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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 3

scence- khurana mansion

maan and geet was very happy...finally they got there friends...whom they were searching..secret they joined their hand...to pray to babji..and giving him big vala thank you!!...in such a way that ther other was not able to see...one talk!!

even baba ji would be happy to see them...finally his two most wonderful creation ...had got what they wanted...he used to see that how both from there heart used to ask him...he himself was so over whemled by there gesture that finally he had to fullfill there wish...but he knowed that it was there first step...they had to go way!!

maan and geet was simling

at the same dadi came to the hall with pammy

maan saw them...he wanted to show and thanks his dadi for giving him a friend!!

dadi and pammy was tallking to each other

maan came running to them

leaving geet there

by seeing maan running in such a way..dadi quickly went to his knee to ask him...she thought must be maan very sad...but what she saw was really shocking...she saw maan similing ...happy infact very happy..like he had never being...now she was curious to ask!!

maan came running to dadi maa..and quickly kissing her cheeks

dadi maa was shocked again

not only dadi maa but also pammy

on other side rano was very happy to see the love between both of them

her eyes went in search of geet

geet was little far from her...she quickly signalled her to come close and also to be quite

geet quicly followed the order

dadi was so shocked that she cant even wait for a sec to ask

dadi- kya huin maan?? ap etna khush kyun hain??

maan was breathing heavingly

maan- daaadiii maaa'

dadi- first just relax

maan finally relax

dadi maa- ab bataiya??

maan- dadi maa..ap thik khate tha..baba ji ne mera friend ko baje diya

dadi maa was shocked and curious

even rano and pammy

dadi maa- kaun beta

maan signal backwards

dadi raised her head to see...but was shocked to see

dadi maa- there is no one!!

maan also seen at the back with fear and he didnt see her

but as he was turning her head to see dadi maa again he saw that HIS sweetu was standing with her mother

  • dadi maa-kya huin maan??

maan- dadi maa there she is my friend...sweetu

again dadi maa and pammy followed the hand ...they saw a little girl standing with rano

she was indeed very beautiful and cute

maan- dadi maa...apko humari friend kaise lagi??

maan- sweetu come na...meet My dadi!!

dadi understood that she was rano daughter...but

ya she was in confusion ...if raj came to know about it

she quickly saw towards pammy...who stand still in shock

maan ran to sweetu..to bring her near dadi maa

at the same time rano was totally shocked!!

where as dadi shaked pammy

dadi maa( aside)- pammy...pammy!!!

pammy- hain maa!!

dadi maa- ye larki...

pammy- i knw ..ki ap kya kahana chahati hain...yahi ki she is rano's daughter

dadi maa nodded

pammy- par agar enko pata chala tho...ye tho pura ghar sir pe autha langa!!

dadi maa- mujhe pata hain..pammy

but after so many years i have seen maan so happy!!

pammy ' ji par??

dadi maa- kya kiya ja sakta hain...hosakte hain ye babaji ki wish ho!!

pammy- par agar??

dadi maa- worry not...mein huin na...i will not allow anyone to come between their frienship!!

to lighten pammy mood ...she said dramatically

dadi maa- when dadi is here why do you fear!!

pammy and dadi giggled!!

where as rano was in a mixed emotion

maan brought geet in front of dadi maa

maan- sweetu ye meri dadi hain

geet nooded with a smile

maan- sweetu tum kuch kyun nahi bol rahi ho??

geet- mummy ne mana kiya hain!!

maan- dont worry sweetu...meri dadi maa hain na voh apki mummy ko apko nahi daath ne dengi!!

maan said proudly!!

dadi maa was amazed that in such a short span of time..there friendship was so strong!!

dadi asked geet

dadi maa- tho apka naam sweetu hain??

geet nooded negatively

maan- arre nahi dadi maa..uska naam geet hain..mein usse sweetu bulata huin...aur voh mujhe prince!!!

now all three..rano , pammy and dadi maa was super duper amazed by there frienship!!!

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part- 3 ' finished

part 4- geet talking to dadi

what will dadi do to save their friendship??

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

love to see both of them happy... sweetu and her prince... what next

Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
awesome part dea
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
awesome update
love it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
hw cute friendship...
luvd maan's excitemet for his sweetu..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh so cute...Maan is a darling and Geet is a real sweetu...mumma ki achi bachi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 3
lovely part...
the kids are so adorable and Maan is so happy to have found his new friend, HIS sweetu...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART-4

SCENCE- KHURANA CONSTRUCTION

Dadi maa- acha tho apka naam geet hain...bahut pyara naam hain apka!!

Geet- sukriya bari malkin!!1

maan- tum enko bari malkin kun bula rahi ho??...ye tho dadi ma hain!!!

geet- mummy ne bola tha ki...asa he boluin!!

maan- NAHI..mein dadi maa bulata huin tho ...meri sweetu bhi dadi maa bulaya gi!!!

with angry expression

dadi maa and other were getting more and more suprise with each passing second..

maan breaking the silence which was prevailed

maan- hain na dadi maa...meri sweetu apko dadi maa bula sakti hain na??

dadi maa(affectionally)- hain kyun nahi...jaise mein apki dadi maa..vaise unki bhi!!1

maan (happily)- suna sweetu...tum bhi dadi maa bula sakti ho..aur tum vahi bulao ji!!

geet- thiek hain prince...jaise tum chaita ho!!

maan- good!!

at this point of time all other present there want to faint..but some how controlled them

dadi maa- geet beta ap kis class mein hain??

geet(cutely)- mein 1st class mein huin dadi maa...mein na abc parna shuru kar diya hain!!

dadi maa smiled at her innocence

dadi maa- acha..very good geet beta!!

maan- akhir voh meri sweetu hain...!!

dad maa and rano finally laughed...

and rano just smiled

dadi maa- acha apki sweetu tho bahut pyari hain...jaiya and apni room dikhaiye apni sweetu ko!!

maan happily- chalo sweetu...

geet seen towards rano for approval...which was not left unnoticed by dadi maa

rano moved her head postively

both maan and geet left!!

dadi maa (st)- bahut pyari bachi hain..aur sanskari bhi..eska alwa mein maan ko etna khush mein phele baar dekha hain...uski khushi se bare ke mera liya kuch bhi nahi hain...esa liya mujhe agar apna hi beta ke against kara hona para tho mein kar hongi!!

pammy(st)- maan ke janam se le kar ab tak mein usko etna khush nahi dekha...apna bache ko etna khush dekhna ke liya...meri akhen(eye) taras gayi thi...ab aur nahi..etna saal tak mein maan ko dukhi hi dekha hain...par ab nahi...agar uski khushi uski sweetu ke saath hain tho mein enki frienship ke liya..apna pati ke against kari rahuingi!!

dadi maa and pammy..looks towards each other...they know ki wat they have to do!!

dadi maa- rano apko humne kaam par rakh liya hain..kal se kaam par agaiya ga...

rano ' ji!!

dadi maa- geet ke saath...rano beta!!

rano was very happy to hear that ...she had tears in her eyes

rano- gi!!!

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part 4- finished

part 5- maan very posseive and insecure about HIS sweetu!!

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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