FF-Eternally Waiting 4 U Update 25 Sept pg 142 - Page 48

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Posted: 14 years ago
woh woh what an update dear

i think the creative group should take some ideas from u n make the boaring track good one

by the way gr8 job

thnx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh poor piya...her plan fails...oh no...abhay...
but anyway that was simply awesome ..
thanku for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
well...well...
what can I say...u r just TOOO DAMN GOOOD😃
the language, wry humour and of course the love...all comes out superbly
through your writing...
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always wait for the next update...
after a looong tiring day...ur update is like a heavenly treat...
keep it up...thanx for the pm...
do update😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: MaanArmaan

well...well...

what can I say...u r just TOOO DAMN GOOOD😃
the language, wry humour and of course the love...all comes out superbly
through your writing...
👏
👏
👏
👏
👏
always wait for the next update...
after a looong tiring day...ur update is like a heavenly treat...
keep it up...thanx for the pm...
do update😊

Music to my ears sweetie. Next update will be even cuter
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: quarkinsen

woh woh what an update dear


i think the creative group should take some ideas from u n make the boaring track good one

by the way gr8 job

thnx for the pm

Thanks for the praise hon!
Posted: 14 years ago
Aww nyceee
cant waite wat ahppenz next
thnx for the Pm xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazimg nd superb part...
plz plz cnt wid next part soon.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update👏👏👏
eyes instantly find each other like magnets nice line , nice convo btw jay ,abhay , kabir , shaan & ranbir & abhiya part was nice
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome Ayesha 👏 Brilliant narration 😃 There's a right mixture of every element in ur FF, be it passion, humour, friendship or sis bonding. Loved it. Waiting for ur next update 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

:::Precap 12:::Get U Back:::

Misha had a solid plan to teach Abhay a lesson for rubbing his attitude all over Pia's face. Her sister was having difficulty with him around and seemed to lose her cool around him and her head. It infuriated Misha to see her sister fall to pieces during her altercation with Abhay. Misha had heard celebrations were in order from the Dehradun's 6th Form College for defeating Mount College with the grand event at Venti's place. Misha was livid and was already salivating to taste victory on her lips. The next week was going to be special because it meant they were going to their enemies quatres. She'd seen how grand it looked from the outside but how would it look in the inside?


Misha had a few plans in the basketball game up her sleeves. She'd practiced very hard with her peers. Jay's was very accommodating to wiping the floor with Abhay. He'd given everyone a little one to one tuition specially Pia. Maybe her sister wasn't going to be all gaga over Abhay if she could be pushed into Jay's arms. Wishful thinking it was but Pia's eyes were only one Abhay.


Pia was excited at the prospect of seeing Abhay again. It was all she could think of. Pia could hear the muffled sound filter through the field of the students in their warm up sessions checking out Abhay with her greedy eyes. Pia gasped at the sight of Abhay's intensified eyes sizzling right back at her. His own eyes met Pia's which were giving off heat he didn't want to even fathom what was going inside her head. It was almost like Pia was seeing through him with her innate power over him. His dark haired beauty had enslaved him as he struggled to break free from her gaze. Abhay met his continence, looking dark and brooding in the form of Jay keeping his hawk eyes on him. Abhay could feel the hate in his eyes but why? Nobody bothered Abhay. They never got under his skin apart from Pia but Jay was beginning to grate on Abhay for some unknown reason.

Pia found Abhay a puzzle within a puzzle. The man was indescribable, titillating, fascinating and intriguing. Pia found her lips went dry and moistened them. The range of emotions blasting through Pia had overwhelmed her. How could any man let alone Abhay have this power over her she thought thickly. Pia found he reluctantly tear away her gaze at Mishas nudge.

Edited by matwamango - 14 years ago

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