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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
loved da concept
cont soon
da sharma...one big happy family...😃

tczz
loads of love
Edited by cutiepie12 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
bautiful story. but fiza dont delay to update your other ffs. specially Ardhangini. plzzz. u r amazing writer. I love you
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
oye hoye..!!!!!!!...wonderful coNcept..FIZA...

keep updatinG

thnx 4 thE PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Hi Fizza
Nice Start dear A perfect Sharma Family
May be its going to be different sort of story But I love to read it
so plz cont soon
and thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: valiyah27



Soo to hai...humara apna thread 😳...!!!

Shashikala yuck...Faru ki bacchi😡😆...yeh chugalkhor aunty hi mili...koi aur accha sa naam deti na...waise i like Fizu name Hey Mogambo 🤣🤣...!!!

ahhh...valiyah k nam solid hai
haha mogambo khush hoa...
buhat he manhoss ho ...meray hi thread per mjhy hi tang ker rahy hoo...
mr india...tu mr india he rahy gi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
amazing...but i'm scared...what r u going to do...i hope it will have a happy ending...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
well concept aur start dono kafi acha hai

but perfect family main story ko intresting karna mushkil hota hai

lakin yar app tu cheeta hain (Karachi language) 😊
tu hopefully agay bhi acha hoga


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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
awsom fiza...

i love such diff kind of story
plz add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39

Hey Guys

Knowing tht I have been blessd by such readers tht always tolerate whtever I gave thm…moreover trusting me…..thnks aloot….i hope I can cum up to ur expectations

Thnks for the comment ….due to hectic schedule I wasn't able to rply to u all…but I'll do it next time paaka…

Love ya

Fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40

Chapter :1

The two angels rash towards him on hugging his leg n other his waist causing him to disbalnce….a hand took his thing from him…

Nupur: lay mjhy dain…she said with a smile….

To wch he gave him his belonging ..pating her cheeks lovingly…..next he took them in his arms

Hey dad….we missed u so much

He chuckled

Mayank: aha really….

Prem: hey bro

Mayank: hey prem….ruflling his hairs

Nupur: acha ab tum dodno neechay uthro gay

No….the trio said in union

Hum dad k sath mein rahy gay .nn mayank nooded a firm yes….settling on sofa

Mayank: yes….so wht my angels did in my absence..n raj tumhary tu exams chal rahy thy kasay rahy

Rahaul: dad yeah fail hogaya

Mayank: haaan

Raj: dad yeah jhot bol rah ahi…..i rocked dad…colliding his knuckles with them

Rahaul: tu tum kal tu bool rahy thy k …uff meray khuda…mein phir fail hogaya

Raj: uffu stupid woh tu mein ps khel raha tha..uff…

Mayank: ufff….raj..this isn't the language u shud b using…..n rahul…bhai per nazar rakhty hoo..hai…ap ny kiya kiya school mein

Rahaul: uffu dad ..u want belive….excitedly he turning from his arm sat on his lap…..he giggle on his excitement

Mayank: wht

Rahul: I won the race…n we had a big color day…we played with so many colours..aur mein ny sab ko color lagaya…but mjhy koi bhi nhi laga saka…..he laughed out loud sharing high five

Mayank: ary wah tum tu bulkily dad per gay ho….

Raj: kya dad..itn pehakta hai….aur tumhain priya ny color k pani mein hi push kerdiya tha…aur yeah sar colorful hogya tha

Mayank n raj laughed to wch rahul frown……

Rahaul: us k tu mein dekh lo ga…itni cheating kerti hai….

Mayank: aray tu phir tu woh bulkily mama per gai hai haina……he looked at her…n recived n angry glare from already anger person…..

Rahul: yaa mom is also a cheater…she even lied

Mayank: ahaa….is this way to talk to ur mom

Rahul: dad mom said we all r gona have fun at holi…I u will paka cum but u didn't

A guilt appear on his face

Mayank: thts not ur moms fault..its mine….sorry dear dad wasn't able to find time ….sory..he touched his ear….

Chalo bacha party …go to ur room its high time u go to sleep…..

Nupur: ap kahana kahy gay ya kaha ker aay hain……

Myank: kaha ker aaya hoon…he reached in kitchen n his anger wife closed the light….n went out…

Collect his things from sofa n she went to her room…smiling in guilt he followed her to there room…..

Prem: its hot today n u desrve it

Mayank: acha…its all ur fault…finish ur studies n get on business …so tht I can spend time with my lovly wife yaar

Prem: ohh really…he put his hand on his shoulder…..sum 1 is dyng for it

Maank: tu mar khay gaa….kya chal raha ha

Prem: studies….purly

Mayank: good…n good night

Prem: have agoood night ….n he rushed leaving a giggling brother

………….

