ANKAHI...{LRL-RN} #2 last Ud wd EPI n PG 100(21/11 - Page 21

Originally posted by: nayant

Awsome...

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

yeh main kya dekh rahi hoon????😲 😲 😲 SHAITAN Priya ki Shaitani...😆

Yeh ANKAHI hi hai na??? I mean... PRIYA ki fic??😲 tujhe koi shaq hai kya...??? hai toh phir se padh le...dekh aisi spl bakwaas chizain sirf meri hi fic me tujhe milengi...aur kahin nahi...😆

toh itna long update kaise? kaise?? kaise??? 😲😛😆 mujhe background pe LRL ki title song sunayi de raha hai tere iss sawal par...😆

anyways...love you for that dear !! 😃 love you for that...hadh hai yaar...kabhi to bina matlab ke bhi pyar jataya kar...😆tujhe pata hai main tujhe kitna pyar karti hun...phir bhi...😛

aur update ke toh kya kehne!! ekdam jhakkas !! 😃 he he he...Thank you...😃

Bechare Rajveer sir ! 😆 😆 😆 apni cadet se pyaar karne ke side effects toh unhe bhugatne hi honge na ! 😆 kabhi Ankahi ka seq banane ka mood kiya na toh main jarur ek naya fic likhungi..."Shaadi ke Side Effect"😆

Liked the whole station scene...Alekh Neelu waala bhi and ofcourse! RN scene bhi ! Aakhir Rajveer ne dikha hi diya ki he can very well handle the things...😛 kabhi kabhi students ke samne proof bhi karna padta hai ke unn ke teachers unn k teacher kyoun hain...😆

Naina ka jaldbaazi mein shaadi karne ka reason...bhalehi funny lage...par hai toh sachchai ke kareeb na?😛😉 he he he...😆

Ab likhnewaali tu hai toh BIDAAI ko bhi jyaada der tak emotional kaise rehne degi...😆 😆 sahi bola...jab meri bari aayegi...kya hoga pata nahi... par abhi thoda sa toh hass hi sakti hun...😆dont mind Pri...filhaal uss waale scene se thodisi emotional attachment hai na...😛haan...samajh sakti hun...par pic nahi hai mere paas... uss scene ka...kaash voh hota...😛

And END was just WHAT I EXPECTED...! shocked??? 😲 he..he..he.. par pata nahi kyun mujhe jabse yeh shaadi kaand start hus hai tabse aise lag raha tha ki aisa hi kuch hoga... mujhe pata hai aur tune mujhe dhamki bhi di thi ke 'agar raj ne apne mission ke liye naina ka ishtemal kiya hoga toh Pri main tujhe chodungi nahi'...😆

maine tujhe bataya nahi...kyunki fir tu usse badal deti...😛 😛 😛 😆 nahi tune bataya tha...par tujhe pata hai mujhe door ki ghanti baja kar bhaag jana achha lagta hai...yehi samajh le ki...kuch hai yahan par...jo sayad achha bhi hai aur thoda bura bhi...😆😛😉

chal...abhi update soon...soon boletoh SOON !! kya kare...itn padhke bhi mann nahi bhara...😊 thik hai...phir se jaldi hi pakkayungi...aur iss baar toh pakki baat hai...😆

Originally posted by: golu_1677

A superb update... Thank you dear...😃

Raj n Naina married good... yeh toh GOOD hi hoga na...😛

But whr hv u ended who has kidnapped Naina and Rajveer injured... kya karun...kuch dhamaka bhi toh jaruri tha...😉

Pls try n cont soon ...

Originally posted by: nainaahsingh

wow priya now thats call an LOOONNNGGGEEESSSTTT UPATE!!!!...WAY TO GO!!!!...ab itna laaamba update tha to comment bhi lamba he mele ga u deserve it!!!👏👏👏

Originally posted by: ridhz21

Hi Priya hiiieee Radhika...😃

Update was awesome...loved it Thank youu...😃
Pooja ne watt lagadi major ki 😆...Rajveer handle Pooja smartly...KMA mein game khelte the 😆😆 Maj ko kisi bhi tarah bachna jo tha...isi liye kuch bhi bol diya...😆
Station RN scene 😍...aur Naveen already decide raj n naina marriage 😳Naveen ne dur ki soch rakhi thi...😆...aur sab ko ek saath ullu bana diya 😆 😆 tabhi toh rajveer unn sab ka teacher hai...😆
Mehendi scene n secret RN meeting ..loved it thank you...😃
Loved Quick Shadi😳 actully shadi scene ko describe karne me main baht buri hun...isi liye short cut me khatam kar diya...😛
Last part 😲 😲...shadi ke baad action...😆 😆 aap aisi pehli reader hain jo action scene par hass rahi hai...iss ka matlab aap mujh par trust karti hain...!!! lekin baki ke readers ko dekh lo...sabhi gusse se laal-peele ho rahe hain...😆
enjoyed the update
Lrl jokes loved them
thx for pm
Update soon

