NEW FF- CHIMERA- Part 19 pg 140- SEASON FINAL - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
safi i was so upset that u r ending "REMORSE" and u won't be writing …😭

but THANK GOD u will b continuing ENIGMA ….. 😛

and yuppieee u r writing a new one too …. 🤗🤗🤗

LOVE the NEW CONCEPT …..😍 w8ng to c how u will unfold the STORY …. 😉

WISHES FOR UR NEW FF … PLZZZ UPDATE SOON ….. 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
~CHIMERA~
PART 4





It was 2 hours drive to airport then 1 hour in plain then 4 hours back to the house. They left exgusted. Maan instantly slammed him self to the bed. Then he suddenly realized, his room changed. It's completely different, not that Girly room, more like his now. He took a sigh relive, this girl atlas understood something.

Next morning geet came in. Shouting at him to get up..
Maan "ha! Ha!" he snaps up. Barely could figure out geets face.
Geet "let me see your neck!"
Maan "why?"
Geet "shh! Let me see." she cheeks for her chain, but not there. "where is the chain I gave you?"
Maan "oh! Actually I... L.."
Geet "YOU WHAT? yOU LOST MY chain!"
Maan "I did not loose! It's in the draw!" he spoke innocently yet annoyed, she asks too many questions!
Geet "good!"
Maan "you can have it back!"
Geet "have I asked I wanted it back!" she retorts.
Maan "umm!"
Geet "uff! You still the same!" she snaps up from the bed & walks out. Maan looks at her bluntly! Not sure at all what to expect!

Later in the day dinner table. After long years whole family came together. Geet supper exited as her bf is also with her. She seems to be supper cheeky! Handa & rano rolled there eyes. Typical teens.
They were being really flirty which everyone felt uncomfortable with!
Rano "ho gya!" armaan looks down. Bit embarrassed...
Maan "are you in same class as geet?" maan asks, he seems decent he thought.
Geet "no! He does not go to collage!" maan looks at geet in surprise. "then?"
Geet "umm! He lives with his mum & dad!"
Kesar "what do you do?"
Armaan "nothing usual!"

Armaans impression did not satisfy maan or kesar! He was not right for geet! Both thought. Geets parents couldn't care least. She is a very suborn girl!

As the dinner finished geet took armaan to her room! That's when rano shouted, no boys in your room! Geet made a face! Then eventually as the evening passed he left.

Next day...

Maan was getting ready. He only have 1 month holiday before he joins NASA. Geet rushes in.
Maan "ka hua?"
Geet "mummy do not like armaan! & told me to break up with him!" she was crying! Maybe since last night! "she even refuged me not to go to the karate class anymore!"
Maan "aunty ne tik hi soca hi na!"
Geet "did you like me breaking up with him?" maan did not answer her. Tears still dropped down, little by little. What he to express exactly. It's her life after all, who he to entifear.
Geet "bolo na!"
Maan "if aunty is happy! Then we should be fine to." geet stamps her feet & walks off in strop. Kesar walks in... "nutanki! Her waqt nutanki!... Where are you going?"
Maan "umm! Shopping with aunty actually!.. As you have refuged. I need to help her."
Kesar "seriously maan! You are mad. You going shopping with mom!"
Maan "someone needs to help her!"
Kesar "do you know how much shopping she does?"
Maan "I guess so!" kesar roles his eyes and walks off.

Rano "geet hurry up! Enough of your nutanki! By 2moro you will have another boyfriend! So what's the point of crying over this one?"
Geet folds her arm & sits next to driver seat... Rano at the back. Maan driving... "seat belt pahenlo!"
Geet "no!"
Maan "geet! Seat belt phenol!"
Geet "I said no!" rano was about to shout but maan stops her. He bends over & does it himself. "move your hand!" geet being stubborn! She staid glued to her decision. He repeats again "geet! Remove your hand!" she does not listen. Rano was about to shout again, maan stops her. He does it him self. Geet just watched him...
Rano "uff! Geet when will you grow up?" geet makes a face, like she barely cares... There was a tint of smile on maans face... Like he knew exactly why she was doing this...



next😲


hay you all.. pls pls pls do leave comments if you like it :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
me first ... here tooo

3rd time today 😃

loved the updates ...


Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
wow crying for her boyfriend
so maan join NASA interesting
wonderful part
love it
love how the story going
cant wait to read next part
remind me ur fancy update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
loved the update...seems like maan is a sweetheart...
never troubling others and never hurting others...
wat geet has bf...
does either of them feel anything...
seems like geet is still childish and stubborn...
not sure wat next...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
awwwee i loved it. i cant wait till they both start liking each other !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
short but very cute 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
wow...amazing update.
cant believe maan went all this.
cant wait for the nxt update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
Awesome loved all the updates...
She has a bf??? Let's hope she did it to make maan jealous hehe
Can't wait for more
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
nice ff dear... nd i bet when it cum to propose geet in future maan is gng to hv a very hard time in confessing his feelings...

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