss ne Naina ke forhead par kiss kiya...
par uss ke soch ke opposite...achanak Naina ne use khinch kar bed par dala...
voh hairan tha...iss achank hamle se...
phir Naina bed par baithi...aur apne dono hathon se uss ke chehre ki dadhi-muchai.. ek sath khicnh kar bahar nikali...
voh aadmi kafi zorr se chillaya..."Ahhh..."
Naina:-"aap me yeh dadhi muchain achhi nahi lagti...aur vaise bhi voh mujhe chubhti hai...!!! aur itna late kyoun kiya...kab se main aap ka wait karr rahi thi...aap ko pata hai na...??? kam se kam ek phone toh karr hi sakte the na...main kitna pareshan thi aap ke liye...
Maj Rajveer ne pahle apne cheeks sehlaye...phir Naina ko iss tarh se gusse me dekha...halke se mushkurate hue...use apne kareeb khinch...apne seene ke kareeb la kar kaha:- "uss kambakhat word boy ki nazar mujh par thi...toh kaise aata...!!! upar se Gunny bhi late aaya...!!! use maine apni jagah par sone ka order diya...Naaz ko uss ke paas usi position me bithaya...use ek glycerine ki bottle thamayi...aur tab ja kar bahr aaya hun...!!!aur yahan pahunchne me mujhe pure 2 ghante lagg gaye...tum toh yahan aaram se thi...vahan kya ho raha tha...tumhe kya pata..."
Naina:-"vohi toh jann na chahti thi...par Salim khan ne kal se apna chehra nahi dikhaya...
Maj Rajveer:-"bichara dara hua hai...kafi zorr se mara tha na tumhe uss ne...use darr hai ke kahin tum badla lene ke mood me uss ki dhulai na kar do...aur tum ne kal se khana kyoun khaya...???"
Naina:-"aap ki tension lagi hui thi...dil hi nahi karr raha tha kuch khane ko...!!! Alekh aur Yudi kaise hain...???"
Maj Rajveer:-"maze me...!!! bullet Alekh ko lagi hai...isi liye voh Neelu se faida utha raha hai aur Yudi ko bullet lagi hai...par voh himmat Shalini ko de raha hai...
Naina hassi...iss baar...apne chehre par gire halke balon ko piche hatati hui boli:-" aap ko pata hai maine aap ko kitna miss kiya...
Maj Rajveer ne lamp ki uss halki si roshni me Naina ke chehre ko dekha...phir dhire se uss ke chehre ko apni ungliyo se brush karte hue pucha:-"kitna miss kiya...
Naina ne ek sudden feelings apne ander mehshush ki...aisa nahi tha ke voh pehli baar Maj Rajveer ke kareeb aayi thi...par aaj kuch aur hai...kuch khaash...time seemed to have stopped for both of dem...they kept looking at each other...
aaj uss ke samne uss ke admirer hain...uss ke hubby bann kar...jinhe voh hamesha se pana chahti to thi...par apni chahat ko pehchan nahi payi thi...
Maj Rajveer...jo Naina ko...apne kareeb thaame...apne dil ki zuban ko samajhne ki koshish karr arhe the...n he pulled her closer and wrapped her in his strong arms...
"haan...ye meri naina hi hai...dulhan ki jode me...meri Naina...
Naina dhire se aage badhi...Maj Rajveer ke neck ke paas apna chehra chupaya...
Maj Rajveer ne dhire se kaha:-" ab bhi kuch nahi kehna...
Naina ne dhire se kaha:- "LOVE YOU...RAJ...
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