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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey jus recently strtd reading ur FF😃 nd 2day finally finished reading it😆...it is MINDBLOWING.👏...i soo luvv it😳
i really lyk d concept of Kria-Sharon being BF 😳nd den Kria leaving for a yr nd cumin bak nd Sharon nd her anger...its a lot lyk Gossip girl...but it is sooo AWSUM👍🏼
cumin to d couples😳...Swaron ka *hug* it was sooo cuteee☺️ cud literally imagine it wid deir bg music😍...nd den d walk in d rain under d same umbrella sooo romantic😍...nd finally Swaym's dream song very nicley written👏
ViHa scenes were sooo cutteee😳...luv Vicky but i hope he wud soon stnd up for his luv😃
nd finally Kriyansh☺️...hehehe luv d way kria snt stop thinking abt Rey sooo cutee😆...nd d dance class scene sooo adorable☺️...luvd every bit of it😳
on d whole AWSUM writing👍🏼...keep up d gr8 work nd keep continuing plz nd plz pm me tooo😃
ur new FF fan Farah😳
Parvathi12 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
dude update
please please i am begging u
not knowing wat will happen to sharon is driving me crazy n am waiting for some swaron scenes
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetshine

Hey jus recently strtd reading ur FF😃 nd 2day finally finished reading it😆...it is MINDBLOWING.👏...i soo luvv it😳

i really lyk d concept of Kria-Sharon being BF 😳nd den Kria leaving for a yr nd cumin bak nd Sharon nd her anger...its a lot lyk Gossip girl...but it is sooo AWSUM👍🏼
cumin to d couples😳...Swaron ka *hug* it was sooo cuteee☺️ cud literally imagine it wid deir bg music😍...nd den d walk in d rain under d same umbrella sooo romantic😍...nd finally Swaym's dream song very nicley written👏
ViHa scenes were sooo cutteee😳...luv Vicky but i hope he wud soon stnd up for his luv😃
nd finally Kriyansh☺️...hehehe luv d way kria snt stop thinking abt Rey sooo cutee😆...nd d dance class scene sooo adorable☺️...luvd every bit of it😳
on d whole AWSUM writing👍🏼...keep up d gr8 work nd keep continuing plz nd plz pm me tooo😃
ur new FF fan Farah😳



heyy farah! ⭐️im sooo glad you liked my FF and am soo glad to have a fan like you who wrote so much and🤗 🤗made me feel so good thanks a ton! my name is simran but i was just wondering did u just recently start watching D3? cos its an amazing show but has very less recognition. ❤️
anyways thank you nd hope to chat soon😉

sweetshine thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey Simran😃...yes i really luvd it❤️...hope u'll update sooon😃...for past two weeks it has been my survivor during d weekends😆...i strtd watching dis show a mth nd a half bak😃...actually i saw its promos looong tym bak but becoz of xams i decided i wont watch any serial nd i kind of forgot abt D3😛 den rite on d day wen my xams finished i saw d news of KSG in D3 nd i remembered i had to watch D3 nd strtd watching immediately😆...nd everyday i'm jus fallin in luv wid dis serial 😳nd all d actors😍...i knw i cnt believe such an AWSUM serial is not known to many ppl...dey r at loss😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
dude please update
i am literally on my knees please
update as soon as possible ( maybe lyk tonight 😊)
man i cant wait for ur update
i come online every 5 mins to see if u updated
man u r an awsome writer
ur language n ur style of writing is just too good
the way u express every emotion of the characters like sharon's emotions when swayam hugged her just amazing
so dude keep writing cause u r just freaking awsome😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii ...just read this ff...
its amazing...also liking how the story is going on
n the thing that sharon n kryia were best friends
rey as usual is awesome
im curious 4 the next part
see u soon
love yaaa
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 11

They both got in the car and Reyansh drove as quickly as possible. Reyansh couldn't help feeling a lot of respect for Kria, and couldn't understand how Sharon could dislike her so much! when Kria cared so much about Sharon that she wanted to come to the hospital to see her.

