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Posted: 14 years ago
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BTW dude pls pm me when u update
this is awsome
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Posted: 14 years ago
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well you guys are probably thinking that i was gone lyk for ever but YAY im back and im really really sorry i have a lot of D3 catching up to do too but the thing was that i have been soo busy! seriously university visits and then i had to read sense and sensibility for my english coursework. and let me tell you that it is no ways an easy read! but anyways i hope you guys will forgive me :S and dont throw any shoes plzzz😭😆

ps enjoy! 😉

Part 9
Reyansh laughed quietly at kria's angry expression, she was paired with him and she couldn't do anything about it.
Is it just me or is everybody trying to fix us up? Thought Kria. Stop it Kria, he can't have bribed the teacher could he, wait, could he? She gasped inwardly no ways!! Did he? She looked at him frowning, he didn't seem like the kind of guy who would bribe a teacher, and why? Just to be her partner? After all she was just Kria-after all Reyansh could have any girl he wanted- all the girls in the college would die to date him.
'What? Why are you staring at me like that?' he asked. Kria straightened her frown and stopped looking at him so intently. 'Nothing I err.. Was thinking of dance steps I know already'
'Here look at mine' Reyansh moved his feet into a circle glide and formed a popping wave with his hands. His dad had made him take dance classes at the last place they lived. It was fun but he didn't have time to do it here otherwise he would have.
Reyansh's dance step was quite cool and Kria couldn't help exclaiming 'heyy that's cool, teach me!' then she remembered who she was talking to and said 'err... i mean, if you want to because you don't have to and I'm not that interested...'
'Okay' he cut in 'I'll show you it's really simple basically all you do is move your feet like this' as he showed her the foot step then the hands steps, Kria tried but she couldn't do the hand movement. She was trying when suddenly Reyansh came up behind her. He touched her arms and she felt a bolt of lightening go through her. Kria shivered under his touch. They were standing so close she could smell his aftershave. Then slowly he lifted both her arms to make the locking effect that he had just shown her. Reyansh turned and looked into Kria's eyes, and in turn looked into his eyes. A wave of wind sent Kria's hair blowing onto Reyansh's face and they stood there for a moment. Reyansh stood there holding Kria's arms in his as he looked at her through the splits of her hair.
Suddenly Kria was broken from the trance by a familiar sound of the teacher's voice and slowly she removed her arms from his and her hair from his face. Reyansh closed his eyes but all he could see was her face and all he could feel were the soft light touch of her hand as she removed her hair from his face. Kria had removed her hair and was about to say something when she saw Reyansh's eyes open again and look at her with a smile on his face.
*
'Hey guys look miss verbal diarrhoea is here, move out the way or she will attack.' Said Nilesh as he entered the kitchen to see Neha and Vicky.
'Guys stop it na, leave the poor weakling alone look bechare is so poor she has to deliver pizza just to live' said simmi as everyone around her laughed at Neha.
Vicky stood their unable to say or do anything. He wanted to say something but all these years he didn't have the courage to say that he liked her, how could he stand up for her in front of the dazzlers?
Vicky tried to think of something quick before they could hurt her more as he could already see the tears threatening to spill that were rimming her eyes. He went out the kitchen to the living room and grabbed his wallet and took out the money that he had to pay for the pizza.
Neha stood there in the middle of all the dazzlers looking at Vicky, she knew he wouldn't say anything but she had hoped' after helping her in the library she thought maybe he wasn't that bad at all but she guessed not. She didn't know what to do? Standing there in the middle of all these dazzlers if was a losing battle already, there was no point. When Vicky came back he was handing her the money and she was going to take it and run as fast as possible but then simmi took the money out of his hands and smiled as she looked into neha's eyes.
'itne bhi jalde kya hai? So what are you gonna spend this money on?'
'I'm begging you! Please buy yourself some better clothes! We will give you more money if you need it' said Rimmi laughing and looking around her. 'I think we would all agree, friends can we all chip in some money for the poor weakling'
Everyone around her started laughing and a few guys took a few coins out of their pockets and handed it to her.
Neha was on the edge of tears but she willed herself not to cry. She would not let these dazzlers have the satisfaction of seeing her cry. She had never needed another guy to save her and she didn't need one now! Her mother had always taught her to fight her own battles. Think, what would Kria do?
"you know what It's okay i will keep the money and buy what I want thanks, at least I have my own money and I'm not living off my parents" she said as she snatched the money from Simmi's hands.
'maybe you'll all learn something from me' she paused and eyed Vicky. then she walked out of there with a smile on her face and slammed Vicky's house door behind her. She had wanted so badly for him not to be the bad guy but just misunderstood! but he was just like the rest of them. A dazzler. who was way too busy dazzling to think about Neha.
'Forget about her guys, lets just... enjoy the pizza! and I'll just... be back... in a few...' he said as he looked towards the door hoping she hadn't gone yet!
As soon as he reached outside he saw it was raining and she was halfway down the street. should he run? or leave it? he wasn't even wearing a coat and the rain was beginning to settle in. Without warning and even without noticing, his feet began to move towards her and he though he had not yet thought of what he was going to say, He felt Neha worthy of an answer from him, or at least an apology, after his speechlessness in front of his friends.
'Neha, wait' He said as he approached her but she still on the edge of tears, thinking about how he had just isolated her, felt unwilling to turn on his request. He put a arm on her shoulder and said 'Err I... I'm Sorry Neha... I didn't know what to do?! I...'
'you know what? keep your apology to yourself because i couldn't care less! and next time don't even come near me because I may not be a dazzler but at least im not fake!' she said. And with that she turned to leave, blocking out Vicky's shouts of apology. She felt tired, cold and tearful as she walked away until finally she could hear his voice no longer.
*
Swayum watched as Sharon drove away in her car. He stood there for a while holding his umbrella and staring at the rain.
Suddenly someone snapped their fingers in his face and he blinked. When he turned to see who it was. Standing there next to him was sharon! in a light pink saree in the rain. She smiles and him.