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Pata hai itni lamba update dekh kar mein tumhe double thanks kehne wali thi, par ending padhkar, ek wapas le liya.😉 ye sahi nahi hai...ek toh maine ghanto baithe itna bada kaarnama kar dikhya... upar se daant bhi main hi sunu...not fare...😭😆

Keh kar faida nahi, par how could you stop at such a point😔. ud ka length dekho...ek hi post me nahi aa paya...isi liye mujhe ek hi ud k do parts karne pade...aur jyada likhti toh ek aur part banana padta...aur kai kai readers toh first part me hi so gaye the...!!! naam nahi loongi...par unhone mujhe phone par kaha hai yeh baat...😆RN ki shaad, sabhi readers ka who sapna hai joh tumne complete kiya, par saath mein itna bada heart attack bhi de diya. Raj has been shot and koi naina ko kidnap kar ke le gaya😡...Yaar abhi toh shaadi hui thi, aur itna bada jatka. main kya karun...story ki demand thi ke ek dhamaka hona chahiye...😛

Well the update was too good👏. Aur itne lambe update ka reply bhi lamba hi milega.😉 okay...mujhe vaise bhi lambe comments achhe lagte hain...😃

Pooja ka yeh reaction toh aana hi tha.😆 Akhir uski best friend aur faourite teacher ki shaadi hai. Raj is feeling very embarrassed because of Pooja's excitement and tries his best to stop her. He does not want every one to know about his and naina's wedding in order to ensure naina's security. par Pooja ko koun samjhaye...😆

Raj and naina make a silly excuse to all the other officers to cover up pooja's actions😃. aur karr bhi kya sakte the...dono...😆

Raj gets angry 😡on pooja for behaving like this but than realizes that uss ne shayad over react kar diya. But with his charm, who bahut hi aasani se pooj ko mana bhi leta hai. Aur Raj ko apni hone wali saali ke nakhre toh uthane hi padenge. 😉 haan...vo toh hai...😛

Raj ko pata hai ki yeh toh shuruat hai, uski band bajne ki.😆 haan...kyoun ke aaye din uss ke cadets kuch na kuch uss ke sath karte hi rehte hain...😆

Alekh loves neelu very much and wants her to accept him and their relationship. Neelu confesses that she is not able to forget her mistake and is still feeling guilty. Alekh wants her to forget her past and move on in life. ab dekhna yeh hai ke dono kab iss ki suruwat karte hain...😃

Raj badi hi chalaki se naina ko alag le jata hai so that his students would not disturb them. 😳Naina finds it very funny that Raj is hiding from his students kyunki who Raj ko tease kar lagte hain. Naina ko raj sharmate hua bahut hi cute lag raha tha.(kisse nahi lagta yaar😉 ha ha ha...sahi hai...😆). Both of them feel nostalgic thinking about naveen and how he used to joke that he would get RN married. They both wish that Naveen would have been there to see his dream come true.😍 naveen ne toh yu hi bola hoga sayad...par maj ne seriously le liya tha...aur aaj pura bhi kar diya...😆

Raj ne apne cadets ko accha ullu banaya?proving that they should not try to mess with him. They were all too shocked to even react. 😆 aur karr bhi kya sakte the...ullu jo bann gaye the...aur voh bhi din me...😆

Naina's parents are confused about why Raj and naina have decided to get married so soon. Her father is upset because he will not be able to arrange a grand wedding for his daughter. Naina understands their feelings but she does not want to worry them by telling the truth and so makes up the most full-proof reason that she can think of.😉 Hearing about Raj's mission her parents give in easily. ab naina ko kuch na kuch keh kar iss baat ko ghumana tha...bass uss ne vohi karr diya...😃

Shalini tells Raj about Yudi's feelings for her. Raj shalini ko samjata hai ki she should give life a chance and keep her mind and heart open. 😊 ab raj toh sab ke prob solve karne ke liye hamesha free of cost mil hi jata hai...😆

Gunny tries to find out about Naaz's past. He knows that naaz kisi problem se lad rahi hai and so he advices her to share her worries with Raj or him. He knows that she is good at heart. par Naaz kya karne wali hai...yeh toh koi bhi nahi janta...😉