When they reached St Trinity Reyansh ran to the reception desk to ask of the where about of Sharon then they both rushed to the ICU where she was bring treated.

"Thank you so much" said Reyansh to the man who had been waiting there for them. "Its fine, I hope your friend is alright, her car hit the side of a truck. Her leg was bleeding heavily" he said as he was leaving.


Both Reyansh and Kria paced around the door of the ICU until Kria could stand it no longer. A single tear dropped out of her eyes and landed on her cheeks. She didn't want to cry but she was just so afraid for Sharon. If anything happened to her? Please god please; don't let anything happen to her. She repeated in her mind until Reyansh came up to her and put his arm on her shoulders to turn around. She did but not until she burst out crying. Reyansh patted her head and she rested her head on his chest. She closed her eyes and put her arms around his body. "shhh, don't worry Kria, nothing is going to happen to her."


Kria still couldn't help being worried and said "did you try to call her mom, dad?"

"Yes, but they are out of town for business" Reyansh said disgusted. How could a mother and father be so careless about their daughter! Even Kria felt the same, although she did not say it, Kria had always felt that Sharon had never received the love that she deserved.


That's why she had always been so close to her, Kria should have never left this town. It had made Sharon even more closed off about her feelings. She was always protective of people because she knew how much they could hurt her. She never even used to open up to her parents, only Kria.


Suddenly the doctor came out of the ICU and smiled at them both. "Not to worry beta, everything is fine, the operation has been successful but she will be on crutches for a few days."


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As soon as Vicky got home he told everyone to go home as quick as possible and when everyone disagreed and starting asking questions, he told them his parents were coming home early. Everyone ran as fast as they could when they heard that, like a bunch of scattered spiders.


But all Vicky could think about was Neha. How could he tell Neha how much he liked her without offending the dazzlers? He knew they were his friends and although he had tried to ignore the feeling towards Neha. He couldn't. Not any longer. But what about Kria? When Kria had abandoned the group Sharon had completed broken down. But she built herself up again and now would never forgive Kria for leaving her. Just like Sharon would never forgive him if he left the dazzlers.


The dazzlers were his friends since Kindergarden. The kind of relationship he had with them was hard to build again. He loved them like his brothers and sisters. Even Sharon. Who nobody but us dazzlers understood why she was so bitter all the time. She was bitter to others but within us lots she would do anything for a friend. For Sharon we were her family. And they were family to Vicky too. Nilesh with his stupid beats and cheesy jokes. Rinni and Simmi who were always there to high five Vicky when he played one of his pranks on people. Also Vikasha and Reyansh.

He sighed. Although Reyansh hadn't been their friend for as long as the others they were still close. Vicky had played a prank on Rey when he had joined as a joke and while others would have been angry Rey returned this gesture with a just as good prank. This way they had become close friends.

Every time he thought about this his head would start hurting. What should he do?? One side there was family and one side their was Neha. Both meant so much to him! Oh god why couldn't this dazzler/weakling this just end! It was doing no one any good.


~||x||~


Thanks for reading! Reviews are always much appreciated.


Parvathi12 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice 1 dude..👏...hope shron forgives her...n hope vicky's problem would be solved soon...😆...loved the way u decribed sharon n her issuses wid opening up to people...n the way u decribed vicky's feelings was just awsome...stuck between his family n his love...😉...n the i almost imagined the disgusted expressionon rey's n kriya's face when they think about sharon's parents...wonder what sharon's reaction will be when she fynds kria in the hospital crying...or will she...will kria leave b4 sharon can see her...wonder what will be swayam's condition when he hear's about sharon's accident...well guess i have to wait...😍 ...in short ur ff is just awsome...so please telll me when ur gonna update next...i know that ryt nw i must be getting on ur nerves asking u for updates😳 well i'll be waiting...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update. I hope Sharon can still dance, or else that's going to be bad. Rey comforting Kria :). I loved the way
you described the Dazzler's friendship. Loved the update! Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome great Fabulous too good , Can't express in words just awesome PM me when you update

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