Hey Poco, This is the first time am ever commenting on your FFs. I am loving every move of all the characters, every scene, every kind of atmosphere your trying to create at each place. In fact, I love the way you've woven the story.
Abhay's confused but clear, umimaginable but true emotions and his attempt to make Piya spill the beans is one of the BEST. He fighting his emotions for Piya. His jealousy, when he reads the letter written to Piya by someone unknown to him(as he thinks). Him trying to find out why doesn't he feel the same warmth in Maithli's hair, hug, eyes, hands...Maithli's Love, when he feels it, the intensity, the depth, the power of Love, Friendship and the Soul, only when Piya is beside or around him is wonderful.
Kabir's disgusted and helpless face (which is worth to look at) when he sees Anushka in a totally diiferent avatar, opposite of what he had seen and what she used to be. And he doing his duty by protecting Piya and being there for her always and he trying to protect Abhay, as his friend, so Daksh doesn't play any more games.
Piya's deliberate attempt to hide the secrets, the darkest secrets from Abhay and her helplessness to stop herself from revealing her true emotions for him, is really good.
Panchi is totally under control of Daksh.
Daksh playing with his most favourite past-time toy: Panchi.
Sambhav trying to deal with his emotions for the two most important people in his Life 😭: Misha and Tanzie, and his saying to Abhay, " It was nice being friends with you!" His heartbreak or rather say his unspoken sadness that he fell into when he was made to realise who we was (a werewolf)..., Who he was going to be (the leader- King)...and Who he ought not be (a Friend, Someone's Love, Lover...a Human being).
Anushka's struggle to get the curse off her in the Underworld and to be back in time, before Abhay's 666th birthday.
Misha going 😆 bonkers and scared of the whole supernatural thing taking the worst turn ever, but at the same time, making herself stronger in every step she takes. And also, dealing with her emotions for Sam and Abheer.😭
Tanzie trying her best not to hurt anyone in this whole new gang of genuine friends, she found herself 😊 for the first time in her life. She dealing with Natasha with equal amount of fierceness, anger, and brains. 👏
Zeenia making everyone howl 😛 and go crazy😆 with her stupid but awesome antics!! She always brings a smile on my face in the toughest of the situations in the story, either by popping her head or her nose or her whole self in the middle of even the most crucial moments. Thats what I've seen.
And last but not at all the least...
Abheer: who is the total opposite of what we actually were waiting for.
His DEVIL MAY CARE 😈 Attitude, his style, his arrogance, his confidence (will become over confidence, someday), his honesty, his total personality is...beyond anything to say. (A total Bad A--) And what more...we will be out of vocabulary soon, because describing him will be the most hardest thing ever. 👏
Well this was all. Hope that this has made up for every update I did not comment on.
Will try to keep up with you and your updates.
Keep bringing lots and lots of twists and turns, because Supernatural can never exist without its share of twists, troubles and turns. I call it a T3 of Supernatural!!😉
Do let me know if I've missed something out.
Regards
Annie 😃
Edited by AnnieKittWatt - 14 years ago