SS-JAANE TU KAHAN HAIN-THREAD 1(NOTE-PG131) - Page 8

Created

Last reply

Replies

627

Views

113.1k

Users

79

Likes

2.3k

Frequent Posters

mandy15 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#71
loved ur updates dear...:)
they r really awsum...:)
update soon
maaneetmaahi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#72
brilliant update dear...
loved swetu and prince convo..
continue soon

spvd thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#73
part 4
lovely part...
Maan is so possessive of his sweetu...
cont soon...
angelwords thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#74

PART-5

KHURANA MANSION

Maan pulling geet towards his room

maan- chalo jaldi sweetu...mujhe tumhe apna kamre dikhana hain!!

geet- hain prince...mujhe bhi tumhare karmra dekhna hain

maan bumped to a man

man- arre maan baba..ye kaun hain?

Maan- nakul kaka ye meri sweetu hain...meri friend!!

Nakul- ohh tho ye apki dost hain sweetu..ap kaise hain sweetu!!

maan- nahi nakul kaka ye sirf meri sweetu hain..ap esa sweetu mat kahiya..apke liya ye geet hain...samjhe ap!!

in posessive tone

nakul- thik hain maan baba...tho geet beta ap kaise hain??

geet- mein achi huin ji...aur ap kaka??

nakul- hum bhi...acha ap dono kamre mein jaiya..hum apke liya kuch snacks laate hain!!

maan and geet noded

and they went off

nakul(st)- pheli baar maan baba ko asa dekha..babaji kare enki jodi salamat rahe..chalo nakul beta kaam pe vapas...bare saab ke ana ke time ho gaya hain!!

maan and geet entered the room

maan quickly ran and switched on the lights...

geet was astonished ...the room was very beautiful and filled with so many toys

maan- kya huin sweetu..asa kya dekh rahi ho??

geet- hum tho apke kamre mein jane vala tha na..tho fir hum yahan kya kar rahe hain??

maan (suprised)- matalb??

geet- arre prince dekho na...ye tho koi toys ki dukaan lag rahi hain!!

with cutest baby face!!

maan laughed loudly!!

maan- oh god sweetu...tum kitni cute ho...ye mera hi kamra hain sweetu!!

geet with 'o' expression

geet- achaa...etna bare kamre aur etna sare toys...ap tho sahi mein prince ho!!

maan- hain meri sweetu...aur hain sweetu ab se ye tumhare bhi toys hain!!

geet- sachi mein??

maan- hain sweetu sachi muchi..par hain sirf hum dono ke toys..samjhe!!

geet- ohhhkkk!!

and they started playing with the toys

three pair eyes were also seeing all this

they were totally shocked

they were none other than dadi maa,pammy and rano

pammy ' dadi maa apne dekha na...

dadi maa- hain dekha..jo maan kal tak apne toys kisi ke saath nahi share karta tha..yahan tak ki vicky kke saath bhi nahi voh..aj...

pammy- dadi maa ek baat tho paki hain geet ki mera maan ko humare pass vapas la sakti hain

dadi maa- sahi kaha apne

hearing dadi maa and pammy convo...rano was totally shell shocked!!

nakul came and served them snacks...

they were eating less and playing more with the snacks...

bichara nakul was the target..his whole uniform was messed up...

and then

rano- bari malkin..ab hume chalna chaiya...mein kal se auingi!!

dadi maa and pammy seen the time ...and noded as time of raj coming back was there

they all entered the room

maan and geet smiled and them

geet quickly ran to rano and hugged her by her waist

maan done the same as his sweetu

he quickly ran to pammy hugged her

this brought tears in her eyes and even dadi's!!

rano- geet...chalo beta ghar jaane ke time ho gaya ...kal schul bhi hain na!!

this diverted maan attention to rano and geet

maan( angryly)- nahi meri sweetu kahi nahi jaye gi...voh mera saath rahe gi!!

dadi maa- maan beta..humari baat suniya...

maan- nahi hume kisi baat nahi sunni...sweetu mera saath rahe gi bas...

and he left the room angryly

geet quckly ran behind him

leaving three people in tension...

...

part 5- finished

part 6- will maan let geet leave with rano or raj will see all this??

...

so here is another part...i was very happy that u all are liking it...so i cant stop myself form writing one more part,,,,keep liking and commenting..ho sakta hain..u will get one more update.

sorry for mistake

hope u like it

and

do comment

no pms

thanks to all who commented and liked!!

...

Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
mysteriousmilli thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#75
Fantastic update...
loved to see maan and sweetu's growing bonding...
please update soon...

Remya_Pillai thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#76
maan ki sweetu use samjahyegi ki she has to go and vl cum bak soon..
wat a cute friendship..
TanuDDian thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#77
punam2712 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#78
SWEETO AND MAAN ARE SO SO CUTE
GEET WILL BRING MAAN CLOSER TO HIS FAMILY
HIS DADI AND MOM WILL DO EVERYTHING TO LET THEM BE
HOPE SWEETO GOES BEFORE RAJ COMES
soni4eva thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#79
wondaful update soo cute
luv der friendship maans so possessive bwt er
plzz cont soon x
angel_smily thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#80
awesome parts
luvd it
thanks for the pm
continue soon

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz

2 months ago

Aradhana & Reyaansh SS : Na Jaane Kyun (last chp + epilogue pg 3)

COVER BY AISHWARYA (Mystic_Muse) SUMMARY Suzanne Miller , an Indian Origin Canadian Citizen adopted by the Miller family, who goes on a quest to...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul

5 months ago

Tere Ho Gaye Hain Hum(I have become Yours)Sameer Nandini ZaBir SS

Parth,Adnan and Ketaki version I dedicate this to my friend Sydell who wants the Parth,Adnan,Ketaki version of the movie Hum dil de chuke sanam...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul

5 months ago

Tere Ho Gaye Hain Hum Purab Sakshi ZaBir SS(Closed)

(Parth,Adnan and Ketaki version) Tere Ho Gaye Hain Hum.... I have become Yours..Part 1 I dedicate this to my friend Sydell who wants the...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz

7 months ago

In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2) In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2)

Siggi by Sandhya (@sevenstreaks) (P.S this was my pitching picture to the production houses - which Sandy had done for me a couple of years...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Koeli

5 years ago

Comment Migration Request Thread #1

Hey guys, This is the place where you can request for comment migration. Please know that FFEs are going to migrate your comments. Rules - You...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".