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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
ohh my...i jus really loved da update😃

hawww...da kids r soo cute😆
n prem sleeps wid amickey mouse...🤣
BY GOD a totally happy n perfct family...
i wish dey remain da same forever...😊

tczzz
loads of love
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
O fear that was really sweet update
loved mayur scenes and Prems micky mouse pillow He He abhi tak baRA NAHI HOA
Hope every thing will be going fine
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
Fizaaa

another ss

wow loved d concept n prologue

cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
Amazing part 1

really loved it

cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: valiyah27

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Amazing update with beautiful moments of a most adorable family...Nupur is truly an ideal wife...mother n SIL...same goes with Mayank too...these Sharma kids r too cute to handle...loved the way Mayank behaved as a kid with his angels...ufff ho yeh Sharma bacche bhi na samajhte hi nahi its Papa's turn babies😆...unko bhi darr lagta hai but the point is Mummy se🤣...Mayur moments r sweet as usual...!!!

Wait i didn't skip Nupur n Prem part...infact its the very first time im more focussed on this duo rather than Mayur here... y i feel their mother n son like relation is gonna take a drastic turn...!!!

Fiza aisa kyun feel horaha hai ki Mayank ka kiya wada toot jayega jo usne Nupur se kiya that he is not gonna leave...why i feel that he is actually gonna leave and that to soon...aisa kyun lagraha hai ki kismat koi bhayanak aur dardnak mod lene wali hai...i hope u get it what i want to say n what i feel...well yeh next update hi batayega ki mera darr sahi hai ya nahi...update jaldi karna...please...!!!

yarvaloya tum tu abhi se daaranai wali baatai ker rahi hu...😭
lag tu mjhey bhi kch aisa hi hai...but reality type stories mai yehi tu suspense aur life ka real face daikhnai ko milta hia...😉
mummy papa ko phone pai stories sunai gei tu papa ko nend tu aayei gi na...😉😉ROFL
Edited by drmaha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
enchanting...
i sooo love it
amazing job yaar
wat a gr8 upsdate
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
Lovely sharma Family, kids are too cute..
Very Nice update Fiza
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
Fiza, nice start.👏
bt i tell u d truth, when i saw ur pm n also MAHAFIZ word...i just thot, ab to mai gayi...again an urdu ss.😳
bt thak god...k tune hindi me likha.😃⭐️
mere taraf se tujhe bht barawala thaks.🤗
bt seriously awesome start.😃
love mayur family.😃
raj n rahul r too smart😉...love their convo.😊
its a sweet son-father convo.😊
very nice.👏
like mayank-prem lil convo...it shows their sweet brotherly bonding.⭐️
lolz...kids r so smart...they caught nupu red handed...lolz.😆
like nupurs care for prem...he really seems like her son.
love her...she is so sweet...loving his devar like her own son.👏
love mayur scene.😃
they are so sweet...actually they r alwz very sweet.😛
awesome start.👏
continue soon.😊
thanks for the pm.😊
Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59

CHAPTER: 2

Mayank: prem agay kya socha hai

Prem: bhai bs final year hai…us k bad mein free

Rahaul: tu hum sab picini jay gay …haina chaho

Prem:bilkul…woh tu hum jab bhi jahy jay gay…..

Mayank: whn u want to join business

Prem: bahi just give me 6 mths..after studied tu I'll join

Mayank: oki….but not more thn tht….

Prem: ji bhai….

Nupur: kyun…dheeray dheeray seekh jay ga

Mayank: han han ..tumhar bety k tu abhi mickey mouse se khelny k din hai

Nuour: mayank….

Prem: bhai….

Mayank: kal tu us k sath soo rah tha

Rahaul: kya…chahoo tum ny liya mera mickey mouse k pillow…

Prem: tu..mein bhi tu apni cheezay share kerta hoona

Rahaul: hmm yeah bhi hia..meray pass spider man wala bhi hai aj tum woh lay ker suna

Mayank: chalo tum roz new k sath suna …thik hai choto..baray hojao

Raj: lo dad ap kal hi to kaha rahy thy ap k dar lagta hai…islyan mama k sath sotay ho…tu chaho nhi sop saktay

Maynk: mayank's juice choaked in his throat..n nupur hided herself to avoid the suition …while prem was grining with smile

Sorry bhi…chahoo k khilaf tu kuch bool hi nhi sakta…..

