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Posted: 14 years ago
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it's mindblowing...u take a lot of time 2 update but its awesome
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Part 10

'Kria, will you'?' Reyansh had started to say something when suddenly he heard a loud 'thump' someone had just tried a lift and they had fallen to the ground in cries of pain. Everyone turned their head to the commotion and gathered around the girl.

'Are you okay, Priyanka?' asked the teacher as she helped Priyanka to a chair in the side of the gym.

'Yes ma'am I'm fine but errr can you ask Reyansh to get me a drink of water please?' she said in reply to the attention she had gathered.

'Sure. Reyansh go and get some water for Priyanka please and Kria can you please get an ice bag?' she said as Kria nodded and left the gym to get an ice bag. Kria knew why Priyanka had asked Reyansh only to get the water for her. Girls would do anything to get close to Reyansh.

She remembered the moment of touch that had passed between Reyansh and her. She had felt something so deep it went all the way to her heart and now she knew, she couldn't stay away from Reyansh. There was just no way she could do it.

When class finished and everybody had changed back into their clothes, everybody crowded near the entrance of the gym. Reyansh, who was also stuck behind the crowd, said 'guys what's the hold up? Why is nobody leaving?'

'It's raining like, really heavily man' came the reply from the front of the crowd.

Some waited till the rain would stop while some put their jacket over their heads and ran to their car. Reyansh was also about to make a move when he saw Kria looking outside. It had been sunny in the morning so Kria was not wearing a coat and she was about to walk to the bus shelter since she didn't really mind rain, in fact she liked to play in it a lot.

Reyansh caught her eye and he said 'Do you want a ride?' Kria thought about this hard. She really shouldn't' suddenly something buzzed in Reyansh's pocket and he frowned.

He was about to pick up the phone when he noticed it was from Sharon. At the moment he really didn't want to talk to her, she would start asking a million questions from why did you join dance class? To why would you join a dance class with weakling?! He didn't want to but still he answered and an unfamiliar voice returned his "hello"

"Hello, I'm speaking from St Trinity hospital, the person whom this phone belongs to has had an accident"

"What?!" shouted Rey unknowingly. At this moment Kria was about to accept his invitation but Rey's "what?!" stopped her in her tracks and she frowned in concern.

"Yes, Can you come to the hospital as soon as possible please?" the man on the phone said.

"Sure, I'm coming right now; I'll be there as quick as I can, please stay with her until then. Thank you very much"

"What happened? Is everything okay?" Kria asked unable to control her concern.

"No, Sharon just had an accident" he said worriedly "I have to go" he said as he walked out into the rain.

"Wait'! Reyansh please can I come with you?" even after the humiliation that Sharon had put her through Kria still loved Sharon as a sister and was very worried on hearing this news.

Reyansh thought about this. If Sharon found out he would be very angry but he couldn't help but look at her worried expression and say "Ok, quickly"

~||x||~


Thanks for reading! Reviews are always much appreciated.
Edited by mayurlover4eva - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update!! 👏👏👏
i hope reyansh and kria become couple sooon 😳😳
and omg i hope sharon is ok 😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
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dude update fast
cant wait to find out wat happens next
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvKaJen666

dude update fast
cant wait to find out wat happens next


thank youu 🤗will try... xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow awsome ff pl add me on your pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww that was so sweet of kria to show her concern thats really nice and im looking forward to see what happens between kria and rey on the way and how sharon reacts to kria's coming but awesome update by the way can u tell me ur real name?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hope sharon's okay. thanks for the update!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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dont worry about sharon guys i have something planned for her 😆
glad you enjoyed and btw shruti my name is simran 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
dnt mind thoda spelling mistake hain but jaadu toh uska same hain mere upar...its awesome

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