Sharon starts running away from him and swayum chases her until he catches her saree pallu,
Tere Aane Pe Gungunane Pe Yun Khul Ke Phir Muskurane Pe I Am In Love
Hooo (he brings her closer to him with the saree until she is in his arms)
Hmmm Tere Rooth Ke Manane Pe Na Jane Kis Bahane Pe
I' M In Love
Sadiyon Se Maine Kiya Intezaar
Hayo Hayo Rabba I' M In Love Hayo Hayo Rabba I' M In Love. (they both smile as he sings this to her)
Inkaar Se Ikraar Se Na Jane Kis Takraar Se I' M In Love
Hmmm
Woh Bhul Se Anjaane Se Kiya Aaj Se Ya Zamane Se I' M In Love
Sadiyon Se Maine Kiya Intezaar
Hayo Hayo Rabba I' M In Love Hayo Hayo Rabba I' M In Love

(Swayum smiles and dips her down as sharon puts her arm on his shoulder and slowly lifts her up)
You Are My Dream My Love My Life
I Just Wanna Spend My Life With You
You Are The One That Makes Me Smile
I Just Wanna Spend My Life With You

Hoo Tum Joh Ab Aaye Ho Ankhon Mein Chaye Ho
Main Toh Jagoongi Ab Raat Bhi Aa
In Fizaon Mein Hoon Teri Baahoon Mein Hoon
Mere Hone Ka Kar Le Yakeen
Woh Din Mein Ya Raat Mein Aur Aaise Hi Woh Baat Mein I' M In Love
Hooo
Woh Dhoop Mein Barsaat Mein Na Jaane Kis Mulaqat Mein I' M In Love
Sadiyon Se Maine Kiya Intezaar
(sharon opens up her arms and swayum comes up behind her with his arms up too, )
Hayo Hayo Rabba I' M In Love Hayo Hayo Rabba I' M In Love

Hoo Teri Aankhon Ka Rang Aasmano Ka Rang Badal Baante Reh Reh De Mujhe
Taaron Mein Kheli Hai Chaand Ki Saheli Hai Badal Banke Chupa Loon Tujhe

You Are My Dream My Love My Life
I Just Wana Spend My Life With You
My Life With...You

(sharon turns around and puts her head on his shoulder as he sings the last bit and they stand there hugging for a while.)

Suddenly Sawyum looks down and sees that there is no one in his arms. Confused he smiles. He had imagined the whole thing. He hits himself on the head. If He wasn't in love with Sharon already. He definetly was now. He walked away smiling to himself as he rode his bike home.

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Edited by mayurlover4eva - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
nice updateee!! 😃
i am glad that neha stood up for herself! 😍 👍🏼
and vicky needs to grow up and stand up for the ones he love 🤢
and lovee reyanshhh and kriaa! 😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it all the jodis in one update kya baat hai very happy with this update plz continue soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Preet.

nice updateee!! 😃

i am glad that neha stood up for herself! 😍 👍🏼
and vicky needs to grow up and stand up for the ones he love 🤢
and lovee reyanshhh and kriaa! 😳😳


thanks yaar ur online today? lol we are finally online at the same time: and thanks! glad you enjoyed it! congo on being a rockerzz!! party toh bante hai nah?

@sweetapple2995 thank you will try to update as soon as possible! 😉
Edited by mayurlover4eva - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayurlover4eva


thanks yaar ur online today? lol we are finally online at the same time: and thanks! glad you enjoyed it! congo on being a rockerzz!! party toh bante hai nah?

@sweetapple2995 thank you will try to update as soon as possible! 😉

yess!! i think when i posted here it ws my 5000th post 🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Preet.

yess!! i think when i posted here it ws my 5000th post 🤣🤣


wowww lucky me then! 🤣🤣 and lucky you too xxx
btw there were no mistakes right?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayurlover4eva


wowww lucky me then! 🤣🤣 and lucky you too xxx
btw there were no mistakes right?

noo i dont think there were any mistakes 😆
yesss lucky ur FF tht it received the great honor of Preet's 5000th post 🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great update! Thanks for the PM! Vicky shouldve stood up for Neha. I love swayum; he's so sweet. Can't wait for more Kria-Rey time. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Great update! Thanks for the PM! Vicky shouldve stood up for Neha. I love swayum; he's so sweet. Can't wait for more Kria-Rey time. 😊


Originally posted by: sweetapple2995

loved it all the jodis in one update kya baat hai very happy with this update plz continue soon :)


thanks guys 🤗 will update as soon as possible! xx

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