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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
Yay!!! Nice nice...

Actually the Pentagon was correct, Sam has changed a hundred folds since his entry but for the good and those oldies were brainwashing him... tch tch!

Okay, you better turn Piya and Misha into supernaturals too... i don't like it when those old people call them 'mere humans', especially over brash and brave Misha!!!

AbhIya is kinda in a stand still now... and honestly seeming a bit too boring to me even though i know you're doing this on purpose cos a greater goal!

Haseena aunty dying... haww!!! Hope Mish and K get sense into Panch before she does the blunder!

Loved it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
omg sh** the last paragraph is so deep nd i wish abhay gets jelous and angry on kabir for pulling pia away oh plez i wanna seee the jelous abhay so plez update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
res!:D

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i love this update! :D holy shit, i feel BAD for sam. like, REALLY bad. but, then, i guess i'm sortof happy, too. 'cause i always preferred the villainous sam. the guy with a plan - you know, i see jay as a potential sam, though, not quite. idk, i just have my own image of sam in my mind - he's one of the most relatable characters to be honest. ''you're not the good guy.'' <- idk, i just LOVED that line. ya know, times like these when i remember the initial stages of your fanfiction, where misha used to annoy sam & he was so stuck up with his plan, trying to get to abhay n all. and now, when he actually likes being loved, he's being sucked back.. i guess, that's his destiny? and, unlike him, abheer doesn't believe in holding back; he doesn't have to.

daksh and panchi's part was ..erm, creepy? daksh is using panchi to kill haseena? like, seriously, dude, HE NEEDS TO MAN UP! 😆 ..

sorry for the short reply, i PROMISE it will be bigger & sooner next time!;D
Edited by _Akanksha_ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
Poco! Mujhe nahin bataya ki tumne naya thread banaya! Akku just told me, and that's why I'm finally here! But congrats on book 3! Hopefully, there will be many more books to come!

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How can Abheer change his personality so easily and quickly? Why does he have to be so mean to Misha? He is making her think about so many things so that she will be distracted by those and won't think as much about saving Abhay. And also to torment her. And poor Arnab. Abheer was selecting his words so carefully just to make him feel guilty. What did Arnab ever do to him? I wonder how Misha is going to react when she finds out about Piya being her sister. I don't think that she will react quite as badly as she did in the show. Your Misha is much more mature than that. At least the charm worked. Always looking on the bright side! 😆

Misha shouldn't be in love with Abheer! Sam is better for her! But, I guess, if I were her, I would be falling for Abheer. I mean, he is sexy, and even though she is supposed to love Sam, he is just a friend. He is more interested in T. So what can she do? Abhay must really want to get the information out of Piya if he is letting Kabir dance with her. Hopefully, she can turn the tables on him, and make him jealous. It would be so fun to see a surprised and jealous Abhay now. I bet Piya must have felt so bad and hurt. More than anyone could ever imagine. All her hope that he might somehow remember her has vanished. That must have shattered her! 😭 When he remembers, I don't think Piya should forgive him for hurting her so much immediately. He has done so much damage to her emotional health, and you cannot forget that in a just few moments. The supernatural part was awesome! Sam is growing a heart, and he has just realized that. He is growing close to humans and vampires, and is becoming attached to them. That will be very dangerous to him! Anushka shouldn't be called a criminal because she saved Piya's life! If something happened to Piya, then Abhay would have gone insane, so technically, she was saving Abhay's sanity as well. The Pentagon Ancients kind of remind me of the Volturi from Twilight; no exceptions and no regard for human life.

Sam is the heir to the werewolf throne? I guess that is why he has been trained to be cold and unfeeling. I don't believe that Sam is a villain. He has a heart, and the Pentagons are just brainwashing him against using it. Why does Daksh want to kill Haseena? She didn't do anything! Granted, she is a vampire and he is a vampire slayer, but she didn't do anything wrong! He's a psychopath, killing just because he can! 😡 Daksh doesn't love Pancchi. He doesn't care about her even one bit! She is just a toy for him to use and then throw away when he is done with her. Hopefully Kabir and Misha can save her before she does something too bad, like killing Haseena. Abhay is anything but innocent. He is purposely provoking her and using her to make her tell him what he wants to know. I wonder what Abhay is going to do to Kabir since he pulled Piya away. Piya and Kabir should make Abhay jealous! That would be fun to see! 😆

Update quickly, please, Poco! We're waiting for Daksh's party!
Edited by AbhiYa_luver - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
great poco!!
poor sam i hate when he acts like villain!but why is he going to be part of the the pentagon?!!!!
and those masters they were "nice"to sam but to cruel!😡but didn't they know that what the evil vampy gang is doing with him...can't they tell him?

and daksh...i hate him more than abheer!!i mean what abheer do;he does it in out ..in the open but that**daksh** that moron why is he using panchi?he is a vampire slayer can't he do whatever he wants by himself!!or he really feels connection with panch!

btw nowdays you are giving to much of all this but leaving our poor abhiya!
really you seem to be ekta's sis..ended at such a delicate situation!
now update soon darling cause i am so exited what kabir's gonna do?!!!!...
Edited by ilove99 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
wao poco u rock...
wat an updttt
luvlyyy.
plz plz cnt wid nxt part soon,cant wait dear for d nxt part
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
owesum update poco!!!👏

so the pentagons really showed wat sam was... a villian... there is no place in him to have human feelings and he had just one goal to kill abhay... so daksh is upto something really big in the party... killing haseena🤢 and once abhay knows this no one is gonna spare him... panchi is really in danger, i hope everyone do smthing before it ends badly... abhiya part was superb😳... pia was really frustrated with abhay's reactions towars him... eagerly waitin fr daksh's party so abhay comes to know of the truth😃... loved the update and continue soon❤️
Edited by minahil1997 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
awesome update...waiting to see abhay's reaction on this act of kabir
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh my god, daksh is a such a evil planner, I just don't know what about panchi, how misha and kabhir going to save her form daksh clutches, daksh surely evil and planned to killed hasina & abhay what he going to do with kabir with his act by the way nice update poco 👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Poco i am really thanking God that i had the good sense to go through the pages of your book 2...or else i would have surely missed a lot of your updates which are very dear to me...congrats on starting book 3
coming to your updates...
Abhay is hell bent on getting out the truth...nd his plan is working too...he is pushing the right buttons
Abheer is manipulative to the greatest extent...and my favourite villian...he is entrapping everybody in the trap he is weaving for Abhay
Panchi is well o the road to destruction
Poor Mish...now her heart is in an even greater turmoil...
Sam's mind is also in a muddle...where is this new state of events gonna lead him...
Kabir is keeping alive his old character even though he can't escape his fate as a slayer..he still cares for his freainds...
Zeenia is her usual self adding humour to the rising tension in the air..
Daksh...well what to say another manipulator but not as much as Abheer I guess...
The ring seems to be fast approaching...
waiting eagerly for more
With Love
Nidha🤗

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