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rohini

@Rohini20

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#521

That was a sensuos update...luving the present track...annie...argg..😆...continue soon..!!

Rohini

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anupamachem

@anupamachem

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#522

Nice long update! really very gud!

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#523

1stly Marvee wanna

for the lovely , long update 🤗

Beautiful 👏

As I've said earlier you make simple daily life situations special & how ... 👏

I mean SR is , in general , supposed to be intimate ... who would have thought Geet wanted a 'pretend SR' ... got carried away ... & had one of the best make-out with her hot n sexy hubby 😉 ... Hats-off to the freshness & ingenuity of your idea 👏 👏 👏

I love this Enigmatic Geet ; she's like a magnet . Her antics are endearing yet puzzling . I think this is one of the major attractiveness that completely bowled Maan . He wants to solve the puzzle called Geet 👏

The SR scene was the best I've read till date ; even though incomplete I'm completely bowled 👏

Your writing is crisp & fresh Glitter Star Blue

I simply love your ingenious ideas Glitter Heart Blue

Fantastic Glitter Star Green

Thanks for pm ...

( Okay me again on treating spree our Drashti for the 1st time is in the No.1 position . Although I'm not into the no . game coz for me she's always no.1 yet it feels nice to see her ruling her well-deserved position of Numero Uno @ least once 😳

So me again flooding your page with treats 😛)

Edited by drashsree100 - 14 years ago

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Sneha Bhattacharya

@khushi_4ever

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#524

First of all Marvee u write so well👏 👏 👏Second, i could have happily trottled Annie, but why is Geet like that, jut becoz her mopther let go of her dreams doesn't mean Maan will ask her to do so, but i know u must be planning a very grand scene where she realises that she is in fact in love with her husband and nothing and nooone is more important to her than him...right????

Edited by khushi_4ever - 14 years ago

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Mishu

@-Mishu-

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#525

awesome yaar...loved it...👏😊

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aali

@18mypride

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#526

Ahem Ahem..☺️

aaaggg... this anie ... supid !

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mandymore

@mandymore

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#527

Wow,superb prt jab pretend wli sr itni hot h to real wali kitni hot hogi,geet do luv maan bt nt acceptng it,grt prt n thnxs 4 superlong n super hot prt.cont soon.

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#528

very nice update Marvee, like your style of writing...emotions are expressed very well

loved the chemistry between maan and geet and the luka chhupi of emotions ... lets see how long Geet denies her feelings...

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supernasahu

@supernasahu

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#529

Fabulous update!!⭐️ ⭐️

Geet should soon realize that maan loves her so much n cares for her.Loved it.😃

Thanx 4 d PM. Waiting for next update 😊

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#530

awesome update. geet loves him but doesn't tell. poor maan is feeling sooo sad and geet just taking it lightly. i am sure she will admit soon as maan is going to make her feel it.

thanks for pm and pls update soon