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Posted: 14 years ago

Epilogue:

In reality faahad is still unknown to all this, he is living with a delusion tht she loves him truly n loyal. When asked faizan to stop doing all this , tu he said "woh mera pass khud aai hai, mein tu nhi gaya us k pass, tu mein kyun rukho" he is having fun , n she is providing all this. She say she only shares her problems with him as he is the loyal friend of her.

The person telling the story is a common friend of faizan nad hira…evrythng in this story is reality , obviously except the names. The story is still going this way with hira having few month old daughter.

Writing the epilogue sumhow I felt so low n disgusting about all this.

The only think I want to say is tht, whn ur in a relation before marriage, its not offensive to have, but to be in ur limits is. Adding prefix, spending endless time, imagine him as ur husband, and imagine all tht he has yet not any right on, is not good n right. A person who say 2000time he loves u , nt necessarily loves u..think why he always need to repeat it again n again, does his gestures doesn't speak tht, I know confession is important it feel bliss, but confession is, not mere repeating of sentence.

U nevr knew wht destiny has for u , n if God forbidden he is nt ur husband thn how will u face ur hubby and moroevr urself whn u urself knew u have crossed limits, even if nt practically but ya imaginatively u have.

I may sound orthodox, but im tht…

Pyar, Ishaq, Muhabbat, are feelings pure, n serene. There feeling tht God Himself has put at the top most level, donot make them impure .

Having a relationship is a blessing and maintaining its purity is ur dignity. Having affirs for fun, going out of way in fashion is not good..

Pls be a little careful ..else evry thing will be La Hasil, out of ur reach, ur dignity, love and moreover Gods blessing. Evry1 might not know ur deed but HE does, u may escape this world u cant HIM.

Love Fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
first of all my heartfelt gratitude to u for writing this exceptional piece...tumne behad khubsoorti ke saath zindagi ka ek badsurat pehlu saamne laya...hats off dear...!

well the answer to the ques that how one can stoop soo low is unknown...as few r actually there who can stoop lower than hira n i personally know one...n i m yet to get the answer as what made them go to this extreme...!

epilogue not to mention is outstanding(nothing unusual though)...aap epilogue ki mallika ho janab...khaas kar reality stuff mein aap la-jawab ho 😳...kaash yeh log jo insaan bas naam ke hai woh yeh samajhte ke aise harqaton se woh sirf apna hi wajood khote hai...aur unke liye bas ek hi zumla yaad aata hai...dhobi ka kut*a na ghar ka na ghat ka...!

Edited by valliyah - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautifully written API...
awesome part...
i really loved it...
n d deep thought inside d Epilogue is jst awesome...
i really feel disgusted of d girls like Hira...
who cant b loyal to der partners n want to hv fun wid der EX...
evn inspite of Faizan's rejecting her for marriage...
hw cud she still can talk wid dat man...
n i feel really bad for Faahad...
his best frnd n his wife both r betraying him...
love is a pure n devine feeling...
u hv no right to make it impure...
if no one can see ur deeds bt still der is SOMEONE who can see it all...
n 1day u hv to answer HIM...
so ppl plzzz nvr b unfaithful in any relation...
love ya API...🤗

Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
different & very written story fiza
Pyar, Ishaq, Muhabbat, are feelings pure, n serene.There feeling tht God Himself has put at the top most level, donot make them impure. very well said...
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
completely agreed fiza...thanks for writing this...:):)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely epilogue

Very deeply thought

Being a girl it feels bad tht some girls lyk Hiram exist in dis world

Do write more
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Posted: 14 years ago
I need to read all chapters
but this one is amazing...very well written and
very thoughtful...
I know there are some girls like hiram...disgusting !!!

But very nice epilogue👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
fiza this is actually the reality people sometime are so cheap and selfish
thanks for writing this
completely agree with you
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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 msg Fiza, bt she was really crossing her limits and dnt knw what to say bt yes her acts were disgusting..!

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