Nupur: mayank..bs…

Prem pouded…..

Mayank: oki oki…im leaving ….tacke care….

Ruffling prems hair he…kissed is sons….bye..he sid to her n winked n left

Raj: huamin baba k sath skool jana tha..he pouded

Prem: kyun chahoo k sath nhi jao gay….

Raj: han ….chaoo chalain gay

Prem : bulkily chalin ga

Rahaul: lets gooo

….

Nupur: no way ..no move ..ok

Prem: bhabi it's a gr8 animated film…bachy buhat enjoy keray gay

Nupur: prem u go n prepeare for ur exam n thy r gonna do there homwwork….samjhy

All three puded n sery on sofa …with there hand on ther cheeks

Prem: ab kiya kero

Raj: chaho mjhy blue dekhni hai plissh

Rahaul: mjhy bhi…pls….

Prem: don't be sad bacha..im thinking…

Rahaul: he sobbed…my all frnd has seen it..me too

Prem: hay don't cry ..jan…..let me think…..idea…

Prem: bhabi…plsss…na

Nupur: prem no…

Prem: acha agar woh dono ho,ework kerly aur mein parh lo tu…will u allow…..he said with so much of hope n spark…..thy r very sad….

Her heart melted with te love the share

Nupur: thik hai

Prem: I love u bhabi

.prem: oki bacho…..we have two hrs…chaho will prepare for his exam n u guys are gonna finish ur homwwork…thn we can ask mom to give permosion…write

He out fowd his hand

N rahaul put his twoo…Right

N raj twoo….Right chaho….

Yaayyy

Lets go…plan in action…..

…ra: mom me n raj has finished there howmwork n we have learned the chapts two

Nupur: haannn…so quick

Prem: n me too has done the preperatipon

Sh put her hand on her waist

Nupur: tu kya kero

Rahaul: hit his head with hand…uff…smiple ..let us go to movie n aaa…plis

Raj: pls

Prem: plis plsih plish…

Nupur: oki…but cum fast

Yaaayyy…thy scream n hugged her….

Prem: common my angles…we r gonna n have fun

Rahual: chao I want butter pop cone

Prem : oki

Raj: n I want drink to..with salty one

Prem: oki oki….any thng u want…my prince are gonna have…its there party time……..

Seeing there retreating figures…she smiled…..how much she loves there bound n cherish …prem really love her children…just like n elder brother…..n take care of them as the most preious ones..she is so proud of prem…as for her he is also her son…

………………………

Prem: hey guys wht r u doing

Friend: nthing yaar just chilling ….

Prem: wht this

Friend: wht this cigrate…..u wanna try …

Prem: no yaar…its not good

Friend: aby chal…ek dafa peeny se koi addict nhi hojata…..lay try tu ker

He took n coughed…but thn as his friends instruction he strtd to take it in…comfortably

Friend: bs ker meri pori cigrate,….tujhy tu maza lag gaya

Prem: yeah lay…kanjoos….

Friend: kya sooch raha hia

Prem: kuch nhi yaar …im bit tense abt bhai is expectation n wht im gonna do…he took the cigrate from his friend …..

Friend: dont worry yaar…time lagay ga but u will get the bussines….tera itna bara business hai…tujhy kkiya tension

Prem: han yeah tu hai…..lets see…abhi tu ejoy kero life yaar….n he agin took the cigrate

Friend: aj club araha hai……

Prem: no way

Friend: common yaar finall semester hai …phir kaha time milay ga…..try tu ker

Prem: try kero ga…bhai se pochta ho na

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60

Nice update, Their bond is so adorable,,, Rahul,Raj, Prem & Mayank-Nupur.. Really cute update, & it looks like Prem is heading to the wrong way.. Hope Mayank-Nupur can help him from following the wrong path... Awesome update Fiza, continue soon...

-Laiba

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