Naina wanted to go and meet Raj, par huda aur alekh naina ki mom ko yeh bata dete hain and so she is not able to go.😡 dono ko peetna achha lagta hai...maj rajveer se...😆

Pooja does not want naina to see her mehandi so that she can write Rajveer's name on her hands. Everyone teases naina during the mehandi ceremony and all she could do was to blush while thinking about Raj.😳

Naina is missing naveen very much on this special day of her life. She does not believe that Raj has actually come to her room. Raj tells her that this was all Huda and Alekh's plan to send him there. 😆 ha ha ha...ab Raj toh khud aata nahi...isi liye ye plan banana pada uss ke cadets ko...😆

The scene where Huda and alekh are trying to teach raj about what he should do on the night before his wedding was too funny. Raj buri tarah se phaas gaya hai apne cadets ke beech.🤣 aur kuch karr bhi nahi pa raha tha...😆

Naaz is trying to make sure that Yusuf will not create any trouble in RN's wedding.

Naina and Raj are trying to convey their feelings through their eyes during the marriage ceremony. This moment is very special for them and they want this feeling to sink in that finally they have become one.🥳 aur finally maine shadi bhi karwa di...😃😛

Naina aur uske parents ko bidaai ke waqt rote dekh kar😭, Raj sabko hassa deta hai. He promises her parents that they will be back soon after they finish their mission to spend some time with them. And they all leave after taking blessings from naina's parents.

Raj aur naina par hamla agar Yusuf ne nahi kiya to kis ne kiya hai😲. Hope that naina will be safe and that no one else has been hurt. Am sure that tum Raj ko kuch nahi hone dogi. Par itna bada heart attack dene ke saza yeh hai ki app ko next update jaldi kar na padega? try karr arhi hun...jaldi ud karne ki...pakka toh nahi keh sakti par kal sayad ud karungi...😊

so will be waiting.

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Sorry yaar i know very well that i am so much late but kya karoon mai ek jagah rahoon to theek hai par aaj kal mai IF pe kahan kahan paayi jaati hoon mujhe bhi nahi pata. koi baat nahi...😃

Here comes reply for page 8 i think 😉 😉 😉

Good update. 👏 👏 👏 Thank you...

Naaz ne acche se Yusuf ko samjha diya ki us k peeche nahi pade jyada kyounki vo jo bhi kar rahi hai soch samajh kar hi kar rahi hai par mujhe ye samajh me nahi aaya ki us ne aisa kya suna tha vapas jaane par jo us ko ab kuch bhi nahi samajh aa raha hai. voh toh sayad 2-3 uds me pata chal hi jayega...

Kahin in logon ne Noor ko maar to nahi daala hai na? Gunny bhi Naaz ko kai baar peeche se bualata raha par us ne suna nahi. Baat kya hai aur aakhir aisa kya ho gaya? pata nahi kya hua hai...tu thoda wait to kar le...

Ye Huda aur Alekh bhi na humesha bacchon jaise ladte rehte hain. bachhe hi toh hai...voh toh khelte khelte KMA me aa gaye the...aur soliders bann gaye...

Shalu ko finally Yudi ki feelings k baare me pata chal hi gaya. Ab Yudi khud to kabhi keh nahi paata accha hi hua ki vo dairy padh li us ne. Shalu ka apni jagah aisa react karna normal hai, par Yudi bhi sahi keh raha hai ki vo change nahi kar paayegi us ki feelings ko apne liye. dono hi apni apni jagah sahi hai...par mujhe hi kuch galat karna padega...😆

Koi bahut bada kadam uthana hai Major Rajveer ko,isi k liye itne saare baatein apne seniors se discuss kar rahe hain. sayad pata nahi...😕

Naina ko apne saath le to gaye itne acchi jagah par itna soch me gum rahenge to jo kehna hai vo kaise kahenge? Sahi kaha Naina ne ki kaun jyada beautiful hai aakhir vo lake ko hi dekhe jaa rahe the, had hai itne sundar ladki bagal me baithe hue hai aur in ko jara bhi khayal nahi? Ye bhi koi baat hai. maj rajveer aise hi hain...

Ab jab Naina ne vapas jaane ki zid pakad li to accha hi hua ki finally major sahab kuch pooch to paaye Naina se. kuch nahi baht kuch puch liya...

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

That was really unfair... ab kya ho gaya...