Placing his thngs on bed she was moving out of the room..whn he caught his warist

Mayank: nupur…pls…he pleded….

Nupur: bacho ko dekh ker a rahi hoon …..tum fresh hojaoo……

He left his hand after hearing her plain voice….she left

Raj: mama aj meri turn hai..ap meray sath soo gii….

Mayank: ji nhi aj baba k turn hai….aj mama baba k pass rahy gi….

Rahaul: ap tu big hoo….ap khudi so jao

Mayank: aray ……mjhy bhi tu daar lag gay ga tu

Raj stood on his bed with his hand on her wwasit….

Raj: acha tu ap out of country hotay ho tu kasay sotay hai…..

Rahaul: ohh budhu…mama raat ko phone per baat kerti thin a….tu dad ko story sunati hogi….

Bth of them cant not hold but laugh out loud…..mayank reach rahul as he was in aww with his innocence..n moreover he got him red handed as she use to talk to him…..

He strted to tickle bth of thm n thy strt to fight with pillow….to wch nupur recived a tight from mayank

Nupur: aah..mayank….she hited him right …n here thy all four were busy in laughing n enjoying there moent together…

Bs…subha skool jan hai na….go to sleep…

Mayank: yes mam is right chalo shbash ….

Bth of thme stod beside ther children make thm sliped into there fairy dreamland…..covering thm n kissing thm ….he left towards the door…n she switched off the light….

Mayank: kaha ja rahi hoo

Nupur: prem ko dekh lo zara

He shocked his head in disbelieved

Mayank: han jao…apny baray bety k bhi dekh aao….

She reached him n found him snuggled to a mickey mouse pillow…….she smiled…n cover him with sheet…caressing his hair …

Myank: wht

Nupur: shh…..chup….

Putting his hand on his mouth ..he left out controlling his laughter

Reaching there room…..he close the door n without wasting any time he grped her n hugged her from back…..

Mayank: im missed u soo much

Nupur: acha really

Mayank: nupur u know I tred…kya kero yeah kam na….

Nupur: mayank I know ur work..but us ki wajah se tum occasion per bhi nhi hoo…..asa acha nhi lagta……

Mayank: im sorry..tumhain bacho se bhi

Nupur: han shukar hai …tumahin un k kayal aay tu

Mayank: un k kayal hai mjhy per…ek yaqeen hota hai k tum un k kayal rkh lo gi….per problem mjhy kuch aur hoti hai …..jab mein yaha nhi hota tu

Nupur: woh kiya ….she asked incently

Mayank : meri biwi k kyal kaun rakhy ga……woh tu rekhy gin hi….

Nupur: han han…buhat kyayal hai …she broke chain of his hand n went to ly on bed……

Mayank: nupur dekho meray betay k bhi pata hai k tm se baat kiya bagari mjhy neend nhi aati…he climb up to bed…aur jab naraz hoti hai tu bulkul nhi…..lyinng down he turn her towarde him …moving his hand in her hairs…….im sorry …I miss u too….asa nhi mjhy tum sab door rehn acha lagta hai….bs ab prem pahr lay tu meri responsibility kam hojay gi…magar woh mickey mouse k sath lay ker sota hai…she laughed

Nupur: tu….chota hai woh..acha…aur buhat zemedar hai woh acha

Mayank: bulkil..mickey mouse k tarha

Nupur: mayank ….us k mazak maat uraoo

Mayank: acha baba…ma k bora laga ..sorry mom

She chukeld…

Nupur: han…meray bety ko kuch nhi kahna

Mayank: he lean to kiss her on her forehead….thnks …for cuming in my life…

Nupur: she move fwd n kiss on his cheek….thnks for giving me so much

Myankk: kya baaat hai..…..

Turing around she huged him tight…..as tigh as possible

Nupur: kuch dino k lyan tum kahin nhi jao gay….promse…

Myank: he chuckled…ok madam..atleast 3 mths tak mein kahin nhi jarah..no out country

Nupur: sach ..but even no late work hmm……she broke n looked in his eyes

Kissing her forhead ….he asure her….

Mayank: n where is my good night kiss

Nupur: nhi milay gi….tumhari saza….

Mayank: koi baat nhi I'll do the honors by myself….aur wasy bhi mein aur bhi buaht kuch soch raha tha….he said mischievously ….leaning close ot her…..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago

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