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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

res!

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i LOVED the abhay mish scene! i've read it, like, 5 times now. i love the contrast between the understanding abhay to the protective abhay to the worried abhay! he's turning wicked.. he might even turn evil, but he'll still be ABHAY, you know? even though he'll do whatever's so not expected of him, you know he'll make up for it. right now, he's angry with misha.. dissapointed, even? but that doesn't mean he would stop caring for her anytime soon! 😳

i loved the little abhay adopting werewolves and bolshvas talk! 😆 i love this gang so much. :D if only they could twist and turn the show like in your fanfiction! <3 and, oooh, abhay wants to 'leave' piaa.. well, nice? i'm pretty much thinking that his own plan will backfire on him. 😆 lol, i'd LOVE to see a jealous abhay now! 😃 if not exactly jealous..disturbed, even. && i love misha's last para! :D

the meeting was...interesting! :D who is pentagon ancients? and why is sam scared of them? omg, is sammy in trouble!? will they make him do whatever 'sin' he's gonna do and scar some certain person's life? OUCH. but, i preferred the old badass sam anyway - the animalstic rough monster. idk, i just picture THAT sam when i think about the sam in your story. the sam now is a wannabe version of abhay. 😆

continue soon! :D

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smile843

@smile843

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

CONGRATULATIONS ON BOOK 3 POCO...

You story is going amaaazzzinggg... am loving every bit of it and always always eagerrrlllyyy wait for the update...

thanks for such a wonderful writing.. :-)

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

hey poco

congrats for book 3, both updates were awesome👏 really loved it

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shivani

@ssshh

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

hi di😃,i m back😛... sorry for late update😭 bt i was stuck in some mess😡.

congratzzz for book 3👏,its amazing👏.

now what will piya,abhay ,misha,sam do😲?everyone fighting their own "emotional disease"😡.soon abahy will feel betray by everyone even piya😡, piya will lost abhay's trust and misha's trust. poor misha,she is gonna a big trouble ,first she is attracted to" king of evil abheer"😡,her sister become pet of another evil daksh,she will also feel betray by piya😲 and her father😕,she is erasing sam's feeling in her heart by abheer😡.

sam attached to "t" and he will lost her😭,he have to betrayed misha-piya's trust for his clan.

god save abhiya,samisha😭

fab parts😃

plzz update soon😳

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#55

yay!!! mast mast update poco! jhappies!!!

Angad-T: Dettol couple!!! 🤣

Loved how suspicious Kabeer is getting of Zee.

Aww.. so you are going Abhisha way... damn!!!

And poor Anush!!! being called a criminal cos she saved Piya's life. Damn!!!

loved every bit!!

update soon-ish!

luv ya!!!

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Ritzie Ring'gghania

@Ritzie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Very nice Poco.

Abhay seems to have a big plan in his mind and I am all waiting for it. Pia with Kabir? Kya baat hai.😉

I like the small jokes you slip in. Tracker helping in deciding Zee on lip color and Zeenie's reactions. Dettol couple, Kabir noticing Anush's language change on Harpic.🤣

These Vampire masters are ruthless. Are they like Volturi of Twilight - no sympathies for human lives? And Anush is a witch, how can they decide any punishment for a witch? Don't Vampire and witch have different leaders. And Sam's boss is here?😆 Is it that all the Supernatural bosses are getting together too?

So, now he will be forced to do something that he will repent for his life. I have a guess what that crime could be. Getting closer to a Bolsh has to be punished by Bolsh's end? Is that the time when Mish will closer to him - supporting him? It is getting teeth-biting now. So, many things happening and all leading to one major thing - Abhay's birthday. Haina?

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Hey Poco

You are just awesome I read both the books in just one day as when I wanted to start reading the ff I thought I will read when I am free but as I started I couldnt leave it in b/w the concept is gr8.

I think CVs should also read ur ff to get some ideas about supernatural stuff the way u take story ahead is just best. The way u develop the story Abhay's 666 b'day, Abheer's powers, the bolshvas, Zeenia, Sam, solar elcipse and the list goes on.I have jus become addicted to ur FF.

Continue soon and please add me to ur PM list.

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Apoorva

@katiehiwatari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

cool..cool.. i love it.. i feel bad for Piya thoguh wt is this Abhay upto.. oh wel.? bt i really don like him ignoring poor Piya like this.. bt i loved the narration of Piya's hurted feelings.!!! :( n the meeting was cool.. wowiee tat's a big prob.. wel i gues Abheer is goin to make Abhay's life hell.. n Sambhav.. i gues the guy had forgetten to hate Abhay in the 1st place.. he was kinda being affectionate to him na.. soo chweet.!!!

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VRITIKA

@karantakiar

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#59

amazing part poco.
m sure abay nd piyaaa r soon goint to be together.
i wish yaar,that u shud be d director of pyek...
amazing dear.
plzzz do cnt soon.
nd plzz add me to ur pm list dear.
luv u
vritika😊