I mean update on pg. 16 short nahi tha but jab RN itne acche mood me the to blast hone ki kya jaroorat thi? jarurat unhe nahi mujhe thi... bina koi dhamaka kiye mujhe achha nahi lagta...

Anyways start se bolti hoon. Finally Raj proposed her for marriage and Naina said yes but not directly. thoda sa hairan thi bass...aur kuch nahi...

Ye Naina bhi na, jab Raj bol sakta hai to vo kyoun nahi? kyoun ke maine mana kiya tha... Song was good and it was appropriate for the situation. Thanks...

Raj sun na chahta tha but Naina to sach me 18th century ki heroine ki tarah hai jo kehti hai mere aakhon me padh lo, bina kahe samajh jaao. Sharmaa k najrein jhuka lo, ab batao aaj kal kahin aisa chalta hai kya? mere fic me chalta hai...ayr aaj tak toh kisi ne bhi complaint nahi ki hai...na toh Raj ne aur na hi Naina ne aur na hi mere kisi Readers ne... arey haan...tune ki hai...ha ha ha...😆

Village ki gals bhi is se jyada smart hoti hain.naina village ki nahi hai na...isi liye...smart nahi hai...par pyari hai...Ab bhai dhabe ka khaana to mujhe bhi pasand hai accha kiya Naina vahan le gayi aur aashirvaad bhi mil gaya shaadi k pehle hi. jarurat thi...iss ki...

Par ye blast kaise hua? Naaz ka gussa obvious tha kyounki is se us ka plan chaupat ho raha tha. Par mujhe samajh nahi aaya ye kiya kis se agar Yusuf ne nahi kiya to? pata nahi...main pata kar ke batati hun...

Finally shaadi ho rahi hai aur Raj to sach me itna sharmeela hai ki sab ko apni shaadi k liye invite bhi nahi kar paa raha hai theek se directly ticket thama raha hai. aur karr bhi kya sakte hain maj...apne students ko apni shadi me bula rahe hain...aur shadi bhi apne ek student se karr rahe hain toh thoda sharmana toh hoga hi...😆

Itne sharam aati hai ki kisi se kuch kaha hi nahi jaata us se. Yudi to sach me stupid hai kuch guess bhi nahi kar paa raha tha to sahi kaha Alekh ne ki abhi bada kahan hua hai.

All know that Naina and Raj are getting married. Pooja to kabhi nahi badal sakti humesha aise hi rahegi. kuch chizain na hi badle toh achha hai...

But Yudi sach me itna to bada ho hi gaya hai ki apne aur Shalu k relation ko sab se acche se samajh raha hai aur samjha raha hai. Sach me ab ye vo Yudi nahi raha. haan mujhe pappu ko thoda bada banana pada...

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

Newton's third law says :-"Everyaction has an equal and opposite reaction"😊 yeppi...mujhe yaad hai...😆

Reaction 1:- Wow, itna lamba update...Priya di is great..😛 yeh main janti hun...kuch naya bol...😆

Reaction 2:- Chalo Alekh and Neelu ki problem to solve ho gayi.😛 tune hi toh kaha ke main gr8 hun...toh solve kaise na karti...😆

Reaction 3:- Huda and Yudi...lage raho huda, naina nahi, to yudi sahi..😉 mujhe kisi ko akele dekhna achha nahi lagta...😆

Reaction 4:- Gunny and Naaz scene was too cute..😃 hona hi tha...dono jo cute hain...aur padhnewale toh unn dono se jyada cute hain...

Reaction 5:- Raj ki shadi hogai...Vidushi crying😭...raj kisi aur ka kaise ho sakta hai...😳😉 tu dur reh raj se...age dekhi hai khud ki...raj teri jaisi bachhi jo ki school me hai uss ke bare me kaise soch sakta hai...use jail me kyoun bhejna chahti hai...😆

Reaction 6:- Ye kya tha??????Shaadi hui nahi ki barbaadi shuru😲..(Priya di ande-tamatar ki barsaat se bachne ki koshish kar rahee hain, jo never satisfied readers unpe barsa rahe hain.😆 nahi...main bachne ki koshish nahi karr arhi hun...tumhe sayad nahi pata anda aur tamatar dono hi skin ke liye achhe hote hain...😆)

Reaction 7:- Update jaldi kar deejiye,mera soch soch ke bura haal ho raha hai.😊... aur mera type karr karr ke...kyu ke next part me phir se galiyan padegi...😆

Reaction 8:- on LRL Jokes:- Hamara Raj to bachpan se hi genius hai, dekha nahi usne kaise train miss karwa dee...⭐️ koi shaq...😉

luv

Vidushi

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

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